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Hey guys, this my first time writing an FF, hope all of you like it!

Vrinda Dawda was walking home from the sets of D3 after a long day of shooting. Amar and her had to shoot some Taarey scenes together. She smiled to herself remembering the scenes. As she was walking she heard several honks right behind her. She turned around to see who was this rude person was. To her surprise it was Amar! Vrinda was taken back by his soft chocolat brown eyes, and oh so handsome face! He gave her one of his heart melting smiles and she walked up to his car. Hey Amar, what's up? "Nothing much, I saw you walking home and decided to give you a ride." She smiled at how sweet and caring he was. Amar couldn't take his eyes off her perfect figure, her big eyes, and her heart warming smile that always made him feel like he was flying. Although it hasn't been a month since they've met, they have been inseparble together. They became friends very quickly and sooner or later couldn't stay a minute without each other. She got into the car and they both had light conversation the ride home. When they reached Vrinda's house, Vrinda thanked him for the ride and got out. Amar got out to walk her to her door. They both gave eachother a small hug, but somehow neither of them felt like letting go. Vrinda looked into his eyes and they both seemd to get lost in each other's eyes. Amar noticed something in Vrinda's eyes that he hadn't noticed before, he saw pure love. Was Vrinda feeling the same way about me as I am feeling about her, he questioned himself. He took Vrinda's hand and gave her a small kiss on the hand. Vrinda's face turned a soft shade of pink from blushing. Amar couldn't take his eyes off her. After breaking out of the eye lock, Vrinda whispered bye, and walked inside her house. She felt a tingling sensation inside her stomach, but then it seemed to spread all through her body and her face glowed. She went over to the mirror in the hallway and noticed that she was still blushing. I love you Amar, she said into the mirror. What she didn't notice was that she had accidently dialed Amar's cell number and hadn't realised it. Amar on the other side had heard everything. He knew Vrinda was his and only his.

So guys hope you enjoyed the first part. Please leave your comments, thanks!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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No offence 2 ur writing. It is really gud as I read d first few lines b4 knowing its on Vrinda n Amar.
A secondary thot to dis write-up is, it may bring negativeness fr Vrinda like it hapnd 4 Taani.
It is just a fictional writing bt ya it wil have little or more effect 2 d ppl who read.
Kriyansh fans have a neutrality 2 vrinda . I jst hope dis work doesnt change dem to think against.
Just my opinion.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waise aate hi ss/ff?????/ should i think that its a fake ID??? ho sakta hai...MIDS may be...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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YeAh i guess u r right. Thanks for the advice! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it a nyc ss/ff.. just edit the names or make it a TR ff...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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no way now i dont want to hate vrinda...gosh no way..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sry bt i cant imagine AJS and vrinda together...

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