**VEER-ICHCHA ROMANTIC OS 3***

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Ishani!!!

@--Ishani--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: oldveechafan
aww read it again it was amazing...veer controling herself not to destroy their frndshp...Awsome...

yeah..i have tried to write what generally would go in veer's mind when Ichcha falls on him yet the realsation that he should control himself!! not much of a writer I am but have tried my best to potray the romance! it really boosts me up to see all of your and other's appreciation!!!thank you!

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Ishani!!!

@--Ishani--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: loveyouveecha
this is totally outstanding 👏i really like your talent ishani.hug for you🤗oh God now i cant controll myself...i wanna see veecha with this romantic story..❤️

yeah!! if we read and feel so good wont it be so awesome to see it on screen???😊😊thanks for your appreciation..you dont know how much it means to me!it helps me a lot!!!! a big🤗🤗to you too!!!!!!

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Ishani!!!

@--Ishani--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sami44
so romantic , very gud os

thanks sam!!! 😃😃😃😃😃

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Ishani!!!

@--Ishani--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: princessofkesar
ishani superb
very romantic

hey shraddha thanks sooo much!!!!🤗🤗

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Ishani!!!

@--Ishani--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Am008
Awesome,very nice.no words to explain,just mindblowing.HATS OFF U ISHANI.waiting for part 4.wow

thank you thank you so much dear!!😊😊

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Ishani!!!

@--Ishani--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: shivani9

Heyyy Ishani, Many thanks for part 3 as promised⭐️, I love ur sparklee ur mine forever..❤️...coming to the OS...I was sad to see Veer in Physical pain, but the statement he felt happy and in peace even while in pain soothened my nerves.😊... somehow my imagination of love is not to have any pain at all😳, but we all have to go through pain to understand happiness completely 🤔 ..BTW Ichcha falling into Veer's arms was classic 😆

Continuing about Veer I am just beginning to wonder if he feels guilty that he did not mange to find his Ichcha yet and now seems to develop these new feelings towards teacherji 😲, does he ever introspect n think abt all the women in his life 😛. I wish you cud possibly explore his mind😉 .Thanks again for ur lovely efforts to keep us entertained👏

hey shivani!!!😃😃 firstly thank you so much for your detailed feedback🤗🤗it helps me a lot to improve as i am writing my first OS series!!

coming to the OS the part where veer gets hurt..there I had tried to potray that even in pain while his true love touched and called him he could forget all pain and also eventually it had vanished due to ichcha's care..meaning while in love he didnt have any pain and if there was any it was removed by ichcha..be it physically and mentally...

In this OS I had concentrated on the romance between veecha..as strangers yet as lovers for ever so couldnt really concentrate on their minds..will surely do it in the next OS!!!

thanks so much dear!!!!!! 🤗

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ashvithy

@-Ashvi-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

hey awesum ishani! waiting for part 4! how nice it would be if this happens in real!

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Ayesha

@oldveechafan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Ishani is amazing...a big hug 2 u... 🤗

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Fan of Tina Datta

@tina2711

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

tanhayee, sangdil tanhayee, sang layee yad teree sang layee
bar bar woh bahar phirse yad aayee
sunee sunee rah dil kee jisane thee sajayee
tanha dil (roya re... dil roya re - 4)

chand suraj bhee wahee hai, hai wahee aasman
jindagee bhee chal rahee hai, chal raha hai jahan
mai hee thehra hu khud me simta hu, dil hai ghum se bhara
bin tere kaise jiyu mai, kuchh toh de mashwara
jindaganee aisee rehgujar peh mujhko layee
saye se bhee abb tere ho gayee judayee
tanha dil (roya re... dil roya re - 4)