KriYaansh OS: Forever Yours!!!

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hi guys!!!

i know- i know do-do updates pending hain mere ff's ke buti had to give my senior member becoming treat!!!

so i wrote this os to treat my fellows specially my kaminis!!

this is my first attempt on os so wish me luck!!


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"Urgghh!!! Swayam, yeh time itni dheere kyun chalta hain?? Tere paas koi ilaaj nahi hain kya???"

Swayam was just staring at him and chuckling at his amusing struggles to pass the time.

Swayam: rey, it's alright!!! I am telling you for the last time, stop acting like a baby!!! Baaki saare boys, if you haven't noticed tere inn tantrums ki vajah se yahan se challe gaye hain aur sirf main bacha hoon toh plz, mujhe toh mat pakka!!!!

Rey gave him a disgusting, disbelieving look and sat down on the chair.

Rey: aur kitna time??

Swayam: (chuckling) 4 days!

Rey legs caught legs spasm and they shot him up in shock. He couldn't believe it!!

Rey: 4 DAYS!!!!! Have you and Taani totally lost it???

Swayam started laughing but rey got tensed. "4 days" was constantly being repeated in his mind and he got more and more restless.

4 days!!!! Has everyone got freaking mad??? 4 days!!!! Main nahi jhel sakta!!

He sat down on his knews in front of swayam and started pleading him and requesting him.

Rey: swayam…..mere bhai…..mere dost…..please baat karle…..taani ko call karna!!!...teri toh joh behan hain!!...meri baat voh Kabhi nahi maanegi!!!...plz…plz!!!

Swayam: par mein usse kya bolu???

Rey: use vaapas bola!!!! Right now!!!! 4 days is too long, tell her to come right now, with the others!!!plzzz!!!! use bolna ki maine bolaaya hain!!

Swayam agreed at his wish and called Taani who had gone to celebrate her birthday for a week long birthday bash road trip with the rest of the girlies. 3 days had already passed and now it was heights for rey!!! Cant anyone understand that he so cant live without seeing her, hugging her and just holding her??? He had become so used to pamper his fianc day and night that even an hour without her seemed incomplete and here it was the maater of a freaking week!! And they expect him to go through it?? In no hell way!!!

Swayam's convo.

Taani: hain bhai, Kya hua??

Swayam: Taani, tum sab apna trip cut short nahi kar sakte??

Taani: bhai, don't worry, aapko bhabhi se milna hain na?? thoda aur wait karlo, please….mere liye!! Waise bhi sharon bhabhi aapka photograph dekh-dekhke apne din guzaar rahi hain, thoda aap bhi sehlo!! Jabse aap dono ki shaadi hui hain na, tabse aap bhabhi ke peechhe kuch zyaada hi deewaane nahi ho gaye??

Swayam: (blushing) Taani, abhi tu chotti hain chhotti rahe!! Waise……….you know teri engagement ho gayi, ab shaadi ka bhi time aa raha hain!! Aur tera fianc toh…………..

Taani: bhai, uske baarein mein aap kuch nahi bolenge!! Aap mere bhai hain aur main aapko maarna nahi chahiti!!

Swayam: oh-ho dhamkee!! Achcha waise I called cause mein toh rahe raha hoon, actually hum sab rahe rahein hain par humaara rey nahi!! Usse apni dearest fianc ke biger ek pal nahi raha jaa raha!! So if you don't mind please talk to him or he is gonna pakkao me to death!!!!

Swayam handed his mobile to rey and he snatched it quickly and vented out his inner restlessness on Taani.

Rey: Taani, please please please come back!!!!! I cant live without my fianc!! I want her right now in my arms!!! Cant you just cut short your girly week out?? Please!!!! For me!!!! You can do that, come on taani!! Please! Please!please!!

He continued to plead as a five year old boy asking to buy a chocolate from a vender.

Taani: rey, whom are you missing??? Your fianc or me??

Rey had enough such questions from her and was already irritated from them. Why did she had to ask that everyday?? Knowing that the answer wold be the same and will just NEVER change!!!!

Rey: Taani, enough of this! You know who I love and whom I'm missing to the the core of my heart! I need to talk to that person, can you please do me the ind favour and give me the pleasure so that I can talk to the person I love?

There was a moment silence which was broken out by a sweet sugary voice on the other side of the receiver……..

Caller: hello?????

Just her voice filled his heart again. Her voice which was capable to drive him off all the edges and roll him into a dreamland from where he can just never return, a forest so dense he just becomes lost in it, a poison so powerful it can make him loose all his consciousness. The voice which he hadn't heard since the past three days and was feeling as if he had forgotten how to live. She completed him, his soul……she was his better half as they were never two beings just two bodies with a combine soul. They thief of his heart was the speaker on the phone, he so wanted to sue her, make her arrest for the crime she did…………the crime to be so gorgeous, so pure at the same time, so divine and sooo cute that even when he does not see her, he still wants to cuddle her, wrap her in his arms and stay so forever…………..

Rey: (his voice was husky and dreamy at the same time cause he still wasn't of wherever she had send him)hi………….

Caller: REY!!!!!! Oh my god!!! You know, I wil kill you, LITERALLY KILL YOU!!!! Itne din ho gaye ekk baar bhi call nahi kiya!! Aur ab call kar rahe ho!!??? Aap rahe sakte ho par ap jaante ho main aapke biger thodi der bhi nahi rahe sakti!! Why rey, why???? Aapko meriyaad nahi aayi kya?? How can you be like this!! You have so changed Mr. Reyaash Singhania!!! Tum pehle toh mujhe itnaa ignore nahi karte the!!!! I hate you!! Jaao, main abbaat nahi karoongi!!!

He could feel her pout and anxiety to talk to him over the phone too. He felt her so cute that he almost drowned in the moment but got a grip on himself. He decided to play with her for a while, she had played with his feelings by being away, so it was his turn now!!

Rey:ok, baat nahi karni toh bye!!!

He cut the call and waited for the return one to come. As predicted it was flashing on the mobile screen in the next second. He grinned………kahan bachke jaaogi??

Rey: hello…..

Caller: rey, you seriously don't love me….???

She was crying and now the water had grown to high for him to handle too! He melted the instant and went into his most consoling tone showing his love in his every sound…..

Rey: kriya….please don't cry!!! You know I cant see you like this!!! Please……

Kriya: rey, you are not seeing me right now!!

Rey: I can feel you……your every tear gives a scratch to my heart……………..the pain I receive is twenty times more than you can even imagine!!!!

Kriya: but how do you know I am crying??

Rey: kriya, i—

Kriya: hey, I wanna give you something!!

Rey: (confused how she recovered so soon and was so excited) what??

Kriya: a surprise!!

Rey: aur who iss nanhi si jaan ko kab milega? (pout and looking little boy baby cute)

There was a soft peck on his cheeks and two hands grabbed his shoulders from behind……

Kriya: abhi…….

He grabbed her after a swish turn into a powerful, passionate hug which she no hesitantly returned…..

Rey: kriya, I miss-

Kriya: I missed you more!!! Rey, maine nahi chhodkar jaaongi aapko Kabhi!! Main nahi rahe paati!!

Her head was burried in his chest and his arms were circled around her gripping her tight, he was so powerful that even the man winning wwf's again and again could also not put them apart.

"ahemm,ahemm!! Guys can your romance wait till you reach your house??"

Kriya moved herself from rey but rey wouldn't let her go and clutched her curves tighter in himself. their chests were apart but legs and waists were pressed together . (hope you guys get it).

Rey: (to the gang through gritted teeth) tum logo kiii kyaaa problem hain????

They all laughed and sat with their love on the etrium's stairs. It was their last year and the best one ever in the most amazing college ever: st.louise!! swaron were married; kriyaansh, viha and taanvam (Taani+shivam) were engaged and rimar, nimmi and bharat+Vishaka were still bf's and gf's only.

Kriyaansh joined them but rey couldn't keep his hands to himself and made kriyaansh sit between his legs as she refused to sit on his laps. Rey was sitting with his legs wide open for place for kriya. She sat wither legs sticked together, his arms/hands around her narrow waist pushing her perfectly blendid curves in his body. (guys, hope you all can relate their position.)

Swayam: (who was hugging Sharon) so how come you guys back?? Tumne toh itne strictly kaha tha 7 days poore, no returns before, toh phir kya hua??

Sharon: (rolling her eyes andpointing at kriya) you see that girl over there?? The one you call your sister?? She was the problem!!!! Usske tantrums!!! Gosh!!!! Mujhe rey ke paas jaana hain!!!! Sharon, you are so mean!! 7 days ka surprise trip plan kiya Taani ke liye!! Not fair!! Mera linecutter!!!!!

Sharon acted like kriya perfectly, being the diva herself. Everyone laughed except kriyaansh and Taani(she still loved rey but was commited unwillingly to shivam) the other girls followed the acting session……..

Neha: kriya cant live without rey neha!!! Please kuch karo na!! mujhe waapas jaana hain warna main khaana nahi khaaongi!! Neha, agar tumhe tumhaare babu se door rakhein toh!!!

Vishaka: Vishaka, you are my girl na, tum toh samjho!!! And when we offered her some food as she was growing weak she just scremed at us!!! I don't want food!! Only rey!!!!! I want rey!!! I want rey!! (like a small baby)

Everyone laughed harder and harder. Kriya pouted and rey smiled at her cuteness which was being enacted by the girls. He gave her a flying kiss and she blushed. He adored her and was lost in her, she looked up and they shared a look-look,hawa-hawa…………..swaron nudged them to come back to the real world from reyaanshworld and kriyaworld so they could see the acting…..

Simmi: and the best one was……… (she snatched kriya's bag which was lying beside her and took out rey's picture from it. She took it in her hands and brought it front of her face and acted to go lost in him and pretended a faint smile on her face)………rey, I love you!!!! Rey, I miss you!!! Rey, please come back to me!!! Rey, I still love you!!!! Rey, I again love you!!!!! Rey, I am still continuously loving you!!!! And so on and on….!!!!!

Everyone: ooohhh!!!!!!!

She blushed hard. Everyone hooted as rey placed a peck on her cheeks. He holded her hands and brought it to the mouth and kissed it:: kriya, I love you too!!!

The teasings just grew more and more and the way the gang commented, kriya was not able to take anymore so she dug her face in his chest which was too embarrassed and bright red from her tremendous blushing…..

Rey got up and carried kriya n her arms, lifting her up from the ground.they shared anintense eyelock.

Rey: guys, we are going……..

he carried her to their personal room( they maked one in the college with bed and everything were they sometimes spend the nights in each others arms, sometimes with clothes; sometimes without….). Away from 3 days!!! He had to do what he missed the most…….

She was not ready or just nervous, he made her nervous….but with just his one arm around her, she felt protected…in her home….in his arms….

He came close to her she doesn't know why but she moves out of his embrace and to the door. He doesn't give up and comes behind her and grabs his waist by his hand and pins her back to the door, banging it close. His left hand goes above her and locks the door and comes back retracing her fingers on her cheek.He brushes his hand through her hair and helds them petitely.He tastes her upper lip slowly leaning forward, she pushes him slightly but it didnt really have much effect on him.He kissed her more passionately making it a continuing kiss than liplock.He pulled off from the kiss for her breath for a while and started plating wet kisses on here exposed neck and then to the chest.His hand outlined her perfect feminie figure from her shoulders, passed through the curves and started working on her hips.His hands struggled to get down the hips. , he loosened the belt on her capris and pulled it off.His hand passed through the short feeling her soft thighs and he untucked the shirt.His hand slided down the shirt directlty to her bare waist sending jolts of electricity down her spine.His fingers were moving on her waist while lips caressed the nape of the neck. You didn't wanted this, hain na baatcutter", he told beneath the neck giving her little waist a tight squeeze. She moaned in anticipation.She clutched his t shirt tightly.His lips wandered down her chest, he circled her with his arm and worked out with his lips on the bottom of her top.He successfully put it off her and removed it.He kissed her chest more passionately and moved it.She let out a gasp.She pulled him back to face her.She pulled his shirt up and caresses his mascular body with her hands.He completely removes the tshirt and breaks off again into a passionate kiss.He pulled her more closer, their bare bodies were now in contact with each other, the passion growing wilder and more intense. He carried her to the bed where they……………………………

One hour later!!

They bothe were sleeping in each other's arms, cuddled into their love only covered by a thin silk sheet…..

Rey: (whisper) kriya…??

Kriya: (whisper) hmmm…??

They both were still really close, breathing on each other……the hot breaths caressing their cheeks and their eyes closed………

Rey: so, forever mine????

She opened her eyes, he opened his. She crashed her lips in his and in between murmured……..

"forever yours……….."

The kiss's passion remained between them just the same till their wedding and then as usual, one baby boy and most common: happily ever after!!!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

awesome os sejal...
loved it loved it loved it
swaron are married... wow
kriyaansh were so cute nd adorable... awwieee
they cant live without each other for seconds also...
gang teasing kriya... hayee 😳 😳
every girl's acting liked kriya nd tease her... loved it
nd then there romance... uske liye kuch nahi bolugi... *blush* *blush*
keep writing more...
thnx for pm

p.s. all the best for papers
Edited by GayatriJethani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great OS
Loved all the girls teasing kriya
For a moment I thought Taani was his fianc nd I was gna stop reading but luckily i didn't
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsm yr😊...
really i loved it...
mujhe laga ki taani rey ki fiance hai but thank god kriya thi...
he loved her so much...
wow👏...
uske bina ek pal bhi nahi reh sakta ...
how sweet...

Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome os...
Luvd it
u scared me in starting i was abt to stop reading it bt then console myslef dat it is a kriyansh os so glad i read it
thankx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS...
WOW!!!!!
Ahmezing luvly awsum...<3 <3 <3
Ur first attempt in OS iz just awesome...
Just lotz an lotz of Wows...:) :) :)
N thankz 4 d pm...:)
Edited by 0-Sata_rupa-0 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res ! 😭

~Unres~
Socked?!!! Not beliveing?? !!
Ki Mein? Aur itna jaldi Unres? 😆
Dont belive ki its me? 🤪
haha.. Believe kar le.. Mein hi hu.. 😆
ha.. Pata hai.. Pata hai.. Ki KR FF pe Abhi tak Unres nahi kiya.. Sowwiee sowwie *Kaan Pakding*..
Isske baad jaake wahi par unres karne wali hu...
Pls pls Maarna mat ! 🥺


Sabse Pehele bada wala Congratualations and badi waali Jhappi Senior Member banne ke liye... Love You Seju
Abb toh tu Bindaass hamare saath Spamming kar sakti hai ! 😆
Awww... Ye Os specially Kamini's ke liye... Aww...
Love you meri seju Jaan
Badi wali Jhappi again
Meri Kamini Ka First os.. Aur mera comment 2nd page par ! Uahhh 😭 😭
Par Baki dono kamini's se pehele hai !! Yay !!!
Preetu, Kuhu -


Ok enough of my Pakaofying.. Update pe coming...
Aww.. Seju kamini.. Os was fantastic, fabulous, wonderful, super-duper awesome, ah-mazing, mindblowing, loveeed it... ❤️
Aww... Rey is Choo cute... Acting like a baby.. Awwiee...
Oops.. Bechaara swayam.. Pareshaan ho gaya Rey se ! 😆
Lol.. Baaki saare boys rey ki nautanki ke wajah se bhag Gaye.. Haha.. Bechaare swayam ko atka ke chale gaye !.. 🤣
Woops.. Baki sab logo ko laga ki you were writing about Taa---Rey and taani rey ki fianc hai !!! Hahahha... 🤣 🤣
Par mujhko pehele se hi pata tha ki ye teri nautanki hai baki sab ko gumrah karne ke liye !
😆
Tu bohot Mind trick karti hai.. Jaise ArSha FF mein woh Alan wala kiya tha...
But this time mujhko pata tha ki tu khali Nautanki kar rahi hai !! 😛
And i even know ki tu kabhi taa--rey ke baare mein nahi likhegi !! 😉

Haha.. 4 more days sunke bechaare rEy ki halat tight !!
Aww.. Ye lines kitne cute hai.. "Cant anyone understand that he so cant live without seeing her, hugging her and just holding her??? He had become so used to pamper his fianc day and night that even an hour without her seemed incomplete."... Awwiee..

Swaron Married... Awwiee...

Awwiee.. Kriyaansh ki phone cute thi !! ❤️ ❤️
Lol.. Sab girls ne milke bechaari kriya pe atttack kiya.. Hahah...
Lol.. I could imagine every girl acting as kriya.. And teasing her... !!
Lol.. Kriya saying.. Mujhe rey se nahi milwaya toh mein khana nahi khaungi.. Haha.. Rofl.. 🤣 🤣
and the best one by simmi..
Simmi: and the best one was……… (she snatched kriya's bag which was lying beside her and took out rey's picture from it. She took it in her hands and brought it front of her face and acted to go lost in him and pretended a faint smile on her face)………
rey, I love you!!!! Rey, I miss you!!! Rey, please come back to me!!! Rey, I still love you!!!! Rey, I again love you!!!!! Rey, I am still continuously loving you!!!! And so on and on….!!!!!

Haww.. Clg mein personal room ! 😲
Wah ! Kya clg hai !!! 😆

Aww.. their Romance... Awwiee.. Awesome..

And the last line...
Rey: so, forever mine????
kriya: "forever yours……….."


Aww.. Loved it seju..
Awesome Os.. Loved it.. Love You !
👍🏼 👍🏼 ..
🤗 🤗 .. 🤗 🤗
Edited by hetalt29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is ur 1st os! Believe me.. U simply rocked it!!
In starting I was totally puzzled n re-checking continuously if itz a Kriyaansh OS or Taa---rey! Bt then realized it was just a trap n u've successfully trapped me..lolz

Awww Kriyaansh r engaged n missing each other so badly.. Loved the way girls were mimicking Kriya..
n a personal room in College!! Hmmm? *rolling eyes*
then Their romance... It was as hot as ever..
Want more KR n ArSha OS from u
Edited by shukti_19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome ..!
Loved it ..!
Very cute ..!
Thanks 4 d pm..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sooo CUTE

teasing and ooting by the gang and d way d both were missing each other..
loved it...
yhnxx fr d pm

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