ss: zindagi ya pyaar!!!COMPLETED pg 15 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Nice, really liking the concept!!

Do continue!! and add me to your pm list please!!

-Luv Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

wow concept is just awesome and here a new relationship of jeeman bhabi-nand

continue soon so curious
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😳PART-1

it was morning 8:00 am in chicago and a tall handsome guy woke up from his bed streching himself lazily and then he unwinded his blanket and woke up. he went to the bathroom changed into yoga tracks , did all his eercise and wore his fav aarmani shirt and went to meet his friends.

friend1- yaar yeh virat kaha hai?
friend2- lo aa gaya
friend1- virat man finally u r here
virat- yah dude just got late near yoga anyways lets go in chalo

it was there graduation day and virat was the topper of his university he and his friends celebrated his success and in the evening they got a call from karan their best buddy inviting them to india for marriage. so all set to go to india. After a week all reached india and atteneded their friends marriage and all the virats friends were in a party mood so they were shouting dancing and enjoying on the road when suddenly a car hit virat from back and he became unconcious with blood all around he was then admitted to hospital and the next day he gained concipous but doc continued to do tests for him and virat felt that something was fishy. so after two days he asked the doc
virat- dr i think u r hiding something from me is it something like my bodypart is damaged due to accident?
dr- no there is no problem with accident but i guess u have something else
virat- what is it dr plz tell me i cn face it
dr- mr virat u have Arrhythmia!!!
virat- means???
dr- heart failure u have max 9 months to live
virat- what????
dr- plz virat b brave!

virat was shattered and thinks how cn he die so fast and he still dint enjoy his life too!!! and was in state of shock so he was discharged and he was walking on the road deep in thoughts when suddenly a car saw him and applied brakes
man- r u blind cnt u see and walk usome people are just born to die

but virat left from there sad he reached home
and his mother opened the door who is vanshika
virat- maa mujhe bhook lagi hai khana khilao na plz?
vanshika couldnt bare a situation of her son and hugged him crying

vanshika- bhagwaan sirf tumhara saath hi kyun karta hai

and was crying

AT NIGHT


virat was sitting on the teraace and his dad came
dad- virat r u ok?
virat- da main kuch poochunga toh aap mana nahi karenge na?
dad- of corse bolo kya
virat- dadi wanna spend some time alone without any sad feeling disturbances nothing
dad- par...
virat-plz dad?
dad- tikhe virat

next day morning virat set to rishikesh without meeting his mothere as he knew she wont allow him to go so left silently to b alone...

PRECAP- manvis intro...( no virat and manvi meeting)
dancing in rain
TIP TIP BARASA PAANI...


hey guyz i know i told i ll update in oct but i wanted no one of u to loose interest as u were all interested in it so just updated😉 anyway plz comment and tell me how the story is and to tell it is completely a new one!!!😛and in this story rishikesh is a hill station like ooty and kodai kanal and i will add new places in it too srry for it 😆

LUV YA
BYE!!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Awesome update!!
Loved it!!!
Continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Nice so virat will die no...continue soon and thank u for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
lovely update
cant wait for the next part
continue soon and thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Omg no this can't happen! So virat will die in 9 months. Pls make some miracle in the story and make virman live long life together. This update is so amazing and shocking. Continue soon and thnx for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

omg virat!!!

continue soon...waiting for virman meeting

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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

nice start dear

too different ... poor Virat...😲

thanx 4 pm

update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

plz don't kill viraat

excited for next part cont soon and pm me

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