AdIni OS: She is my Wife

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys

This is my first OS on this forum and that too on AdIni
And its a pretty bad OS, i usually don't write this bad but i was writing this at 12 at night
But will try and write a 100 times better one on them...probably
so here it is...its pretty short...

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"SUGNI MERI PATNI HAI!!!"

Everyone started at him in shock.

"Woh meri biwi hai, aur agar koi bhi use batameezi karega toh mein use chodunga nahi. Cahhe who koi ho." Yelled adi letting go of niranjan's collar. "Mamiji please apne bhaiya ko samja dijiye ki agar yeh sugni ke ass pass bhi mujhe dhike toh mein yeh bhool jaounga ki yeh apke bhaiya hai."

Niranjan laughed, "Patni, aur Sugni. Adi I think you are forgetting ki yeh ek bedni hai, thume isse kharida hai. Iske saath apni kuch zarrorat poori karne ke liye. Sugni sirf thumara khilona (toy) hai. Aur khilone toh share karne chaiya."

"NIRANJAN" Adi grabbed him by the collar.

"Adi, chodo mera bhaiya ko." Said TVS pulling Adi away form Niranjan. "And anyway sahi toh kahe rahe hai bhaiya Sugni is not your wife, tumne uski maang mein sindoor bhara, nahin na. Toh phir kaise woh thumari panti hui."

Adi turns around and grabs Sugni's hand and starts walking towards the madir(at home), while Sugni just stares at him remembering how he just called her his wife.

Adi grabs the sindoor from the mandir and fills Sugni's maang. Sugni and everyone stares at him in shock.

"yeh apne kya kardiya," Sugni spoke.

"Woh joh bhaut phele kar dena chaiya tha." Said Adi.

He turns around to face TVS," ab toh Sugni meri patni hui na. So Mamiji aur baakisab log yeh jaan lo ki aaj se Sugni is ghar ki choti bahurani hai. Aur is ghar ki Bahu ko kaise rakhte hai ye hap sab log jaante hai." Says Adi.

He grabs Sugni's hand and walks off to his room.

Inside the Room

Sugni is crying.

"Sugni, I am sorry ki maine thumse bina pooche thumair maang bhardi'sorry'.lekhin mera pass aur koi rasta tha nahi'." Adi strats explaining his action but Sugni places a hand on his mouth motioning him to say anything more and then she does the unexpected and hugs him.

"Aditiyaji, app bahut aache hai, apne ek baar bhi apne bare mein nahi socha, apne meri izzat ke liye apni zindagi dhau pe lagadi. App bahut aache hai." Sugni crys into Adi's chest.

Adi starts patting her head, consoling her.

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Inkpen4877 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was super cute! I hope you continue to write!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So Super Lovely.. Just ..Wow...👏

Plz dear be Active & Post for ADINI & join Fan Club of Nandish & Gulki & comment for then.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjht_one

Hi guys

This is my first OS on this forum and that too on AdIni
And its a pretty bad OS, i usually don't write this bad but i was writing this at 12 at night
But will try and write a 100 times better one on them...probably
so here it is...its pretty short...

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -- - - - - - - - -- - - - - - - -

"SUGNI MERI PATNI HAI!!!"

Everyone started at him in shock.

"Woh meri biwi hai, aur agar koi bhi use batameezi karega toh mein use chodunga nahi. Cahhe who koi ho." Yelled adi letting go of niranjan's collar. "Mamiji please apne bhaiya ko samja dijiye ki agar yeh sugni ke ass pass bhi mujhe dhike toh mein yeh bhool jaounga ki yeh apke bhaiya hai."

Niranjan laughed, "Patni, aur Sugni. Adi I think you are forgetting ki yeh ek bedni hai, thume isse kharida hai. Iske saath apni kuch zarrorat poori karne ke liye. Sugni sirf thumara khilona (toy) hai. Aur khilone toh share karne chaiya."

"NIRANJAN" Adi grabbed him by the collar.

"Adi, chodo mera bhaiya ko." Said Reva pulling Adi away form Niranjan. "And anyway sahi toh kahe rahe hai bhaiya Sugni is not your wife, tumne uski maang mein sindoor bhara, nahin na. Toh phir kaise woh thumari panti hui."

Adi turns around and grabs Sugni's hand and starts walking towards the madir(at home), while Sugni just stares at him remembering how he just called her his wife.

Adi grabs the sindoor from the mandir and fills Sugni's maang. Sugni and everyone stares at him in shock.

"yeh apne kya kardiya," Sugni spoke.

"Woh joh bhaut phele kar dena chaiya tha." Said Adi.

He turns around to face Reva," ab toh Sugni meri patni hui na. So Mamiji aur baakisab log yeh jaan lo ki aaj se Sugni is ghar ki choti bahurani hai. Aur is ghar ki Bahu ko kaise rakhte hai ye hap sab log jaante hai." Says Adi.

He grabs Sugni's hand and walks off to his room.

Inside the Room

Sugni is crying.

"Sugni, I am sorry ki maine thumse bina pooche thumair maang bhardi'sorry'.lekhin mera pass aur koi rasta tha nahi'." Adi strats explaining his action but Sugni places a hand on his mouth motioning him to say anything more and then she does the unexpected and hugs him.

"Aditiyaji, app bahut aache hai, apne ek baar bhi apne bare mein nahi socha, apne meri izzat ke liye apni zindagi dhau pe lagadi. App bahut aache hai." Sugni crys into Adi's chest.

Adi starts patting her head, consoling her.

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JUST...COOL..POST...Be Active...ADINI.FAN...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow supabbb post... Plzzz continue ... 😊

mjht_one ... plz Don't mind... is so sweet lovely story me some chang karna... Riva ke place pe TVS coz Reva all timewish karti hai sugni kisi aur ki ho jaaye.. so ...

"Adi, chodo niranjan ko." Said Tvs pulling Adi away form Niranjan. "And anyway sahi toh kahe rahe hai Niranjan Sugni is not your wife, tumne uski maang mein sindoor bhara, nahin na. Toh phir kaise woh thumari panti hui."

again plz Don't mind...😊
Edited by br200910 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

This was super cute! I hope you continue to write!

thanks...i wwill write more on them soon

Originally posted by: jmoyee200

supabbb... plz continue...

thanks

Originally posted by: ananya2000

So Super Lovely.. Just ..Wow...👏


Plz dear be Active & Post for ADINI & join Fan Club of Nandish & Gulki & comment for then.

thanks yaar

Originally posted by: romalove

JUST...COOL..POST...Be Active...ADINI.FAN...👏

thank you

Originally posted by: br200910

Wow supabbb post... Plzzz continue ... 😊


mjht_one ... plz Don't mind... is so sweet lovely story me some chang karna... Riva ke place pe TVS coz Reva all timewish karti hai sugni kisi aur ki ho jaaye.. so ...

"Adi, chodo niranjan ko." Said Tvs pulling Adi away form Niranjan. "And anyway sahi toh kahe rahe hai Niranjan Sugni is not your wife, tumne uski maang mein sindoor bhara, nahin na. Toh phir kaise woh thumari panti hui."

again plz Don't mind...😊

thanks veyr much...LOl its ok i changed it to TVS...and thanks for telling me how to improve it...cheers
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice to see an Adi-Sug fanfic
I cant wait for the day for Aditya to finally speak up... and say what he wants to and also to see that Sugni as more, and once he does... he will love her no matter what and give her the importance and respest she deserves
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mjht_one if u were to writter of this story may be it would be much much much much better may be we would love it !!! i hate adini but i liked the way u write.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lennie

Nice to see an Adi-Sug fanfic

I cant wait for the day for Aditya to finally speak up... and say what he wants to and also to see that Sugni as more, and once he does... he will love her no matter what and give her the importance and respest she deserves

thanks very much...i cna't wait for some nice romantic AdIni scene sin the show

Originally posted by: ronshaan

mjht_oneif u were to writter of this story may be it would be much much much much better may be we would love it !!!i hate adini but i liked the way u write.

thankyou, i think the cvs have screwed up the story i think if they wanted adini they could have gone to that track much betterly...

i will write a sad sugvi ff for you and the other sugvi fans:)

thanks😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So Super...Post Lovely Story...Want Next also...
I wish u also be active in Other post of Adini...lovely...👏

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