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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update temps 😃 but itna short😭
so abhiya told piya abt ranbir, i am sure abhay's reaction over dis wud b worth 2 watch😆
ranbir-mini-karan convo was hilarious😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dont ya worry...i wil giv short posts bt jaldi jaldi...n thnku so much for liking it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well guys lets make it a more interesting...u all tell me whose is your personal favorite character now...
My personal favorite os ranbir...i lyk his attitude...
n guys wat abt u?...

Do tell plsss... :) :) i wil feel i m a gud writer if u reply to this question of mine...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice dear ...thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome...but does piya no ranbir is vampy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
EPISODE 29

NARRATIVE IS ABHYA


i got ready...and i was completely overwhelmed by ranbirs note n ofcourse, very much obvious the dress he chose for me...i wonder am i really his princess...but surely he was my king ...my life ...my everything...i got down quickly ...had my breakfast...waved a bye to dad and mom came out to drop me ...i pin pointed her strange behaviour...she obviously wanted to say sumthing about ranbir...
"Mom dad ko shak ho jaega ki aap unse kuch chupa rahe ho...what are you doing" i told mom

"dont worry for that abhya...abhay ko mai bahut ache se manipulate kar loongi..." and we both laughed softly..mom was teasing me since morning...i wish there was any solution for that...poor me... "haan to mai yeh kehne aayi thi ki muje dekhna hai meri beti ki pasand kaisi...kab milaogi ranbir se...huh.." i couldnt hide my blush...
"sharmao mat and batao kab? "

"Mom relax jald hi..." i definately cannot give mom invitation to my room when ranbir comes to meet me..."i will let u know...bas aap apne excitement control karna mom...i am scared dad wud cum to know about it"

"Ahh...dnt worry abt that...jao ab ranbir wud b dying to meet u .."

I glared at her "mom" and went to my car. ..it seemed like mom was even more excited than me...i wonder what would be moms condition when she fell in love wid dad...hahahah...i reached the fiesta road where he told me to meet him...ranbir was already there...i smiled at him...and he like always gave his breathtaking smile...killer one...totally..i stoped beside him and shifted to the passenger seat..he looked surprised...

"Arre aaj to kya baat hogyi miss raichand wants me to drive..."

"You are worth watching than driving mr.khanna"

"am no model"

"But not any less attractive" we both laughed..
There was a sudden breeze of happiness among both of us...we were having the best bond ...

"Abhya what all you told to mrs. Raichand..."

"Oh mom..." i told him in the exact wordings playing mom and myself...

#flashback#
I went to the garden outside at 6 with a confidence that my mom would b there..freshning herself with breezes outside...i reached there...
"Mom " i called her

"Arrey abhya beta itni suba...koi problem"

"Mom bahut badi...hadd se zada badi problem" she looked very concerned...but that was the way i thought to make mom emotional first and tell her whatever i could manage...

I sat on the bench n mom sat beside me...i looked down ..thinking how to start..mom became impatient "bolo abhya please...mai tumhare sath hun..bas bolo...ek baar to"

"Mom aapki beti ...aapki beti...ko..." i stoped...confused between like and love...
"Bolo abhya beta...tumhe kya" mom kept her hand on my shoulder..

I spoke immedietly spoke "mom aapki beti ko pyaar ho gaya hai" i faced her she looked surprised...but the very next moment..she looked too happy...but i dared not tell her ranbir was a vampire...otherwise her reaction would have been opposite...but i was sure even if mom comes to know about ranbir...she might accept him...as dad was one of them too...

"Abhya...really beta .." she hugged me.." i am so happy for u..meri dil ki tammana poori hogyi..tumne toh mujhe darra hi diya tha.."

"Mom i thought u wud not be okay with that...so i got worried" she parted away

"Abhya mai aisa kabhi nahi karti.. aakhir maine bhi to abhay se pyaar kia tha..i know how it all feels...abhya pyaar iss duniya ki aisi cheez h jo sirf kismat walo ko milti h...jan tum kisi insaan ke dil se judte ho vo aehsaas...sabse alag hota hai...ek cheez yaad rakhna bahut takat hoti hai pyaar mai...tum bhale dur raho par dil hamesha jude rehte hai...vaise ye sab tumhe time ke sath samajh aayega...naam kya h uss khushnaseeb ka"

"Mom he is ranbir khanna...mere college ke batch mai hai...and he is very genuine..."mom cut me

"Smart to hai na" smart was an understatement for him..

"Mom!!" all i could manage was just a blush...

"Oh abhya look at u...you blush like never before.."...she hugged me again "awww...abhya i am so so so happy for you"

" love you mom ...aap jante nahi ho kitna bada burden uttar gaya mere sar se...i m trying itne dini se..but bata hi nahi payi .."

"Its never too late beta now guy and rest ...n get ready by time"

"Okay mom ..." and i left the place

#flashback ends#

"Finnaly i got a glimse in your mind...conversation se hi sahi..." and i smiled to him...

"But my mom wants to meet u"

"Mil lenge...i will impress her dont worry ..."

"Not that...you would have to be very normal...she knows how a vampire can be..."

"I will handle that love, dont worry"..he kind of assured me...

"vaise abhya mai sach mai bahut khushnaseeb hoon...i got u in my life...i mean existence.."

"No more of it" ranbir...i am the more lucky one...and no more argue for that"

"No abhya i mean it...you came in my life from nowhere...you changed my life totally ...you changed me abhya ...you totally reverted me from my current personality.." we reached the college parking.. "you got me back abhya...aak se mai jo 50 saal pehle tha abhya...tum uss ranbir ko vapas lekar aayi ho...uss insaan ranbir ko vapis laayi ho tum ...beleive me on that ..."after he parked the car,he hold my hands...and kissed them...i became silent...because i just now realised he was right... he love me more than i love him...i could see the joy and emotions at the same time...i love him because he was my everything...i was so selfish for that matter...i began crying...but there were no tears...urghh...these vampire effects...did not even make me cry...

"Please say something abhya"

"I feel like crying ranbir...i mean so much to u and then also i thought i love u more than u love me...i was wrong...i am sorry for being such an selfish ass..."

"No abhya please dont say this...your love is no less...u love a vampire afterall ..Thats more than enough for u to be ...just...great.. " he left my hands...after 2 seconds i heard a knock on the window...its was ish...
"U sensed her..." ranbir nodded... hell this ish disturbed such an intellectual moment...i went out if the car..

"Good morning ish" i tried acting as if i wasnt angry at all..

"Morning behna...ye ranbir ne apni bmw tyaag di hai kya..."

"Uff ish suba suba tu shuru hogyi..." ranbir came out now locking the car

"Hey ranbir...hi"

"Hi ..."

"Chalo na abhya jaldi humare college mai auditions ho rahe hai..."

"For what...?"

"Chalo to sahi..."

I had an eye contact with ranbir ...indicating him to come with me ...we 3 walked...there i saw those huge huge posters...'the philante'- a dance troupe...that seemed attractive..bt it was waste for me...me and dance...never...that too so professional... "chal na abhya lets give a try to this 1"..

"No way ish...tu ja...i will never do this ..." ranbir was standing at our back ..his chuckle was very much audible..atleast to me ...

Finnaly he spoke to save me..
"Ish u go and let abhya be with me...we have some work.. "

I smiled at him...for saving me..ofcourse everybody was still scared if him...thinking hes a freak...

"Okay fine abhya see u later.." she made a sad face and went...

"You saved me.."

"My duty rather than pleasure"

Suddenly i got a thought...ranbir knew dancing and not me ...so why shouldnt i learn...to be equal in atleast one thing...
"Vaise i think i should go there...i wanna learn it... dancing..."
He laughed...

"What??"i asked him

" nothing...u first time changed your mind ..that made me laugh...but theres couple entry only .."

"Would u be comfortable if i dance with someone else.." i smiled in sarcasm now ..

"No even for second...i will ...infact i am cuming with u...go quickly its about to end i will be there just in a moment ...just say your partner is in way ..i have some important work..."

"Oh well okay...come quick..."

"U know i cannot stay away from you even for a second ...and abhya one more thing dont make them write your real name...i dont want mini teasing me for this dance...if at all she comes to know about this.." we both laughed..."okay as you say..."
And we both went to our ways...

I reached there...to the lady who was writting names...
" hello i am sanaya malik...can you please write my name..."

"Ya sure but get any partner"

"Ya he is just coming...in 5 minutes...his name is raghav kapoor..."

"Okay but if he does not come ..you will be out.."

"No problem" wats even there do dance without him..
I texted ranbir "mister you are raghav kapoor..come jaldi...i ie sanaya malik is heading inside..."

"Well maam how will we get auditioned..? " i asked that lady...

"Nothing your audition was to fill in the name here."

"Oh"...i left laughing how stupid that could be...suddenly i saw a wooden rod was falling in me..but i remembered i was fast enough...i ran in speed...since no one was there..n that lady was busy in her papers..i reached in...there was a huge stage almost half college was there...i reached up..they already started with salsa i suppose...there was a man centered...he looked in his early 30s...a different physique...but he looked a bit skeptical..he was the dance teacher i suppose ..he looked at me "oh welcome lady...you have no partner ..no worry i will be yours.."

"no thats fine sir...my ..." he cut me

"Oh lady how wil u manage to do salsa alone..."...i was like okay fine...for a minute only i wud have to dance with him...afterall he's the teacher here...i may learn something new from him...he reached me ..and held my hand with grace...and was about to reach my waist...a voice came from back..

"Sir may i...that girl is my partner..." he was very loud...i smiled to him as that sir went 3 steps behind leaving my hand...

"Oh so you are his partner ...good take her...boy..."

"Your most welcome.." i read the persons thought...
'Oh ...lucky girl ...such a handsome man...all others are just too crazy...but this guy ..ooo...lovely masculine one..'
I began laughing...and ranbir held my hand and waist meanwhile...

"Abhya you are laughing on my jealousy..."

"Now i am laughing on mine"

"What why wud you be jealous..." we now
started dancing with others..

"Looks like in jealousy u didnt read that guys mind..."

"What ...what he dared to think ..."i started laughing again

"ranbir he thinks you are a real man...with best masculine body..n rest just all the same..stupid guys..." he looked happy by that...was ranbir crazy too...i began staring him...but after a minute his expressions changed...and i laughed too badly that everybody started staring me...and i controlled it to just a smile

"Oh no abhya save ...save me...from that gay personality...and you are laughing...are you not jealous..."

"Yeah no doubt i am...but i know you will never leave me...so whats the point of thinking about that freak".

" abhya if anybody comes to know...they will laugh like anything..."

"Uff ranbir be brave...i will kill him if anything happens.."

"Oh yes i can also kill him that ways...i forgot what i was" he mumbled under breath...i didnt realised i was going with flow in dancing...wow...ranbir was such a fab dancer that he can make a non dancer dance...

"What abhya why dont they play any romantic number"

"But i enjoy this kind too...music is in my heart ...i am sure u can hear it too...try ..."... i tried harder the song was album old track..i found in moms playlist...some 'raabta' was its name...

"vaise ranbir i am loving ur new side too...i wud fall for any type of you that means.."

"All because of u...abhya i cant explain at all...what have you done to me ..."

"Jo bhi kia h ...mere liye to sab acha hai.."

"Vaise tumhe dress kaisi lagi..."

"I like ur choice...n the note...all i can say ranbir...i love you more than anything ..."

"N i love u like any crazy obsession.." I just smiled

"Abhya theres this fall...manage it..." fall... what fall...where...i didnt know any of it...bt the next moment i was bent towards ranbirs left side...my hands were automatically in his shoulders...n i got lost in his deep black eyes...it was the claps which made me got up...

"Oye abhya...u were to not interested...how come" ish came ...

Embarrassed i said " i changed my plans sorry.."

She wispered in my ear " you both were sexy to hell..."
I patted on her shoulder...

That crazy man spoke "so everybody i hope you enjoyed today...see you next time...we will do jazz... bye ladies and men.." and he particularly looked at ranbir...i tightened my hand on his hand...

"I feel it..badly"

"What?" There was a total sarcasm in his tone...

"As if u dont know...jealousy..."...it wud be better if he stays away from ranbir ...not even looking at him...ranbir chukled at my face ...

"Is your important work done..."

" yeah...done..".

"Lets go for classes sanaya..." huh...who sanaya...oh then i remembered my dance name...that lady was staring at us...

"Raghav you have which class..." we reached out...

"class ki chodo...just tell when are you meeting my family" ranbir asked...a vampire family fascinating ...no doubt...but me all alone...but still i Wanted to meet them ...as ranbir wanted me to do so...
"Mom says every morning to meet u ...but now u should...dont worry they love you already.."what did he saw my little fear...

"Okay lets make for ...mmm...tomorrow .."

"Done...mini would be jumping hearing this..." we both laughed...

We attended our classes...only in history we were together as english we misses for dance...i left him on the fiesta road...making him promise to come at night...he ran away..i went to my room rested ...ate dinner...moms teasing never stoped...then i did my homework...and around 11 ranbir came...we chatted ...about many things...wolves and other vampire histories...mom...that crazy dance teacher...and finnaly we came to point...his family which i have to meet tomorrow ...he told few about everyone...interesting they all were...we both will be bunking college...we decided to go in my car only...no other reason to give to dad...and all set i was excited...scared...and hoping they like me...and rather accept me...
It was 1 and now ranbir wanted me to sleep...but how to tell him mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi...the effects are definitely getting worse..i hope i am able to control them infront of ranbir...now he was beside me lying...waiting for me to sleep...i dug my head on his chest...my most comfortable place...like heaven...




Edited by temptations - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update and ranbir and abhya convo amazing...looking forward 4 abhya meeting wid vampire family... but wonder wat is abhay's rexn when he come to knw abt abhya having bf...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Plsss...its a request ...do leave your comments...it encourages me too wrute more interesting posts...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey temps awesome update dear 👏
abhiya n pia moment was sweet 😊
abhiya is fascinated by ranbir's looks😆
btw i feel abhiya is lucky 2 hav ranbir in her life😳
abhiya trying out 4 dancing made me feel like all girls r alike😆
dat dancing sir 🤣 🤣
love brings da best side of ur personality😉
n its happening with ranbir 2😳
hmm m... feeling scared 4 meeting ranbir's family 😲


lots of luv 4 u 4 writing dis beautiful ff 😃😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Abhir r so damn cute...very nice update...just l loved it...

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