VirMan- The Cruel World -prt 1 page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guys... m not a writer but have read lots of stories here.. i thought to write of my own.. hope u will like it. going to give u lil prologue..

Kyun tumne kaha ki humara bacha duniya mein aanse pehle hi mar gya.. Tumne humare sath yeh thik nahin kiya (hugging his lil baby angel nd crying with angry eyes) Main apni beti ko leke bohat door chala jaunga... jahan tumhara saaya bhi na pade.. par tume zindagi bhar muaf nahi krunga.. Virat took his angel in his strong arms whom he just found in Anaath Aashram.. He wanited to protect her frm everone, specially frm Manvi.


if u want me to continue.. pls hit like button, comment nd send me buddy req..

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preetipc thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls continue and pls accept my buddy request and pls pm me after u update😊
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interesting concept

plz cont it and pm me when u update it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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contd. soon nd pm me, plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'd like to read,but only if you write in english..
so please write in english it looks really interesting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please continue & pm me
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"Virat you really think you can do this..? I mean.. you've not been to Chandigarh for 3 years now.. nd I know you're not gonna go leaving Gudiya here right.." Maya asked Virat . he was ANGRY as he was left with no other choice but to go for the award function where he was nominated for Best lawyer. he was very well known as Mr. VV.. He hadn't disclosed his full name ever..

He threw the glass on the floor nd broke it into pieces.. "I'm left with no option but to go back to hell.. If I say NO our company's reputation would be at stake.. nd especially when A lawyer who has got so many awards refuses to do it.." His anger changes to worry when he sees his daughter peeping from her room's door with a scared face.. His expressions softened nd he went to her.. as he picked her up nd kissed her, she quickly says "chi papa chi" making him laugh.. "You wait here papa will be back having a shower.. okk Gudiya"

He came back with in a few minutes nd sat with Gudiya in his lap craddling her.. he stopped when she asked "Why don't I have a mumma..?"

"Why do you need a mumma, Gudiya..? doesn't papa take care of you..?" Virat asked in a loving tone.. he knew the question was bound to come up one day..

Gudiya hugged him saying "All my friends at play school have their mumma who picks them up.. they say I don't have my mamma because God is angry with me.. Am I a bad girl papa..?" she asked in a very innocent nd cracking voice..

Virat just hugged her close to his heart.. tears flowed down from his eyes.. Gudiya came out of hug when she felt him crying as well.. she gave him a small smile nd wiped his tears saying "My papa is the best.. he loves me more than any of my friend's mumma does.. Gudiya nd papa are best buddies they don't need mumma.." Virat was overwhelmed listening to his daughter he gave her a smile nd kissed her head..

"You know Gudiya. God never hates any child.. he loves all of them even if they're naughty.. you were very small when God saw there was another baby who needed a mother.. so he sent your mother there as he knew your papa would love you enough for you to never miss your mumma.." Virat said finally convincing his Gudiya nd patted her to sleep/

He had many fears as he packed his own nd Gudiya's stuff for a week at Chandigarh. he has to go there for an award function where he was nominated ..He asked Maya to accompany them too as he would never want Gudiya to come to that function nd meet any of his family who he was sure that they will come for sure as Viren was also nominated.


Hope to get some long comments enough 4 me to update next part :) thnks
Edited by Hello-hi-by-by - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update.. thanks for the pm
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awesome update dear,,,,hats off👏⭐️ ...continue soon and pls pretty pls Pm me...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nc updt, loved d concept bt plz make ur updt longer nxt time.

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