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@Fazila~

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: Xaffi
Amazing... Sorry for so late comment.. Althought i am the last but not the least... Loved ur updates... Thnx for the pm..

dont worry about being late :)))thx😳

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@Fazila~

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Fau Zi

@lazylad8-FauZi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Fazilaaa...I am DEAD!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful post!!!!!!!!!!!!

You should have waited till tomorrow!!!!!!!!!

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Frances

@Punkin22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Oh my soul, what a magnificent post!! Written with the hand of a writer and the heart of a poet. Where to begin...

The FF story has taken on a life of its own Fuzzy. You have filled the loops completely and brought depth and color to each character. I love this Arnav, he has personality straits that make him hard to understand or bring sympathetic feelings for but he also has finally been given a brain, a working Harvard University brain that can stay one step ahead of Dadi and Shyam. Arnav has finally learned Shyam is a dangerous psychopath and must be watched by a professional to ensure safety for his family.

Nani was a rare jewel you used perfectly, she has prepared this day like a general going to war. Double checking that the victory is won before the first shot fired. And she pulled it off right under Shyam's nose. Now, that is beautiful. She is a grand Queen to me.

We have all wanted so much for Khushi's wedding, we have picked sarees that looked beautiful, we have discussed how her hair should be and what jewelry she should wear down to her dainty feet. But you brought together what was really needed to have a perfect wedding. Only three things. Arnav, Khushi and their love. Stunning.

You brought all the players that really matter into the celebration. Akash, Payal finally have something to add and NK. NK is fast becoming outstanding in his role as Khushi's and Arnav's brother and friend. Loved his part in all this.

Now, we have a brand new character, ones that has no love for any of Malik-Raizadas. In fact, seems to hate ASR on sight. What is the msytery and secret of this man and what does Khushi have to do with him. I have a guess but I shall allow you to surprise all with you wit, Fuzzy.

Congratulation, well done my friend, well done...

Edited by Punkin22 - 12 years ago

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Amazingly awesome update...loved it!!! :)

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

I am glad that Nani was sensible enough to talk to them and get them married before the latest storm hit

Now as she said, they have to weather it together.

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tokyo

@tokyo

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

It was a very interesting twist and waiting for the next part.

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bavucute

@bavucute

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

fazila..wat a update yaar 👏 I had butterflies when Arnav doing hide & seek.. iwas like past is out... but you really maintained the secret very clever.. but plz reveal yaar. tension is really increasing yaar.. plz show some concern on us 😕