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Posted: 13 years ago
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Akash's charater sketch 🤣

FAB start so far wonder what he said thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting start dear ... can't wait to read more
O.O kushi 's arrogant and insensitive ? U got my attention
PLZ do pm me the next part as well
MUahhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept..loved the teaser n C.S
Looking forward to read this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Interesting prologue. Waiting to read more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing prolouge ..u write so beautifully.
Thank u for pm :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: IPKKNDkaur92

Akash's charater sketch 🤣

FAB start so far wonder what he said thanks for the PM :)


Even I was ROLFING 🤣and LOLing 😆after reading what I wrote!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1 below...


Chapter 1

Edited by Ipkkndrokzz4eva - 13 years ago
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Hey Guys! I'm back with Chapter 1.😳 This is Khushi's introduction Chapter.😃
Before starting with the first chapter, I just want to tell you guys that I believe in this:
"People rarely succeed unless they have fun in what they are doing." ~Anonymous😆




------------------------Chapter 1----------------------------
A New Beginning




"Daaadddyyy, WHY DIDN'T YOU WAKE ME UP??"




The voice was so loud that it shook the whole house with its high intensity in the morning at 7'o clock. The sun was up and the sparrows were chirruping outside and flying around in order to collect their food.



While in the house, our BIG sparrow was flying around from kitchen to her room and back from her room to kitchen, trying to make her breakfast.





She roamed around with a toast in her mouth with was drenched in honey. Honey was dripping from the toast and while making it's from the toast to the floor it was kissing the soft cotton fabric of her shirt, spoiling it.




But alas OUR KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA didn't have any time to look at it as she was too busy to pack up her school bag.



She took the comb and dropped it in a hurry (*stress on the fact that she is way too clumsy*) and started sorting out her tangles with her own fingers which were drench in honey too. She sorted them like somebody who was combing a sheep who has not even been touch in a decade.





Finally she was able to make her hair into fine-looking French braid. She hardly had the time to think about the decreasing volume of her hair while she was tearing apart her tangled hair into half.



Lost in her thought she made her way towards her father's room still with the "TOAST" in her mouth and "HONEY" still dripping from it. But as we see our KKG is lost all the time.




In midst of running and sprinted she found the time to just glance that the clock to check how much time has she left from getting late to the school.





She looked at the clock and discovered (YA! Our KKG has at least discovered something)that she just that 10 minutes.



She opened the door and entered her father's room which was as big as one could imagine yet as uninteresting as one could reasonably think of.




All the things were covered in the most uninteresting color-BLACK. Everything from cupboard door which was made from black ebony wood to the pillow covers everything was BLACK...!


It seemed as if you are in outer space and all you can think of is just one color-BLACK...BLACK, BLACK all over and all around. Yikkeees, it was the color she loathed just because of this reason.



She took large steps or rather sprinted to his bed where her father lay asleep unaware of her presence and was peacefully dreaming.



As we all know KKG is clumsy and requires someone's support to walk properly or even stand straight at all times even she possesses four limbs- TWO HANDS and TWO FEET but they don't work in coordination.



So the outcome when she came near the bed was that he tiny-piny-horrible-riny toe struck the edge of the bed and made her stumble and she was able to balance herself but the "TOAST" covered with "HONEY" in her mouth couldn't.



It flew from her mouth across the bed towards the unexpected yet expected target- Mr. Shashi Gupta's face. (*DEVIL IN THE HELL- GRINNING*)



She gritted her teeth in fear and covered her eyes with her hands and sent a prayer to heaven where her Devi Maiya sat on a couch in front of the TV screen with a remote in her hand and watching the drama unfold.


Alas, KKG isn't that lucky so the "TOAST" drenched in "HONEY" fell on the face of the target who was fast asleep.


Mr. S. Gupta found himself lost in the dreams of him and his wife. Both where holding each other's hands and were lost in each other's eyes.



Suddenly a TOAST" drenched in "HONEY" fell on his face and interrupted their sweet romance and both knew who it was.



"KHUSHI"



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*Here, Khushi is a crazy and bubbly teenager*

My exams got over so I decided to continue with what I started.I changed my concept a bit, KKG and ASR are teenagers and I'm going to describe their meeting, their friendship, their love for each other and their hatred for each other too.

So I thought why not start it from their TEENAGE LIFE? HUH?😛

What do you think?😊

Do you want me to continue??😉


WOULD LOVE YOUR PRECIOUS COMMENTS.😃

THEY ENCOURAGE ME TO WRITE MORE AND MORE...😳


DO LIKE

AND COMMENT!


Edited by Ipkkndrokzz4eva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting update. Waiting to read more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very ineresting n thnx 4da pm dear...please continue soon...

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