One Big Happy Family

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone! So recently I have been watching all my favorite TV shows from the past and have decided to write a Fan Fiction using the Characters I love. So with no further waiting'Here it is! Enjoy.😃

The Jodies are...
Maan and Geet (Geet Hui Sabse Parayi)
Prithvi and Damini (Love Ne Mila Di Jodi)
Kavya and Suhana (Kavyanjali/Bhaskarbarthi/Sasural Gendha Phool)
Shaantanu and Khanak (Rang Badalti Odhani)
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CHARACTER SKETCH

Khurana/Saxena Household

Savitri Devi: (Anju Mahendru) Head of the house. Loves all four of her grandsons a lot and makes sure that they are happy at all times. Fun, loving, caring, and can also be strict at some times.

Mann Sing Khurana: (Gurmeet Chaudhary) Eldest of four brothers. Is very strict and no nonsense type of guy. He is super hot and can make a girl melt within seconds. Loves his family and can do anything for them. Tough on the outside but a big softy in the inside.

Prithvi Khurana: (Gaurav Khanna) Faternal twin to Mann. He was born five minutes after him. His personality is just like his twin but he is still very laid back. Loves horse riding. Again super hot and ladies flock around him every day.

Kavya Saxena/Khurana: (Eijaz Khan) Third brother. Savitri Devi adopted him and his brother when he was very young and has thought of him as his grandson. He is very poetic and does a lot of shayari. Girls are always all over him.

Shaantanu Saxena/Khurana: (Karan Tacker) Youngest of the four and real brother of Kavya. He was also adopted along with Kavya. He is very fun loving type of guy and pranks around a lot but still gets away with it. Again he is very hot and has the girls drooling.

Gujral Household

Bibi: (Zohra Segal) Head of the house. She has four granddaughters that she loves to death. Is very funny but a very intelligent woman.

Damini Gujral: (Chandana Sharma) She is very responsible and handles all the business. Loves her sisters a lot and makes sure they have every little thing they need. Very strict with other people and a hot head.

Geet Gujral: (Drashti Dhami) She is very bubbly and funny. Just like Muskan from Dil Mil Gaye.

Suhana Gujral: (Ragini Khanna) Exactly like Geet. Very hyper and is a big prankster. Her and Geet make everyone go crazy.😆

Khanak Gujral: (Yashashri Mashurkar) sweet, shy, innocent type. Always tries to make everyone happy first and makes sure they are always comfortable.

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Well here was the Character Sketch. Hope you all liked it. I am writing the first chapter and will have it posted by today.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey everyone here is the intro. chapter 1. Enjoy 😊
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INTRODUCTION CHAPTER 1

Khurana/Saxena house (Mumbai)

Savitri Devi is sitting at the breakfast table and her grandsons join her.

SD is sitting at the head of the table and Maan and Prithvi on her right and left hand side. Kavya joins in next to Maan and Shaan is next to Prithvi.

SD: "Good morning baccho"

They all greet SD "good morning Dadi" and start to dig into the breakfast, when Prithvi and Maan notice that SD is not eating and is lost in her thoughts.

Maan: "Kya hua Dadi? Aap kuch khoi hui lag rahi ho?" He looks toward SD with concern, which makes the other two notice SD's quietness as well.

SD: "kuch nahi beta woh mujhe aaj subha meri best friend ka call aya tha. Hamne unse bohot samaye ke baad baat ki, toh bus purani yaade yaad aah gayi." She said smiling.

Shaan: "oh ho Dadi aap ne toh ham logo ko aise hi dara diya, aur ek baat toh mujhe aache se pata hai ki Maan aur Prithvi bhai ko toh almost heart attack hi aah gaya hoga."

He hi-fived Kavya across the table and they both started laughing.

Prithvi: "Hanh hanh udao mazzak…" he said while twisting shaan's ears.😆

Shaan: "ouch common bahi I was just playing with you"

SD just smiles and shakes her head but then gets serious.

SD: "Baccho hame aap logo se kuch baat karni hai." All four get serious and look toward SD.

SD: "Ham ne jiss friend se aaj baat ki woh Delhi me rehti hai. Aur aab kuch business ke wajha se woh yaha Bombay me shift ho rahi hai. Aur aap logo ko toh pata hai ki Bombay me itne jaldi ghar milna ahsan nahi hai. Toh hamne unhe kuch samaye tak yaha rehne ke liye bula hai. Hame yaakin hai ki aap logo ko koi aitrazz nahi hoga"

Kavya: "Aare Dadi aab hame kyu bhala aitraz hoga?"

Maan: "Hanh Dadi hame koi bhi problem nahi hai." He said smiling and others nodded their heads agreeing with him.

SD: "Toh theek hai ham unse baat karlege. Aur hanh unki granddaughter's bhi hai joh unke saath yaha rahegi"

As she said that all four of them automatically thought about little young girls and felt relived. At least they wouldn't have to deal with crazy older girls falling all over them in their own house too.

Prithvi: "Theek hai Dadi aab hame chalna chahiye warna late ho jaye ga"

All four brothers get up kiss their grandma goodbye and leave. Maan and Prithvi for office and Kavya and Shaan for college. Not imagining how wrong they are and what crazy toofans will be coming their way...

Pre-cap: Inro. of the girls and SD's friend and their granddaughter's coming to Khurana/Saxena house.😃
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Well here it was. I hope it was an ok start and you all liked it.😊 I will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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INDEXCharacter Sketch: Page 1 Intro Chapter 1: Page 1

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