On the Ridge Between Life and Death

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Where was he? What is this place that stretches like a dark tunnel... the darkness deepens and slithers, haunting yet enticing him with it's velvety promise... come surrender to me it murmurs , I will keep you safe ...embrace me and there will be no more betrayals, no more pain ...




Beyond the Siren's call was the last vision he had... the one that inspires him to fight back ..



The image of those beautiful eyes drenched with anxiety and compassion... the echo of that voice reassures and urges him to fight...




She soothed with her stubbornness ... Pushing him to acknowledge what he was running away from... Bringing HIM home, where he hid himself all these years ..there was no way out but to face HIM... even his last attempt to escape went in vain... his defences crumpled under the onslaught of memories... the happy times they shared ... Now he had reunited with his Friend...he loved this serenity that came with it... the serenity that was brought by her determination ... his Biwi, she was wilful like him...

She is determined that he should fight... Confident that nothing bad will happen to him... he remembered the feel of her warm clasp on his hand asking him to hold on...



Yes, he will hold on... He will let her have it her way this once...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bindu that is such a soothing and beautifully written ...You redefine their relation...The articulation chemistry between them yesterday was just way to soft and feathery moment a moment to hold on and the memory not to let go...

I love love the way you write...
Edited by ISADORA - 12 years ago
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Exquisite, Bindu.⭐️ Loved the writing.👏 At once both gutwrenching and soothing, and with a formidable thread of tender passionate resolve.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifully written...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Write upTM👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow ...beautifully written 👏...This scene was indeed magical and their eyes said it all. MB's words of assurance made him open his eyes every time he gave up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg bindu!! u r awesome,,
i loved it,,
madhu will not let him lose hope
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow a v nice nd emotional post.u hav described rk feelings in a v epical way.amazing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice post Bindu chechy

beutifully writen,its touchy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ISADORA

Bindu that is such a soothing and beautifully written ...You redefine their relation...The articulation chemistry between them yesterday was just way to soft and feathery moment a moment to hold on and the memory not to let go...

I love love the way you write...


Thank u Hatzie
However much they fight that gentle thread of caring exist making their relationship unique...

Edited by bangalores - 12 years ago

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