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Posted: 12 years ago
At first i like to thank all of you...
I love you all,please be with me to finish this SS successfully...

Part 19

Muskaan already slept beside her amma,but khushi was not able to close her eyes...where is golu?...why did not they come yet...?
She heard opening of door,arnav and aryan stepped in room quietly as muskaan was sleeping...
Arnav asked khushi whether she took medicine or not.khushi nodded...
Aryan:"amma,dinner?"
khushi:"sure beta..."
khushi walked down to kitchen...
she found arnav also sitting there,she served food both of them...
aryan:"amma,you also take it na...its already been late"
arnav just looked how much his son cared her...
Arnav:"khushi...please complete your dinner..."
khushi:"you dnt need to think about this..."
Khushi's thought went how she spent night with that room..its their room...they spent awesome memories together...but today facts were different...
aryan:"amma,go...its late...tomorrow will be our school,new school,you have to go with us"
Khushi went there,arnav already laid on couch...
khushi:"you can sleep in bed,i will manage"
arnav:"no...muskaan and aryan will need you,i am habituated sleeping here"
khushi slept with her children...
Arnav could not sleep...whole night he looked at her face...she was really angeL...how could he live without her that seven long years!!!...
khushi on the other side though closed her eyes,but she could feel his sense,his gaze...
Tears fell down automatically...she suffered a lot...she recalled past experience..how her arnavji technically threw her from shantivan...
Arnav set in his cell alarm so that he would wake up before khushi...
But hearing alarm tone when he woke up,he did not fine her in bed...
Khushi stood near poolside...he came near...
"khushi...you are here,when did you wake up?"
Khushi did not answer any question,she was about to leave,but he caught her..
"Khushi,you should answer first"
khushi:"we are getting late..."
she forcefully took her hand from his grasp...
khushi prepared both of children...they took blessings from all members in shantivan...
As soon as they left house...
All the members started their planning sesson..
yes,naniji told everyone to be present after arnav,khushi and children went for school..
naniji:"we have to do something,after all its chotey's happiness..."
anjali:"i know nani..but how?"
nk:"naniji,exactly,they need initiator..i mean"
naniji:"nanhe...think practical...they are parents of small children...they must complete their responsibilities..."
mamiji:"Hello hi bye bye...i have a solid plan,we will send them to secret place where no one will be there to interrupt...they need to talk..."
anjali:"but what about muskaan and golu?khushi will never leave them and..."
naniji:"but we have to give them personal space...when they will alone then only they can share their feelings...i have seen how chotey gave punishment himself for misunderstanding her"
mamiji:"sasuma,that's why,i tell you send them to somewhere"
anjali:"or they will be here,but no one of us..."
naniji:"i can't get it..."
anjali:"that means we will give excuses to go somewhere together,we will take muskaan and golu also,then they... "
nk:"ROMANCE...got it!!!"
naniji:"wow!!that's great plan..."
mamiji:"don't worry sasuma,we will succeed sure"


on the other side...khushi looking her children how they were happy seeing this big premises,
weird thought came in her mind...
She always wanted to keep them happy,she always provides them best thing,but they both were happy now getting father...but her sacrifice was never noticed...
Muskan rushed towards her and hugged her tightly...
"amma,i am very happy"
Khushi told herself
:"i want to see them happy,how can i think about it!!!
they are my children,they can love their father also...
i should not be jealous"

Khushi cupped her face and told:"we will go some place..."
muskaan:"wow!!that's great"
aryan:"amma,where?"
khushi:"SURPRISE!!!😊"



How is it?
Hope not bad...
Some of you wanted to know how longer it will be continues...
Well frankly speaking i also don't know..i am just building its concept..
But one thing i can say until"ARSHI will live happily ever after",i will continue😊

Edited by arpita20 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yay!!!!! mee first.. 🥳
wonderful update..
i really love this arnav.. who wants his khushi back in his life , who is so caring and regetting for his mistake..
loved golu and muskaan.. 😊😊
Edited by goldengirl.0123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update. Waiting to see ARHI romance.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
n wats d surprise...??
waitng to read ahead'
thnx 4 ur pm.n cont soon..:))

n yaa..thnx 4 d dedication too..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wish da writers apply ur SS in da show...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita20



Well frankly speaking i also don't know..i am just building its concept..



take your time..see what you feel, and add it to the story.. you can build some very beautiful moments..arnav khushi golu and muskaan..its a perfect family after all😃

nice update..🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr

nice update
n wats d surprise...??
waitng to read ahead'
thnx 4 ur pm.n cont soon..:))

n yaa..thnx 4 d dedication too..:)


you will sure come to know😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
i am sur there plan will backfire
kushi wnt giveup so soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow lovely part.
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...write as much u can,i dnt want this to end.its a perfect family

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