**VEER-ICHCHA ROMANTIC OS 3*** - Page 4

Originally posted by: shristeemathur

tanhayee, sangdil tanhayee, sang layee yad teree sang layee
bar bar woh bahar phirse yad aayee
sunee sunee rah dil kee jisane thee sajayee
tanha dil (roya re... dil roya re - 4)

chand suraj bhee wahee hai, hai wahee aasman
jindagee bhee chal rahee hai, chal raha hai jahan
mai hee thehra hu khud me simta hu, dil hai ghum se bhara
bin tere kaise jiyu mai, kuchh toh de mashwara
jindaganee aisee rehgujar peh mujhko layee
saye se bhee abb tere ho gayee judayee
tanha dil (roya re... dil roya re - 4)

Originally posted by: oldveechafan

Awsome...

Originally posted by: --Ishani--

hey shivani!!! firstly thank you so much for your detailed feedbackit helps me a lot to improve as i am writing my first OS series!!

coming to the OS the part where veer gets hurt..there I had tried to potray that even in pain while his true love touched and called him he could forget all pain and also eventually it had vanished due to ichcha's care..meaning while in love he didnt have any pain and if there was any it was removed by ichcha..be it physically and mentally...

In this OS I had concentrated on the romance between veecha..as strangers yet as lovers for ever so couldnt really concentrate on their minds..will surely do it in the next OS!!!

thanks so much dear!!!!!!

Originally posted by: venkivenkat

Really wonderful and romantic ...waiting for part 4

@shivani9:

Originally posted by: --Ishani--

@shivani9:

I am too glad to receive your feedbacks so keep replying always!!I understand you POV too...And now I know why you dont like watching uttaran anymore..coz everytima nowadays veer is kept in dark or made to suffer the most and that too by ichcha..

well.. We cant change that but certainly that can be done in this OS!!

thank you a lot!!!!!! you have helped me improve a lot!!!