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Posted: 13 years ago
awsummm update,,,,awww kumar gift her der house wow
house name plate was really sweet,,,,i luv it,,,,
propsed prt was supr awsummm,,,,,plz plz plz nxt prt update soon plz dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey plz update soonnn.😊
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hello shello frnds... main buhat nahi buhat buhat zayda late hun iss barr sowiee... for that, but i'm angry also itne din baad update karne aayi hun aur dekhti hun sirf 18 likes yeh toh galat hai comment nahi at least like button toh hit karo na...

this update for all those who was waiting for me to update this.. like shaffy has asked me in sacred love thread to update this... so this ones for u all guys...


sorry i couldn't reply to everyone personally..


PRECAP


After 5 minutes he make demselves straight nd bent down on his knees took her hand in his, looked into her eyes & said...


"Shakti I have already given u d ring but today I am giving u dis house, vil u make dis house our home wid me? our dancing souls nest, tumhare saath zindagi ek buhat hi interesting suffer
(hindi wala😉)
hoga jo main iss ghar mein shuru karna chahta hun toh kya tum tumhari zindagi ke har pal chahe ache ho ya bure ho, chahe khatte ho ya meethe ho mere saath bitaogi?
WILL YOU MARRY ME shakti mohan sharma, will you become Mrs. shakti amarjeet singh??"❤️

chapter-12


shakti grinned evilly 😈 and turned her face to hide her grin from amar...

amar wondered what is she upto..." shak's kya hua??"

shakti: so You wanna marry me...
.(he nodded) okay then i have some condition if u accept them then it's cool.. so u want me to continue..(he nodded excitedly looking forward to hear her most dreadful terms) so for becoming my hubby u have to wake me up everyday with a bed tea, and after that before leaving for shoot prepare breakfast and lunch then in the evening after coming back make some nice coffee for urself and myself so that we can refresh and then start with the dinner aur yeh toh routine work ki baat hai, alternate days ko u have to cleanup the house and plus the clothes which will be washed up in washing machine you have to put them for drying after that sort them up and every Sunday we will go for shopping aur haan be it grocery or anything else, you won't stop me from going to my house whenever i wanted... 😲if u agree with this conditions then i will consider about ur proposal...

kunwar: just one question baby, if all the household stuff will be done by me then what are u gonna do???😕

shakti: karungi na tumhare haathon se khaana khongi aur tumhe buhat sara pyar karungi ab yeh bhi toh buhat bada work hai...

kunwar: okay but i have a condition too for every household work i need a tip and that would be a proper kiss not just a peck...😎

shakti: achaa... let us see first right now i want u to propose me while singing a song and if u passed then may be u get lucky...

kunwar: WHAT???😲 are u mad or what?? u know na how bad I'm at singing, plzz tum mujhe dance karne ko bolo main woh kardunga, apne ghar ka kya neighbors ka bhi kaam kardunga par song no way...

shakti: nahii ur not going to go to any of our neighbors u know na how are they always chipko to u so better u stay here...

kunwar: okay... but no song plzzz..

shakti: shut up and start ur work already come on come on be fast...

with this she turned on her heels and left for the living room to make herself comfy...

here kunwar was wondering how to fulfill her this wish and she shouted for him to come over fast...🤢

kunwar: haan aya.
(then talking to god) hey bhagwanji !!! ab gaana kaise gaaon main?? Aap hi kuch idea do...

and an idea came to him he immediately arranged for his lappy and projector the surprise which he was going to show her in last now it will help him...

she was just roaming here there excited to know what will kunwar do next...

suddenly she heard a faint music, the lights got dimmed and a video started on the projector she saw all their moments of togetherness, there sweet and cute memories since DID till now, their fights, pics of rehearsals, closeups during their performances and during the scenes in D3, pics with their Friends, their masti, naughtiness, it was like journey of them, but the video doesn't have only pictures but also there were lyrics coming along with them and on focusing a little bit she can make that it is the same song which is playing...😳

she was wondering where is kunwar and turned to find him but a hand slowly crept on her waist, pulled her towards him so that her back touched his broad chest, he blow air near her ears into her hairs... she closes her eyes feeling their proximity☺️, he leaned more and nuzzled in her hairs shiver ran down in her whole body...

Hai tu kahan,kahan hai tu
aajaun mai, jahan hai tu

iss dill mein, dhadkano mein

hai tu hi tu

hai jaan tu jahan hai tu
main hun jahan vahan hai tu
kaise tujhe bata dun
kya kya hai tu
yaar hai tu pyaar hai tu
aarzoo tu justuzoo tu
zindagi tu bandagi tu
rab mera tu sab mera tu


he swiftly turned her so that she is facing him, her hairs scattered all over her face he softly brushed them of sliding them behind her ears and slightly caressing her earlobes, he bend towards her face more and outlined her cheek bones and jawline with the tip of his nose pecking her throat, his thumbs rubbing her lower lip...❤️ this brought shakti back into senses, she pushed him and ran towards the far corner near the windows and her back towards him...

Aadhi adhoori jaisi dhalti hai zindgaani
jo sath mein mere na tu
karte hai har ghadi hum khudse baatein tumhari
hardum khyalon mein hai tu
aaja tujhe bata dun
pass aa tujhe bata dun
kaise tujhe bata dun
kya kya hai tu
yaar hai tu pyaar hai tu
aarzoo tu justuzoo tu
zindagi tu bandagi tu
rab mera tu sab mera tu

he came to her... drifted her hairs and leaned in, firmly yet seductively placed a kiss near her nape,☺️ she hissed and groaned, he felt her inhaling nd gasping so he smiled and turned her embracing her tiny waist tightly,🤗 her hands on the back his neck, both of their hearts racing like it will explode anytime, he pulled her body closer to his, slowly whispered "I LOVE YOU, WILL YOU MARRY ME??" ...

Tere liye bana main, mere liye bani tu
saara jahaan yeh jan le
dill mein tum hi base ho saanson mein ghul gaye ho
tum toh ho badhkar jaan se
yaar hai tu pyaar hai tu
aarzoo tu justuzoo tu
zindagi tu bandagi tu
rab mera tu sab mera tu


she stared deep into his chocolate brown eyes, knowing fully that he means every word truly and suddenly she saw the future which she really wanted to have with him in his eyes she just murmured a "YESS..." and then he chuckled a bit... she again said..." YESS Mr. kunwar amarjeet singh i'm willing to marry you, i will share each and every moment wid u whether in happier times or sorrow or in health or sickness, i will spend my every day and night with you... har subha suraj ki pehli kiran ke saath tumhara chehra dekhna chahti hun main, har raat ko tumhari inn ankhon mein apne aap ko kho kar sona chahti hun..."❤️

he instantly cradled her into his chest and then after releasing her he yelled..."YESS Finally you will be mine only mines forever..."


they both had their lovely dinner in each others company and chit- chatted about her NY experience and about interiors of theirs house then she remembered something and asked him.."kunwar woh tumne 3rd bedroom ko rehearsal room kyun banaya hai.."😕

kunwar: woh kya hai na i knew u love to create new ideas and choreographing them plus dance is what runs in our blood, we needed a place where we can celebrate our dance, dance is the thing due to which we are together so what's the better thing then having ur personalized rehearsal hall, and i know one day you would start ur own dance academy so for that preparation you need a place madam...

shakti: Aww...😳 but kunwar dance academy toh tumhara bhi dream hai, isiliye toh tumne apni indore ki ancestral property sell out nahi kiya but tumhare baki family ne ya toh apne share ki property sell kardi hai or they reside there...

kunwar was finding words to explain her, he was avoiding here eyes and saying.." woh... woh..."

shakti is smart nd sharp so she realised what must have happened..." OMG!!! you sold it, to buy this house, ain't you???"
(she asked shockingly)😲

he nodded his head in approval...

she was glaring 😡 at him, to which he explained..." I couldn't take you to the rented flat or to Dharmesh's house after getting married. that's why I have to purchased something of our own & if you are with me then i could setup our own academy also in the future, but we needed a stable house, our own nest just for you and me and for our warmth of love...please shakuu.. don't be angry..."

shakti who was listening to all this quietly with admiration for him in her eyes said...

"tumhe pata hai kunwar aaj tum kitne matured sound kar rahe ho, jis kunwar se main 3 saal pehle mili thi, woh jo flirt karta tha😎, har ladki par chance marta tha, jisko uss time sirf apne dance aur looks ki tension rehti thi woh aaj humare future ke liye itna poessessive hogaya hai, mere liye , meri family ke liye kitna protective hogaya hai... I am proud of you kunwar, jab bhi main sochti hun ki ab isse zayda na mere na tumhare pyar ki limit hai, tum kuch na kuch aisa karte ho jisse main galat prove hojati hun, it seems that your love knows no boundaries.. it can cross infinite miles to make me happy, which makes me fall in love with you again and again, tum aisa kaise kar lete ho, aisa kya magic hai tum mein???
(she asked innocently)

kunwar
:(chuckled 😊a bit took her in his lap and embraced her tightly) It's not me sweetheart its you, tum jab se meri life mein aayi ho, sab kuch khud hi badal gaya hai mujhe kuch karna hi nahi pada, earlier i used to be charming but now you have made it magical , tum jaisi angel har kisiko thodi milti hai aur ab jab tum mere paas ho toh I want to cherish each and every moment we spent together, I want to pamper you, I want to fulfill every dream of yours.. main chata hun tumhari koi bhi khawaish aadhori na rahe...❤️

thats why jab maine us din mandir mein tumhe panditji se yeh kehte suna that hopefully you will get married to me,at that time i was stunned fir tumhari diary read kari toh sab kuch samjh aagay ki this is one of ur wish to get married to me and have our own house plus
( with a naughty grin) I got to know that u have a desire to have a white wedding , i mean christian wedding, Is that ture?

she nodded shyly..☺️

he sighed..." Hmmm..see i have already talked about it with my parents they are cool about it, but you have to convince your family as i haven't talked to them..."

she was surprise..😲.
(that who is this man?? he has already talked about marriage with his family, who is he, some god sent gift in her life??)

when he didn't get any answer from her he continued.." let's go now, its already quiet late, you should be home, otherwise whole Mohan brigade will eat me up alive for stealing their lovely daughter.."
he stood up and make her also stand she caught his wrist.

shakti: kunwar main apne ghar mein hi hun, aur hum jayenge zarur par i will talk to them today only coz i want to be urs asap...


he immediately lifted her in his arms and trwiled around in his hapiness...🥳

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few minutes later they were siting in her parents home, everyone was super excited with her surprise comeback, mukti called up neeti to tell her about their NY returned sister, kriti and shakti's dad asking her numerous questions but one person who was least bothered about this was shakti's mom, she was continuously staring at amar and shakti in to nd fro motion then after some time she came and sit beside shakti; moved her neck from left to right, checked her collar, then parted her hairs here there as if she was interrogating...

Amar who found it amusing eyed her from corner of his eyes, then shakti speak up..." Mom what are you ?? why are u inspecting like a CBI agent??"😕

SM: HUh...
nahi woh main check kar rahi thi jab last time tum dono aise midnight ke baad aaye the toh u both were engaged
(she pointed to her ring) so i thought this time probably you both got married , but here is no sign of that...

Both amar's and shakti's mouth was wide opened and eyes were popped out of their sockets...😒 then they both shouted.." WHHAATT??"

then shakti
(nervously) "woh mom, yes, you are partly right..(to this her parents raise their eyebrows) I mean he asked me to get married only today and i accepted his proposal and why shouldn't I ,(with this she took out the set of keys of their house and kept in her mothers hand) he gifted me our home as a marriage gift.. so ( she chewed her lip and amar clutched her hands in assurance) we both want to get married and for u kind information we are not married yet, so you all can fix the date and start with preparations...

her mom hugged 🤗Amar immediately... thanking him for coming in her daughters life...

initially shakti got miffed 😡 that her mom did'nt hugged her or wished her first but preferred him over her, but then she get rid of this feeling coz what's new in this, it was bound to happen so madam shakti be ready to watch melodrama of kunwar and mommy for the life time...🤣

and they celebrated whole night...🥳
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pheww... END...

so dear readers this was the last chapter, hey don't worry its not ending wala end its beginning of their new life so wish our arsha a new happy married life nd one more thing check the post below this one plzzz something waiting for you may be an... na i'm not gonna tell check out urself...


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Edited by pallavi.14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so its an epilogue, quiet big one okay be ready or haan pehle bol rahi mujhe likes or comments chahiye agar kisko SACRED LOVE ka next update chahiye toh kaam pe lag jao samjhe, main buhat greedy bachi hun...

one more thing this epilogue mainly will be from amar's point of view
plus
i have already mentioned earlier still i am stating it again that i'm not going by the current situation and news of d3, it is just fictional so TANHA is a couple here.. in a way i'm making myself and tanha fans or swaron fans happy so plzz its not meant to offend anyone, sorry in advance...
actually i have written this epilogue long ago and till evening their was no news of sneha's leaving that's why i hadn't changed any of the thing in update so left it the way it was... i'm really sad just cried over hearing the new development though i respect her decision but still it pinches being a fan... happy that my story ended today only, otherwise i don't know myself what would i have done later on... enough of this senti- senti thoughts...

so now enjoy it enough of my bakk bakk...




EPILOGUE


Amar P.O.V

It's been two year's and a month of our marriage and these two years were full of surprises, ups and downs just like a roller-coaster ride...

I was right life with shakti is very interesting, she is an amazing person to be with... i found so many new things about her Evey other day, like with every new day with every ray of sun she unfolds a new secret of hers...
i knew she is a strong girl, woman of substance but behind that their is also a girl who wanted her self to be pampered, who is as cute as a 5 year old school girl, and most importantly this girl whom the whole world knows for her ambitiousness and thorough professionalism behind this veil of hers their is also sweet caring,loving housewife or homemaker, she had been my best freind, girlfriend, lover, business partner and also sometimes she behaves like my mother or my cute baby...
(his lips turned into a smile😊 remembering their crazy yet beautiful moments)

he remembered how her parents reacted when they got to know that they wanted a christian wedding all her family created a lot of fuss about that and she being the impatient one announced if they won't approve it she will elope and get married in the way she would like to...😈

me including her family was stunned to her latest breaking news and finally i have to work as a peace maker... i convinced her parents for a christian wedding but they took a promise of traditional Indian Punjabi marriage to be done on the same date at night...
i was lucky that christian weddings are done in morning and Punjabi marriages are in night or else shakti would have thrown another fit of hers that incidence was just a trailor for me which showed a sneak peek that dude beware a lot of adventure is stored for u in future; i ignored all those calls and as i was hell bent on marrying that devil but never the less be it my foolishness or whatever🤪; after marriage my life has been full of sweet and sour moments which sometimes give sweet pains sometimes make me happy...


Ahhh... that time when i got married i can't forget that... shakti in that white gown and a messy yet elegant french bun she was just looking mesmerizing, truly an angel my angel.. haayyee!!!!
she was looking like fairy who has just stepped out of a Disney movie and I was like a boy smitten by her beauty,then those vows i took them not just as a part of a ceremony but as an oath to fulfill nd follow each and every thing till their is last breath and soul in body and the time there was announcement of us being husband and wife that was the time i felt myself complete...❤️


but...but... that was just not the end we were already married still the day was not completed we both were not allowed together😔 as that day only we got married as per Hindu rituals the time i saw her in Indian bridal attire... ohh my lord my i gulped hard on seeing her she was just looking ravishing in that crimson red lehnga choli she was not less than any Indian princess and i... ☺️what can i say about myself prince of Indore and she my princess what a couple, heaven made match...
(he smirked 😉a little)


after all those hussel and bussel for two days first marriage and then reception we didn't got time for ourselves, we both were not even alone for single second moment and during the night we were hell tired so we both slept off... 🥱

all this thing irritated me so on third day before anyone could wake up.. yes all my friends and relatives were staying at our house...🤣god wasn't that unfair to newly weds, i mean why the hell every body wanted to shower their love when we wanted to spend some time alone together... so where was i???
haan before anybody could wake in early morning i woke up my wifeyy dear from her beautiful sleep just to hear her curses😡 but never mind it was not that torturous than what my freaky relatives and our crazy friends have done with us... we sneaked out of house with our luggage and i messaged shantanu that they all can have a good gala time at our house, as i have kidnapped my sweet wife for myself and for ransom just wanted to have some nice time with her alone so we would be back after 20 days and i have already got holidays from production unit, so by the time we will be back i want everyone out of my dancing souls nest...


after that we both switched off our phones...
.( a naughty glint 😈😉appeared on his face)


My most treasured and prized experience with her.. our honeymoon which i have planned i guess 2 months before our wedding... we both are huge Europe lovers but in that short time period we can't cover whole Europe so i selected 3 best places which she always wanted to goo... and booked our our destinations-

first for Switzerland where we had our ahem...ahem first night..☺️.
(no details its not a matter to be discussed, so let it be private) it was a perfect romantic getaway, making love to my love and exploring new depths our passion in beautiful Swiss Alps, she complained about not spending much time in experiencing and discovering the unspoilt natural beauty of the place though we spend a good week there but we rarely came out of our suite as i was busy in exploring my own personalized natural beauty... she still crib about that and i tease her may be we should visit the place for our second honeymoon anyways the next destination i didn't repeated my naughty deeds and let her do what she wanted otherwise one of us would have come came back only and probably it was her... 🤢

our next stop was Venice as i knew she always wanted to tour that 'city of water' view was breathtaking sprawling water taxis, one can hear the faintest hint of a serenading violin, the tour guide was busy in giving his great insight about this Romantic gondolas carrying smitten couples coast along the web of waterways and shakti was busy in hearing all of his knowledge she was concentrating on his each and every world as if she is going to use all this experience in teaching our children history, and i like a love stricken puppy was looking at my fairy noticing her by inch by inch and grasping her each and every expressions of amusement...

after Swiss alps and beautiful city of water with twisted narrow paths of land i choose Paris in last, as the last act should be the best act of the whole show,

The city of lights, the city of love, a city of fashion the whole ambiance of that city was unforgettable, just divine could be the word which explains it better we both enjoyed The gentle river seine that rambles through the city and our silent walks with our entangled hands on the cobbled Seine and graceful bridges and visits to its museums, centuries-old churches, and blocks of Rococo and viewing Noe-classic-design architecture which were new to me and anyone who knows me would have said that i must have got pretty much bored on my this sight seeing🥱 but in her company one can never get bored i couldn't get enough of her, i was impressed by the level of knowledge she possessed about those structures but whom am I kidding before making dancing her career she was aiming to be an IAS so she must be having ample of enlightenment...

though at that time i use to throw tantrums 😒for shopping but now i miss those strolls in markets just for finding gifts for everyone and then making our way to a caf or cinema cuddling and snuggling🤗 into each other warmth of love ohhh... how i wish i could take her back to the time... and how could i forget our visit to Eiffel tower in hours of night it was breathtaking mesmerizing lights every where and i still remember the glow on shak's face was worth while watching she actually made me propose her again on the top most floor of that tower and we did kissed each other while winds played there major role in our romantic moment... that was just elegant yet marvelous, ravishing, splendid experience of my life...❤️



we both returned to our normal life after most fabulous 20 days of love, joy, passion... everybody teased me 😆about kidnapping my own wife and running away...


as said she is the one wonder girl with whom every day seems to be like a new life so here it was... i joined my shooting schedule again but shakti choose to rest some time as she didn't have any assignments or commitments for next one week, on the first when i get back home i was shocked😲 to see the sight in front of me...

i was welcomed by not my shaku bai or shaks, but a homely sweet shakti clad in beautiful green sari, a small mangalsutra on her neck and pinch of sindoor on her forehead... though she was looking as ravishing as ever i was finding it hard to even think straight but controlling all the demons🤬 dancing inside i asked her..." shakti tum kahin jaa rahi ho kya???"


to which she answered..." nahi toh, but y did u asked???"


kunwar: ahh... woh tum aur sari... so i thought may u r going somewhere or there is occasion
(he said in his confused 😕state still wondering about this bhartiya nari state of hers)

shakti:
(smiled 😊a bit) arey yeh.. woh actually kya hai na i thought i'm married so i should behave like a one na, isilye mom ne kuch indian attires pack kiye the so i thought of wearing it, so how do i look??" ( she asked with a hopes of appreciation in her eyes)

kunwar:(cleared his thoughts) You look beautiful, just outstanding.. i mean you are looking so yummy i'm feeling like having u right now...(she blushed ☺️on hearing his lines and he picked her up in his arms he just moved a step ahead but she stopped him)

shakti: kunwar ruko... woh maine dinner banya hai woh nahi karna kya???
( he instantly stopped in his tracks after hearing what she said, she knows how to make food he knew this but it was not everyday that the great, the diva shakti preparing food for someone, he had come home all prepared to cook for night but what he heard now was a breaking news...🤔)

kunwar: shakti tum... tumne dinner babya hai???? i mean r u okay
( he kept his hands on her forehead, she removed them)

shakti: yup i'm fine kunwar kya maine pehli baar khana baya hai kya jo aise shock ho rahe ho
( to which he nodded his head in no direction) toh fir???

kunwar: but u don't do all these things na...
.(thinking what about those terms and conditions which You forcefully made me agree to do all the household work)

shakti: arrey toh earlier i was not married na stupid, now i'm a married woman and mom called me up since its my first day in our house after marriage so i should cook something sweet dish so i thought why not prepare whole meal... tum nahi khaoge kya??
( she asked innocently)

kunwar:
(ohh god those cute innocent honey brown eyes will kill me someday) arrey aise kaise nahi kahaunga, u set the table i vil just freshen up...

shakti: happily jumped👏 and said..."okay..."

when i was back i had the best dinner prepared by her ever in my life as if she got some magic in her hands, all the things were my favorite... and she even made kheer for dessert as she knows it is my weakness...


but it was not a dream of one day but every day she use to do like this like a goody goody bahu and dharmpatni types, wearing saris, suits and waiting for me handing me glass of water, preparing food for me, shyly😳 smiling at me when ever i compliment her and lowered her eyes when i used to kiss her, etc, etc...

i found it amusing day by day for 5 days it continued like this but then i made her sit beside me nd asked her..." shakti sweetheart see i love all this housewife type character of urs but i'm missing my own jungli shakuu more yaarr, once in a while its okay but why are u doing all this it is not like we live in a joint family of saas-bahu types then is something bitten u or u banged ur head on something??? plzz tell me honestly..."
(he asked her pleadingly)🤪

shakti:
(smiled)actually kunwar don't laugh... woh humari shaadi wale din i saw u admiring me when i came in Indian bridal attire, i thought u liked me more in that, mujhe laga ki agar tum mere liye itna sab kuch kar sakte ho toh main tumhare liye thoda buhat toh badal hi sakti hun na...

kunwar:
(hugged her) aww... baby ya i know i was gawking at u at that time because u was looking truly like an Indian princess only my princess and whatever u wear, or whatever u do doesn't change my love for u sweetheart, main tumhe haar roop main itna hi pyar karunga jitna abhi karta hun shayd ab aur zayda karne laga hun...( he kissed her cheeks and cupped her face)

shakti:
(sighed)thank god mujhe laga ki mujhe woh sab daily pehna padega aur aise behave karna hoga, chalo when i'm finally back to myself so kunwar i have something for u...

kunwar: what a surprise????

she walked to the closet and came with a shopping bag in her hand..." here this for u, mom send it for u..."

i peeped inside it and took out its contents and stared at them in confusion..." shakti yeh kya hai.??? mithi matthi , namkeen matthi, fruits, sweets, and a red shirt what is all this and yeh sieve aur kalash mumma ne yeh mere liye bheja hai r u sure??
( raising his eyebrows)🤔

she replied casually..." haan baba tumhare liye hi hai, woh maine hi mom ko bola tha tumhare liye bhejne ke liye, tomorrow is karvachauth na so i thought if I'm keeping fast so u should also keep it, maa ne (amar's mom) meri sargi buhat pelhe bhej di thi so i asked from mom to send urs sargi woh mother-in-laws deti hai na that's y..."


amar's opened wide open in 'O' 😲shape..."what main karvachauth kiske liye rakhunga? par kyun??😔


shakti: what type of question is this obviously for me ur keeping it aur koi hai toh batao???
(she raised her eyebrows asking him and warning through her glares)😡

Kunwar:nahi...nahi... bilkul nahi tum hi ho par...u know na i can't stay hungry fr whole day and that to with shooting tomorrow, so hw can i keep the fast baby plzz understand na...
(pleaded)

shakti: kaise matlab kya?? just the way i'm keeping fast for you, you also keep it and fr shooting i have already talked to palki she said she won't be burdening u tomorrow with heavy work u hav just one or two scenes and have to go for that only for 3-4 hours, so its decided, fine.. chalo now lets have dinner fir kal subah 4 baje uthna hai bhi toh hai sargi khane ke liye...

and here she dropped another bomb on me...🤣



kunwar: what 4 baje?????? yeh kuch zayda nahi ho raha i mean in first place why r u keeping this karvachauth fast?? its not like u r very much like a typical Indian bahu so all this, why??? aur mujhe bhi kyun????aur tumne palki ko bataya ki main fast karunga ab set par mujhe kitna tease karenge tumhe pata hai?😭

shakti:
(grinned)😃I know dear hubby i'm not exactly an idol Indian bahu but still i do have values plus I'm married woman and its my right which not even you can snatch away from me and about you keeping fast for me don't you want me for next all births as ur wife???? (to which he nodded like a kid)so mere saath tum bhi karavchauth ka fast rakhoge na...( she blinked her eyes sweetly for buttering him and her magic did the trick he nodded in yes) so darling go and change have dinner and then we have to wake up early... okay and one more thing kunwar tumhe tumhari jungli shaks wapas chahiye thi na so she is back sweetheart...(she winked 😉and left for kitchen)


i was standing their like fool wondering what have happened and cursed myself..." aur kaho jungli shaks chahiye... i have served myself in front of a bull to come and kill.. huh what an idiot I'm chalo beta amar patni ka hukum sar aankhon par..."😭🤪



she actually made me woke at 4 in the morning we had our sargi then i left for work...if the drama from previous day was not enough something else also waited for me on the sets...



I was given a set of papers which contained dialogues and description of the scene to be done i had just read the heading "kriyaansh meet" and groaned...got up and asked my director..." dude yeh mujhe purani script kyun dedi hai, kriyaansh scene ki????"😕

to which i got an answer..." amar this is not old one its new script go through it man..."


i was like have they replaced someone as kriya in place of shakti? confused i asked the same from palki she said 'yes' their is kriya's re-entry in rey's life the actor has already arrived on sets...

but when everything was ready for shoot and i just grumpily 😒 waiting for the new entrant i heard a voice of stilettos coming out from makeup room and i saw her... THUD... i fainted...


when i opened up my eyes after god knows hw much time i saw shakti bending upon me with worry lines all over her face and shouting my name..." kunwar, kunwar, wake up..."😭 then she started tapping my face still i was bit dizzy but got full conscious when archie brought his one of the smelly socks in front of my nose...🤣



That means she was back as kriya to complete kriyaansh's love story which we have created together...


D3 got back on the track and ran successfully for next 9 months then we bid adieu on a very good note when there was peek ratings of our show but as it was said every good things have endings so the case was with D3...

it did ended but only to be back with season 2, right now the talks are on😊

and nope i was not on any break after D3 got completed my lovely wife who had already planned a surprise for me, opened up her new set of cards, one day i was just watching an interesting match , not bothering about the surroundings shakti took advantage of that opportunity and asked me if she can use my credit card so i happily obliged her and handed her with my card... and after about 30 minutes i heard her screaming from the other corner of our hall...


i asked her about what made her so excited... she bit her lips a bit then moved the lappy on which she was doing something in front of me and reading the piece of information on the screen YOUR APPLICATION AND FEES HAS BEEN SUCCESSFULLY ACCEPTED, YOU ARE WELCOME WITH YOUR TALENTS IN OUR ACADEMY FOR WINTER SESSION... i yelled..." What????"😡


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and on getting back she gave another shock to me, i wonder before marriage it was me who use to give her surprises but now it was a role reversal it seems as if my creative mind has taken a back seat...


she had actually bought a place on lease and done some infrastructural developments and started a dance academy not with her name but with our combined name "ARSHA' that i got to know the depths of her love, she use to say that I'm her angel but actually she is my god send angel...❤️


we have successfully managed to rope in students for all types of genres of dancing and choreographers are none other than our D3 and DID friends... shantanu, sneha, macci, archie, alisha, dharmesh, mukti, vinti, samentha all helped us to reach the new heights of success by showcasing their talents ...


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back to sense

(Tring tring... ringing of my phone got me back from the flashback into present... sighed
) "HuH.. here i am standing in our own dance academy now counted as India's top most dancing school and it does seems like a festive mode has hit this place like a storm...

Yup guys it is karvachauth again tomorrow and my dear wifeyy like past two years is on her full swings to celebrate it again with her all female friends i mean sneha, alisha...poor 🤓 shan and archie i pity on them...but she won't be keeping fast this time i won't let her keep it..."



Ahh.. my phone continued to ring..." speak of devil and devil 😈calls..."


kunwar:" hey archie wassup dude?"

archie: hii bro.. and shan is also on con call...

shan: bhai bacha yaarr, hum dono maar jayenge
(he literally cried😭)

kunwar: arrey aisa kya hua hai tum dono devil heads ko aaj meri advice chahiye?? and shan u back from kolkatta??


shan: just on my way to airport coming by the evening u better pick me up...

archie: woh toh isse aana hi padega aakhir iski biwi ka bhai jo hai tu...

kunwar: hehe.. very funny now stop it i hav other works to do also...


shan: bro, is it to difficult to fast i mean look at me i'm alredy so thin why sneha is adding one extra day of dieting in my regime...
(he whined)

archie:
(butted in) and main toh do ghante se zayda bhuka reh hi nahi sakta... 🤡

kunwar:
(laughed😆) My boys have a nice time with ur lady loves, i can't do anything on this mattered already surrendered...

shan: haan tujhe toh do saal ka experience hai na... chal bye aa raha hun apni wali ki sargi lekar.. c u in the evening...


archie and amar..." okay bbye dude..."

after cutting the call i marched to a group of girls having their gala time i thought who would say this a dance academy right now it is looking like a wedding affair...

i bend down towards my angelic beauty and whispered in her ears... "shakti plzz come a side.." she excused herself from the bunch of giggling girls and come in the corner...


shakti: kya hua kunwar?? tumne mujhe aise kyun bulaya... pata hai kitna mazza aa raha tha wahan par...
(she whined)😒

kunwar: i know baby ur enjoying urself to the fullest isilye maine academy mein yeh occassion celebrate karne ki permission di hai, but jaan apni health ka bhi toh dhayan rakho, have you had ur medicines??
(he asked knowing the answer)

shakti:
(biting her tongue) oops.. sorry bhul gayi... 😕

(he moved his head and handed her the medicines) "shakti aisa kaise chalega jaan ur not alone u have to take care of our baby na... " (resting his hand on her belly which has a slight bump, hardly noticeable)

shakti: uffo!!!! kunwar plzz apna lecture matt do...tum toh na sach mein buhat boring hogaye ho bilkul budhee uncle ki tarah bolne lag gaye ho...


kunwar:
(glaring at her😡) Achhaa... I'm behaving like an old man na coz ur behaving like kidddoo... baby ur going to have a baby so plzz take care of urself... and woh... woh i wanted to say that...

shakti: kya bolna hai jaldi bolo na itna darr kyun rahe ho...be fast na i have so many things to do...


kunwar: shak's tum kal fast nahi rakhogi...
(he said in one breathe)

shakti: But why??
(disappointingly😒) You na every year i keep it for you then why not this year??

kunwar: coz this year things are different ur 4.5 months pregnant and i don't want to compromise for ur and my princess health, so that's why ur not going to keep it...
😳(he said firmly, knowing that a lot of argument is going to come)


shakti: firstly the baby is not princess, my prince is going to come and secondly tumhe pata hai chahe main koi aur ritual nibhao ya nahi but i do follow this very ritual.. it is connected to you and this is important for me, and this mine baby also i know i will be fine so plzz let me...
.(but he intruped)

kunwar: No way.. ur going to fast, agar kuch hogaya toh, i can't risk ur life... doctor ne bola hai na ki shuru ke moths buhat important hote hai so sirf iss baar ke liye jaan plzz...


till now shakti has reached on the verge of her patience level now days due to harmonal changes and mood swings she is becoming really emotional and hyper sometimes it becomes difficult for kunwar to handle her...😵

shakti :
(angrily😡) doctor ne sirf first trimester ke liye kaha tha jo ki khatm hogaya hai, aur this is my baby to so as much as ur concerned I'm also ...I don't get it whats ur problem i told you na we both will be fine i can mange it, jabse tumhe meri pregnancy ke bare mein pata chala hai your going like a mad freak, har time shakti medicines kha lo, in every two hours you bring something for me to eat, in every 1 hour u call me asking about my health, amar i need space ur suffocating me, its my life too and i know how to take care of myself and baby... do u understand....(her eyes literally out of her sockets while shouting and everybady around them has gathered up and silence prevailed) 🤔

kunwar:
(angry, irritated) Okay fine you want space na then let it be, agar tum ek saal fast nahi karogi toh main marr nahi jaogunga aur shayad marjao toh tumhe space miljaye happy now...😡

shakti was by now in tears 😭her mouth was opened wide hearing his last sentence... she just yelled..." Ur very bad kunwar, i hate you..."
(and then ran away)

here amar groaned on realising his mistake... " ohh god..." he sat down his head in his hands and facing downwards


sneha came to him and placed her hands on his shoulder and whispered ..." amar..."

he moved his head up...


sneha: amar tumhe aisa nahi bolna chahiye tha, u know na hw hyper she gets when she is having her mood swings those words she didn't meant them, it was just her harmons taking over the control... Out of every body at least you should have understood, i know its difficult to make her understand ur point of veiw but kamsekam apne aap ko calm rakhte, tum khud bhi us par chilla diye... and the last bit u shouldn't have said that pata hai na she is sensetive about these matters fir bhi...

kunwar: I know sneha mujhe woh sab nahi bolna chahiye tha janta hun yeh sab uske liye important hai but for me she and our child is the first priority, i can't let any thing happen to them... usse samjhna chahiye ki main uske bhalayi ke liye bol raha hun... aur uski iss stubborness se main tang aagaya hun sabka khayal hai but apna nahi hai, kabhi bhi meri nahi sunti toh frustation mein woh sab galti se bol diya...


sneha smiled a little...😊.


sneha: dude don't be like a devdas woh zayda dur nahi gayi hogi jao mana lo use aur haan be calm...

kunwar: i know where she is... i vil get her... thanks alot...

and he ran towards the terrace knowing very well that his stupid love will be there crying😭 and cursing him...

and there she was standing in front of rallying looking downwards at snailing traffic and complainig about him to her god...
( this her favorite timepass if she ranout of any other things to do) 🤣

shaking his head he procededd to her , her back was towards him so she couldn't see him... he hugged her from behind and whispered in her ears..." I'm sorry..."

she stopped her verbal abuses and from the corner of her eyes saw him..." ab kyun aaye ho, jao na yahan se tumhe nahi rehna na mere saath toh jao... I hate you .. samjhe tum...
"

kunwar: but i love you my sweety pie... aur main kahan jaunga tumhe chodkar dekho tum toh mujhe ghar se nikal dogi par baki koi bhi mujhe apne ghar mein nahi rakhega na dharmesh, na humare frnds aur agar indore gaya toh mere mummy papa toh mujhe joote alag se marenge 🤢so main kahan jonga...

she smiled😊 a bit but covered it up instantly..." kyun hai na mere parents woh tumhe zarur rakhlenge fokat mein, bhains ki tarah padne rehna wahan meri mom toh waise bhi mujhse zayda tumse pyar karti hai...'
😡

kunwar: arrey haan yeh toh maine socha hi nahi, chalo done tumhe ghar drop karke main apna saman pack karlunga...
👍🏼

shakti turned facing him and his hands encircled her waist..."haww... how dare you tum hume chod ke chale jaoge..."
(she pouted)

kunwar: kyun tumne hi toh kaha tha na ki u needed space so ab space de toh raha hun pur 3 BHK ki space hai... do whatever you wanna do...


shkati grabbed him from collar and threatened him..."you are not going any where do you hear me Mr. kunwar amarjeet singh... tum humesha mere aur mere baby ke saath hi rahoge, humare gulam ban kar chahe main tum par kitna hi chillao, attyachaar karun but tum kuch nahi bologe..."😡
(with last line she pulled him more towards her making his lips just an inch away from hers)

kunwar: agar tum aise dhamki dogi toh main pakka bhaag jaonga... mmm...
(he was cutted)

she furously kissed his lips, first he was stunned at her sudden action then he to kissed her moving his hands up and down on her back calming and soothing her wildness, and she was running her hands in his hairs, thay both were transported to some another world with ragged breathing and dancing tounges bringing a fiery heat in the silght chilly weather and the rest of world disappeared for them.... when they were short of breath they both pulled apart extinguishing the flames inside them and making them come back to the focus...

they both smiled and there forehead touched, eyes closed...
❤️

kunwar: what was that for???


shakti: just to shut that big mouth of yours...and dare you bring those death words again, i swear i would strangle you with my own hands or just push u off from this terrace... and i'm sorry too... 🤢i shouted at you na...mujhe aaj kal kuch samjh nahi aata ki main kya bol rahi hun these pregnancy jitters are to much sometimes par tumhe kya hua tha u don't shout at me ever so...😭

kunwar: aww.. baby main toh darr gaya ... but haan aaj pata nahi main bhi buhat zayda bol gaya na lagta hai tumhari company ka effect ho raha hai u know na that we r going to have a baby so may be mood swings...
.(winked😉)

shaki: ya ya why not mood swings... kunwar you are pathetic at excuses...
😛

and they burst out in laughter...

so shakti didn't kept fast but kunwar did it for her and they do completed all the rasams and all means she feeding him with her hands and he seeing her through sieve and all...⭐️
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4 months later...

kunwar was hell worried about shakti they were taking her to the hospital...

they were arranging for a house party as the dancing troop from their accdemy won the competion and the folllowing day was kunwars birthday,... though nobody let her do any work but still she was super excited and chirpy,managing all the arrangements by sitting on the couch.. kunwar was in tension because although her due date is some days later but keeping record of neeti's pregnancy he was being very careful.. and all his nightmares came true when she yelled😲 in pain around 10 "o" clock...


kunwar ran to her..." shak's kya hua, false alarm hai ya fir baby kicked you..."
(become panic)

shakti:
( trembling voice) kunwar my water broke... its time v need to go to h..ooo..spitall...😭

and she shouted loudly in pain...



kunwar picked her up immediately and ran as some of their frnds were already there so archie drove the car and kunwar and alsiha sat at back with shakti...
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it had been almost 45 minutes since shakti was inside the operation theater😡 yellilng and cursing and receiting some of the beautiful verbal abuses🤢...

in the car and while on strecher also she was beating kunwar and abusing him..." kunwar you idiot tumhari wajah se mera yeh haal hai.. you donkey, you monkey, you DOO... " and she was taken into OPD...

everybody was there in the waiting area kunwar pacing to and fro...a nurse came and onformed.." Mr.singh ur wife wants u to be with her..."


kunwar was already to go in but archie and macci stopped him..."dude tu pagal hai kya tujhe pata bhi hai andar kya hoga... nope ur not going inside, better u stay here..."

kunwar who was already on the verge of crying shot them glares😡..." stop it both of you andar meri wife or child hai main ja raha hun bas.."


archie came and held his arm and macci another just then shantanu and sneha came running...

shan: amar shak's kaisi hai aur baby...
😕

kunwar: woh andar hai aur abhi baby delivery nahi hui hai...

sneha: toh tum bahar kya kar rahe ho... andar jao you moron...

kunwar: sneha main andar jaa raha tha but yeh dono.. glaring at archie and macci and giving leave me or you wil regret later look...🤢

shan: yarr jane do na usse andar.. she needs him...


archie: nahi.. dude tu pagal vagal hai kya.. woh kaise jayega andar pata hai andar...
(but sneha intrupted)

sneha: oye jane de use warna tu dekh kya karti hun main...

macci: acha kya karegi bata...


sneha: abe oye punjaban hun main panga mat liyo chal chod amar ko warna dono ke jo yeh daant hai na salmat nahi rahenge...
(lifting her hands in a punching position)

archie and macci left kunwar at that moment... he ran inside and sneha gave both the hooligans a deadliy look...🤢

shant: Hayye rey meri punjaban...
(she blushed) ☺️
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after 2 hours or so a nurse handed amar his beautiful bonny baby girl.. he admired her and a tears of happiness trickled down his cheeks... he moved to shak's so that she can also see their princess their creation...

shakti looking weak from all the stress but smiled on having a glimpse of their baby...


shakti: Happy birthday kunwar...
(placed a hand on their daughters head)

kunwar: this is the best birthday gift of my life shak's thanku...
.(he kissed her forehead and protecting their princess in his arms)❤️

gang entered the room and on seeing their cute little angel they congrats the couple...


mukti: so jiju humari pyari si baby ka naam kya hai...

amar looked towards shakti and smiled she signaled him to tell...

kunwar: ARSHA...

everybody.. "awww..."

shan: par iska koi matlab bhi hai ya fir bas apne naam ka combination hai isilye...

shakti: shan my hubby has always some reaasons for every thing he does so kunwar batao...

kunwar: arsha ka meaning hai..."prayer ceremony" or yeh humari ibadat hai...
(he hugged 🤗shakti in side ways)

gang: picture perfect family...

shakti: abhi kahan... jab tak mera prince yani ek baby boy na ho tab tak no perfect family...

kunwar and all others: NOOO...
😲

shakti pouted..." kunwar u don't want another baby from me... "

kunwar: aisa nahi hai baby but kya hai na tum delivery mein jate time buhat marti ho aur verbally abuse kart ho toh isiliye...

shakti: aur tumlogon ne kyun mana kara???
(confused)😕

alisha: kyunki tumhe pain mein dekh kar iss gadhe ki halat buhat buri ho jati hai ya toh yeh rone wala tha ya kisi ko maarne wala tha...


all laughed...😆 and this how it is just a new beginig for our Arsha and their little baby arsha, of which these were few sweet and sour moments hope u all liked it...🥳❤️

THE END...


so finally khatam hui my first ever write up, guys kaisa tha batana zarur aur like bhi karna pasand aye toh, and this applies to silent readers also guys last update of this SS so its a request mw did u find this story,it feels good to complete a story...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the sweet and sour elements!😃
Marvellous ending!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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damn !!!!!!!!!

u defeated me in length
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb awesome lovely mindblowing amazing update + epilouge..
really loved it...
no words... just beautiful
u hav describe each nd everything beautifully...
"prayer ceremony" the meaning of ARSHA... aww
keep writing more nd more ...
thnx for pm..

p.s. gone miss this ss of arsha... as they are very imp in my life...
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thanku sweetie..😊
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thanx i am glad u liked it..
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Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007

Loved the sweet and sour elements!😃

Marvellous ending!



thanku very much dear, i am happy u liked their khatte mithe moments...😊

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