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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thanku so much mahi4ever ...

And thanks to all who read my post!!

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kirti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

Awesome update!
Piya teasing Abhya so cute! Loved d understanding n friendly relationship b/w mother n daughter.
Loved d dance sequence! Both faking names!
Dat gay teacher! ROFL
Abheer jealousy reminded me of Abhiya jealousy!
Abhya meeting with d Ranbir's parents.lukin 4ward 2 it.
Cntinue asap.

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Tanvi Pareek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#283

lovely updateand that dance scean i love most

keep updating and thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#284

Dance squance is good ,i like the story ,thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#285

EPISODE 30

NARRATIVE IS ABHYA

I could hardly sleep last night...these effects were now scaring me...i wonder it has been just a month i knew i have this vampirical problem...i know this word does not exist ..but i like to invent words...i felt that ranbir shifted me the other side..but i didnt responded to not to make him tensed ...i got ready by 6...jaldi tha agreed...but excited thi...i wore my black jeans and a white top with a blue shrug over it ...ranbir decides to meet me beside the torbit hotel...which was like a mid point to our homes...it was 7 i went down because mom called me...i saw varun there ...what hell is he doing in the morning..dad ..mom ..nanu everybody was chatting with him...

To act normal to my family i wished everybody goodmorning...
"Hi varun...itni suba kaise"

"Kyu aa nahi sakta .."he talked as earlier when we were kind off ...friends...now he was my half enemy..

"No i mean...u can...anytime..."

"Kafi dino se college ki chutti ho gayi to notes lene aaya tha...u mind giving.."

"No..y wud i?.."

"Thank you"

"Varun why dont u go up with her n take them" dad suggested...ufff dad bhi na...vaha to ranbir ki smell hogi..."go abhya take him"

"Yes dad..." and i began to move upstairs...he came behind me...i decided to talk normally to him...so that he dont think to blurt out that my boyfriend is a vampire...i reached my room...stood at the entrance..

"Come in.." i said to varun
I entered after him...

"Nice room...but it smells dirty...disgusting.."

"Thats me varun...half vampire...so you can stop breathing till the time i give you notes"

He laughed..i wished i could read his mind...I took all my notes and handed to him
"Here take them..."

"You want them till..."

"Till tomorrow ...today i will manage" whose attending anyways...

I spoke again.."you look better than earlier...so you finnaly accepted who you are"

He became angry "you cant even have a hint of what i am suffering with...the physical pain is nothing infront of the mental one...so you better stay out of it.."

"Varun but you seem happy ...downstairs.."

"Seem...only...i am not..."

"Reality cannot be changed be varun..its high time you should accept them as rahul bhaiya...be sincere enough...dont lose your identity... be the way you were"

"You better not talk about reality ...identity...i may be stupid that i dont accept my reality..i cannot because..i hate it...but you..abhya are the most stupid person on earth...you have no idea what your future will be..how much danger you are putting yourself...that bloodsucker is not worthy of your trust...back out abhya...i have no option..but you have ...so opt it...if you want your good...you will soon lose yourself...lose your identity...and you are saying me not to lose..huh..." i was so much angry on him...i would kill him this moment only...but then i thought about mom dad

"Go away varun...you are aggreviating me to kill you.."

"Abhya i hope you realise it soon...before its too late..."

"Go away...i told you say anything which is not related to ranbir got it...you are no one to tell me...i cannot doubt his love neither nobody can mine...my future will happen what it will have to be...you dont worry...you will be a dirty wolf..."

He shouted now"abhya!! "

"Thats the truth face it...i will get fine soon...but you desrve this"he smiled now..

"Fine and you...time will tell abhya...and thanks for telling what i desrve...well...Abhya all the best for your dark future...bas usse keh dena...nahi marenge hum tumhe...humare trails follow na karein.." he left ...and i patted the door very loudly with all my force..

He was such a pain in the ass...i hate varun...how cant he see how much ranbir loves me...how cant he see how genuine ranbir is..voh kisi ka bura nahi soch sakta...varun...i hate you..i nearly crushed the handle of my sofa...i was having a sudden ache in the throat...terrible...urghh...these effects are now turning worse..i guess in anger they become worse..abhya relax...calm down...dont care about this varun...just concentrate on ranbir and the meeting to his family...the excitment returned back...and the smile too..i ignored my effects...now it was 8..i took my breakfast...i waved a bye to mom dad ..it was around 8:30 i got out..my normal time to leave...i msgd ranbir.. 'i have left'.. i reached the tormit hotel...then i shifted to left seat for ranbir to lead me the way...
"Hi...scared"

"Mmm...not really..i wonder how your home will be like"

"Dont worry iss baar bhi coffin nahi hai" we both laughed

"Kuch tips do na how to act and what all not to do" i asked him,he huffed..

"Abhya they are very normal trust me...the love you the way you are..they know every thing.."

"Every...??"

"Yeah including that you are a half vampire for 3years .."

"Still every?"

"Matlab?..."i glared him "oh ...oh...not very personal things.."n we both laughed..

We were into some very unknown place..very uncommon from the rest populated dehradun.. filled q
With trees..i was watching the Dense jungle..at my side

"We have reached abhya"

"What you live in jungle.." i stared him now

"Abhya left nahi right dekho.."

I saw at my right basically right front.. there was this...a very huge mansion...beautiful...eye catching...i couldnt remove my eyes from its glass windows...the greenery stuck to the walls the gorgeous wooden work...and the huge main door...the work on it was quite ancient..but wonderful...
"Abhya aandar ke log aur ache hai
..chale..."... the doot of my side opened...i didnt even realised..ranbir was out already

"Oh.."i got out

"Amazing ..."i told ranbir..

He open the main door with his finger print...

"Welcome abhya...a place where you are the first one ever to enter"i smiled to him...

I followed him...to a huge hall...a huge kitchen to our left...and open space to our right...the dining table beside the kitchen was so unique..

I came beside ranbir now...and from the grand staircase came two beautiful god like personalities..that must be ranbirs parents...they reached us...ranbir turned in order to see both of us...
"Abhya he is my dad" he waved his hand towards his dad..he looked very sincere...and definately smart as any vampire would be..

"Hello uncle...nice meeting you.."

"Hello abhya...you are even more pretty than i heard about you" he saw ranbir..who was shying away with a smile..i smiled back to uncle..

"And this is mom"

"Hello aunty.. ..sorry but i cannot hide this...you are extremely gorgeous"
She hugged me...
"Ahh...abhya...welcome home beta...thanks...i am glad ranbir chose you to love...he is very lucky.."

"Thankyou aunty"

"Chalo abhya lets go in my room someone is a bit busy ..."he was loud thia time...i got it he is referring to minisha and karan..
And there came running minisha ...she was there in seconds...

"Shut up ranbir...none of your business...i was packing a gift for abhya and not you.."...she looked at me now...
"Abhya...wow...I finnaly came to meet us...i am so happy i cannot even express.."

"I am happy too...to meet you all..."

"We will surely be best friends.." minisha hugged me..

"So lady ...this is the second time we are conversing...welcome to our family...and thanks for not revealing who we are..." karan spoke

"Revealing that i will expose myself too ...how can i do that.."

"we trust you abhya..." uncle said

"Hope for a good bond in future abhya..." karan spoke again...i smiled to him...
"Ranbir...abhya ko humara ghar dikha kar aao.." aunty told ranbir

"Good idea...lets go abhya.."

I could hear the whisperings behind..."oh mom isnt she very adorable..." that was minisha...
"Very much...i am so happy for ranbir" aunty replied..

I started smiling...
"Abhya ye hall to tumne poora dekh hi liya ...baki chalo first floor dikhata hoon"
We reached upstairs..."abhya yaha hum sabke rooms and extra bahut saare..around 7 guest room hai...2store rooms...aur baki 3 occupied rooms..." we moved circular around the first floor "...and mera room iss lobby mai jaakar aata hai..lets go"

"Okay"
We went in that lobby..this was very secluded part of the house...infront of his rooms door...there was a painting of ..i really dont what it was..it was something i canot predict..not even a guess...ranbir opened the door...the room was large...very clean...we entered...
"Dont you use the room"

"Hardly"..

There was a huge sofa...room was filled with paintings...there was this huge shelf...full of cds...omg so many cds...there was a music system
..brand new technology...there were 3 guitars...1 violen...i wonder what he likes and what all he knows...he was so superbly talented...then there was this big almirah...in which clothes for an year can fit...the bed at the middle corner was such a luxurious one and there was a huge window...inshort the whole room was fantistically fascinating...

"You like my room"

"Whats there not to like in it...its so luxurious.."he laughed

"Come lets sit" he pulled my hand towards the sofa..we sat..oh wow it was so couchy and comfortable...

"I have something for you"

"What is it?"

"1 second" he ran in his vampirical speed and in a moment was infront of me..in has hand was a guitar...looked old but prestigious...
"Abhya i made some sort of vocals for you.."
And he played the guitar...i was lost in the tone...it touched my heart..it was melodious...it was mesmerising...it was soft...now i think i could never forget that tone ...it was so emotional...i also could see ranbirs facial expressions changing to a crying face ...he kept the guitar behind him and i immediately hugged him ...
"Ranbir...thank you...i could feel your love..i cant even cry out of happiness"

"No abhya Thank u for understanding the little bit emotions i have left with myself...and you can cry no one will say u anything"

I parted "its not that any one will say me anything...but ranbir they just dont come out ..how hard i try...i guess the vampire effects.."

"But abhya...vampires can cry...but only difference is we cry with blood"

To act cool i said "oh toh i am Not a complete one...isliye may be i cant express"

"But abhya...no...sumthing is wrong...you are just in the initial stage..."

"Nhi ranbir aisa kuch nahi hai...i am fine...really...trust me..a word now ...i will go to ...mmm...minisha..."

"Okay fine...then come here" he pulled my hands and he hugged me tight...and i hugged him back...

"Abhya would you want to eat something..."

"No i am not hungry..at all...no formalities i will tell u...vaise hi jabardasti i ate breakfast in morning..."

"Come i will show you my few secrets..." did he hide uptil from me..we went towards hi bed and sat there ...it was so clean..like untouched..

"Dont you sleep here" we both sat..

He laughed "abhya we dont sleep.." i chuckled..."oh ya.." is that the reason nowadays i can hardly sleep...he took out a box...and opened it..

"Abhya as a human i was like this.." he showed me a picture ...he was wearing a suit...handsome still...
"You look so good ..as a human too..though now you are uncomparably smart...but pehle you were smart too...i am sure all girls would want you with them"he laughed
" this was around 6 months before i became this ...around 1980.. and ya uss time relatioship seedha marriage par pahunchti thi...so many wanted to marry me" i felt such a pain in heart..aahhh...i was jealous...
"Ranbir now you are making me jealous"

"Jealous from the ladies who would be our nani's age.." and he laughed...and i laughes thinking on that fact..

Now I looked more closely "hey you had grey eyes..."

He smiled "yeah...but i am happy with black too...all animal eater vampires have black eyes" he seemed proud to just be an animal eater...no guilt for even killing them..hhaaha

"And human eaters..." he stiffed at his position.."Blue...but when we come to our actual form...we both have blue eyes" actual form ...i remembered the last time i heard this was when i researched...

"What is your actual form..please show me"

"I wish you never have to see that one...i dont want to scare you by any means..."

"Oh come on...why would i get scared"

"No abhya anything but not this one...i dont want to kill you...we use that form only at our hunts when we breathe heavily to smell animals..and with you infront of me i cannot even think that..."

"Oh..."i bit my lower lip "sorry"

"Dont be...please...i cant help with this one...dont embaress me..abhya"

"Okay fine...i take it back..." and i smiled "now show what all you have in this" i pointed the box...

"Hmmm..." he opened and took out a old jewellery "this belonged to my mother...pure gold...the only jewllery she was left with" his face became sad..

"Its pretty...looks like 24 carat nowadays even 10 carat is next to impossible..."

"And this doll i made for my elder sister ..." he was even more sad now

"Ranbir " i hugged him... "you are feeling sad about remembering your family...please close this ...i dont want to see anymore of it...i cannot see you unhappy.."

"No abhya its not that...i am just .." he stoped ..now i looked at him...his cheeks were full of red tears...it was blood...
"Ranbir...please dont cry..." i couldnt even cry with him...that was so painfull...i took out my hanky ...and wiped ranbirs blood tears..

"Abhya mat karo mujhse itna pyaar ..pata nahi iske kabil bhi hun mai ya nahi..." i ignored him..
I put the things back in that box... and tried not to see anything in that ..and closed it...

"Ranbir..."his cheeks were all so red red... "now stop blushing ...your cheeks are to red..." he laughed in his sad face only...he hugged me ...and then raised my face and kissed my lips gently...and hugged me again...

"Abhya you are my whole happiness...my family ...my everything..." i moved my hands to his back which were on his chest before...

"Ranbir i want to know how you became a vampire...you promised to tell me afterwards...and i want to know it..."

"Can you see the red tears again.. " i hugged him again

"No ranbir its just that i want you to share all your sad past...taki tumne jo dil mai itna dard bhara hua hai kam ho jaye...dard batne se kam hota hai na...please...and i am here to wipe your tears ...your sadness...so start"

"Tum nahi manogi "

"Bilkul nahi " i parted away from the hug...

"Okay ...acha toh...mmm...mai around 19 ka tha jab meri di ki shaadi hui thi...vo photo di ki shaadi ki hi thi.. meri family mai hun char log the..mai ..di...muma...dad...we were not rich ..infact we came in middle class family...dad earned 20000 of a month...uss time 20000 was enough to handle daily expenses of four people...but now di was 23 ..unki shaadi fix ho gayi thi...the marriage happened peacefully...happily...but..." he stoped for a minute and then continued again "di ke sasuraal wale thags the...as in daku...dad ko unhe pehchanne mai galti ho gayi ...they fooled us...unhone kaha ki vo businessmen hai saare...and then problem started ..shaadi ke time toh they didnt asked for anything except di...but after 1 month they asked for dowry...if we wanted Di to be alive...they asked for 25 lakhs..." my anger turned uncontrable now..ranbir noted this...he kept his hand on my shoulder...and shifted me minmum closer to himself "abhya relax...aage suno..." he continued again "we said we had nothing much...jo tha shaadi mai laga diya...but they gavr us 1 month time period...we could arrange only 5 lakhs ..with borrowings and extra work...now this furiated them...gussa toh hume bhi bahut aaya ...but we were helpless...di unke paas thi...and vo usse marne ki dhamki de gaye the...now they started torturing di...unhe insult kua... maara...his so called husband pushed himself on her...and this how two months passed away...we 3 couldnt sleep for even a night...we cried everyday..mom tried suicide many times...kyuki she thought that unki hi vaja se di is suffering...then dad decided to file a case for these criminals...uss time raj humare lawyer the..i never saw him..kyuki when evee dad met him i went away..because i believed that un criminals ka law bhi kuch nhi kar sakta...to ek lawyer kya kar lega...but raj took it personally and ensured dad that he will help us out...and also agreed to work free...now those thugs got to know about our filing...now they were scared..i thought this will work..and that day i met raj...we made plans...how to make all this possible...we were waiting for the hearing which was after 5days but after 4days we come to know...that these people killed my di...i lost my control...jis insaan ko sabse zada chaha maine...apno di ko...voh iss duniya mai nahi rahi...sirf meri vaja se...i should have killed them earlier only ...atleast muje apni di ka yeh haal to nhi dekhna padta
..bhale hi mai usmai marr jaata..bit mero di...mai bahut roya abhya..but uss time raj ne humari family ko sambhala...mom dad toh tut hi chuke the...he got us that energy ki jo ho gaya usse badla nahi ja sakta...but hum badla lenge..unhe hang to death karvaenge...he was right di torture sehti isse acha vo mar hi gayi..." i wish i could cry...this was killing me all the more ... "i the hearing we got di's husband in jail...with this ...they attacked on dad...and he was murdered...all efforts went in vain..i became helpless all alone...how would i manage mom ...thankfully raj was with us...we did more case hearings...in every hearing 2 got arrested...now it was 3 weeks ...all were in jail...obviously khushi to nahi thi...we lost our everything. ..dad..di...then i does not ends here...mom one day went to take vegetables...but they still had a whole gang...they attacked mom with swords in the market...she was brutally injured...she went running to raj...because of his good control ..raj managed to talk to my blood wounded maa...she pleaded him to save my life..by doing anything...she want me to be alive at any cost...because they were now coming to attack me in my house ,she knew it was her end...she thanked raj and died in his arms...he was helpless too...now he came running to me...he was late they attacked me already..i was badly injured toofrom swords...now only moms words were echoing in rajs ear to save me at any cost...he got it...to save me he had only option left...that was to change me into a vampire like he was...he bit me on the left side of my neck...i can never forget that pain ...it was too much that i couldnt even feel my wounds...he brought me home...he bit me at every full moon night ...till three times...until i changed to a full vampire..and then he introduced to mini karan ..adah...who were vampires already...so this how i became a vampire..the newest one here...i killed those thugs myself...i have a lot of burden of raj over me...i respect him a lot..a human killer helped humans only...initially i was very angry with him...but time made me realise he was so correct with what all he did..." i had no words to say...i was so much bitten emotionally...ranbir suffered so much...he had so much pain inside him..but he never showed me...i faces him now...his tears were now..till his shirts ...i took my hanky again and tried to wipe the fresh ones because rest was dry by now...and hugged him...

"Ranbir you are my hero...you did so much...i ...i ...wish i could express my tears...but i am helpless"

"Shhh...no need abhya...you shared my pain ...thats enough for me...now cheer up...i dont want to spoil your first meeting with my new family...i love them now..." he kissed my forehead.. "wait i will be just back..." he went running...opened his cupboard..went to washroom...and in a moment was all clean infront of me...he washed his face and changed his shirt...and sat beside me again..." you were right i feel a little less burdened after sharing with you ...thank you ...i love you"... he literally made me climb over his legs from my waist...i smiled...my hands were over his chest...i kissed his lips now...and he kisses me back..now i hugged him from holding his neck... " i love you too.."
He held his hands over my waist...

There was a knock on the door.

"May i come in " minisha was already in ...and we were in such an awkward pose..i was in his laps..hugging him...

"You are already in..." ranbir replied..i got up...with embaressment i looked down...he also got up now...

"Mini could you ever leave me with some privacy..."

"Then next time bolt the door.."and she laughed.. " so i came here...abhya take this...its a gift of the beginning of our new friendship.." it was a small box...with purple cover on it...

"Oh there was no need minisha..i mean i did not got anything for you all ...so i should not take too..."

"Oh come on..abhya...dont be so formal...next time you give me..but now accept it.." i took it..

"Thanx minisha .." she cut me "mini.
.my closer ones call me that.."
I smiled "okay.." my throat was aching badly...it felt burning to some extent...

" lets go down..our special meals waiting for us.."

"Chalo abhya"... ranbir ...urghh...he would have ordered from his mind to minisha for getting me lunch..how can i tell i donot feel hungry at all but thirsty...that too such a burning thirst...we reached down ...the dining table besides the kitchen..was not empty...there plates and few bowls...aah..for me...and five glasses...they had blood..oops..thieir special diet...interesting...i was staring the blood in it...we reached the table ..ranbir spoke something..i couldnt concentrate what he was saying...the blood was more fascinating..i was still staring it...i felt the burning essence in my throat to rise..now i felt shaken..i got diatracted from my stare...

"Yeah ...yeah..what happened ranbir"

"Abhya where are you lost...you have problem with this " he pointed the glass...i was again lost in its depth for a moment

"No ...no..i dont...its just that its quite ..i mean good...no..i mean leave it"

"Abhya tum itna alag kyu behave kar rahi ho.." i was again and again looking at the glass beside me..

"Nhi toh ranbir..."he looked worried...now uncle ..aunty..and karan came...

"Ooo...wow...aaj konsa blood group hai dad"

"I prefer the common one..b+ as usual.."

"Chalega ...dad...energy ke liye koi bhi chalega..." i still was having an attraction to that glass...why was i so getting involved with blood...hell now the throat was watering badly for the urge to drink it...hell man what was this ...i ..i cannot drink blood...no.. i am not a vampire..why then...

"Lets start...abhya your lunch is there..." i ignored her...
Then suddenly dads words were echoing in my ear ...the human blood will call you...later in this effects...is it so later that i cannot control..no later toh would be when i will be 21...urghh..i banged my palms on the table...to control my hand

"Abhya .." that was ranbir..i didnt responded naturally "abhya.." now he held my hands and turned me...i felt so uncomfortable to remove my eyes from a thing that suddenly becomes the most imporatant part of my life...i was not in my control...what was happening...my vision was becoming blurred...i think ranbir whom i was facing,he was not clear at all...he was constantly speaking something..bit i couldny hear it..he was shaking me too...i turned my face back...i could only see ...blood..blood...it was calling me like anything...i pushed ranbir away who held my hands...with my maximum power...i turned ...took the glass and drank it in a second...aaahhh...my thirst seemed settling..which thw water could not do blood did...i felt it touching my throat ...my food pipe...aahhh...such a high level of satisfaction...i kept the glass on table...now everything seemed clear...i was surrounded by everybody...i realised what i just did...i drank a vampires diet...

"Abhya.." there was confusion on every bodys face...

I took a deep breathe and kept my hand on my mouth...
"I felt a certain urge to drink this i couldnt control..." now suddenly i felt uneasiness...something was moving in my stomach...i felt it coming up...
I shouted "washroom"
"Left corner" i dont know who spoke ...i ran keeping my hand on my mouth...at my max speed obviously it felt more than a human
...
I opened the door...directly went to the wash basin..and what came out from my mouth was blood..just now what i drank...i felt a hand rubbing my back...i fainted...the very next moment...

Please do comment...!!!

Edited by temptations - 13 years ago

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temptations

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Posted: 13 years ago

#286

Thank you so much...i hope you like ranbirs past!!

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rida mahveen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#287

my pleasure temps 😃 🤗

Superb update 👏 ... i must say m impressed,👏

its ur best update till now😉

i think varun got 2 know dat being with vampires vil convert abhiya also,

n he always tell abhiya 2 pass msg 2 ranbir instead of talking directly🤣

i din't got y varun said bas usse keh dena...nahi marenge hum tumhe. 😕

liked abhiya n ranbir's family meeting😳

m dreaming abt ranbir's house

m already liking mini😳

hmm... abhiya drank blood, now her process vil speed up i think

Edited by mahi4ever - 13 years ago

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temptations

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Posted: 13 years ago

#288

Thanku so much @mahi4ever...few questions i have to answer for u ...
so varun means thar the wolves will not kill abhya...and what he meant exactly my next posts will reveal that...so let it be a bit of suspence...
n abhya drinking blood surely has to be noted as aa serious thing for her ...and what exactly is happening and what woll after she have drank that my next posts will reveal...
annd one more thing ...the dance sequence i have included is important too...its going to bring twists and dangers for the raichands...khannas...and wolves...chaudhary...(the chaudhary part will also be reavealed but a bit later...

I hope i have not opened a lot many lopes of my stort but i cant resist to keep my readers in a deep question... :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#289

oh gosh abya drank blood,its becuming interestng wow awesum😊

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Trishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#290

nice update...!!!!!!

hi!!!!! i will post my comment in 3 parts based on 3 diffnt situation and 3 diffnt characters... but will take time so by tonite or till tommorow i give my views...

Thanks 4 pm...

Edited by trishnawaliya - 13 years ago

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