DIL, DOSTI.. HUM!!#2 ch 43: pg 141/thread #3 added - Page 63

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

any chance of update,may i wait or rd it in mrning?


dont wait dear.. m typing bt nt sure if it ll b done..
also have cousins comin ovr for d wkend,
so no promises!!
Edited by nats0101 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nats0101any chance of update,may i wait or rd it in mrning?

dont wait dear.. m typing bt nt sure if it ll b done..
also have cousins comin ovr for d wkend,
so no promises
ok ,take ur time we wil wait😊
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nats0101=LILY111144any chance of update,may i wait or rd it in mrning?

dont wait dear.. m typing bt nt sure if it ll b done..
also have cousins comin ovr for d wkend,
so
no promises!!
ok ,tak ur time we wil wait😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just came OL today and saw 5 chapters written 👏
nothing less than treat 😃 loved the Geet reading the diary and knowing the truth
Maan understanding that his going away leaving her had hurt Geet
lastly terrace scene was wonderful ⭐️
Loved all parts
thanks for all pms
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Posted: 12 years ago

Some mature content..!! read as per ur discretion!!

Chapter 41

Maan

Her silence was scaring me..

Though she was.. no, is my fianc.. I wud never force her into a relationship..

She was mine bt yet I needed her affirmation!!

Bt why wasn't she even looking at me??

I dint know wht to do.. it was just a few moments bt to me it seemd like ages..

I cud feel myself backing away fm her.. it was killing me!!

It was a considerable distance between us..!!

I closed my eyes.. fearing d worst!!

Why did she agree to dis engagement???!!

Suddenly I felt two arms engulfing me in a tight hug!!

I dint have to open my eyes to know it was her..

My mishty!! Only mine!!

No words were needed after her presence in my arms..

I needed her like a drop of water on parched lips..

Like a heart beat for a life!!

Like maan needed his mishty!!

I hugged her tight.. never to let her go!!

I dint know if I was hurting her bt I needed her now!!

On opening my eyes I confirmed her presence!! Thr she was hiding herself in my arms.. it almost felt as if our hearts were one beating at d same pace!!

I had a craving so strong.. tht I cudnt stop myself as I slammed my lips on hers taking her lower lip n sucking on it wid an aggression I dint know of..

I cud feel d shock in her as she froze..

Bt I wasn't gonna give up..

Bt slowly, she started responding.. bt I wanted more!!

She was mine..!!

As she opened her mouth trying to take in sm air I slid my tongue into her mouth..

It felt like heaven tasting her!!

Every nook and corner fascinated me.. d taste of her percolating its flavor deep into my soul.. one tht wud imprint in my memory forever!!

Finally wen I felt her gasping, I tried to get a hold of myself..

I forcefully lowered my head burying it in her shoulder only to lose my self in d fragrance of her hair..

I bit gently not able to control myself..

"ma-aa-n.."

My name sounded heavenly from her lips.. esp in d trance of our passion!!

"tht was for scaring me!!" I murmured..

I looked deep into her eyes.. glad to c my feelings n cravings reflected in dem!!

I lifted her in my arms wanting to move away fm d cold breeze which though forced us closer deeper into each othr's warmth n yet I cudnt tolerate it wen she shivered due to it!!

Engulfing her petite figure in me, I walked down to d master bedroom, which coincidently happened to b d first room on our way!!

I noticed her turning crimson as she noticed d room, n it dint take me long to guess her thots!!

As I rested her on d cosy bed, n then covering her wid my body, I cud feel d warmth transversing thru our bodies!!

Not waiting any more, I kissed her again, dis tym a slow one, concentrating more on d passion which was now oozing out, finally having ovr cm all hurdles n insecurities!!

Forcing her to respond wid d same level of passion!!

N she did.. n shocked me by biting my lip hard..

Forcing me to look at her.. bt she just licked it, soothing me n then kissed me taking me by surprise!!

Bt I loved her dominance, I loved her claiming me!!

all i life i had tried controllig evrythng.. bt for once i wanted to lose ctrl.. to her!! letting her guide us thru..

I gave in willingly enjoying d feel of her as my hands slid ovr her body!!

Thr was no hesitation now, not after her acceptance n response..!!

And as her hands which had slowly moved upwards from my neck to pulling my hair drawing me closer, I needed no further encouragement!!

our lips were busy relishing each othr!!

As we separated to breathe in, I was greeted by d smooth passage of her neck..

Which was calling out to my touch..

I cud feel her restlessness as my fingers followed by my lips explored her..

Her formal shirt buttons made it easy for me to feel her further slipping down, exposing her shoulders n giving me more access as she arched backward..!!

Every response of hers send a positive sign to me to, as if calling me to claim her!!

A msg I cudnt ignore.. an order tht bound me to it!!

Sliding across d breath of her shoulder, I stopped seeing d bite mark so vividly etched on her skin, I licked it, happy to have marked her as mine..

While she moaned my name aloud..!! I looked upto see her eyes closed!!

It made me feel on cloud nine to see her lost in my touch..

Slowly moving down I found my treasure..

bt der was an obstruction n I dint like it!!

So I turned her over..

Unhooking her bra..as she held onto me tightly digging her nails into my shoulders..

Bt no pain had felt better!!

Separating her fm myself even though it was for a sec to remove d barrier was a torment n I wondered hw I ever thot of forgoing her n our love just a wk ago.. probably love makes u selfish..!!

Bt I dint get much tym to ponder on my thots as her bossoms came into my view..!!

Just relishing dem wid my eyes had aroused me ..

N der was no odr way I knew for a release tht my body needed as I pounced on one of her mounts into my mouth, as if it was d route to salvation, while my hand kneaded d odr..

I just cudnt get enuf!!

She was making those noises tht were music to my ears!!

Her body was responding to me!!

N I loved d feel of our bodies, d friction causing me to burn in d heat of our desires!!

I suddenly felt her hands grip me..

I feared if she was uncomfortable wid our intimacy!!

But den I realised she too wanted to feel me better as she unbuttoned my shirt pulling me up for a kiss!!

Tht was it..!!

Der was no looking back as we deepened our kiss!!

My hands automatically slipped down feeling her flat belly n d way it contracted n den relaxed under my hands..

I moved fm her lips down to her belly kissing her navel..

As her hands caressed my hair..!!

I tasted her, flicking my tongue across her skin, kissing her navel, giving her love bites as her moans filled d room!!

As I further slipped my hands down, sliding down her skirt, I felt her wetness on her inners!!

She was gonna b d death of me!!




not sure hw it turned out..!!

another 3-4 updts n we r done!!

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Edited by nats0101 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
hot nd passionate one
but its going to end soon
i hope u can write it futher
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Posted: 12 years ago
I DONT WANT ANY INTIMACY.MAAN HADN'T TELL HER D COMPLETE TRUTH.N HE EVEN DOESN'T KNOW THAT GEET HAS READ HIS DAIRY.PLEASE WAIT 4 MARRIAGE.THINGS R NOT VERY CLEAR B/W THEM
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!that was so needed part after their tiring confrontation..
they needed assurance of their relationship..
Superb one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update ! introvert maan being bold and aggressive ! may be all pent up feelings coming out open. you know after reading the scene above, your line 3-4 parts more, and we are done, was ... I could not stop myself from laughing ... nice ! donot get me wrong !
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow hun.. that was a hot update.. so finally maaneet kiss like theres no tomm.. omg did they ho all the way? cont soon

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