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Posted: 12 years ago
Maaneet ff- kaisa ye pyaar hai





Part 49





Maan lay on hospital bed and geet sit near him.

She stands up and move but he held her wrist and said 'Now where are you going?"

Geet: bs wo pani lene ja rhi thi

Maan: hmm,

Jaldi aana

Geet: hm

She goes outside. After going her dev and meera enter in his room.

Meera: geet

Dev: bro

Maan: tum dono

He tries to sit but dev stop him.

Dev: bro aap aaram kijiye

Apne to hum sb ki jaan hi nikal de thi

Thank god you are alright.

Maan: dev you are crying.

Dev: nhi wo to

Bs

Maan: mein thik hu dev

Meera: maan dev ne bilkul shi kha

Aap ke accident ke baad na milna , dheere dheere hum sb ko todta jar ha tha

Sbse jyada geet aur daadimaa ko

Bs hum sb ek dusre ke saamne apne aansu chupa lete the

Pr geet''

Dev: bro geet kha hai

Wo bina kissi ko btaye achanak se chli gyi

Hum sb bhut pareshan ho gye the

Maan: geet bahar gyi hai

Ye lo aa gyi

Meera turn and hugs her.

Geet: kya hua meera

Meera: kya huya

Now you are asking what happen.

You know very well, you go out to home and not tell to anyone "where are you going" in which place.

We are mad, you know me and dev are much tensed for you.

And you,

Geet: sorry

Meera: sorry for what geet?

You not care about us.

Geet: this is not true.

I get call "maan hospital mein hai"

Toh'

Meera: toh tum bina kissi ko bina btaye chali gyi

Ek baar bhi ye nhi socha

Meera ka kya haal honga

Tumhe kuch ho jata toh

She caught both ears and say sorry to her.

She looks so cute while holding both ears.

Dev: meera ab maaf bhi krdo

Meera: hmm

Maaf kiya

Agli baa rasa kiya to'.

Geet: toh tumse bura koi nhi honga

We all know.

Dev, geet , maan laugh together.

Meera: you make me fun.

Geet: nhi

Dev: maan bro mil gye ye khushkhabri daadimaa ko bhi to bta du

Meera: hmm

geet ab tum ghar chalo mere sath

geet: par maan

meera: maan ke pass dev ruk jayenge

kyun dev

Dev: ha geet

Tum rest kro

Geet: mein ruk jati hu na

Meera: geet is halat mein

Mein tumhe yha nhi chod sakti

Maan: kis halat mein

Geet ko kuch huya hai kya

Dev: nhi bro

Wo to

Geet: mujhe fever tha

Isliye ye dono mujhe rest ke liye kh rhe hai

Maan: geet tumne mujhe btaya kyun nhi

She came near to him and held his hand and said "maan ab mein thik hu"

She turns and glares towards both "bilkul thik hu"

Kyun dev and meera

Dev (whisper) : meera ye geet dra kyun rhi hai hume

Bro ki tarah

Maan: tum dono khud hi baatein krte rhonge

Ya kuch khonge

Geet say to meera through eyes "now I want each moment with him"

Meera nodded.

Meera: geet tum yha ruk jayo

Maan ko acha lagenga

Dev: abhi tum

Meera: dev ab hume chalna chaiye

In dono ko bhut si baatein krni hongi

She came near to geet and hugs her and whisper into her ears "baby aur apna dhyan rakhna, and don't worry maan ko tum khud hi btana "

Geet: "thanks meera"

Meera: "I understand"

Take care maan.

Maan: hmm

Both left the place.

In car

Dev: meera ye kya hai

Meera: kya dev

Dev: ek to geet weak hai

Wo apna dhyan rakhengi ya maan ka

Meera: dev relax

Dev: daadimaa bhut naaraz ho jyengi

Aur bro ko jb pta chalenga

Wo bhi

She cupped his face and said "look into my eyes dev"

Geet ab bilkul thik hai

Uske har dard ki dwa uske sath hai

Uske pass uska maan hai ''' dev

Dev: pr meera

Meera: sshhh

Jb pyaar sath ho

To

Har dard km ho jata hai

Aur geet har pal ab maan ke sath rhna chahti hai

Unhone bhut duriya dekhi ha dev

Nazdeekiyo ke pal bhut hi kam naseeb huye hai

Dev: hmm

Tum har baat kitni achi trh smjh jati ho

She removed own hand from his face and slightly touch his hairs "kyun kit um jo nhi smjhte buddhu"

Dev: tumne mujhe buddu kha

She innocently nodded and after sometimes both laughs.

Meera monologue

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Kash dev tum smjh pate

Meri unkahein baateion ko

Tumhe lagta hai mein sb kuch smjh jati hu

Par tumahre dil mein kya hai mere liye

Bs ye nhi jaan pati

Dev monologue


Tum sbko smjhti ho meera

Mujhe bhi''

Par mere dil mein kya hai tumhare liye

Ye kyun nhi smjhti'''

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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update hospital scene and meera dev feelings



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Posted: 12 years ago
wow lvly update
get 's glare
uff maanu ka asra toh hoga na😆😆
when she will told him they r going to b parents
waiting 4 next part
lvd it..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update dear
waitng for next
cnt sn
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrzt for new thread,,,
nice FF..
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update

waitng for maan reaction wen he got to knw dat maan is going to be father

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...geet ne abhi tak batayi nehi ki woh pregnant hai...aur meera aur dev...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome dear but when geet disclose to maan that she is pregnant.
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update
loved it
continue soon dear

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