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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: riafna

hey I really want to know about all these things which I referred last time..I mean you have to continue..please don't stop by next two updates...actually waiting for this train is really awesome...so cover all these if you think it will be better...love the possessive Nk...Thanks for PM




You will get whatever you want in the next few updates...thank you for appreciating
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: morning_star




You will get whatever you want in the next few updates...thank you for appreciating
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I wish this train keep going on on on...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arnav_addict

that was mindblasting
Kiss kiss kiss & kiss.☺️
With each blush Khushi blushed I blushed double😳
With his each husky confession I felt like going weak in knees.☺️

Thay are kissing like we breath.😆me lovie☺️

Waiting for next😊




OMG...Thank you...
I am so happy you like it...
the blush on my face has not completely wiped out...
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Posted: 13 years ago
this update was too good to be true...wat will happen to break them???
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update
This is so cute..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg!! naughty Arnav ☺️ ☺️

Loved their kiss 😳 A very sweet and a Fantastic update ..

Very nice work .. continue soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: march2011

this update was too good to be true...wat will happen to break them???



Break ups dont happen in my world...😳...so no worries...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aaliyahassan

Omg!! naughty Arnav ☺️ ☺️

Loved their kiss 😳 A very sweet and a Fantastic update ..

Very nice work .. continue soon 😃





AWWW...THANK YOU..
U R VERY GENEROUS...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel13

great update

mo MU and fights please
thanks for pm
cont. soon



I have no misunderstandings lined up...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey,
Can't thank you people enough for all the appreciations.
Thank you-


MyAnastasia18- This is a Fantasy fiction story.Not a Reality based story.

please6-Who needs those jalebis as best friends when you have Arnav???


happygolucky234-Wishful thinking huh?!?
Yes,In my world there are no misunderstandings and breakups...Actually nothing negative at all.😃



Part 7- You Are My Pillar Of Strength


Love does amazing things to you. You don't love someone because they're perfect, you love them in spite of the fact that they're not.

Now I felt how Payal must be feeling for her fiance and my Jiju-Mr.Akash Mehra.

How she wanted to talk to him on the phone all the time or else be near him.They planned on getting married next month beginning.I was super excited.It was going to be a perfect celebration.

And Yes.Arnav was Imperfectly perfect for me.

I was so in love that day,I could not see anything beyond Arnav.

Arnav walked me to my bus stop.When I boarded my bus,he waved to me.While waving I felt that I was leaving a part of my body behind.

Suddenly I had a very bad feeling like something worse was about to happen.My mind just felt foggy.

As soon as my house in Laxminagar arrived,I got down and called Arnav from my phone.

"Awww...missing me already baby.? He finally answered.
Relief swept over me.

"No just making sure that you are safe." i replied honestly.

"I am just outside my house.Will call you after dinner.ok Sweetie ?

"Ok.Make sure you are safe." i said wistfully.

"Ok.& you make sure you dont blush too much." He is such a tease.

"Bye.Love you"

"Love you too baby"

I started walking towards my house when i realised people staring at me in an awkward fashion.I looked all over my clothes and touched my face to see whats so wrong?

I could hear whispers around me..I tried to pick up some words.

"station.." "yeah youngsters!" "khushi" "hugging" "AR designs"" Arnav Singh Raizada"

The last name gripped my heart.
WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING...I AM SO DEAD...

I rushed past all the whispering people in to my house.

OH NO!

The scene unfolding before my eyes made me want to run for my life.But i stood rooted to the floor.

My Dad was sitting on the recliner and my Mom was talking to him deeply.Payal was frantically twirling her shawl between her fingers.The television was on and it was playing the evening news.

My arrival made them all stand up with worried faces.My mom came forward first and hugged me.

And she burst out crying.

My dad came forward and held my mother by the shoulders and made her sit.Jiji gave her water and comforted her.

I was shocked as to what had I done to get such a welcome.

The television presenter appeared on the screen.
"Yes..Viewers,the clipping you see is of Arnav Singh Raizada with his 'fiance' Khushi Kumari Gupta.Onlookers have witnessed love blooming between the two love-birds on the station.Eye witnesses foresee a romantic fairytale in the making.The connections between the Gupta's and Raizada's which has been always talked about is going to be seen in a very loving light now.Will this alliance lead to a marriage or a break-up.?Leave us your thoughts and comments on our website..."

My mind was zoning out.

The video accompanying the announcement was of us hugging on the station.

I thanked God it was not the kissing one.I would have died due to the embarrassment.

MY Dad switched off the TV and turned to look at me-The grand statue standing in doorway of the living room.

My dad took my hand and made me sit on the couch.He was always the practical person and made Jiji and myself feel like princesses.I being the younger one was the apple of his eye.

But now I felt like the rotten skin of the apple.

"What is happening between You and Arnav Singh Raizada ?" he calmly asked.

shit shit shit...damn everything has gone wrong...

Before I could answer, My phone started ringing.Arnav's name and photo flashed on my screen.I quickly cut the phone and switched it off.

I hesitantly started..."Daddy, I-..Daddy do you trust me.?"

"Yes.I know that my princess will not break my heart.But baby you need to tell me everything."

Gathering confidence i started.."Daddy I am in love with Arnav."

"Really?"

Okkk...That was so not as bad a reaction I had expected.

"Yeah.i hope you are not upset.I did not know him at all.I met him on the station when I did not know him.I was attracted to him.He is a very good guy.He is very respectful of me.I know you will like him.I know its a bit too fast.But I know you will not regret my choice,Daddy.I love him too much." I blabbered nervously.

As I was saying this I did not realise that my eyes had filled up with warm tears.

And I also did not realize that my family was grinning as if Salman Khan had just magically arrived on our doorstep.

"Yeah,That's my girl." My dad screamed.

My Mom kept on crying tears which now was looking like tears of happiness.

Jiji came and hugged me.

Ok.What did I actually miss here?

"Sweetheart,I am so happy that you have fulfilled our wishes." My dad exclaimed in happiness.

"Khushi,it was a lifelong dream of your dad that you get married to Arnie." My mom explained.

Excuse me...WHAT??

Arnie?!?!

"Don't tell me that you do not remember Arnie.?" She said looking at my confused look.

Arnie...That name rung a bell somewhere..now that Mom was saying it over and over again.
Then it hit me...

OH-MY-GOD ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA IS MY ARNIE..!❤️

Cliffhangers are necassary...

Okk...Try finding out who exactly is Arnav.Actually its very cliche.But in an awesome twist
y sort of way

Ok...Seriously I don't know what i have done...is it good enough to continue...or should i just scrap it...has it become boring by any chance..?

Okk...by a long shot I have tried to seal many of the loopholes.Please point out any such blooper or loophole which needs to be sealed.

Criticisms are always appreciated.


Precap- Childhood is the one story that stands by itself in every soul


Iss Flashback Ko Kyaa Naam Doon?
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Edited by morning_star - 13 years ago

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