My first Poem

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Vinder90

@Vinder90

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Posted: 12 years ago

I am very crap at poems, but it is said that harsh / very awesome times lead to natural poetry, so here goes. . .

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65379944
😆 😉

ANd yes seriously,, there is a poem-like 4 line writing by me there (today), so not jokin 😊

its at the last page there. . . ALSO. . .make sure to state your states of missing our daer lali A lot. .

edit: go down 2 posts to find my desc. of this poem/ whatever you call it lol 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Itna funny poem mai rau ku raha hai...mujhe toh poem padhke hasi aayi...waise accha poem hai...😃

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Vinder90

@Vinder90

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kusum11k
Itna funny poem mai rau ku raha hai...mujhe toh poem padhke hasi aayi...waise accha poem hai...😃

thanks lol. . .also make sure to comment in that AT as well lol. . .😃 kairee is loosing its Rapshikness without lali lipistick😭

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Vinder90

@Vinder90

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Posted: 12 years ago

actually guys, this now doesnt seem like a poem LOL. .

its more like a shayari than a poem lol. . and best thing i can use to describe is is this song. .

Shayarii aa gayi, mai shayar to nahii. . . 😆

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