RishBala - Ishq, Junoon aur Pagalpan (SERIES) pg 9

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Dear MBians,

Hope Some of u may know me here. I am already writing a story on RishBala. Now I Want to write a series of short stories. Which will have mostly 1 or 2 parts with "Different Titles". Some times the story may continue to have link with other part n some times it may b compeletly new.

I would like to name this Series as "RishBala - Ishq, Junoon aur Pagalpan"

This series will either be related to story line or my own crazy Ideas. If anybody r interested let me know.

Note: Those who want the PMs please add "gbr_pm" ID. Thanks for all those who liked and commented. Please take time to like the post and write at least a word to say what u feel about my update. That really gives a lot of encouragement n courage to proceed further.

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~~ Drift Away ~~

RK was standing near the shooting spot which is just 2 blocks away from his studio. There was a grand set and the sequence is a romantic dance number in rain. The sight b4 him raged and his hands turned into fists. His nails almost pierced the skin of the palms making it red. He just wanted to smack the man hard n kill if possible n pull her away from that man's embrace n take away from this world to somewhere that only belong to him or just say them.

He jerked out of his violent thoughts with the loud shriek of director's cut. All he could listen was director appreciating them n the dance director came to continue with their steps. He couldn't stand the sight in front of him.

Her back is facing him. He saw her standing there in sea green color sexy saree with backless blouse except for a small strip that is holding it n noodle strap showing almost all her back . The saree started just at the start of her lower back showing her snake like spine n hence he can imagine how her belly button would b visible along with her flat sexy stomach. The saree is see through n to top his anger it is completely wet n acting like second skin showing her sexy curvaceous body and that man's hand on her dangerous curve of her waist.

He was on the verge of losing his sanity if there is any, when he saw her laughing at some stupid jokes that man n dance director cracking. He never saw her laughing so openly n carefree when she was with him and that thought is enough to enrage him more if possible. He grudgingly admitted that she is looking out of world in that dress with that beautiful laugh of her. She is looking not less than an angel. He forgot that he is openly drooling on her until there was a tap on his shoulder. He turned to c Aditya the hero of the movie called him n his friend.

Aditya: Hey RK. H R U buddy? Long time no see. After the last movie I didn't think u will remember any of us. But u r here gr8. So wassup dear?

Yep they both are friends but now he hated Aditya to core as she is moving freely with him.RK was long lost in his own thoughts. He is observing her every move from the time he came here to the time she faced him. It pricked his heart to c her smile fading away when she come face to face with him. And that simply gesture of her's made him realise n regret the moment he lost his temper n said those words to her when everything is going normally n if left that way could have been even better.

He forcibly smiled to Aditya n said: Hi. It's not like I forgot u. U r busy n me too. Hey I got to go.

Aditya: Hey u r going like that only. Come 'on man. I know why u r here n where u were lost when I am talking. U never come to sets of others when u r involved in ur work. Go n meet for whom u came here.

RK: Nothing like that. I am leaving.

but Aditya's words halted him as his steps dead in track.

Aditya: Don't u want to meet ur wife?

RK: I will meet her later.

saying so he left the place, reached his house and locked himself in his private room where he makes busts, paintings n even statues all made of Clay. His passion n best way to vent out his frustation n emotions. This room has all his memories which are personally close to him which he never shared with anyone. Not even with his Wife. He has unshed tears in his eyes n smiled painfully thinking about turn of events in his life.

He thought sadly. "Yep My wife or My BIWI as I used to call whom I lost with my foolishness or say big fat ego. N knowing her ego n temper its completely difficult to mend the things back as they were a year ago."

He still remember how he wanted to share his this secret with her. How he want to show her his passion n art. But it remained his wish which may never fulfil.

He know she won't b back as she never listened to him after that fight of theirs a year ago n she drifted away from him.

"Madhubala..." He whispered. That name itself brought a smile on his face.

Here Madhu's condition is not less. She is also remembering the same as he is doing.

They both r thinking about all their encounters that has hatred, pain, comfort, melting tempers, happiness n suddenly a big gap or say black hole which can't b covered. That's what they felt.

But nothing is impossible if we try whole heartedly but their egos r sooo big that nothing can cover the emptiness between them apart from themselves.

Their story has 6 phases till today n started 2 yrs ago accidentally.

2 years ago--

The first encounter or phase of their story which revolves around RK the superstar n Madhubala, a normal middle class girl, which brought immense hatred towards each other n of course start of their story.

HIT n RUN case - where he is culprit n she is witness. But their egos clashed n turned to personal war which lead to wicked games n humiliations. The end result was 'Both their names were tarnished in public. Being a normal girl she is the one who suffered more n that made her to hate him to core. Her engagement was broken; her foster father was beaten to death by his men. That made her wild n again their war started by slapping him on his set and he coming with the idea of revenge to make her suffer till death.

That led to the second phase of their life that is their contract half marriage n increased hatred. First few weeks was hell for Madhu as he never leve a chance to humiliate her n she on the name of contract as she has to either pay the money he lend for her father which is almost around 40-50 lakhs. But the humiliation her mother faced in his hands made her to fight back n from then started their war. Till then he is the only one to play with her but she too started to play with him n his emotions. To top their headache his so called family also came into picture for Madhu which made her sick. N the worst was Dipali his bhabhi who always try to seduce her devar.

But all of a sudden their challenges n war gave them a bit of satisfaction coz that changed the status quo. Also not always being victim n some sudden facts which came unexpectedly b4 each other made them a bit calm n gave a little break to their hatred.

Then started their third phase which started as a plan to save himself from Dipali but that brought them together not in every sense but unknowingly they came close first physically..Not in man n wife sense but started with sharing same room n taunting n talking n unknowingly some comfort formed between them.

Fourth phase of melting tempers started as they saw the good side of each other. He saw her good side many times though his ego won't allow him to accept it. But now she can also see that other side of RK i.e. Rishab by taking care of her n also her father by providing spl treatments for his cure. They became a bit more close, all started with reviving his faith that was buried deep in his heart n in the process they fought, created unnecessary fuss but at last melted. As destiny has it the attack on him brought them closer. Unknowingly they both started to rely in each other but always Dipali made it a point to make her presence felt but they conveniently ignored her.

The fifth phase of their life was best for both. Aftermath of attack brought them close n they started their life fresh with friendship. Their cute nhok jhoks, their rootna manana everything about them was just friendly n not romantic in any sense. But both were drowned to each other n the spark was lighted between them. They know about this change in them. But that change is not that big enough to fight any odds n trust blindly.

Where the relation is not strong it can't stand even a heavy rain forget the storm. Same happened with them n the rain's name is none other than Diplai. She played a dirty game with the help of Madhu's ex-fianc'.

RK planned a date with Madhu to move in their relation. He wanted all their old memories of hatred n pain to b gone forever. So He planned a date n left a note for Madhu about the place and time along with the gift packet. But Dipali changed the venue and time so that she can implement her plan to separate RishBala.

Unknown to the fact Madhu saw the note n was very happy as she too wanted to move ahead with him. Coz she felt that her happiness laid with him. She was on cloud nine n got ready in a sea blue color sexy see through saree and made sure that she look appealing n hot. She took extra effort to get ready only for him. The thought of impressing him bought shy smile on her face. She went to venue on time unknown to the turn that will change their lives for worst. As per Dipali's plan the venue was close to RK's set n can b seen by him.

As soon as Madhu entered the place she searched for him eagerly, feeling shy n excited. It all felt too new to her. She never felt this way. She is giggling to herself with all sort of cozy n romantic thoughts ever possible. That's how RK found her. He first laughed at her enthusiastic n shy expression but frowned seeing her there. As per his note she should be near the park at their house n he will take her from there. He thought may b she want to come to me in excitement. But she didn't wear the dress given by him n also she was in wrong place at wrong time. He would be there for her in an hour but she is here. Nothing made sense to him. He thought that she may b here on some work. But he could fathom possibilities the scene b4 him made him boil in anger. There she is hugging her ex-fianc' ad comforting him n that's it he drove back to his house n smashed almost everything in their room. By the time Madhu came back she was astonished seeing the plight of their room. It seemed like some storm stuck there. B4 she could ask or say anything she heard him shouted at her to stop n get out of his room.

She was completely blank with the turn of events. One moment she was flying high n the other moment she fell from the same height.

She asked about her mistake. He smirked sarcastically and said u really want to listen that from me then listen I saw u romancing ur ex-fianc' on my back or say b4 me. She tried to protest but he didn't listened and simply gave his final verdict.

RK: U r so fond of him, then why don't u get out of my sight n live happily with that spineless creature of yours. What more can b expected from a girl like u? I gave u everything money, status but u still betrayed me?!

Madhu just said "Rishab... " in so much pain. But he ignored the pain n also the fact that she is calling him so closely for the first time n continued his ranting

RK: All u want is freedom from me isn't it. Ok then pay my money back n get out of my sight. No no..NO need to pay money I will nullify our contract. U nursed me when I am hurt. SO I will count it as ur nursing fees. Just get out of my sight n enjoy with that ex-fianc' oops sorry present lover of yours.

That's it. It break the last bit of her sanity n she shouted at him.

Madhu: Mr. RK what u think of yourself. Everything can't b calculated by money. U may felt I nursed u for money. But I done it coz of humanity. U don't have to nullify the contact out of pity. I will throw u the money u gave me for my father including all the expenses for my stay here. Once I pay ui I will b out of ur life forever. Till then I won't even eat here in your house. By the way I never ate freely in ur house. I worked n had my food. Now also it continues same. But the difference is now I won't b ur BIWI but only the ninth servant as u bought.

Saying so she went out of his room not giving him the chance to talk any more. This way the sixth phase of their life the "non-fill able gap" started coz of their EGO. They never tried to go back to discuss their problem nor they gave other chance to their hearts. N so the relation between them almost faded.

-- To be continued

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Monami Tasnim

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awsm cocept Rekhd di.Continue ASAP.

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STUTI KANSAL

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Posted: 12 years ago

I hate tht deepali
gud os dear cont soon and write second part soon and plsss tell us tht in second part dono ke bich mein sab kuch thik ho jayega haina !!!!!!!!
Have a gud day tc ks

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Trishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey wow wow and wow its fantastic and amazing plz continue and pm me i start reading ur other ff heights of obsession but i am still on ch11 soon i complete read dat plz pm me...

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb.mindblowing start.i just hate deepali.loved to see dat jealous rk.thanx for pm.continue soon.

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kareena32

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome ff dear

cont it soon

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shruthiR

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Posted: 12 years ago

It was very well written.I really enjoyed reading it.How sad,their relationship is one big emotional mess.Hope things will get sorted out soon.Looking forward to the next part of this series and thanks for the PM😊