KR FF ||Destiny Binds The Love|| chap 6 (page 13)* - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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rey's hindi loved it meri sapna ha ha ha!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
wow... that was gr8 i just hope ki jab kriya college jaye to rey uski madad kre i mean kriya ki insult wale episodes mjhe achhe nhi lage the hopes frm ur ff rising nd rising
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Awww... Kriyaansh always manage to bring d ear to ear smile on my face n credit goes to u..
I loved it..!
Kriya musunderstood rey to b a spoilt brat bt opp to dat he apologised kriya for his frns behaviour.. Hehe:)
N dat belt scene remind of d scene of walkie talkie durin dance fest..
Update soon n do pm me:)
Edited by Pihu.k11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
thanks for the pm and awesome ff :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
kriyaansh were sooo cute...!!!
luv their convo...
waiting 4 next part...😊
and do pm me..
Edited by anjee_007 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Hiii guys...so here's next part...u'll feel it bored...but for me plzzz enjoy...😊 and from now don't forget that it's titled as " Destiny Binds The Love"


CHAPTER 4


" Hey Dad, I have just landed...where are you? "

" Rey, I'm in the way to Airport...I'll be there in minutes..."

"Dad...actually...Vicky sent a car for me...he said he has some urgent work...sorry Dad but ... "

" That's fine son...I'll straight go to home... U go to Vicky...come home soon beta..."

" Yah Dad...for sure I'll come fast; thanks Dad, Love you Dad..."

" Love you too beta...take care..."

Rey managed his Bags and lead to the car..." What should be the urgent work Vicky has call for me??...God knows...!! ", Rey hopped in the car and then he goes.

...

Kria was still waiting at the parking lot...with the loads of her bags; irritated with this waiting session..." he universji...ye broker ko kaha bhej diya ...ab tak to ajana chahiye tha...phone try kar rahi hu to unreachable...Had hoti hai yar...aaj strike waik to nahi hai...fir kaha rah gaya??...Ek kam karati hu Maa ko call karti hu...Unhe to btadu..."

" Unreachableee?? Nooo way...Universji Kyu???" She look at the sky with WTH look...and tried to calm down herself..." Dekh Kria ...ab terko hi kuch karna padega..."

She find the broker's card from her bag..." To Mr. Broker...ab kaha bachke jaoge??"

She takes her bag...morever the luggage...to the main road and hoping for the taxi..." Taxiii...Ohh bhaiya..."

Taxi stand was at other side of the road...Kria again take her luggage and onto crossing the road..." Lagta hai aaj sab kuch muze hi karna padega..."

And the break jerked...other second Kria was on the road...actually felling on the road...she was bit groaned with the sudden jerk held on her... and she is paining, " aah oouch..."

" Driver, dhang se gadi chalaya karo..." the person in the car yelled at his driver while getting out of the car; and go straight to the Kria who was infront of his car...Lying down...flooded in the pain, as she was crimping it was not unseen that she was hurted...but still trying to cover up and mange to stand up...to look what her luggage have to suffer..." Andhe ho kya...dikhta nahi kya??...aahhh...itni..." caressing herself and her bags...

" You're OK?? Let me Help you..." and he collected her Bags...

" Nahii ...koi jarurat nahi...pahlehi bhot kuch...",she stands and look at the person who helped her and stop addressing him...cause she realized that she just yelled at the person who was older than her...more gentle and well suited...must be he is the big Businessman; " Ohh so sorry uncle...I don't want to like this..." while taking the bag which was handed by him...

" That's totally fine beta...It happens... are you Ok?? "

" ya ya...I'm totally fine...aahhh...", she jumped in the pain while taking a foot forward...then she look at her leg...

" I think it's scratch...U'll not able to walk...Let me drop u..." , he rally round...

"no no...uncle it's ok...I'll manage..." she was kinded...

" No beta how will you... I'll drop you..." and he told driver to keep Kria's bag in the car...

" ok uncle...thank u so much..."

" It's fine...come..." , he helped Kria to get in the car and they are on the way...

...

" So new to Mumbai?? "

" Yes...aaj hi aai hu..."

Driver headed the car to the broker's office whose address was given by Kria...

" Lo... pahuch gaye...lagta hai flats dekhne hai??"

" Ha...ohk uncle...thank you so much...mai chalati hu..." Kria opened the Door and ready to go...

" aree beta...tum iss halat me kaise jaogi...tum rukho..." and to driver " Driver dekho to jao aur uss broker ko leke aao...mera nam bta dena..."

" nhi uncle...mai ..." Kria was trying to stop...but driver has already left...who can disobey his boss around... Kria hoping to talk with that broker face to face...but she can't see him coming back with the Driver...

" Sir... the Broker's office is closed..."

" Ohh damm ab mai kya karu??... " kria getting in tension...and it's not out of sight of him... he was nervous about her...she was so child and new to Mumbai...she diddn't face this type of situation in her life...ohh poor girl...

" Don't worry beta..."

And the phone rings...Kria's phone flashed her Mom's name..." maa...ab mai kya karu?? "

" Hello...?"

" Kria beta pahuch gai... dekh liye flats?? ... Kria kya hua??"

" maa who..." and she told the whole story... and on the edge of crying...

" Laao mai bat karta hu..." he forward his hand to take the phone ; "hmmm Maa ye lo...nse bat karo..." she handed him the phone...

" Namaste...Mr. Singhaniya...Mr. Ranvijay Singhaniya..."; this name was really famous and Kria's mom was know that she is talking to Business Tycoon Mr. Singhaniya...

" Namaste sir... I'm really thankful to you...to take care of Kria..."

" Ohh that's totally fine...I guessed now she will go to the Hotel..."

" haa...maine kaha use..."

" Are aise kaise Mam...wo Hotel me nahi rahegi...pehli bar Mumbai aai hai...mai to use nahi jane dunga...agar aap ko aitraj na ho to wo aaj mer ghar pe rah sakti hai..." Kria was amazed with the kindness of him...

" But Sir..."

" No ...mam...agar aap meri jagah hoti to I don't think that u'll allow her to go to te hotel... u don't worry ..she will be fine with me... and broker ka problem mai dekhlunga..."

" ohhk sir...thank you so much..." he hold the phone to Kria..." lo bat karo...and don't panic okk..."

" hello maa..."

" Kria beta...chinta karne ki koi bat nahi hai...wo janemane shaks hai...u go...ok..."

" okk maa...bye maa..." she can't deny her mom...she don't want to create more problem by not listening to her...and she hang up the phone...

" driver ghar le chalo..." he told the driver and then the car goes on the way..." Kria beta...tum chinta mat karo...broker ka pata mer beta laga lega..."

" thank u so much uncle...agar aap nahi hote to pata nahi aaj..."

" Bas bas...ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya...dekhna aage sab acch hoga..."

...

They reached at home...ohh home is not correct is was mansion...car enters through the Automatic gate...and here is the Mansion...Kria was unable to keep her eyes shut...she doesn't recognize that uncle already left the car and was calling her to get off...

" kria...andar hi baithna hai kya??"

"umm...no ..." back to her senses...she was helped by him to get off the car and to walk to the door... rang the bell...door opened by the old lady...

" Bade sahib...aa gaye aap..."

" Amma ...kria ki help kardo...ise chot ayi hai..." and next minute Kria was helped by Amma...

" Aao beta...andar aao ...sambhalke..." caressing her to take safe foot steps...

" thank you aunty..." and she get on the sofa...by Amma... " Mai pani lati hu..." and she goes to kitchen...

" kria tum aramse raho...apna hi ghar samjna..." sitting on the sofa side by side...he told her ..." lo pani piyo..." he handed a glass of water from the Amma's hand...

He narrate all the incident over amma...and she sighed for Kria..." and Kria ye Amma hai.ghr ka sara kam yahi sambhalti hai...meri wife death ke bad mere bte ko inhonehi sambhala hai..." he introduced Kria to Amma..Both greeted each other by smile...

" Amma isse guest rum dikhado...thak gai hai...aur ha ...iski chot bhi dekh lena..."

" ji sahib...chalo Kriya..." Amma take Kria to the room her bags were already reached to the room...Guest Room was in the groundfloor (basement) they were on the first floor...

" Hello Rey...Ek kam hai Beta...mai Ek broker ka Nam aur adress send karta hu...ate woqt pata karke ana..."

"Sure Dad..."

**************


P.S; Next part will be around Tuesday...hope u'll wait till tue...plz...review u'r comment's and gives it likes...*Ray*

Edited by Ray135 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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unres

wow!!!!!

i m frst one to cmnt for d frst tym.. .. ...

hurrah!!!!!!

nw abt apdate it's awsumm...

loved it...

rey's dad is very kind nd generous...


waiting 4 rey's entry in house...

it's gng to b intrsting...


thanx 4 pm...
Edited by shalini_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
😃awesome wow... kria rey 2gtr in rey s house wowie i m loving it...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing part 👏...
Kria Mumbai mein land hui he hai aur problems shuru 😆...
Rey's Dad is Sweet n Caring 😳...
Haye Kria Rey ke ghar pe 👍🏼...
Loved it ❤️...
Waiting to see their reaction 😃...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update
kriya rey ki ghar pe

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