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Posted: 19 years ago
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Shalini goes 2 temp. room to chech weather Naina is faint or not:

Raj(in tension): Doctor, kya cadet singh behosh hai?

Shalini: No captain, Cadet singh behosh nahi hai.

Rajveer:Good to usse 1 mauka milna chahiye.

Major Nair: Mauka?

Rajveer: Am sorry sir, par cadet singh 3 level paar kar chuki hai,

Majo Nair: Rules, main rules ko maanta hun captain.

Pooja(in tension):Sir plz, ye test rukwa dijiye sir.

Rajveer(angry):Cadet ghai aap seniors ke saamne chup rahengi.

Major Nair:Aur aap bhi captain, &nbs p; Doctor, stop da test.

Naina tries 2 speak something

Shalini: Cadet, tumne kuch kaha? & nbsp; cadet ne kuch kaha

Raj(on mic): Cadet singh, Cadet singh, can u hear me? &nb sp; kya aap agala level karna chahengi?

Shalini: bolo cadet

Major Nair(Angry): Captain tum cadet ke saath jyaadti kar rahe ho.

Rajveer: Jyaadti, ye aap keh rahe hai Major nair?

Pooja(ghabraate hue): Sir aap ye test rukwa dijiye sir.

Rajveer: aap chup rahiye

Ali: Sir sahi to keh rahi hai ye, Naina is haalat main

Shalini: Cadet singh main tumhe chamber se baahar nikaal rahi hun.

Captain Rajveer tensed

Naina(she tried 2 speak): No mam

Major Nair(strangely):wht?

Rajveer: aapne suna major nayar.

Shaalini: Cadet singh kya aap last level karna chaahti hai?

Naina: yes mam.

Rajveertries 2 tease nair): Jor se boliye cadet singh humne suna nahi

Naina: Yes, &a mp;n bsp; yes sir.

Rajveer: Next level, Doctor.

Shalini: Ru sure, captain?

Rajveer: 200% &n bsp; Major nair?

Major Nair(tensed): Continue Doctor.

Rajveer: Thank u major nair.

Naina cleared last level....

Shalini: Congratulation cadet singh, u'hv completed da test

Major Nair: Abhi nahi doctor, rules ke mutaabik, jab tak cadet apne paanv par khada nahi ho jaata, woh level clear nahi kar sakta

Rajveer: Iski koi jarurat nahi hai, Major nair

Major Nair: Rules yahi kehte hai captain.

Rajveer(chilla kar): Rules my, (then slowly said)my pleasure sir, &n bsp; Cadet singh, on ur feet,

i said on ur feet, (chilla kar) now

Shalini:Maine temperature normal kar diya hai cadet, u can step out now

All r tensed.....

Ali: Ya Khuda, inki madad karna....

Alekh: Khade hoke dikha de Naina......

Pooja: Oye chak de phatte Naina........

Huda: Tu kar sakti hai phoolan......

Yudi: C'mon Naina.....

Huda: Phoolan.....

Pooja, Yudi: C'mon Naina.....

After a long time she stands and salutes, & said with da shivering voice: Cadet singh theek hai sir

Shalini:Sir, cadet singh ne mere test ke dono part complete kiye hai, she's topped this test

Major Nair goes and appreciates heršŸ‘

Alekh 2 Naina(very emotional): Apun ko lagta hai ki apun ne itna dard dekha hai, ki dard mehsus hi nahi hota, lekin tera dard dekhkar, aaj apun bhi hil gaya.....

Agar woh test koi jeet sakta tha to wo sirf tu thi, lekin ek baat yaad rakhna, apun apne experience se bolta hai, dard dard ko kaat ta to jarur hai, lekin apne andar thoda dard bacha ke rakhna, kyunki jab khushi milega to wo bhi mehsus nahi hoga.......

BREAK

B.C.: Guideness puri ho gayi Major

Major Nair: Jee sir, final result laga diye gaye hai hai, aur ab is acedemy ke bekaar cadet baahar ho jaayenge

B.C.: Yaani?

Major Nair: Yaani ki waqt aa gaya hi ki acedemy ke bekaar cadets baahar kar diye jaaye or maine list taiyaar kar li hai sir, cadet singh or cadet sahaani, is acedemy se baahar honge...

B.C.: Fine

Major Nair: ab cadet naina kanchanjanga se baahar hogi...

B.C.: Tum jaante ho major ki agar main chahu to cadets ko acedemy rakh sakta hun, as a special case...

Major Nair: Cadet singh main special kya hai sir

B.C.: Pichle test main usne jo himmat dikhai, wo kaabile taarif thi

Major Nair: To kya aap usse is acedemy se baahar nahi nikalenge

B.C.: Maine abhi to kuch socha nahi hai....

Next scene in Naina's room:

Pooja: Ab sirf 6 niwaale bache hai, ek kaidi ka, ek huda ka, ek ali ka, ek yudi ka, ek mera aur ek rohit ka....

Oye ek baat bata, tujhe ye taste dena itna jaruri kyun tha? ye baat meri to samajh nahi aati

Naina: Ye test na deti to aur kya karti, ye mere liye aakhiri mauka tha

Pooja:Lekin jaan jokhim main daal ke, ye baat mujhe samajh nahi aati

Naina: Mera yahaan rehna, meri jaan se badhkar hai

Pooja: Tere saath is acedemy main jo kuch bhi hua uske baojud bhi, le paani pi......

Tu mujhe apna dost nahi maanti na.... agar tu mujhe apna dost samajhti to tu mujhe apne baare main jarur batati, tujhe to mere baare main sab pata hai, lekin tune kabhi kuch nahi bataya......

Naina: Main is acedemy ki best cadet banna chahti hun, chahe kuch bhi ho

Pooja: Lekin kyun Naina, theek hai baba, mat bata, abhi chal jaldi se so jaa

tera na woh haal hai, incoming on or outgoing off, chal so jaa jaldi se

Naina: Ek din bataungi Pooja, Jarur bataungi......

Pooja: Main waite karungi

Next Morning........ while jogging.......

Dr. Ritu: Good Morning captain, wht a pleasent surprise.

Rajveer: Infact, meri taraf se to ye plane surprise hai...... m sorry 2 disturb u lekin mujhe aapse cadets ke baare main kuch important baat karni hai...... infact, main aapse cadet naina singh ke baare main baat karna chaahta tha....

Dr. Ritu: Haan maine suna ki kal usne kamaal kar sikhaya, shalini ke test main.....

Rajveer: Huh, kya faraq padta hai, aaj cadets ki overall saamne aane waazli hai aur mujhe darr hai ki wo cadet naina singh ke saath kisi aur cadet ko bhi fail kar denge.

Dr. Ritu: But that's not fair, cadets ko hume unke test ke basis par marks dene chaahiye...

Rajveer: Yeh basis hi to galat hai, major nayar ne jaan bujh kar cadet naina singh ko jang lagi riffle di aur subedaar suriji ne bhi kuch cadets ko fail kar diya.

Dr. Ritu: But am sorry captain, maine kissi ko fail nahi kia, aur na hi major nair ne, aur rahi baat aapke cadet singh ki to dekha hi hoga ki wo khud fail hui hai

Rajveer: lekin mera ye manna hai, ki cadet naina singh kaabil hai, wo ek achchi sipahi ban sakti hai, aur ye mera hi nahi balki aapka bhi manna hai.

Dr. Ritu: Main, aapko kaise pata

Rajveer: Kyun aapko nahi lagta ki cadet singh main wo baat hai

Dr. Ritu: Cadet naina singh main potential hai, definitely hai, Par wo har test main fail hai....

Rajveer: Usse fail kiya jaata hai, jang lagi banduk dekar....

Dr. Ritu: Aap kehna kya chaahte hai, ya yu kahe ki aap karna kya chaahte hai?

Rajveer: Ek tarika hai ki jin cadets ke achche grades nahi hai, unhe mere saath ek drill karne ka mauka diya jaaye, comeback simulatation

Dr. Ritu: To aap chaahte hai ki main brigadiur se jaakar kahun ki Cadet naina singh ko aap ke saath drill karne dia jaaye

Rajveer: Jee nahi, main chaahta hun ki un sabhi cadets ko ek mauka dia jaaye

Dr. Ritu: Haan lekin aapki cadet naina singh ke liye.

Rajveer: Nahi, balki is acedemy main insaaf ko jinda rakhne ke liye.

In the acedemy hall.....

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Edited by sweet_gal90 - 19 years ago

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