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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

awsum blossom payal...ekdom fatafati dost :D

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ARMaaneetAbhiya
awsum blossom payal...ekdom fatafati dost :D

Thankz oyshee 😊

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Singularity

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Sorry Payel di, tomar scrap ta puro miss hoye galo..ekhuni dekhechi ar ebar comment korte cholchi!!😉 Ei nao compensate korar jonno ekta LONG comment...😆

You managed 2 capture the essecne of Kolkata AGAIN. Kolkata's traffic jam must be world-famous by now, ami shotti bolchi!!😆 Gawd, it takes an hour to reach my skul, even though it is just 5-6 km away.

And travelling through EM Bypass is a horror!!😲 Don't be so confident that u will reach ur office in 3 hours UV, this is Kolkata, the city of Unpredictability, Bandhs and "MICHILS" (rallies that Kolkata is infamous for.).😆

Manyata is truly one of a kind. She stands out from the rest of the crowd by not screaming and raving over UV, but just appreciates his music, like a true music lover. I just LOVED the way u portrayed Manyata as a regular girl. A main character need not be picture perfect to be admired and loved. In fact, it is the flaws that make the character more relatable and endearing...⭐️

He didn't know why he pronounced her name again while writing it down on the paper, "Manyata".

Hmm, looks like UV was trying to imbibe the name into his memory permanently!!😉

In the first part of the story I didn't like UV at all. He seemed like another "jock" (read rich, spoilt brat). 😡

Then he added, "Udayveer Singh kise banna hai?"

At this point, I thought "How haughty!! Wish Manyata tells him off". And that's EXACTLY what happened!! UV reaction might have been indifferent, but in reality, her words HAD affected him, a LOT. This is what had caused him to make Manyata feel embarassed, even though he could have just shrugged off the mere thought of this "Plain Jane".😉

Manyata and UV's relationship was shown beautifully, even though it had a rocky start. A true lover is always a best friend first...

Oh God, UV must truly have been flabbergasted when M professed her love for him!😕 But he could have responded in a much kinder way..I felt so bad 4 poor Manyata, her love was se pure and genuine that even UV could read it in her eyes.

My heart reached out 4 UV when he realised his love 4 Manyata and then realised that he had lost his love, maybe forever!! What a situation 2 be in!!😭

I loved all the events that occurred after UV heard M's voice on the radio, as RJ Moniya. This reminded me of the climaxes in B'wood rom-coms.The phone convo was so emotional...and the last scene was TOO cute!! A pubic profession of love and that too on a radio station!!😳

Sorry again 4 the late comment, di!!

Edited by FireNIce - 12 years ago

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: FireNIce
Sorry Payel di, tomar scrap ta puro miss hoye galo..ekhuni dekhechi ar ebar comment korte cholchi!!😉 Ei nao compensate korar jonno ekta LONG comment...😆

You managed 2 capture the essecne of Kolkata AGAIN. Kolkata's traffic jam must be world-famous by now, ami shotti bolchi!!😆 Gawd, it takes an hour to reach my skul, even though it is just 5-6 km away.
And travelling through EM Bypass is a horror!!😲 Don't be so confident that u will reach ur office in 3 hours UV, this is Kolkata, the city of Unpredictability, Bandhs and "MICHILS" (rallies that Kolkata is infamous for.).😆

Manyata is truly one of a kind. She stands out from the rest of the crowd by not screaming and raving over UV, but just appreciates his music, like a true music lover. I just LOVED the way u portrayed Manyata as a regular girl. A main character need not be picture perfect to be admired and loved. In fact, it is the flaws that make the character more relatable and endearing...⭐️

He didn't know why he pronounced her name again while writing it down on the paper, "Manyata".
Hmm, looks like UV was trying to imbibe the name into his memory permanently!!😉

In the first part of the story I didn't like UV at all. He seemed like another "jock" (read rich, spoilt brat). 😡
Then he added, "Udayveer Singh kise banna hai?"
At this point, I thought "How haughty!! Wish Manyata tells him off". And that's EXACTLY what happened!! UV reaction might have been indifferent, but in reality, her words HAD affected him, a LOT. This is what had caused him to make Manyata feel embarassed, even though he could have just shrugged off the mere thought of this "Plain Jane".😉

Manyata and UV's relationship was shown beautifully, even though it had a rocky start. A true lover is always a best friend first...

Oh God, UV must truly have been flabbergasted when M professed her love for him!😕 But he could have responded in a much kinder way..I felt so bad 4 poor Manyata, her love was se pure and genuine that even UV could read it in her eyes.

My heart reached out 4 UV when he realised his love 4 Manyata and then realised that he had lost his love, maybe forever!! What a situation 2 be in!!😭

I loved all the events that occurred after UV heard M's voice on the radio, as RJ Moniya. This reminded me of the climaxes in B'wood rom-coms.The phone convo was so emotional...and the last scene was TOO cute!! A pubic profession of love and that too on a radio station!!😳

Sorry again 4 the late comment, di!!

Thankz sister, thankz again fir this nice and long comment and don't be sorry dear, you gave me the best com,ment the way you analysed my story...the way you reach into my thoughts...I felt the real success!!! And yes well said about our Kolkata's traffic jam 😆