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Posted: 12 years ago

KISMAT SE TUM HUMKO MILE HO'..



PART 3

hiii i am back...exams didn't went well but still i will update ...
here is the next part
the one of the most awaited part that i wanted to see...


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He would have drove to few metres when someone came infront of his car ….. well he didn't knew that it was the coming of the new storm………


Maan thought that something came infront of his car ..in order to look who was around he moved out and went a little away …. When maan went away some villagers including both men and women came and pulled geet out of the car …… the peoples who once shower their love and care to her telling small …miniature things to stop her getting hurt…..those same faces are now standing infront of her shooting venom from their eyes as if trying to say that she has done a sin…a sin whose punishment is far more than rotting in hell….. she was wriggling in the tight grip of the inhuman persons who were having no emotions no humanity …no sanity even for the girl who once had considered them a part of her family , her life….. the person whom once she called chachaji….chachiji…. were standing infront of her ……. Suddenly a lady came infront of her and pulled off the veil from her face …….


Lady: why are you here geet…..do you think that we are fools who will not recognize you…


A person came with furious eyes…… the person was her friend's channi's so called murderor brother and her coldblooded brother's friend…..


( I don't remember any odd names of the show except the one I like so addressing as person 1 and person 2…..)

The person came infront of her and roared …..


Person 1: she has brought shame to her family….. god permits getting a daughter like her……when another one supported him…..


Person 2: this girl has made her family disgraced …… she didn't even thought once before making her brother arrest in false accusations…..


The villagers were surrounding geet surrounding her …..spitting the meaning less words …. Somewhere geet was not even able to raise her voice towards the heartless creatures …..only her eyes were giving there verdict by crying …..that flow of salty was giving the reaction that her mind and soul was going through at that moment……


A person was about to slap her when…


A voice came…." Don't you dare to raise your hand on her….. maan singh khurana will not tolerate anything against his wife……"


A powerful voice echoed through the atmosphere ….entralling all and making their gaze shifted to them….. when maan came he didn't find geet but a small drop of blood was caught by his eyes that was probably of geet….when geet was pulled her hand was cut by the small scrap from the car door and a drop of blood fell…..


He was fast in finding her and listen to all the baseless allegations the persons were forcing on her ……. The people who didn't even he knew as far as maan had known all the family members of her family and none was present….. so why these so called people were trying to harm geet…..


Geet was trying to escape but she was badly trapped it was as if they will kill her alive there…..but maan's thunderous voice was like it has brought something in her a sudden contentment that he will save her….. as soon as she saw maan geet tried to free herself and run to his protection …his caring and shielding embrace….but was not able to…..she shrieked in pain as the hold on her hand was like blocking the blood flow through her wrist…..


Maan came and punched the person making him fall geet quickly came to his side and was about to go when again someone accused maan….


Person 3: ohhh so you are also here …… I know you you were the one who carried her …… so he is the one geet for whom humiliate your family ……


Now that was enough before maan could react geet came forward and slapped the person hard…..


Geet: he is the one who saved me from your murderer son who didn't even think twice before helping my brother in killing me geet shouted at the lady ….and what do you know about me do you know where I was or where my family was for three days when I was married….. before knowing anything …. The truth Is always bitter chachi……. And what do you think that channi eloped with gurvinder….. no she was murdered …….. your so called son…channi's brother , brij veerji ….and ….do you even want to know the names of those culprits ……. And you do have a daughter …where is she…..have you been married her to a Rich NRI…..without even gathering any information……


Geet was now boiling with anger …… she had enough she didn't do anything wrong….she was being cheated , humiliated , that person whom she once considered her soulmate was no less than a monster who took her innocence away knowing he will be leaving her the next day….. he was a bloody rapist who needed to be tortured a slow torture that he will beg for death ….and his so called wife she should be given same punishment for even asking her to abort her unborn child…..


Before geet could speak more she holded maan's hand for support feeling dizzy…… when women standing there again started killing her but this time it affected geet ……


Lady : how can we forget that you still is carrying …… going to be a mother without a wedlock ….. girls like you have no right to live…..

Hearing her maan shouted at her…..


Maan: just shut your bloody mouth ….. how dare you say anything against her…… who are you to decide her fate ……


Lady: who are you to her….she isn't married ……… she is telling a white lie infront of whole village…. And you…..she pinted at maan….you are saying she Is your wife …..but I can't see any maritial assets on her …. Not any sindoor in her parting and leave mangalsutra she isn't having a black thread in her neck and you are saying she is your wife……


Before maan could say anything they heard……


Rajji: geet didi is married…… but the guy was already married ………


Lady: rajji …… geet is married …… how can we believe you….. no one was there from the village,…..


Rajji: it was all darji's fault …… it was his fault he made my sister suffered …. Rajji yelled ……


From sometime rajji was standing quiet listening and crying looking at her sister ….. but when the villagers questioned about her marriage rajji couldn't stop herself and intervened….


Rajji: didi why are you back….. no one cared for you then and what do you think they will listen to you know…. I wish I could have helped you …… didi just go away ……


Person:( channi's brother) she cant escape this time….a girl who is responsible for her family's misery ….because of her brij veerji is in jail….. he brought his sword to her neck to slash her but maan held his hand blood was dripping from his hand …….. geet was just numb of everything……


maan snatched the sword ….. he filled her parting red with his blood and took the taveez from his pocket and made her wear it …..


maan: now she is my wife and if you are not satisfied now he took her to nearby temple and took the sindoor and again filled her maang…….


( I know its over dramatic……. But I can't help it…………maaneet literally make me insane…….. this is what I wanted to happen at their hoshiarpur trip…….)


Maan called the nearby police station and get the person arrested in the charges of attempt to murder of his wife and unborn baby….


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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome finally maan ne uski maang bhari nw waiting for nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago
LL comment on this later okey res place
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...
loved the whole drama..
loved to c rajji standing for geet..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
finally maaneet got married
but in odd condition but is was amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
chutki bhar sindoor se tum abb yeh mang zara bhar do ...😳
kal kiya hu kisne dekha sab kuchh aaj abhi kardo ..

loved it ...maan ne mang bhardi ...😳😃

🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

me doing bhangra remembering the worth washing expressions of NT when that actually happened in GHSP ..😃

🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

nyc narration ...too good 👏
uss chachi ki tou mien ...😡
n that idiot je** 🤬... brother of channi wish maan should have killed him thr with his own sword ...🤢

awesom part ..⭐️

is this the last part 😲or u r giving some aftermath scenes 😃as well 😳???
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


nyc narration ...too good uss chachi ki tou mien ...
n that idiot je** brother of channi ewish maan should have killed him thr with his own sword ...

awesom part ..

is this the last part or u r giving some aftermath scenes as well ???



oppsss i didn't thought about it

but may be will write some more parts ...

do u want or should i end here

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana



oppsss i didn't thought about it

but may be will write some more parts ...

do u want or should i end here


yup i do atleast 2 more with some maaneet mahi moments but not from GHSP ur styled ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


yup i do atleast 2 more with some maaneet mahi moments but not from GHSP ur styled ...




my style means...u liked the previous update or should i change more...

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