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Posted: 12 years ago
I read this whole ff in one go last night-the AR version.
I'm posting my reply here coz AR thread is closed.
OMG!!!! This ff is fabulous
It was simply outstanding.
The intense tension in between AR is something I've never read before.
I loved this ff to the core.
It's simply mindblowing.
Starting from AR's first sensuous meeting to their break up and finally their wedding,everything was simply marvelous.
You are a very talented writer dear.
I want to kick myself for not coming across this wonderful piece of work earlier.
AR's love story was very unique.
Ridz wished to marry Sid whom she didn't love at all because of the promise to Sid's dad.
Sid felt that he loved Ridz and took care of her very nicely.
And Armaan didn't believe in love but eventually fell in the trap of love coming across an innocent and vulnerable Riddhima.
It really amazed me to see how Armaan's one touch overpowered all the senses of Riddhima and she could do nothing but respond to him the he wished ,inspite of the fact that her heart was not ready to let Armaan use her like this...
Gosh!! Her reluctance was sooo amazing...She denied his feelings through words and reciprocated the similar feelings in her gestures..
AR's confession was really wonderful.
Armaan's passion for Riddhima made me jittery.
I can imagine him looking at Riddhima with dark desires in his eyes and Riddhima getting all nervous yet craving for him at the same time.
Ridz lied to Armaan and for 8 months they got separated.
I really felt bad for the heartbreak of Armaan.
Poor guy had suffered so much in life.
Ridz was also not wrong.
But they say-All's well that ends well.
I'm glad that Armaan overheard the conversation of Ridz and Anjali and made Riddhima speak the truth.
I loved when he said after the disastrous party that he is going to marry her no matter what she says.
Agh!! I hate Arjun for making Armaan think so low about himself and deciding to leave Ridz.
But AR's love is so strong that no storm can break their bond.
Armaan went back to Ridz after saying her those stupid words and now both have drowned in their dangerous,sensuous and extremely intense passion...
I would like to get the pm part as well.
Plz do pm me if possible.
I know I'm a new reader so you may not pm me.But I read the whole story yesterday only,so plz forgive me for being such a late reader.
I'm eagerly waiting for the pm part.
You are a wonderful writer dear.
Hats off to you!!
Take care!
Asma
Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The pm part was just ❤️😳☺️
☺️I loved it soo much.
Gosh!! The screen of my lappy blazed with fire coz of the heart generated by the intense moments of AR...
I had always thought that Armaan was the more impatient one but Riddhima surprised me this time.
Every second attempt of Armaan to drive away back to the house was failed by Riddhima with one sensuous move.
Armaan was sooo much concerned about the first time of Riddhima and I really loved this thoughtfullness of Armaan a lot...
Well!! AR together make an intense hot couple and finally when they decided to lose control over themselves and become one,patience was the least thing expected.
I still wonder how Armaan managed to drive back home safely without getting driven by wild desires.
The steamy passionate moments in the car were just amazing.
AR are just impossible.
I can't believe that they were fighting for having the upper hand in such a tense situation.However,I loved the way two of them struggled for dominance.
Armaan tore Ridz's lehnga.Well Ridz called that for herself by waking up a hungry tiger...
Armaan tied Ridz's hands.He is unbelievable.Poor Ridz strived soo much to touch him and feel him the way he was caressing her...
I felt quite relieved when he finally untied her after satisfying his demons.
Gosh!! The hot sizzling rounds of AR gave me so many butterflies in my stomach.
My heart skipped so many beats while reading this wonderful part...
Ah!! The car,shower and kitchen encounters were fabulous.
The way you have written this long sizzling part is really fabulous.I could not help but adore your writing skills for writing each and every wild gesture of AR with such excellence.
Hate off to you for writing this outstanding part...
I wish this ff would have never come to an end.But as they say all good things come to and end and this ff is no exception to it.
Anyways,this ff is one of the best ffs I've ever read on IF.
The way AR met and their love story began with the chain of events that happened all along till their unison, was marvelous.
I loved this ff to the core and the pm part where AR became one in all senses was excelent.
I enjoyed reading this ff a lot.
Plz do come up with more such wonderful ideas in future.
Take care!
love ya
Asma

Take care!!
Asma
Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey rida
firstly hats off to u for writing such a long part
and usually long part gets boring
but this one was just uuumm hv no words to describe
each n every line was so exciting
dt i couldnt stop my self frm reading further
it was just amazing nd beautiful at d same time
u r an awesome writer
u hv written this part amazingly
the desire d passion d pain of joy d love everything
was balanced and combined perfectly.
all the emotions were shows fantastically
really loved reading it
AR were just awesome
riddhima was soo cute nd sweet
nd armaan was so loving n caring
really loved it
once again thnk u soo much fr d AR version f pm part.
p.s d AR thread was closed so i commented on arsh thread hope not a prob :)
Edited by youth_showsfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx 4 writing this amazing update.
Edited by chubzy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
After reading few comments m realising m missing some thing if u dont mind plzz mention d link to chaptr after page 126.,
Ps:Sorry jst read ur note abt pm part, plzzz send me a pm too.
Edited by chubzy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wahh..finally Got the PM Part & Indeed it was amazing..I loved it..

U described it amqzingly..no one could say u r not 18...Lol

love the Armaan was thinking about her comfort & he was holding it only for her...hat's reall nice..and that rahul telling thing was so LOL...

Loved every bt of it..u r awesome writer..
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg tooo howt
loved it
i have no word to describe
take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
came across your ff today...read all the parts in one go...amazingly written! keep up the good work... loved how you portrayed each and every scene 👏 please pm me the last part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
That wasss blooody brillianttt
omggg
hawwwt
paaasionateee
loved every bitt of it
PERFECTTT PM PART! COULDNT HAV BEEN BETTERRR
WORTH ALL THE WAIT
omggg BTLOO has ended!
Just epi ???thats it!!?
I loved BTLOO n u sooo muchhh
man one of best ff of if
n u r amazinggg wrtinggg
thnks for pm
n will b waiting for sequel
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Posted: 12 years ago
TThat wasss blooody brillianttt
omggg
hawwwt
paaasionateee
loved every bitt of it
PERFECTTT PM PART! COULDNT HAV BEEN BETTERRR
WORTH ALL THE WAIT
omggg BTLOO has ended!
Just epi ???thats it!!?
I loved BTLOO n u sooo muchhh
man one of best ff of if
n u r amazinggg wrtinggg
thnks for pm
n will b waiting for sequel

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