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temptations

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Guys i dnt noe how to apoligise...but i hv turned a lot busy...i dnt get time at all...to even write in sections...college is more hectic than i thot...plsss cooperate wid me guys...in octobr starting i hv my holidaus...till then u wud hv to wait...and i also need ur help for plots...feels lyk my head has stoped wrking...pls all those who wnt to hv a joint ff plsss pm me...we all will decide...plds its a request...!!!!

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#262

hey its all rite we will be waiting... if u want any help for plot jst snd me pm dat u need help, i take my time and surly help u till my level...

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Its OK temps😊, we vil wait till u get free,😃

abt help , may b i cud jst give idea😉 but as a joint writer its not possible coz of lack of time,😭

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temptations

@temptations

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Thank u guys thnks a lot...n pls pm ur ideas to me...molding thm into posts is my work...once again thnk u for cooperating wid me...i m sure wid all ur help and support the posts will b hilarious!!! :):)

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temptations

@temptations

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

EPISODE 28

NARRATIVE IS RANBIR

i cudnt stop myself frm being at abhyas room ...she was surely a magnet for me...jitna bhi dur rehne ki koshsish karoon...aur paas aa jaata hoon ...raat ko hi to i met her ...but abi i cn nt stop myself...shes lyk a drug ...kaha mai usse marne wala tha n ab mai uspe poori tarah marne laga hoon...i love her so much...it was about 6:30 in the morning...bas maine soch lia tha ki abi muje abhya se milna h ...mai collge ke tym ka bhi intezaar nhi kar pa rha tha...mini ki teasing se mai tang hogya tha...jaise strting mai karan aur vo to seedhe saadhe the...hahahh...

So i decided to go from my window leaving a note ..'c u in collg ...bye'...
I reachd her balcony ...she was awake...itni subah..i wish sab sahi ho...she was sitting on her bed...her eyes were ...and there was smile on her face.
Ye kya hogya h abhya ko...i walked at my max speed to reach her bed from balcony...

"Abhya...wat happened...tum..." her looked made me stop speaking...shhe didint looked surprised...bt there was a different shyness over her face...and nw she suddenly hugged me very tightly...i hugged ger back...i think theres some trouble wid her...her eyes were moist ..

..."abhya hua kya...kisi ne kuch kaha h kya?"

" oho ranbir ...nhi kisi ne nhi maine keh dia h ..." uff her diplomatic talks..

"Nahi samajh aaya na ...kiss baatt ke vampire ho...i hv heard vampires bhut intelligent hote hai...i told muma about you..n she said she is fine with it...aaya ab samajh..." oh wow i cnnot believe this she said all... i hugged her even more tightly "you made my day abhya...i love you.."

She smiled and parted away ..." but dad ko nhi bataya...kyuki nhi to vo tum se ajeeb ajeeb ques poochte bt mom ne kaha that she will giv dad hints ..."

" thats kk atleast u told aunty...i am happy...thnku abhya...but ek cheez samajh nhi aayi...y were u crying...mai darr gya tha i thougut kisi ne tume hurt kia h.."

"ranbir ye khushi ke aasoo the...ab muje mom se permission mil gyi tumhare sath zindagi bitana ke liye...i was so happy ki smjh nhi aaya ki konsa emotion use karoon isliye sab aagya...i cried laughed shouted...evrythng..." n now she was laughing like a child...bt i cudnt reply her ...maai aapne khoon ke aasoo kaise dikhata...i preferred to remain silent...
"Chlo abhya get ready...colg nhi jaana kya...mai tumhe fiesta road par hi milunga..." i got up from d bed." Okay...bas ek kaam "

"Kya...abhya" i dnt knw ab abhya kya maengegi...

She went to her cupboard...
"Please select a dress for me mera dimaag nhi chl raha...usse khushi ka overdose mil gayaa h."n i went towards her cupboard

I huffed on her comment..."okay"

"Thanku ranbir...mai naha kar aayi.." and she came closer to me...

"I love you..." she hold my neck and rise on her toes naturally i bent my face...i hold her waist...she kissed me...i cudnt stop myself either...i kissed her back...we both were so high on happiness...a kiss was the best thing to control it..i parted away " i love my life and my life is u" she smiled and i kissed her again...these desires...aaahhh...i luv them ...her beautiful soft lips on my hard cold lips...made them melt totally...i parted away...
"Abhya...chalo nahane jao...i will keep your clothes on the bed" she smiled and went..to the bathroom..

Hmmm...so i opened her cupboard...omg dat was full of dresses shirts..jeans...shorts..and so much...she wud definately give a gud competition to mini...hahah...suddenly wen i ws moving clothes..meri nazzar ek majenta color ke kapde par padi...i took it out...and that was a very beautiful approx knee length dress...it had frills below...perfect for a normal college day...i loved it..isse hindi mai raani colour kehte h...i kept that on her bed...i tooj a paper n pen n wrote a note for her...' abhya tum meri kaali zindagi ko vapas se roshni mai laane wali raani ho...so isliye i chose a raani colir(majenta) dress for u...see u at fiesta road'

I kept the paper..beside her dress...and now i realised i am becoming back to that person jo mai vampire banne se pehle tha...i laugh too much...mini ne kaha tha bhai ye konsi side h tumhari...kyuki usne to muje kabhi insaan nhi dekha...mai aisa hi tha...fun loving ..khud hasne wala...auro ko hasane wala..mere vo vala ranbir vapis aa ra h ...i dnt know ye achi baat h ya nhi...bt aapne aap ko vaapas paakr bhut acha lag rha h...yes i m loving this...all this has happened because of abhya...jo meri family 50 saalo mai nhi kr payo vo abhya me 1 mahine mai kar dia...i reached home since i decided to go for hunt alone..n now my clothes were dirty ...toh i had to change..i hope kisi ne note na pada ho ..otherwise ye mini fir se chidda ne lagegi...roz ki tara.. bas ranbir..ab pehle wala ranbir ban ja..agar mini kuch kahegi ..to tujhe uska kawab dena hoga ...mini was in my room wen i reached there...

"Oye bhai...u were to nt cming bak..then how...abhya ne bhaga dia?"

I gave her dagger looks...
"Wat bhai bata na kya karne gye the abhya ke room mai..."

"Mini vo hi sab jo tum aur karan bhai kar kar ke thake nahi ho ab tak" n i laughed badly after that...

She looked strange ..i stoped laughing..
..."kya kuch galat kaha..."i raised one of my eyebrow...

She shouted "karan...jaldi aao yaha" arre maine aisa kya kaha...uff pehle wala ranbir mat hi ban apni mini ki khushi ke liye...karan was in the next moment...
Mini hugged him ..." karan!!!...ranbir is back.."
Wat does she mean by that now...i m back...ye to nhi thi vo baat jisse mini ajeeb behave kr rhi thi...and then she went out..
"Kya hua karan...i m bak matlab"
I became serious suddenly

"Ranbir she means you r bak to normal ...jaise tum insaan the tab..." how do they know...n wats there to get so dramatical about that...

"How does she know?"

" oh...ranbir humne kisi bahut puraane vampire se tumhare past ke baare mai poocha tha kafi pehle..n he told us ki tum khush the apni duniyaa mai...bhut hasmukh the...bt we realised tum vampire banne je baad bilkul ulte ho gye the.. no emotions...khushi to dur ki baat h...n tab se mini ne pledge lia tha ki tumhe pehle jaise bana ke rahegi...mini ne to pata nhi bt abhya ne zaroor kr dia ... dude u are bak..." n he gave me a manly hug...
I smiled coz that ws wat i ws thinking abhi...n i cud also hear mini conversing wid dad abt me and theu seemed happy...

" but bhai how was she trying i never felt it"

Mini came from behind " ranbir tumhe aise har baat par chidda kar mai tumhe pehle jaise banana chahti thi...itne saalo se...bt i failed...bt abhya ke aane se asli ranbir bhi aa gaya... aaj jab tumne muje aisa twisted answr dia...mai bata nhi sakto kitni khushi millli iss marre hue dil ko..."

"Awww...mini" i hugged her... "pyaar karne waalo ka dil zinda rehta h mini...tum hi bolti thi na ..."

"Wow man!! kya pyaar ki ek kahaani hai yeh ...ek aadhi insaan n aadhi vampire ne ek poore vampire ke emotions ko vapas laati h...interesting...i am glad ranbir...u chnged...back to normal...i wish hamesha aise hi raho tum...abhya ko pata ke rakhna hamesha..." and he winked me

"Haan jaise aap har 5 saal baad meri behen ko patate ho n dubaara dubaara shaadi kaarte ho.." karans ki shakal dekhne layak thi...i n mini laughed ..

"Impressive ranbir..." and he smiles ."...Vaise mini ranbir ne kya twisted cheez boli thi pehle humme bhi batao..."he hold mini from her shoulder... n i and mini looked at each other and laughed so badly...

"Choda na karan...hum fir kabhi ranbir se panga lenge..." we all laughed and they both went outside...

Edited by temptations - 13 years ago

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temptations

@temptations

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

guys...i worked with lot of efforts..i wrote the whole thing from my phone ...please pay off my hardwork and efforts by writing loads and loads of comments and likes...i hopw i enjoyed it a lot...and sorry i am unable to pm u all...wenevr i will get time to open my pc i will pm u all so as a mark to show u read it hit the like button or comment so that i donot waste time pming u...thnx to all i love u all and ur appreciations...pls do keep appreciating me d way u do...more interestimg posts to come...pls do keep chking my posts incase i m unable to pm u...pla cooperate wid so much lack of time i cn only do this much sorry...pls once again do comment on my episode 28!!!

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#267

hey nice update and ya u r rite abhay ko itna jaldi nahi pata chalna chahiye dat ranbir is vampire but use yeh to pata chalna chahiye dat vampy r their in city and ya rabir ko agar pata chala dat if abhya is in contact wid vampir dan she also become d same and to protect her he have to leave her... think over it and thnx 4 update...

Edited by trishnawaliya - 13 years ago

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611615

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

Nicely wrtn,sory my like butn s nt wrkng, i hv 1 doubt,did abhya told piya dat ranbr is a vampre?

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temptations

@temptations

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Well dat was already decided that abhya will only tell her mom that she loves ranbir and not that he is a vampire...so she just told pia that she likes ranbir...

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#270

Awesome update!
So Abhya finally told her mother abt Ranbir! Dat s gr8 bt i guess it s a half truth.She hasnt told her abt him being a vampire!
Ranbir is back 2 his old self all owing 2 Abhya.
Loved d cute teasing of Mini n Karan.
Waiting 4 d rxn of Abhay!

Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 13 years ago

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