Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri-#3,#4 link added - Page 21

Originally posted by: neha5058

will update it tomorrow morning...

nice part neha...😊👏

baht intezaar karwaya.. but its k kyunki update bht hi achha laga... maan's confession n determination was superbly pictured... n eagarly waiting for next part jaldi update do na...

Awesome update

Loved it

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Soory for late replying as my lappy wasn't working

Originally posted by: neha5058

will update it tomorrow morning...

Dadi-kya aap dono chahte hai ki hum bhi yaha se chale jaaye???

Rey & ash- no dadi….

Annie-mera ho gaya….. good night everyone…..

Everyone retired to their own room,,, but there is two person who are restless…… Geet went in garden feeling miserable , not able to control on her choking heart, over-flowing emotions which are at the verge of breaking down…… she was crying holding her mouth,, sitting on the bench in garden…..

Geet's Monologue

I am not angry from you maan,, I am not….. actually I was never….. how can i?? I love you and that's the reason…. I know you did all this for your love, but today you confessed that you was never in love with sameera, it was infatuation…. It was an attraction…… today I can feel your condition, I know from which phase you are going through…… it is not easy to recover after breaking heart….. it was not easy for me maan…… I have accepted that you are not in my destiny but today I found a hope after hearing your heart….. a hope that I can also be happy, I can also feel love, maan's love, maan's care….. I know today I am sounding selfish, but there is no selfishness in love……

(she was crying but there is happiness, joy in her eyes, a new kind of spark, a spark of being with maan, the dreams which were shattered, today she felt them alive again),,,,

I know maan, you are not able meet your eyes with me because of our first night….. but believe me, you were not at fault….. it was me who was so desperate for that….. if you are at fault then my fault is bigger than yours….. I knew that you were drunk and I didn't stop you….. you think that I don't trust you enough but that's not true…. Still I trust blindly…. You were not wrong…. Actually you can never wrong….. because I know…. I love you….and that's the biggest reason behind it….. because of those two jerks, you suffered a lot today….. agar maine aapko roka hota,, aapko uss chudail sameera ke paas jaane hi nahi diya hota to aaj ye sab nahi hota……

(she cursed herself….. on the other hand maan was watching her crying from his window….)

Aur maan, you have every right….. I know you thought yourself the great Msk but that's not true that msk can't cry, msk can't show emotions,,,,,, msk can cry, msk has the right to feel emotions….. you have every right….. just because of that chudail sameera, you can't breakdown like this….. I won't let you break down like this…… I know maan, I have promised to you and to myself that I won't show my face to you but today seems that I have to break that promise of mine……. Today nothing is more important than you…..

You want me back in you life na, then I'll be….. you want me in your room na because of your cousins then I'll be…… I'll be back in your life maan….. I want nothing except you…. Without you nothing is at the place….. but now onwards, everything will be at place….

Aur wo kehte hai, jab insaan pyaar mein hota hai then hamein dimaag se nahi dil se sochna chahiye…..

Do you know how many feelings i carry in my heart,

how do i end my day and how do i start.

Missing you and longing 4 u is all i can do,

but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how many unspoken words i wanna say,

how can i say i keep on finding the ways.

Loving you and praying 4 you is all i can do

but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how many dreams i have in my eyes,

how can i fulfill them i keep on telling the lies.

Preaching you and caring 4 you is all i can do,

but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how much pain is deep in my soul,

how do i bear them and keep trying to come out of the whole,

Searching you and urging 4 u is all i can do

but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how much I LOVE YOU,

i wanna tell but unable to do.

Missing u, loving u, preaching u, searching u , wat else i can do,

I wish as i feel you feel the same too...

Geet's Monologue Ends……

Maan's Monologue

I know geet, you are crying because of me….. I know I am like this, I am the one who gave pain to everyone, everyone cried because of me…… but today I felt my mistake…. I know where I was at fault…. I promise you geet, now onwards I wont let any tear come in your eyes….. I know I misbehaved with you with our first night…… I was drunk badly….. today I felt the difference between love and infatuation….. I was living in infatuation world and here love was waiting for me and I was ignoring it because of that so cold love of mine…..

(he clenched his fist in anger….. he was frustrated on himself…. He went in his gym area again for removing his anger out from his mind by doing his aggressive moves….He ripped his shirt in anger and looked at his hands……)

These dirty hands touched you that night……. These hands became dirty after touching that b**** and I touched you with these hands….. no, I have to remove her feel from my hands…..

(he took out the belt which has sharp needles on it….. he placed it on the floor and placed his hands on it and starts doing push-ups…. He flinched in pain but this pain is nothing in front of guilt….. blood oozed out from his hand but he was doing push-ups continuously until the surface skin of his palm couldn't remove from the surface of the palm…… )

Now it has lost her touch…..

( he felt calm after removing her touch from his hands….. blood was continuously oozing from his hands…. Floor was all red with his blood….. )

Maan's Monologue Ends……

(gals, basically this song in male's voice but here you can imagine it in female's voice… )

(Geet had seen him doing push-ups on the sharp needled belt…. She flinched in pain after seeing him like this…. She wanted to stop him but couldn't gather the enough courage to stop him….. she sighed when he stopped doing push-ups…. Her eyes filled with tears, tears of seeing him pain…. He was thinking that she was crying because of him and she was thinking that he is doing exercise because of her…… both has not enough courage to stop each other, one was crying feeling helpless and other was doing aggressive moves also feeling helpless….. )

(kuchh is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de

Aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de) - 2

Kuchh is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de

She was about to go but stopped again when he starts his next exercise….. he took out his iron chain and started his tai-chi…. He was about to fell down tripped between his feet but he heard a voice….. "maan" he looked at the source of voice….. he saw her , tears were flowing from her eyes, widen eyes, feeling so miserable seeing her state…. He again felt responsible for himself of her state…… she ran to him…..

Tu har ghadi har waqt mere saath raha hain

Haan ye jism kabhi door kabhi paas raha hain

He looked baffled seeing her worn out totally….. she looked at him…. touching him, assuring herself that he is fine… nothing happened with him……

Jo bhi ghum hain ye tere unhe tu mera pata de

He looked at her with so much care….. she took his hands in her hand crying her eyes and heart out….. seeing the blood in his hands, her heart choked and seeing her in this state, his heart also choked….. both are in same boat but not able to voice out……

Kuchh is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de

Aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de

Tears came out from his eyes, she wiped them with her soft fingers where he was not able to move his gaze from her face which has so many emotions…. Love, care, pain, guilt for his this state…..

Mujhko ko to tere chehare pe ye ghum nahi jhachta

Jaayiz nahi lagta mujhe ghum se tera rishta

She pulled him with her and he was going with her like a magnet pulling him with her….. behaving like a statue in front of her….. she went in his room and made him sit on the bed….. "first-aid kit" she asked to him…….

" second drawer in cup-board" she nodded and took out the first-aid kit…..

she took the cotton and drenched it in savlon , trying to clean his wound,,, he flinched in pain , closed his eyes in pain and he held her hand with his other hand for stopping her……. He was in pain…. His hands were badly wounded…..

Geet-maan, see in my eyes….

He opened his eyes hearing her voice…… he opened his eyes and looked in her hazels, which are teary but controlling the emotions….. omg, her eyes were filled with so much intensity….. he felt he'll drown himself in her eyes…. He still felt that he has seen these beautiful almond brown eyes somewhere before their marriage but still unable to recollect where he had seen??

He met with so many peoples, so many girls, always on business trips, he hardly remember girl's face but these eyes has their own charm, that's why he is not able to forget, always think where he had seen these eyes before…….

she starts cleaning his wound but he felt nothing because he was lost in her eyes,,, their eyes met, feeling like he was seeing love in her eyes, which he was not able to see before….. actually he never met with her then how could he see love in her eyes but there is a fact also… he never tried to meet with her….. he was at the fault here…… she was cleaning his wound…..

Sun meri guzarish ise chehare se hata de - 2

(kuchh is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de

Aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de) - 2

A tear slipped from his eyes and fell on her hand…. She looked at him at once, not able see tears in his eyes…. She wiped them with so much love and shook her head in denial…. Telling him not to cry anymore with her khamoshi……

he nodded and wiped his remaining tears….. his hands are bandaged now…… she stood up for collecting the items of first-aid kit, she arranged the first-aid kit and placed it in the cupboard….. he was looking at her with a great observe while she was obvious with his gaze on her……

Geet-maan, he broke out his thought with a sudden sweet voice of her which is quiet shaking…..

Maan- huh!!! He looked at her with a questioning face….

Geet-wo actually, you need a Tetanus injection….. he nodded….. he stood up and went towards the cupboard for a shirt……

Geet-I'll give you….. he said nothing and step backward giving her space….. she took out a shirt and give him……. she was about to call the driver…….. then talked to herself….. driver will be sleeping… now what should I do? Maan heard her talk….

Maan- I'll drive…..

Geet-no, no…. I'll manage…. How will you drive… you have bandage in your both hands…..

she was not looking in his eyes, whenever she met her eyes with him, she felt she will drown in his eyes that's why she was ignoring his eyes while he was observing her every act…. He was not saying anything because he thought that this is not a correct time for a talk and he has not any right to said her anything….. actually he was fearing saying anything to her….. he doesn't want to hurt her more now….. he thought if his any talk will hurt her further more then he won't able to forgive himself…..

He said nothing to her only nodded, agreeing with her and moved out with her….. she took the driver seat where he took the passenger sear beside her….. he was directing her while she was driving….. she was not obvious much about the roads of Delhi , , , , , they reached the nearest hospital from mansion . . . . . . . .

Precap

Sunday means Holiday…. Means whole family at home means friends are also there….. abhi bhi aur kuch batau precap ke bare mein?????

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Well, now don't think that she move on with him….. now she is just concerned for him….. and maan was not able to voice out his feelings right now….. and after seeing so much pain, love n care….. he was searching words, how to put his guilt in words…… that's why he didn't stop her, let her do what she wanted…….

And one more imp thing….. you won't get their conversation directly, I mean, they felt awkward with each other…….they need time….. you will see in further updates that how she forgive him and how she will start living with him…… kuch bhi straight forward, directly nahi hoga…..slowly-2 they will open up with each other and will talk to each other….. so pls keep patience and co-operate with me…… and yes, love you all for the love n support….. muah…..