Modern Love Story(My FF) Epi76 Pg171

You know, I am so sick and tired of jai speaking and Bani listening quietly, Jigs speaking and bani listening and so on. Does this woman have no backbone? 😡

So I (have never actually posted anything in theis forum) have decided to come up with my own fanfic (which seems to be the fad these days) in which Bani doesen't take any nonsense from anyone, and speaks her mind out. Here is the prologue, please post coments and tell me if I should actually write this story.

the begining is kindof based on the film "Raja" (Sanjay Kapoor, Madhuri Dixit, Paresh Raval) Madhuri and Sanjay dads are friends, and Madhuri's dad even promises her hand in marriage to Sanjay. But Raja's (Sanjay's) dad's factory burns down and he loses every thing. Mandhuri's dad breaks all relations with him because he is now poor and tells his daughter never to meet raja again(this is when they are kids).

Character List: Page 49

Prologue: Page 1, Episode 1: Page 2, Episode 2: Page 4, Episode 3: Page 6, Episode 4: Page 8, Episode 5: Page 9, Episode 6: Page 10, Episode 7: Page 12. Episode 8: Page 14, Episode 9: Page 15, Episode 10: Page 16, Episode 11: Page 18, Episode 12: Page 19, Episode 13: Page 20, Episode 14: Page 22, Episode 15: Page 23, Episode 16: Page 24, Episode 17: Page 26, Episode 18: Page 27, Episode 19: Page 28, Episode 20: Page 29, Episode 21: Page 30, Episode 22: Page 31, Episode 23: Page 32, Episode 24: Page 34, Episode 25: Page 36, Episode 26: Page 37, Episode 27: Page 39, Episode 28: Page 40, Episode 29: Page 42, Episode 30: Page 43, Episode 31: Page 45, Episode 32: Page 46, Episode 33: Page 47, Episode 34: Page 50, Episode 35: Page 51 , Episode 36: Page 52, Episode 37: Page 54, Episode 38: Page 56, Episode 39: Page 58, Episode 40: Page 60, Episode 41: Page 61, Episode 42: Page 62, Episode 43: Page 66, Episode 44: Page 70 Episode 45: Page 72, Episode46 :Page : 74 Episode 47: Page 76 Episode48: Page78, Episode 49: Page 81, Episode 50: Page84, Episode 51: Page 86 Episode 52: Page 88 Episode 53: Page 90 Episode 54: Page 94 Episode 55: Page 96 Episode 56: Page 99 Episode 57: Page 101 Episode 58: Page 104 Episode 59: Page 107 Episode 60: Page 109 Episode 61: Page 112 Ranveer-Rashi Shaadi: Page 116 Episode 63: Page 123 Episode 64: Page 127 Episode 65: Page 131 Episode 66: Page 134 Episode 67: Page 138 Episode 68: Page 144 Episode 69: Page 145 Episode 70: Page 150, Episode 71: Page 153. Episode 72: Page 156, Episode 73: Page 158, Episode 74: Page 161, Episode 75: Page 166, Episode 76: Page 171 (NEW!)

PROLOGUE

Mr. Dixit and Mr. Walia were very old friends and both very sucessful buisnessmen.

Mr. Walia: (Watching his sons Jai, who is 11 and Pushkar, who is 10 play with his old friends daughter Bani, who is 10) you know Nishkant, some day we should turn our dosti into rishtadari.

Nishkant Dixit: *Smiles* What do you have on your mind Aditya?

Aditya: When Bani and Jai are old enough, we should get them married. (looks at his wife Jigyasa) Right darling?

Jigyasa Walia: Definitely. Bani will make the perfect Walia bahu.

Nishkant: I sure hope so. You know how hard it was for me when Pooja (Bani's mother) dies giving birth to her. I just hope I can give my Bani all the right sanskaar (values).

Aditya: (Puts reassuring hand on Nishkant's shoulder) Bani is a smart and sensible girl. Don't worry about her. She will get all the sanskaar herself.

Nishkant: Thanks dost. But what about Pushkar? Don't you have to find a girl for him?

Jigyasa: dont worry Nishkant Bhaisab. When Bani becomes our bahu, she can find a good devrani just like her for Pushkar.

All Laugh.

Suddenly a worried man runs up to Nishkant and...

Man: Sir, there is a fire in your factory.

Nishkant: KYA?????

Man: Yes Sir. Come fast!!!

Nishkant, Aditya, Jigyasa and the 2 kids all get into Aditya's car, and he drives at full speed toward Nishkant's factory. When they get there, they all get out and see the buildin with high flames licking it and black smoke rising from it high into the sky. Nishkant has tears in his eyes.

Nishkant: (To random guy standing there) How did this happen?

Guy: Sir, there was a leak in one of the oil barrels, which had caused a great puddle of oil on the floor, and that just caugh fire.

Just then the board with the company's name on it erupts into flamed and in front of everyones eyes, it falls to the ground and burns to ashes.

Nishkant: (To Aditya) Now what do I do? Ihad let the insurance lapses for the past year or two.

He falls to his knees sobbing. Bani, who also has tears in her eyes, hugs her papa.

Jigyasa: (Pulls Aditya to one side) tell him that we can't maintain a relation with him antmore.

Aditya: WHAT? Are you out of your mind?

Jigyasa: No, I'm not. Now he has nothing. He can't live our lifestyle anymore. He will have to sell his house and he won't even get any insurance money. He is poor and Walias don't associate with poor people.

Aditya: But Jigyasa, he is my oldest and greatest friend. I can't let my friend in need down just to keep up sone silly reputation.

Jigyasa: Fine. Invite him to live with us in our house. Give him a roof over his head and a job, but you will soon see that he will start to take advantage of our status and wealth. And your friendship.

Aditya: What Nonsense!

Jigyasa: Its true. And whats more. If you help him, then you can forget about me.

Aditya: *Shocked* Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho Jigyasa?(what are you saying Jigyasa)

Jigyasa: Mein theek keh rahi hoon. Choose. Me or him?

Aditya is thinking hard. On one hand is his best friend, now a fallen man, sobbing and hugging his daughter, who he believed to be his future daughter in law. On the other hand is the woman he loves, standing with her arms around his two bundles of joy; jai and Pushkar.

Aditya: (With his heart breaking, turns to Nishkant) We aew going now.

Nishkant: (Look's up surprised) Lekin Aditya... (but Aditya)

Aditya: (Cuts fim off) Please Nishkant, don't make this harder than it already is. I just cant keep this friendship going anymore. It will be very insulting for us Walias.

Then Aditya led his wife and two sons back to his car, and drove away from Nishkant and Bani Dixit's lives.

What will happen in the future?????

Tell me if you like the story and everything, and if i should write this fanfic.

Yukti

ohh no...that's so mean. i hope when jai and bani get older, they will still have their friendship!

update soon.

can't wait to read more!

love,
anam

great part
its really good and very intresting
continue soon
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nice!! very interesting!! plz do continue!!
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Thanks for the comments guys, i will write and update episode 1 for you tomorrow.

Yukti

I hate jigasa!! Poor Bani!! I think she well still end up with Jia though

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i hope they are middle class rich 😭

Thanks for all your wonderful comments guys.

EPISODE 1

Dixits...

Nishkant sells his mansion and his Goa home, and he and Bani move to their small cottage in Mt. Abu. He also sells all his cars and the land upon which his once glorious factory had stood.
he makes quite a fortune, but puts all that money in his bank and only uses it to educate Bani in the best school. Him and Bani live their lives by what he earns from his desk job in a hotel. When Bani is ready to move to Mumbai and go to college there he dies, and leaves everything in her name. His already existing fortune, Some investment he had made long ago that he got a profit out of, his savings from his desk job, and the pension he earned all go into one bank account which is in Bani's name, Makes Bani quite a rich girl.

But she has plans for this money. Once she does her MBA, she plans to re-open her fathers company and bring it to to newer hights, make it more well known and more glorious than it ever was.

Bani is sweet, simple and beautiful girl. She holds her head hih, and takes no nonsesnse from anyone, if not nescessary. And now, 12 years after the day her dad got ruined, she lives in Mumbai, in a big and beautiful ground-floor apatrment with her room mate and best friend from school; Pia.

Pia is a very flirtatious type od girl that can knock any guy head over heels. And that is exactly what she loves doing. Her well-to-do parents live in Canada with her brother and bhabhi.

But not matter how different Bani and Pia may be, there is onr thing they have in common, and that is their strong, independant and proud personality, which sets them apart from the crowd, and what makes them such good friends.

Walias...

in these 12 years, the Walia empire grew, and grew, and grew. There was no stopping it. Their buisness not only spread India wide, but also world wide.

Aditya always had to go away for long periods of time for buisness, and Jigyasa always went with him. So her sister Biloo (Jai and Pushkar's masi) lived in their house to take care of them. But inspite of their dadi and masi (who were also great friends btw) always there to take care of them and shower love over them, they always felt somewhat empy inside, so they spent most of their time in the local gym. Working out helped relieve stress and all frustration.

Pushkar was the flirt, and even though he was never actually desperate for gerls, with one look, he could make any girl desperte for him. He was never too serious about any of his girlfriends, and he called all of the a way to amuse himself when bored. He whould just show them a glimpse of his muscles and girls would be fallin at his feet by the dozens.

Jai was on the more serious side, and disapproved of Pushkars beheviour with girls a lot. He never really paid heed to the line of girls always present oogling at hime, but that didnt stop him from throwing them a devilish grin evry ever-so-often.

They both haad looks (and bodies) to die for, but each just desired to end up with a sweet and simple wife. And this is where our story begins...

A girl is sleeping with her body covered by a bright pink quilt. Her face is resting on a matching pink pillow. She is snoring loudly and he hair is spread all over the pillow, when she hears someone sing the aarti.

Girl: *Grumbles* (to herself) Bani. Why first thing in the morning??? (she grabs a similar pillow, covers her ears and tries to sleep, but the aarti continues loud as ever.)

The girl sits up in the bed and we see that it is Pia. She is wearing a soft pink nightie and her hair ia all over the place.

Pia: (Gets up, checks the time, and then heads outside to where the singing is coming from.) Bani. Let me sleep. Sirf 6:30 baje hain.

Bani pais no heed to Pia, just continues the aarti. When she is done, she puts the thali down, picks up some prasad and puts it into Pia's mouth

Bani: (wearing a sky blue Kameeze with a white salwar and white dupatta, and has wet har) Today is the very first day of third year...

Pia: Does that mean that we have to wake up an hour and a half before colege starts?

Bani: Not really. But I was so excited, i couldent sleep.

Pia: Well, mujhe to sone deti

Bani: Yes, but now that you're awake, help me with the breakfast.

Pia: (Giving Bani an evil look) Fine.

next, we see a hotel like mansion. inside it, on the dining table, sitting is an old lady with a middle aged lady. One is Jai and Pushkar's Dadi, and the other is their Biloo Masi. The table is set for four and both women are cutting fruits for breakfast.

Dadi: *worried* Where are the kids? They should be home by now.

Biloo: Don't worry so much. Pushkar came home late last night, so him and Jai left a bit late this morning.

Just then, two young men enter the house. Both are out of breath, and save swat soaked t-shirts that are glued to their rippling muscles and powerful abs. They go to the table and touch Masi, and then Dadi's feet.

Dadi: Where were you. i was starting to get worried.

Jai: We could hae got home sooner if Pushkar hadent stopped to flirt with that girl.

Pushkar: Oh yeah. And while i was flirting, what were you doing with that girl who looked ready to fall at your feet if you wanted her to.

Jai: Just time pass. i was waiting for you.

Biloo: No bickering. Both os you go upstairs and get ready for your first day in college. Then you can come and have breakfast.

Jai and Pushkar go all the way up the stairs still squabbling.

What will the first day bring...

Hope you guys liked episode 1. Nothing too exciting happened, but it gers better...
Leave comments and suggestions for improvement.

Yuks

PS: LOL... Just found out that Bani's mom's name isin't Pooja, its kiren... LOL... Whppos...

Jai just finished his third year and is now going to start his MBA. Pushkar is in third year, and they are both in the same college as Pia and Bani (but none of them have ever met).

I can't wait for the next part!!! 😆 😆

can't wait to read more. awesome part!

don't u think bani and Jai will might recognize each other? they were good friends!

update soon1

cheers,
anam