'A Damsel In Distress' (MG)~~ Part 24 (pg 100) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: maan_ki_jaan

Awesome!! Looking forward to it! :)
Is the story gonna continue in monologues of Maan geet like in the prologue or is it gonna be from the writer's POV?


No dear, later on no monologues... agar beech mein kuch kuch aa gye thn its different thing...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Thanx alot evryone for the guddy guddy comments...
i wish aagey bhi sabko stry pasand aaye... 😛😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
gud start :)
interesting story
add me to ur buddy list and do pm me
do cont soon
love
meena
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: meenaveed

gud start :)

interesting story
add me to ur buddy list and do pm me
do cont soon
love
meena


Thanx alot meena and u r added in my pm list.. i wish ki aapko meri stry ke aagey ke pars bhi ache lagen... 😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Can anyone tell me when will i become a coolbie from this sada hua newbie.. i cant even posts comments more than 10 in a day... 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

intrsting concept

continue soon


glad u liked it!!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
waiting for more
please cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38


PART 1

Good Heavens, what shall I do! What does one do in a situation like this ' I mean a young man and a young girl.

I got out of my car and then ran towards that metal junk, she opened her eyes and staring uncertainly at me, asked, who are you?

MAAN SINGH KHURANA is the name, I said rather taken aback by the blandness of the question. Are you badly hurt?

HURT? she asked me with her face covered with amusement, what do you mean?

Taking an unconcerned air, I said, I was driving my car and with a violent jerk your car stopped, I thought, maybe I can be of some assistance to you.

Oh thanks, thanks a lot Mr. Khurana, for your gallant offer. I am not hurt, thanks anyway, she finished with a charming smile.

Watching her smiling and how do u like to be treated like after this after you wanted in all sincerity and from a purely humanitarian urge to help a seemingly stranded girl?

Well that's the way you feel, I made myself as cold as possible, I have nothing to say. I can only be sorry if I have disturbed you in your capricious frolics, I must confess I am not very familiar with the whims of people who stop their car in the middle of the road and go to sleep.I roared at last.

With an embittered and recoiling mind, I rushed towards my car. Before I could sit she came running towards me and shouted, wait a minute, how can you me leave me alone like this middle of a deserted road at this hour of night, you cannot be so cruel.

What! But you were alone a little while ago, were not you? I asked curtly,

and during this little while, if you have made anything dear it is that you want to be left alone again.

But I do not know where I was going.

What is the game this time? I said, making no effort to conceal the note of scepticism. Whatever it is, I have no time for any more of your pranks, save it for the driver of the next car

But please believe me I am not lying, I really don't remember where I was going. After a pause she said actually I don't even know why I am doing here.

I heard genuine anxiety in her voice and sat gaping. What has happened to me?

She was on bewildered excitement, half to herself. Where was I going? Where do I live? Who am I??????''A fine mess to be in, that too at this time of the night and at a place like this, I thought, while I was constantly getting calls from Dadima.

Then suddenly she said it loud Mr Khurana now u can laugh at your heart's content at my cost. I can't remember my own name!

I was started and stared at her. No, she could not be such a colossal practical joker try to this on me: I could see that on her face, helpless in anxiety and apprehension.

But just the next moment I said, it seems to me there has been a concussion or something of that sort, and your brain is not working all right for the moment.

The next I said was more surprising as I don't know what thing got into me when I said that,

My house happens to be just a few yards ahead. I am sure an hour of rest and dose or to of a stimulant will pick you up. So if you allow me to offer my gallant services again'

I don't know why I was speaking so politely and sweetly to her, just because she is beautiful or charming, or just, oh god! What am I thinking?

She broke my chain of thoughts by saying, the damsel in distress is completely at your disposal. She said it promptly as she jumped out of her car.

She came over and sat by me. I fastened the old car behind. As we started, that obstreperous thing shocked me again it made no noise. Strange, I seemed!

Precap- Geet in Maan's house. What will happen now? 😊

Eagerly waiting for your comments... 😃


PART 2

Edited by Harshitabedi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Yeee, me 1st to comment...
awesome update... 😃

ahhh, one smile melt the MSK
and, geet forgot her own name...
hmmm... what can i say on this?
as i already know what will happen... 😆

but yes, me now eagerly waiting to see
how many response my Jaan vl get on this fabulous part..
Lubbb ya... ❤️
Edited by Dipti_Sam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesooome...loved d upd.
tfd pm ...

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