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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice and cute maaneet story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome story dear..
i loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sweet story

loved it
request- donot make it sad story & negative character should not be introduced plzplz
Edited by preet.harman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preet.harman

sweet story

loved it
request- donot make it sad story & negative character should not be introduced plzplz



Dont worry dear...as I myself not like sseparat maneet...or creating MU between them...and moreever..since its a sweet lv story...there will be sm small tiny miny sad moment ...😊...but not too much... so definately there will not any sad moment for too long...thanks for coment...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 7

Hey guyes though I demand likes and coments'and though it didn't fulllfil'.still I'm updating it for my regular reader'those who comented and hit likes'I realy appreciate them and there support'

I personaly want to thanks them'here r those people'

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I'll not take much time'.and ' here is ur update'.

Ha mishty'said maan sweetly'some time lovingle maan said mishty to her which only maan geet and any knew'

Again geet continue in her babyish voice'Maan bataona'Kaise pata lagayeng Kew o Ldka he Ya ldki..muje uska nam rakhna he'looking at maan innocently'

OH GOD y me'?

Said maan mentally'Now what will he answer'sometime innocent is deth for us thought maan'

Maan come out of hug and make geet stand properly'in an intension trying to divert her atension'.Geet wo dekho wahape waterfall he hm waha chalte he'wisebhi tumhe pani me bhigna pasnd hena 'lets go there'maan is hoping geet to come out of her thought and forget things which will embrace bot of them later'But our Geet is Geet'she didn't budge'again come up with her same question' maan tum pele answer do''

Then it strike her'hawww maan tumhe bhi nahin pata????making a shoking face'then smile widely like she got khajana'I knew thumhe bhi nahi pata???...hahaha MSK ko itnasa bhi answer nahi pata'hahaha'maan manlo tum koi perfectionist ya anstyn nahi ho'dekha tumhe bhi iska answer nahi pata'aise to har wkt kehte rehteho..MSK ko sab kuch pata hota he and blab la bla'per dekho tumhe to itnasa answer nahi pata'hehehe'and she started laughing'

Maan though get angry that she hert his EGO'but in peac also as she didnent budge him again asking same question'but his patiens taking tool on him as geet continue on her ranting how he is show his attitude'and he don't know anything'that hert his ego allot and in angre he spat'

GEET muje pata he uska answer smji tum'glaring angrily her'

Though geet is scared looking his angry eyes but she is not gona show him now'and she said..TO fir batao muje answer'ab kyu nahi bolte'tumhari bolti kyu band hogayi??bolobolobhi'

Kyuki me tumhare sawalo ke jawab dena jruri nahi smjta'said maan tirning his head'trying to be paitent as much as possible with geet'but geet is geet'she keep on ranting and he said..look in male and female there is different reproductive system 'male dosent hv overies ..maan keep on saying everything in biological terms'and geet keep listening to it like a obedient child'very concentrately'at the end when maan finish it'askd geet now understand???

Geet kept on wondering on whatever maan said 'thinking taping her chuby chick wither one finger'as our geet is little more fat ..looking everso cute'

Maan is thinking 'now what's she upto as she looking in deep thaught'he cant comprehend what is happening inside her brain but he is sure whatever it is it's definetly not any normal thing'

Than like after ages geet screemed'NAHIII'

Shoking maan to the core'Maan imideatly held geet by arm and worily asked 'Geet kya hua??tum aise kyu chillayi?plz bataona mishit ?timhe kuch hua kya?mishti'kuch to bolo'mishit..

ME aisa nahi krskti'finaly geet utterd again making maan confuse with her voice..

Tum kya nahi kr skti mishit?

Me 'me ..wo..me'shuter geet'

Now maan get irritated.. Geet spit it up'shouted maan..frustadely'

Wo me apne sweeto ko nahi mar skti 'no never me aisa nahi karingi'ye pap he'glt he me nahi karungi'

Now maan is realy annoyed by her nonsenc'and askd desperately'geet tum kya nahi krskti?saf saf batao'

Wo me is bird ko nahi mar skti'said geet'keeping bird close to her heart'

WHAT?????shout both maan and that bird'.whwrw as maan shouted loudely'and bird mentally'he thinking'ab ye muje marneka soch rahi he?...nahi usne to mana kiyaana marnese?but still'soch to rahi hena jobhi he mere jaan se related he'abto muje aur khtra lgne laga he..'mummy'

Maan was still in shcok'he managd to ask'who told to kill that bird'pointing to bird in geet's hand'

Tumne'said geet innocently'

Again this is a shoking news'WHAT???mene kab kaha???asked maan

Ya when did he asked???...thought bird'

Abhi to kaha ke uski reproductive sysem se pata chalta he ke wo male he ya female'ab iskeliye to muje iska stomach cut krna hoga'uskeliye pehle isko marn ahogana???

Now it was limit... maan thaught realy it's just limit of innocenc..no no 'not limit 'its actual causing deth due to innocence'

Then another thing caught geet's atension'maan wo dekho'kitna pyara hena'and almost same to same sweety jaisa he'

Then suddenly geet started dancing in joy'hee hee hipyyy'I won I won'me smj gayi'she said all the while smiling'

Ab kya hua geet 'asked maan'looking weirdly at her'

Maan ye sweetyna ldki he and look at that bird like my sweety 'he is a boy'yeee muje smj agya'yipyyy'

Maan smiled'and ask and how did u know that exactly???with a teasing smirk on his face'

But geet's answer left wipe of that smirk from his face left him flabgusterd'

Maan it's so simple seethat bird 'kitne attitudese usne apni neck high rakhi he'kitna shoeof kr rhahe'kitna arrogant dikhraha he'and kise angrily mere sweto ko dekh raha he..see my sweeto is getting scare by looking at him'just like u'so hua na wo ldka'

And look at my baby'my sweeto kitna dari he ye use meri trah'isiliye I'm ab 200%sure ki ye bechari ldki hi he'meri tarah'

While maan was just seething in angre ii main time'by listening to geet's explanation'

Precap : ab geet k akya hoga??😉socho socho..😛

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Edited by sanam1234u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
omg..geet is soo innocent yaar😆...poor maan😕pls cont soon..tks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Amazing update
Love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
GEET IS TOO INNOCENT
POOR MAAN
KAHA PHAS GAYA
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 8
sorry for late but got busy in study...here is next part hope u will enjoy it...

Maan it's so simple see that bird 'kitne attitudese usne apni neck high rakhi he'kitna shoeof kr rhahe'kitna arrogant dikhraha he'and kise angrily mere sweto ko dekh raha he..see my sweeto is getting scare by looking at him'just like u'so hua na wo ldka'

And look at my baby'my sweeto kitna dari he ye use meri trah'isiliye I'm ab 200%sure ki ye bechari ldki hi he'meri tarah'

While maan was just seething in angre ii main time'by listening to geet's explanation'

Geet maan shouted…and then it strick geet that what just she said…

geet tu to gayi ab…said geet to herself and run for her life…

maan run after her…Geet ruko I will not liave u just watch…shouted maan from behind and bechari geet run to save her life…

while geet run and reach there camp base started scolding herself …Geet jalii kya jrurt this her ko jagane ki…tu apne mouth ko control me nahi rakh sktina??ab bhugto …and geet hide from maan…

Maan reach there also see that geet is hiding from him..but he ignore her ..thinking I will see u later Ms.bkbk…

Later everyone is busy in enjoying surrounding…as in delhi there is imposible to be in such beautiful nature…they love the atmosphere here…its so soothing…and top of it the surrounding..all are roming here and there…then thery decided to go for traking…there security is also with them…

Making pair for traking as pari-karan, yash-meera, Geet said she will pair with any but maan cut her in between…

Geet muje Any ke life ki bohot parwah he u see… so forget about pairing with ANY…and give evil smirk to her he knew it will work and he got his badla...

Geet fume in anger Mr.SADU SINGH KHURANA…tum smjte kya ho apne apko…koi hero…

Comon geet jo bat obvious he use keh ke kya fayda???and I don't like to flont myself but as U urself agree to me kya karskta hu????and he give her a lopside smile…

Hye kitna dremy lgtahena ….said pari lost in maan's charm…geet blood boild hering it …and maan smirk more looking at geet like saying her …see …and geet got more angry seeing maan's expression flaring her nostrinl she look glaring at pari…pari imidiately change her expression …

OPS wrong word …thought pari…geet continue giving pari angry glare…pari u r not my friend anymore instade of supporting me u r busy drooling over him..that to when I'm hell angry on him…said geet in cute angry voice…

Wo o..o ..Geet jane dena …chaln chod dekhna hame der horahi he…

Ha geet chalna yar jbse ayehe teri fight to khtm nahi ho rahi he…said yash…

Meera wackd yash saying his thus further adding fuel to geets anger…

Geet tu chodna ye sab …chalna dekh kitna maja arha he yaha…then all of then goes to traking…they enjoy a lot…

When they retun …all are tiered so much they has there food…then maan said lets go for sweeming…

Adi said swming and here …but kaha?

Maan said there is waterfall nerby…

Me bhi ay=ungi bhai…said Any chirply…and maan couldent say no to his baby sis…so he agry but said..

Thik he any but on condition ke no mischief…and u to he said pointing finger to him…

Geet got happy hearing that they are going to waterfall and she radily agreed for it…

All heded to waterfall..

All gasp seing it…it look so beautiful…it surrounded by trees so no one can think there is waterfall is here..that to this much beautifull..

All enjoy to fullest…geet and any just play in water all boys ADI,YASH MAAN and KARAN go to sewwm…pari and meera also go for it…but geet instade of swming started play with any by splashing water on oneanother…

Then got bored by just playing with each other…they look at meera and geet smile mischively…she winked at any and they both slowly slowly goes tosome meera who was busy in sweming…and achank se wo dono meera ke upper pani splash krna start kiya…merra got scared by sudden splashing and screen ahhh

but as she come to know its geet and any …she shouted geeet….anyyy

Me tum dono ko chodungi nahi…

And strated splashing on them….everyone is then retus to camp …started packing…

And all heded to home…

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved this ff all d parts r deadly awsome

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