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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
only 9 mnths !!!
no it cant happen ... poor virat
eagerly waitin 4 next .
thnx 4 the pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32


i loved the concept
and its nice story
do updat esoon and PM me
and write lots and lots on virika
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
gr8 job i loved the concept plzzz continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Firstof all, U r so sweet .U said u wuld start in oct only but u updated.Thank u so much for that .😊

Loved ur update.Just nine months ah for virat too bad. waiting for the next update.Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
beautiful update, hope virat doesn't die
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
superb start cannot wait to read more please pm me when you update next thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
nice update dear !!! continue soon .thanks for d pm .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Oh so in here, virat has medical issues... Hmmm nice update :) cont soon n thank u for da pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

PART-2

it was 6:30 in rishikesh, a short,thin ,tanned skin girl was walking on the road and then a drop fell on her cheek followed by heavy rain. all people there started to rush back to homes and soon all left. now she was only there dancing and enjoying the rain

tip-tip barsaa paani - 2 paani ne aag lagaayi
aag lagi dil mein to dil ko teri yaad aayi
teri yaad aayi to jal uthaa mera bheega badan
ab tum hi batao sajan main kya karu

naam tera mere labon pe aayaa tha - 2
ho maine bahaane se tumhe bulaaya tha
jhoom kar aa gayaa saavan main kya karu

tip-tip barsaa paani paani ne aag lagaayi
aag lagi dil mein to dil ko teri yaad aayi
teri yaad aayi to jal uthaa mera bheega badan
ab tum hi batao sajan main kya karu

duubaa dariyaa mein khadaa main saahil par - 2
tu bijali bankar giri mere dil par
chali aaisi yeh paagal pavan main kya karu

tip-tip barsaa paani paani ne aag lagaayi
aag lagi dil mein jo toh dil ko teri yaad aayi
teri yaad aayi to chha gaya mujhpe deewanapan
mere bas mein nahi mera mann main kya karu

and after she finished dancing she gave a glance to her watch and saw that it was 8:30 so she immediately started rushing to her home. she reached home and sneeked into her house through the kitchen window and went in quietly and sat on the dining table where her bhai, bhabi, swetha, Tanya, shivangi(they are adopted children by virika as Jeevika cannot conceive) were siting and praying. she sat there and after they finished their prayers they all started having food she also started eating when

viren- manvi!!

Manvi looked lazily at viren and got up

Viren- manvi go!

Manvi-bhai aaj ke liye maaf kardo plz!!!

Viren- manvi go

Manvi- bhai plz main toh sirf aadha ghanta late hoon aur aap dr hokar kisi ko khana khane nahi de rahe hi galat baath!!

Viren- manvi I said go!

Manvi meanwhile she and her sisters arranged food on a plate and just before manvi leaving they gave it to her and she quietly took it and here all again started their food and suddenly heard a plate break sound and hurried out and saw food all down on the grond and viren went to manvi with a explanation look

Manvi- who chori ka khana tha isliye gir gaya!

Viren smiled and hugged her

Manvi- thnx bhai

The next day morning manvi and her beeji went out for buying vegetables and when they were buying in some other shop a guy was looking at manvi and manvi saw it so she took it as a chance for her mischief and went and told her beeji to observe him

Beeji- batameez use abhi jaake doh dalti hoon

Manvi- beeji aap rukiye main hi jathi hoon

And she went to him

Manvi- hain u come

He came

Manvi- kya main tumhe pasand hoon?

Man was stammering

Manvi- yes or no?

Man- yes… no n..o

Manvi- aaj rat 11 baje main tumhara church ke bahar wait karungi we will elope and marry

And she left

Man- ahhh

Manvi- beeji main ne use dho dala

Beeji- that's like my granddaughter

And they both went home

AT NIGHT

That guy came behind the church which was a graveyard. He went in and was scared. He staretd walking when suddenly a ghost woke up from her grave

Ghost1- booo.ooo

Guy- ahhh (screaming)

He ran in and again a ghost come from above

Ghost2- eeehhh

Guy- ahhh( screaming again)

And then suddenly a ghost appeared in front if him

Guy- tum tum wahi ho na jis ne mujhe yaha bulaya

Manvi- haaa maine tumha khoon choosne ke liye bulaya

Guy- nahi nahi BACHAO BACHO and set off running

And then all the ghosts came who were manvi sisters and were all jumping

All- YAYA!!!!!!!!!!!

And started running and came out and then manvi dashed a person she turned around and saw a tall handsome guy she stared at him for sometime and then

Manvi- BOOO………..OOO

And ran away

Here virat stood motionless and expressionless and left from there

PRECAP- virat kissed manvi on her cheek!!!

So how was it guyz plz comment and let me know and for pms send requests I ll accept

Bye

LUV YA

-nicky

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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
loved it continue soon pm me pls

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