Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri-#3,#4 link added - Page 15

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, nice part
loved it
geet done right
maan need to go long way
he was trapped still he was in mistake
he need to confront geet and have to win her trust
direct or indirect way he is responsible
continue soon

First of all, really very very sorry for not updating………. It's feel like ages that I have not updated….. was stuck up…… this part is really big, only giving this big part for lightening the environment…. I know all are gussa from me…… kaan pakad kar sorry…… next part will update in Tuesday then I'll again off till Monday….. ok…. Now enjoy this one….. and love ya for the likes and comments….. I am overwhelmed after reading your replies….. your POV about maan's situation and his questions…… your concern for geet…… really loved your answers…… I have replied some of you… pls check it…. From page-22 to page-25……

@cherish- dear, I thought thrice before replying you….. you have written so many things…. I was thinking what to reply or what not…. Love ya sweety…. Replied you…

@tushti-kiran- loved your reply dear…… you are right at your place….. maan is responsible by himself for all this…. Replied you

@ritzy09- di, I am agree with you….me too thinking the same……

Check replies….

@sweetsampa39, parimishty, tia-kashyap, ushti-kiran, cherish- page-25

@divya22, shali_mg, maaneet4afreen,ritzy09, dipti_sam, madhuri53-page-24

@desigirls12, deepthich-page-23

Part-33

Maan-dadi, is msk not a human? Can't he show any emotion? Has he not any right to feel pain? Msk is that cold heart that he can't show any emotion, tell me dadi, is msk that rude, terror for anyone? Is msk has not any heart? Does msk has not any right to be-loved? To cry? Please reply me…… he again hid his face in her lap like he is hiding his face from the world…………. Though he is very strong person outside this mansion, a very rude, arrogant, heartless person but here he is only maan…………

Dadi cried along with him hearing his complaints, she was feeling very timid, not able to answer him back, not able to console him, she ruffled his hairs and wiped his tears…. He was looking at her with some hopes, asking the answers of his questions, his teary eyes said all to dadi…… he is not a man who will cry but when the heart is not able to take more pain then it shattered into many pieces…… and here the condition of maan like this…… he felt he is a criminal who did the biggest crime in this world giving pain a girl who deserves only happiness, love , care and here what he gave to her….. only tears….. nothing else….. he was feeling a shame on himself…….

Dadi-don't say like this maan…… who said msk has not heart, msk has heart which is very big…… achha tell me, aaj ki generation mein kaun kisi ke bache ko apne ghar mein rakhta hai, parents ka pyaar deta hai?? Batayiye….. he looked at dadi with a confuse look……

Dadi-koi nahi karta, lekin aapne kiya….. aur jaante hai kyon? Because you have heart….. kaun kehta hai maan singh khurana has not any right to be-loved? Wo nanha sa bacha Vedanta bina kisi rishtey ke apse itna pyaar karta hai…… aur kaun kehta hai msk is a cold hearted man….. jab ghar mein kisi ko kuch ho jata hai to sabse pehle aap pura mansion sar par utha lete hai….. sabse jayada tension aap hi lete hai….. aapko yaad hai when annie fell ill on her last birthday to aapka kya haal hua tha…..

He smiled hearing that incident…….

Maan-tab maine doctors ki line laga di thi aur whole 3 days I was with her leaving my office work….. how can I forget this dadi maa……

Dadi-hum jaante hai aap kabhi kuch dikhate nahi hai lekin aap dil se bahut caring hai…. Aur hum jaante hai sab theek ho jayega……

Maan-no dadi maa…… nothing is going to right…. Nothing is at the place…. Kuch theek nahi hoga….. I have lost your trust, annie's trust and geet….. I have ruined her life….. how will you all forgive me? How can I forgive myself? I always think about myself…… dadi shook her head in denial……

Dadi-no maan…. Nothing is like that…… you always think about us before yourself…… haan yeh baat sach hai ki hum sab aapse bahut naraaz the aapke faisle ko lekar, aapne jo geet ke sath kiya par wo kehte hai na subah ka bhula agar sham ko ghar wapas aa jaye to usey bhula nahi kehte, aur aapko aapki galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai to hamein aur kya chahiye…….

Maan-but dadi maa, it's too late….. it's too late,,, I am late in realizing my mistake…..

Dadi-no maan, it's never too late…… aapko apni galti ka ehsaas hona chahiye bas aur kya chahiye….. and today I am so happy that you realized your mistake…… isse pehle aur der hoti aap wapas aa gaye….. now stop crying like a child….. otherwise I'll taunt you again then msk can't cry like a child…… both smiled through tears….. he wipes his tears and again placed his head in her lap……

Maan-dadi maa……

Dadi-haan bte,,,,

Maan-how will I face geet? How will I meet my eyes with her? I couldn't meet my eyes with myself then how with geet?

Dadi-I know maan, you have lost your trust ability in her…… I know her,, she has a big heart…… she loves you so much….. she will forgive you but give her little time to cope up with this situation….. I know it will not easy for her…… wo yaha aapki responsibility par aayi thi beause she trust you, par shaadi ki pehle hi raat aapne kya kiya, uss bechari ka dil tod diya…. Aap jaante hai, aaj hum aapse jo baatein kar rahe hai wo sirf geet ki wajah se…..

she never complaint for anything but I know how nave she is by her heart…… she never gave any reason to me for hate you after that night,,, but I know how lonely she felt here,,, she has everything but I can feel, what a life she is living without a life partner…… this is not easy for her maan….. not easy….. she needs time…..

Maan-I know dadi maa,,, it was not easy for her…… she needs time…. And I promise to you dadi maa that I'll give everything to her, love, care, trust, happiness…. Everything…… but before all that I have to talk to her…..

Dadi-I'll talk to her bte…..

Maan-no, dadi maa, not today….. I always wanted to beg sorry from her but never got chance….. not today……. I'll talk to her……

Dadi-but maan, not now….. rey n ash are also here….. kal baat kar lena aur raat bhi kafi ho gayi hai….

Maan- aapko kya lagta hai dadi maa ki geet mujhe maaf karegi? He was looking at dadi with hopeful eyes, so many emotions in his eyes, guilt, pain, calmness, curiosity for knowing will she forgive him, shame…… everything……

Dadi-I know maan, it will not easy for her but she is a mature girl, she knew everything about you, about herself, about her love for you, everything…… she has a golden heart….. she will surely forgive you but she needs time….. these 3 months are like a hell for her…. No happiness, only pain.,,, she cupped his face in her palm….. will you give her happiness?? Will you fill her life with colors of love, care, happiness, everything where pain doesn't exist…… boliye maan, denge geet ko aisi zindagi????

He nodded with a smile…… I'll dadi maa….. I'll

Dadi smiled hearing his assurance…… today she felt like she get everything which she desired for geet…..

Maan-dadi maa, have you forgiven me???

Dadi-hamare maaf karne ya na karne ka to sawaal hi nahi uthta….. he raised his brows in question…. Hum aapse nahi , aapki harkato(behavior) se naraaz the…. Aapko apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya bas wahi kaafi hai…..

Maan-thank you so much dadi maa…… this time I'll not let you down….

Dadi-I hope so beta….

Maan-dadi, actually I have to tell you one more thing….

Dadi-what is that?

Maan-actually dadi maa, ash & rey doesn't know anything about my and geet's relationship, I mean that we both live in different rooms and we don't have any relation like a husband & wife have……

Dadi-I'll talk to geet about this matter tomorrow….. it's too late now aur aapne dinner bhi nahi kiya…..

Maan-aapne bhi to nahi kiya….. she smiled….

Dadi-let's have dinner together like before…. He nodded and headed towards the dining area where ash, rey and annie having dinner…… they both was not aware the third person's presence….. who was listening everything from outside the room….. and that was geet…. She came there asking something to dadi but stop hearing maan's cry…. She was in tears hearing their conversation….. she ran from there when they both left….. she was holding her mouth for not making any sound of her hiccups….

*****

Meanwhile at Arjun's place…… he wwa having his dinner when his cell buzzed….

Hello! Arjun said..

Hello…. Arjun, said Vicky…..

Vicky…. Hows u yaar? What happen ? calling me at this hour? Asked worriedly arjun…

Nothing is like that…. chill…. Everything is fine… just getting bore then thought to call you…. Answered Vicky calmly….

And what made you thought that I would be awake at this hour? Asked arjun rolling his eyes at his answer….

I just guessed….. actually I thought to give a try…. So punched your number….. told Vicky…. He was getting bore with his usual life…. Arjun, geet was not there….. and alka was not giving him much time… she is also busy in her fashion designing , spend a little time with him….

Ohhh….. tell me, is everyone fine there? Asked arjun to Vicky….

Yeah, everyone is fine…. And hows u? aur geet? He is missing them like a hell….

I am good and geet… she is also fine… just today she fainted…. Then he bit his lip, what he told him….

What?? She fainted?? Hows she now? Why are you here? You should be there, near her…. You know her na.., she is so careless…. How could you do this arjun…. He became so hyper…

Relax…. Chill…. Take a deep breath….. she is fine now…. Vicky sighed in relief…..

You should be near her by her side…. Suggested Vicky…..

I thought so but then I thought maan came after so many days from his business trip…. So wanted to give her little privacy and waise bhi she is married now…. I know we are her friends but then I thought may be maan won't like it…. I'll go there tomorrow…. Aur waise bhi I never met maan after his marriage, so I thought what he will about me to come their house at midnight….. and I have already asked to anvesha about geet… Replied arjun….

He felt a tinge of pain in his heart hearing maan's name with geet, but he knew that she loved him madly, he was just….. then he shrugged off his all thought, he already forget his love for her…. He knew they are best friends and he never wanted to break this friendship…. This friendship means a lot to him….. he wants only her happiness and he knew that Alka loves him, he knew that she didn't confess her love to him but he knew that….. and he respects her feelings…… he made up his mind that he'll never ditch her and hurt her in any way……

I think you are right…. I'll call her tomorrow… waise bhi she is crazy behind maan, I think you did correct… may be maan won't like this….waise bhi he doesn't about us much…. Btw, who is Anvesha? Replied Vicky….. and asked about anvesha in teasing manner…..

Don't think like that Vicky….. she is maan's sister and now we are good friends…. Replied arjun thinking that his reply will shut his mouth….

Really..!! only good friends….. ya fir more than…. You know…. Arjun can see his naughty smirk on his face through the phone……

Shut up!!! Told arjun…..

Waise why she fainted?? Asked Vicky again…

Aah… it's nothing…. She kept fast today…. That's why….. replied arjun…

Ohhh,,, but she never kept fast….. told Vicky…

Yeah I know,, it's her in-law's matter…. How should I know about this? Told arjun…

Hmmm, ye bhi hai…. Chal bye…. It's late…btw, I was thinking to visit u n geet some day….

That's great…..when are you coming? Asked arjun..

Will think about it then tell you…ok…. Chal bye… good night…

Ok, good night… and don't tell anyone about geet there…. Get it… told arjun…

Ok boss….. replied Vicky…….

*****

Maan and dadi joined them on the dinner table……

Vedanta ran and hugged maan tight…… maan smiled and took him in his arms…..

Ved- I missed you so much papa…… and placed a kiss on his cheek…

Maan- I missed you much Vedanta…… hows my son? Kissed him back….

Ved-I am fine papa…..

Maan-chalo jao… it's too late… sweet sleep…. He nodded and ran in his room….. maan took his seat and starts having his dinner….

Reyhansh- hey dadi, is my room ready, remember that corner one….

Dadi-yes bte, I remember but sorry beta, I didn't know that you are coming so that's not ready…. But don't worry I'll tell to nakul tomorrow and you can shift in that room after a day tomorrow……

Reyhansh- it's ok dadi but why so late?

Ashlesha-dadi, aap to isey jaanti hai na, he is so possessive about that room….. ye to hai hi pagal,

Reyhansh-you bak bak Rj, don't call me pagal….

Ashlesha-otherwise???

Maan-will you both shut up??

Ash & rey-sorry bhai…. Looked down and starts having their dinner…

Dadi- reyhansh, beta will you manage tow days in other room except that one? You fav room is not in good condition so I have to re-arrange it…..

Reyhansh- it's ok dadi…. No problem….

Ashlesha- dadi, do one thing….. this time don't give that room to him, then we'll see how will survive without that room….. bada aaya favorite room…..

Reyhansh-will you shut your Rj wala big mouth? Maan was losing his temper because of their tom-jerry fight without no reason…….

Maan stood up from his place in mid of his dinner and gave a glare to both of them and left from there……

Ashlesha-oops, bhai to naraaz ho gaye….

Reyhansh-all because of you……

Ashlesha-no, because of you…..

Dadi-kya aap dono chahte hai ki hum bhi yaha se chale jaaye???

Rey & ash- no dadi….

Precap

Geet-maan, see in my eyes….

Don't curse me for not giving according to the precap…… don't get hopes that I'll give updates according to the precap everytime because sometimes, it get impossible to type according to the precap….. but in next part, it will be according to the precap becoz I have already typed it…… in next part, there will be only maaneet….. ok. Hope I am doing justice with the characters…..

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