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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
thanks a lot for all ur cmnts.i'm so sorry if i missed to pm anyone.well i guess this is a stupid part.so forgive me if it is so boring and chappals and rotten eggs r always welcomed😃these ideas r completely mine and of course won't resemble to any other works.ok i'm done with my stupid talk😆here goes the next part 😃

shivam:taani...woh taani...she is not my gf.we were just pretending...
reyam:kya?????????????????😲...
shivam:yes we were just pretending 😳
rey:tu to gaya aaj
swayam:wait rey.1st i wan't to know the reason behind all these stupid drama😡
rey:u r right swayam.(to shivam)tell me the truth 😡wat was all this about?why all this drama😡and don't u dare to lie now 😡
shivam:(in his mind"if i tell the truth i will be so dead todayScare smileys.so better lie")it was not my fault.taani asked me to pretend as her bf🤢...as a friend i just helped her...

the very moment he finished his line he got the best punch he ever got,that too in his nose🤣.blood ooze out from his nose😆.rey lost his complete patience hearing his words.so he was forced to hit him😉.
now shivam was lying in the floor bleeding badly😆.swayam wen't close to him and helped him to get up.rey was now more angry

rey:swayam why r u helping him😡 din't u hear him lie again,that too about ur sis?
swayam not listening to him.he helped him to stand straight

swayam:so shivam tell me.wat do u prefer to loose?ur hand ya legAngry smileys?
rey:woh swayam ,i MU u 😃.ya shivam answer him.wat do u prefer?ur wish our command 😆
shivam:why r u guys asking like that?(scared tone 😆)i said all truth 😔
swayam:shivam if i punch u once more,then u'll be no more😡so u better don't force me to do so
rey:shivam this is ur final chance 😡tell us the truth
shivam:(really scared)that day when taani said that she has a bf, everyone asked for his name.but she din't said any since she was lying.as i was well aware of the truth i came forward and tell my name.but taani was against wat i done.so i some how convinced her that for rey's good we have to pretend as couple and restricted her to tell the truth to anyone.
rey:u dirty bitch😡tuje to me😡

swayam stopped him from further attack.
swayam:wait rey let him complete 😡.
shivam:so we started pretending to be a couple.she was never comfortable with all these.but i forced her to do so.i wanted to take revenge from all of u.so i made her my weapon.
now it was hard for swayam to control rey and his own anger.still he somehow managed to control rey.
rey:u did all to taani just to take revenge on us😡.but wait wat happened last here?i mean wat did u do to taani that she was crying so badly?i sware i'll kill u if u have done anything bad with my taani😡
swayam:ya i too won't leave u if something have happened like that😡
shivam:nahi me bas woh...kuch nahi...bas me use(gulps)
rey in high temper grabs his neck
rey:tell me wat did u do to my taani
swayam looks at rey hearing that word 😃
shivam:maine kuch bi bura nahi kiya.i just touched her and hold her hand and talked in a bad manner.she was shocked and scared of my behaviour.but i sware i din't do anything bad with her.then taani told me that she will tell the truth to everyone.so i blackmailed her saying that i'll tell everything to rey and when all know the truth rey'll have to suffer since he made taani his ags and like that.she was taken aback with my words and she ran away from there.i sware nothing else happened
rey:nothing else 😡u think this was a small thing?that too for a girl from a village?
saying this he started beating him and swayam too joined him.suddenly rey stopped and said
rey:swayam wait.we'll handle him later.now we have to meet taani.pata nahi kya kar baithi hogi😲she is so sensitive
swayam again shocked of his words
swayam:ya u r right.well u know much about my sis😲

they puts shivam down and rushes to girls cottage...
taani was in a big shock after all wat happened.she almost lost her breath because of her long cry.she wasn't able to control herself.she wasn't able to believe wat just happened.

taani to herself:he krishnaji ye aapne mere saat kya kiya😭ab me kya karu?i can't do all these acting crap and all anymore.neither can i tell the truth to anyone😭.
she felt heart broken 🥺
taani:no i've decided.it's all finished now.no more drama .he can't play with me anymore.ya i can't tell the truth to anyone but i've another option with me😳 ...


reyam:taani open the door
no response
rey:(nervous)please taani open the door
they waited but she din't open the door
rey:swayam we can't wait now.let's break this door
then they together breaks the door and both r shocked seeing taani like that😲
she was lying in the floor midst of dark red bloodshe has cut her vein
reyam:taani 😲
rey:please taani open ur eyes.please taani please😭
he was crying like a kid.swayam din't knew wat to do
swayam:hame use jaldi aaspatal le jana chahiye
and they takes her to the hospital.
...

oh man it took hours for this update 🤢.i thought to end up in this part.but sorry i wasn't able to do so.so next part is the last.i know this has turned to be an awful update
do comment ur views.i don't mind if it is a -ve cmnt.it's just that i wan't to know if it's ok or too boring/bad

if u guys wan't pm do tell me and add me to ur buddy list.or it's hard for me to send pm's.thank u.and sorry if i missed anyone

Edited by sreelu094 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
omg!!! sreelu WOW luved it sooo much...awww ' my taani' sooo sweet xxx cant wait for update xx 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
btw me first 2 comment yaay lol 🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
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sreelu it was amazing<3 taani ne ye kya kar diya.,..,😲 loved ReYam beating shivam.,.he deserves👏😆🤢 update soon.,😃
Edited by blue_cherub - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Super update...love shivam.s dhulai by reyam...and love rey saying"my taani"...feeling bad for taani...cant wait for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
OMG Sreelu its amazing
oh girl its so relieving to imagine Shivam getting beaten by ReYam 😆
i wish we will have this in show too...
and yeh kya Taani se suicide hi karwa diya 😲
khair ReYam are there na, to Taani to theek ho hi jayegi 😆

update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
so much of beating from reyaam🤣...want this in show as well ASAP😆...rey saying "meri taani"...and haila taani and suicide😲...uff ek taraf nikkoo ne rey ko maar diya ab tu bhi kami poori kar de😆...anyways good update now u better update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
omg sreelu this was awesome, it was not boring at all, so many omg moments Swayam asking shivam if he want to loose a leg or a arm that got me 🤣 and Reyam beating that jerk that was too good and Rey saying my Taani I just love that part. Hmm basically I love everything about this update. I hope our Taani is alright though😕 Plz update soon dont keep us waiting for too long.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by blue_cherub - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: crazychickasr

omg!!! sreelu WOW luved it sooo much...awww ' my taani' sooo sweet xxx cant wait for update xx 🤗

thanks dr 😳.will finish this soon as possible

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