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Posted: 13 years ago
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This sounds interesting!!

Please PM me when your story starts.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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geetanjali movie story on virman..?? intresting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update dear !!! manvi is so funny .thanks for d pm .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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manvi is so mischievous, thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ahhh its superb. . . J7t love it poor Virat. . . :( n Manvi is so cute n so naughty. . . <3 hope she will help Virat to recover frm his heart problem plz cntinue soon wanna read it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-3

Next morning virat was walking on the green fields covering himself with a shawl and singing a song

Jab Dard Nahin Tha Seene Men
Kya Khaaq Maza Tha Jeene Men
Ab Ke Shaayad Ham Bhi Royen Saavan Ke Mahine Men
Jab Dard Nahin Tha...

Yaaro Ka Gham Kya Hota Hai
Maalum Na Tha Anjaanon Ko
Saahil Pe Khade Ho Kar Aqsar
Dekha Hamane Toofaanon Ko
Ab Ke Shaayad Di Bhi Doobe
Maujon Ke Safeene Men
Jab Dard Nahin Tha...

Manvi and a group of kids were following him..

Aise To Thes Na Lagati Thi
Jab Apane Rootha Karate The
Aise To Dard Na Hota Tha
Jab Sapane Toota Karate The
Ab Ke Shaayad Dil Bhi Toote
Ab Ke Shaayad Ham Bhi Royen Saavan Ke Mahine Men
Jab Dard Nahin Tha ...

Is Qadar Pyaar To Koi Karata Nahin
Marane Vaalon Ke Saath Koi Marata Nahin
Aap Ke Saamane Main Na Phir Aaunga
Geet Hi Jab Na Honge To Kya Gaaunga
Meri Aavaaz Pyaari Hai To Doston
Yaar Bach Jaaye Mera Dua Sab Karo
Dua Sab Karo

Now he turned back and saw manvi and the kids. They got frightened and huddled together and after a while they started singing like him

All together- Jab Dard Nahin Tha Seene Men
Kya Khaaq Maza Tha Jeene Men

And were walking away from him and after a far distance they were singing again

All- Jab Dard Nahin Tha Seene Men
Kya Khaaq Maza Tha Jeene Men

And laughing and then started runnig back to home

That day manvi and beeji went to hospital for beeji's checkup and then

Manvi- beeji

Beeji-hmmm

Manvi- beeji kya aone aapki javani mein kisise pyaar kiya?

Beeji- chup kar!

Manvi- bataona beeji

Beeji- tu kahan se seekh rahi hain yeh sab?

Manvi- nahi beeji aaj subha main eek aadmi ko dekha lagtha hai love failure hai uss ke upar shal tha aur usne apni dadi bhi shave nahi ki aur ek dem modern devdas lag raha tha aur ek sad song gar aha tha

Beeji- chup kar!!!

Manvi- nahi beeji sacchi chaliye main aapko who gana suna thi hoon

Jab Dard Nahin Tha Seene Men
Kya Khaaq Maza Tha Jeene Men
Ab Ke Shaayad Ham Bhi Royen Saavan Ke Mahine Men
Jab Dard Nahin Tha...

And she turned aside and saw virat coming from dr cabin

Manvi- beeji yeh hi hain who ladka jis ke bare main main aapko bata rahi thi

Then on virats side he was staring at her and then a nurse was passing by he called her

Virat- uss ladki ka naam kya hai?

Nurse- manvi!

Then virat walks upto manvi

Virat- manvi!

Manvi turns around and virat places a kiss on her cheek which was a kiss of revenge and leaves from there

Manvi was shocked and then beeji gave her a angry look and manvi shouted

Manvi- OH NO!!!!!

That afternoon manvi and her sisters were talking clothes in the garden for drying them

Manvi- shhh aaj bohot hangama ho gaya tha

Shivangi- kya hua dee

Manvi- tum he pata who ladka jis humne aaj subha dekha vusne aaj hospital main mujhe kiss deia kyunki maine uska gana gaya

Tanya- kya sacchi???

Manvi- haaa aur uske baad beeji shuru ho gayi koun hai who? Kabse janthi ho tum use? Mamla yeha tak aagaya? Pooch mat aise sawal poochne lagi

Swetha- dee dee who dekho who ladka waha hai

Manvi lsees virat walking and runs after him she comes in front of him trying to control her breathe and says

Manvi- I LOVE YOU

And runs away here virat was shocked!!!

The next day manvi sees virat in the market and goes to him

Manvi- hi

Manvi- dekho aaj raat 12 baje mein tumhara church ke bahar intezaar karungi hum bhag jayenge

Virat- par'.

Manvi- bara baje main intezaar karungi!

And she left virat dint understand what to do so he also left

That night virat came and when he entered the same sequence followed as happened to the boy and manvi all started to scare him and finally he walked away manvi thought he got scared and ran away and were going suddenly a skeleton appeared in front of him

Tanya-bhago!!!

All the people ran away leaving manvi behind just then two skeleton faced figures came in front of her

Skeleton- huzur aapko bula rahe hai

Manvi- mujhe

Skeleton- haan tumhe ab chalo

And dragged her to a guy who was dressed like a Dracula. He turned around

Manvi- TUM!!!

Virat- chup! Bilkul chup! Yeh mera ada hai aur yaha mera awaz hee gungega

Manvi- ma..mat..matlab tu..tu..tum bho..BHOOT ho?

Virat- haan bhoot hoon main

Manvi- plz mujhe chod do plz?

Virat- sheher main aye das din hogaya par mujhe abhi tak khoon nahi mila lekin aaj mera pyass bhuj jayega

Manvi-KYA??? Dekhiye mera khoon bohot gandha hai aur bakwas bhi isliye aap enjoy nahi karenge aap kahenge to main aap ke liye fresh khoon lavungi paka!

By then virat started walking toward manvi and she was stepping back and finally she hit the wall and virat put his both arms on the wall and bent down closer to her face. Manvi was able to feel his breathe on her face and then virat backed off and went back and started running and then at a far distance he stopped and shouted

Virat- TIT FOR TAT!!!

And went away with a evil smile

Manvi became very angry and stomped her foot angrily and left the place and told herself that she will not leave him easily and look after this matter!!


PRECAP- beeji- how dare you do that

virat- but...

beeji- just shutup!!!


NOTE: guyz really sorry for the late update was really busy with exams but now i have one exam to go and after that full regular updates and thnx a lot for ur wonderfull coments and will update a longer one next time!!!

Edited by nikeshathana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Lol at last update, add me in pm list yaar.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
omg so much nokjhok...it's so nice that here we can read all kind of stories and now a funny one ... really so so so good it was so much enjoyed 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Nice update! Last part tit for tat is superb. Continue soon and thnx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Hahahaha Virat is too much. . .:-D Lol tit for tat!!! Dracula buhahahaha loved it. . . Plz continue soon and add me in Ur p.m list plz:-D

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