Mission: REYAM KO PATAO! KriSha SS NOTE on PG 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hellooo guys... me back wid a new SS!

few points-
ReYam r bros & KriSha r bffs (ShaRey n KriYam r gud frends)
Rinni-Simmi r twins sis( Simmi elder dan Rinni by 3 mins),
NiCky r sworn enemies & BhaMar r best buds,
Neha-Vishakha r step-cousins, (dey both HATE each oder, V is too girly-girly & N speaks fluent english)
Bharat-Nil & Vicky-Amar are bros (B knws english & A doesnt lisp)
Pasand aaya CS... toh tohko like, n scroll down...
taniya

Index-
Part 1- pg 1
part 2- pg 5
part 3- pg 8 (Yogini's bday gift)
part 4- pg 10
part 5- pg 13 (Akku gift)
NOTE- pg 14
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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st part-
Sharon: kya karu yaar! Yeh Swayam ka bacha... idiot! Peeche palat ke ek baar toh dekh le. Lemme try once more...
She takes out a rubber band, twists it around her fingers, aims at him & leaves it... The band hits at the back of his head... He does feel something hit him but ignores it as he knows Sharon is doing it.
Seeing no reaction, Sharon slumps forward, put her head on top of her arms & sighs coldly. Kriya sees all this & figured out the story. She puts her hand on Sharon's shoulder... she wakes up wid a start & Kriya gives her a 'i-can-understand-what-u're-going-thru-look'... Sharon kinda smiles & places he hand on top of Kriya's hand & sits up.
Kriya: Sharon, yeh aap kya kar rahe ho?
Sharon: kya?
K: yeh! Swayam ke saath!
S: ohh! woh actually'
K: aap Swayam ko yeh realize karwana chahte ho na that use aapko lekar farak padta hain?
Sharon at first just stares at her wide-eyed, but on seeing Kriya's 'i-know-whats-cooking-between-u-2!- dnt-pretend-as-if-you-dnt-knw!' look. She just sighed & nodded.
Proff: Kriya & Sharon! Out of my class!
SharIya: but ma'am'
Proff: *shouting* OUT!
ReYam turn back to check what happened... SharIya luk at dem & nod ' 'nothing' & leave class.
Outside class,
Sharon: great! Ab kya karein?
Kriya * grabs her wrist* chalo mere saath'
Sharon: kahan?
Kriya *takg her* girls locker room!
Inside GLR,
Kriya: so, u want Swayam to realize he cares for u & ussey farak padta hain!
Sharon: yup.
Kriya: arrey toh woh sab kyu kar rahi thi jo class main kiya! In sabse, aapko usska sirf ATTENTION MILEGA! Dats it!
Sharon: toh ab mein kya karu?
Kriya: use realize karwao' dheere-dheere'
Sharon: ohhh right! But kaise?
Kriya: sochte hain'
S & K think & after smtym, an idea strikes K's mind.
Kriya: Sharon'. *whispers the full plan in her ear*
Sharon's face gleams & beams in happiness!
Sharon: KRIYA!!!! TUMHAARA "K" EFFECT TOH EKDUM AMAZING HAIN! 😃😃
Mr. Swayam Shekhwat!😈 Watch out! Iss siren sharon ne agar tumhaari life main pyaar ka siren ne baja diya, toh mera naam bhi Sharon Rai Prakash nahi!

acha laga... toh thoko "like", maaro comment!
jootas, chappals, sab kuch wel cum...
taniya

Edited by kriyaanshd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow amazing update
loved it
plz pm me wen u update
update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start
Pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting...

do pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyssh
pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME START...loved their characters ...my fav line:

Mr. Swayam Shekhwat!😈 Watch out! Iss siren sharon ne agar tumhaari life main pyaar ka siren ne baja diya, toh mera naam bhi Sharon Rai Prakash nahi!

WOW...can't wait...plz pm me when u update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing concept ..!
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Loved d bonding between kriya n sharon .!
Plz continew soon n update n do pm me plz..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...Update Soon & Plzz PM Me 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please update soon and please pm me when you do :D

Nikki <3

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