Swaron FF LOVE = PAIN+ HAPPINESS

SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hola guys!!! well m new to this forum, so dnt know much abt it, da only reason to join this forum is swaron n only swaron!!!!! so m here to write my vry 1st ss on swaron...I've basically started this from da thursday's precap n i'll definitely include da promo part aswell...well enuf of ma chatterings n without wasting ur time, i'll get started...

hope u guys like it..

SW: Sharon plz m nt goin anywere,unless u come down n talk to me, so instead of arguing wid me, plz come down.

SH: swayam tum...

SW: Sharon plz bas kuch der i promise

SH:(after a lil pause) mmm...okkk main aarahi hu

SW: Thnx sharon(cuts da call)Sharon after making excuses to her frnz makes her way out to meet swayam

swayam on da other hand thinks that y da hell she is taking so much of time n suddenly he senses some familiar presence n smiles...

sw: main janta tha tum jarur aaogi

sh: tume kaise pata ki main...

sw:tume mehsoos karne k liye muje tume dekhne ki zarurat nai hai sharon (luk luk hawa hawa)

sharon mesmerizd by his reply n swayam approaching closer to her wishpers near her ear...

sw: kya hua kafi khoyi khoyi si lag rahi ho(causing sharon to come out of her trance)

sh:in loss of words) mumbles...aabbb...nahi aisa kuch nai hai anyways tumne kyu bulaya muje yaha aur plz swayam jo kehna hai jaldi kaho mere frnz mera wait kar rahe honge(in her diva mode)

sw: a bit irritated n in a hurt tone replies) well i know sharon k tumare frnz tumara wait kar rahe honge lekin main v yaha tumse important baat karne aya tha aur waise v aajkal muje chodkar har koyi tumare life mein important hai...rite?????

sharon a bit hurt ...sh: swayam plz just stop it,maine tume kaha na ki main koshish kar rahi normal behave karne ki phir kyu tum baar baar usi topic par aake ruk jaate ho

sw:no sharon its hightime dat u start behaving normally, ur baseless attitude cold behaviour m just nt able to take it anymore, sharon main ye nai kahe raha k insabme tumari koi galti hai , m nt blaming u 4 nything sharon, bt just tell onething, Where is my fault in all this. in sab min meri galti kya hai sharon ??????kis baat ki sazaa derahi ho tum muje, kiya kya hai maine????? ok tume isi baat ki shikayat hai na ki maine tume sab ke samne defend nai kiya???

toh ek baar apn dil se pucho k kya wakai maine tume ek baar v defend nai kiya, kabi support nai kiya

?????tume jawab khud ba khud mil jayega... bas ek baar sharon...bas itna hi keehna tha muje, maine tumse har baar baat karni chahi magar tum ne muje khud apne aap se dur kiya phir muje laga k shayad wakai tum kuch waqt akele rehna chati ho aur baar baar tumare karib aakar tume uncomfortable nai karna chata tha main kyu mere liye ur wish is always my commamd ever n 4eva...bye...(saying this he leaves frm der leaving sharon vulnerable n somewat guilty)

sh: (tears flowing down frm her eyes) main karu swayam muje khud samaj nai aara hai, main tume hurt nai karna chati par phir v kyu pata nai na chate hue v tume hurt karti hu, m sorry swayam tumse rude behave karne k liye tume ignore karne k liye m sorry)

meri lyf itni messd up hogayi hai k insab mein humara relationship itna affect horaha hai!!!!!!!!!

dats it for today more parts to come...

so guys u like it good bad plz lemme know this part was a torture tho...ur reviews r most welcome n important aswell

n hey can anybody help me about how update da profile so that it will b valid..no idea how to do it so if anybdy cud help me out..wud vry vry grateful!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by devlishswaron77 - 13 years ago

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pooja123456

@pooja123456

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Posted: 13 years ago

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A well written post...it was open-ended...this scene would have fit into the swaron storyline perfectly...but i dont want it to b fit(no offense)
all the swaronians are sick of open-ended convo's between both of them...
if we hadnt been getting only open-ended convo's then this was perfect for the current storyline...
VERY WELL WRITTEN...DO PM ME WEN U UPDATE...

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

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Posted: 13 years ago

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very well written

do update soon nd add me in ur pm list

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: pooja123456
A well written post...it was open-ended...this scene would have fit into the swaron storyline perfectly...but i dont want it to b fit(no offense)
all the swaronians are sick of open-ended convo's between both of them...
if we hadnt been getting only open-ended convo's then this was perfect for the current storyline...
VERY WELL WRITTEN...DO PM ME WEN U UPDATE...

hey pooja yhnx 4 commenting n appreciating dear😊 i know it was an open ended scene n i had to do it bcoz muje promo ka part v abi include karna hai aur agar saari misunderstandings abi clear kardungi main toh aage k part k liye kya likhu...hope u got my point...i promise not to let u down...