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Posted: 12 years ago
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Many virika fans wanted to see a scene where in virika share their thiughts about losing their baby.A small attempt from my part.Idk how it is but ur commentz and likes are most welcomed.

VIRIKA OS

Its night time and jeevika was standing by the window,thinking something.She didnt notice when viren came in the room.Viren came and hugged her from behind,bringing her back to reality.

J:Viren ji app...

V:haan mein,aur kisko expect jia tha,mere ilawa?

J:nehi viren ji,darasal mein

V:kya baat hai jeevika,mein janta hon hon tum kuch soch rehi thi,agr tum chaho to mujh se share ker sakti ho

J:(trying to avoid viren)nehi viren ji,bas aise hi

V:jeevika,tum mujh se jhoot nehi bol sakti,sach batao kya baat hai

J:viren ji,khehte haina,ke jo log is duniya se chale jate hain,wo sitara ban jate hain

V:haan kehte hon magr tum yeh sab

Jeevika cuts him:iska matlab hamara baby bhi sitara ban gaya hai(jeevika was looking towards the sky)

Viren held jeevika.Though her statement made hm sad,he had to stay strong to support her,he couldnt break down.

V:jeevika,dekho jo hua so hua,ab is bare mein sab bhol jao

J:viren ji,wo hume dekh raha hoga na,mujhe .

V:jeevika dekho..

J:wo mujhse bohat naraz hoga,wo sochta hoga ke meri maan bohat buri hai,usme mujhe mar dia,mere jeena ka haq muh se chen liya

V:chup karo jeevika,wo aisa kuch nehi sochta hoga,wo tou apni maa per garv kerta hoga,uski maa ne kisi jaan bachai hai

Jeevika mein janta hon,tumhe in sab se bahar ane mein time lage ga,per dekho,tumhe age berhna hoga,hum kal mein nehi ji sakta jeevika

Akhir kab tal apne loss per ro gi,suno meri baat,jo humne khoya hai,humein zaroor wapis mile ga

J:viren ji,i m sorry

V:kyun

J:meine apke sath bohat ghalat kia hai,mein janti hon ke is bache se apki kitni umeindein thi,aur meine aik i jhatke mein sab khatam ker di...meri wajah se app ko bohat takleef se guzrna pera hai.

Viren ji,mujhe sambhalne ke liye app the,magr app ke sath koi nehi tha,us wakht mein khud mein itna khoi hui thi,ke mujhe ihsaas hi nehi hoa,ke sirf meine nehi per humne apna bacha khoya hai

Im sorry

Viren hugs jeevika tight and crys his heart out.The pain he had been carrying from all these days,finally he let go of it.

V:jeevika mein phir se yehi kahon ga,bhool jao sab kuch aur age berho

J:viren ji,bas app mere sath rehna,hamesha..

V:hamara sath sirf is janam ka nehi hai,balke age ane wale sab janam ka hai.

I promise jeevika,mein zindagi ke is safr mein tumhare sath kabhi nehi chohron ga,bas aik dar hai

J:kaisa dar

V:ke kahin tum mera sath na chordo

J:kabhi nehi,i promise

With this,they hug each other and forget their sorrows,and pepare themselves for the life ahead which they will lead together.

PLz over look the mistakes,thnku for reading.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful...lovely update...do continueee..and when u continue, pls do PM me... thnkz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good oe yar
thanks for writing this
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful and very well written..
Good Job:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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All i can do is 👏
outstanding os...
loved it...👍🏼
Thanks for writing so amazing os on virika...
Hope we get to read more from you on virika...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved oht and if udo continje please pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice update
i liked it
do updat esoon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have a small request...
Can you please continue with this os...
I really want to read ahead of this like virika life back on track n nice scenes of them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww lovely OS... i loved it...:):) do write more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdollashita

I have a small request...

Can you please continue with this os...
I really want to read ahead of this like virika life back on track n nice scenes of them...

First of all,Thnku for reading n liking it but I m sorry to say that I won't be able to continue with this.It is supposed to be an OS.I used to write an SS on virika but have discontinued with it because of lack of time.I m too busy to spare time for writing these,

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