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Just after the leap

Scene 1-(in jail)

Inspector- prena you r released in 5 years because of your good deeds

Prena- thank you sir

Scene 2-(outside jail)

Prena is waiting for mr.bajaj to came and pick her up nobody cames she waits for 2 hours then goes in taxi to bajaj house

Scene 3-(at bajaj house)

Prena goes inside the house she sees a woman's back and says excuse me app kaun

The woman turns around and is none other then kooooooomolika

Komolika- are prena tum ayo ayo prem ka ghar ma padharo

Prena- tum yahan kya kar rahi hu get out

Komolika- for your info now this house doesn't belong to your husband it belongs to u.d

Prena- whatever just leave

Prem comes and sees prena is shocked

Prem- mother India app kaise ha

Prena-dekho na prem

Prem cuts her up

Prem- its ud not prem aur yeh jo kuchh bhi kah rahi hai its 101% true

Prena- prreeee

Prem- apko kaha na ud not prem maina is property ko hasal kar liya hai aur mr.bajaj sharam ka mare yehan se both dhur chala gaye hai he left and it would be better u leave mother India bye

Prena- ab nahi prem aa ha ud ab main tuje maf nahi karogi tuje there saza zaror milagi

Prem- yeah whatever now app jati hai ka main app ko dacha mar kar nikalo

Prena leaves

Scene 4-(outside bajaj house)

A car arrives its anurag

Prena- anurag tumhna yeh kaisa huna diya

Anurag- main kya karta ab tum mera ghar chalo tumhare bacha bhi waha ha

Scene 5-(komos house in the living room)

Debo looking all western wearing a dress

Debo and komo r talking

Debo- komo I want to marry prem for a better future so nobody can harm me

Komo- debo its up to u I don't care but if he says no then I agree with him llet him live his life I will find a much more richer guy then him for u

Scene 6-(at anus house)

Prena hugs sam and her kids thanks mohini and sam for taking care of her kids

Sam- kya yeh hamara bacha nahi

Scene 7-( at bajaj house prems bedroom)

Prem is thinking mother India I am really sorry per mein apko nahi bata sak tha sachai nahi bata sak tha

Scene 8-( at anus house)

Prena is talking to sam

Prena- sam kya tumha pata hai mr.bajaj kaha gaye hai

Sam- nahi pata prena hama sa kisi ko nahi pata

Scene 9-(prems office in his cabin)

Prem is doing his work there is a knock on the door its

INDRONEAL

He comes in

Prem- tum yahan mena kaha tha na muja ab tumsa nahin milna indro 5 sal tum to ek both badra jasoos ho na phir

Indro- prem pata chal gaye PANCHMASHWER

PRECAP- prem talking to komo saying I am going to panchmeshwer for a business trip for 4 days komo says o.k prem leaves

its cool! plz continue soon

Why Havn't u you continued 😭 (p.s. its great)