(MG-FF) Ye Ishq Nahe Aasaan pt 7 pg 124 03/11 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice Start!!!!!!!!😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats for the new ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats for ur new ff in combo...
nice character sketch..
awesome prologue..
maan was broken by his love...
but who is it..y she did?
w8ing for story 2 move on
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow that was nice start.

stories like miseries will be appreciable.

i like it.

and geet what happen to her.

maan heart broken.


me crying...
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Intersting concept
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Congrats guys for your new work.


Its really an amazing concept and it indeed was a bang on start.

Loved all the CS.

Guess its Geet only whom he has proposed...but what is it yaar..u made my Maan cry in the very beginning only😡😡...but me still wondering about why "She" has taken this decision...might me some strong reason...me into thinking mode now😆😆

Looking forward to it...waiting very eagerly for the revelations of the story line up a little bit more...i.e., waiting for the updates.


Thanku anu.. 😊
ohh u r thinking its geet.. good i wont tell anything now.. 😆 me didnt made maan cry.. mujhe kuch nahi pata.. 😉😆 oh anu thinking mode.. now no need i am updating now.. 😃
ur wait is over dear,, 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

congrats for new ff dear

awww starting me hi maan ka dil tod diya

but wats d matter which leads geet tot ake dis desicion

waiting for d update


thanku pooja dear... 😃
so sad na... u will get to know in future updates.. 😃
updating now dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

interesting starting...

loved it very much...

but confused who is dis she...i guess geet only...but prachi is dere...dats why little bit worried...but maan want to propose to his best frnd...n geet is his best frnd...

thank u sooo much fr d lovely ff...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

n

WELCOME

THREE MASKETIERS





thanku so much di... 😃
glad u liked the cs and prologue..
u will come to know soon di.. oops u almost guessed..
updating now..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

wow new ff👏👏
nice cs😃😃
n dev hayee babaji ye khota yha b
hope ye khota(donkey) meri geet se 500 mtr dooor rhe..😡😡😡
prologue
oye wt was that😲😲
mere maanu ka dil tod diya😭😭
who was that girl..
hmm geet??????????😕😕
no she cant b
bcoz in prologue he was 20 when he proposed her
in cs geet is his frnd n 22
itna hone ke baad im sure maanu uss ladki ke dobara toh dosti nhi krega na
babaji kk😆
cont soon😃😃😃


thanku tia... 😃
hahaha dev tho hona hi tha... 😆😆
hawww hamara maanu... dont worry dear hum hain na.. 😃
oh oh... story is in present only dear, maan is 24... so he proposed now only, not in past.. 😃
updating dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago



Chapter 1:





P.S.: Added english translations in RED color.


Not able to find the answers of these questions n not able to bear her refusal maan screamed out loud "ahhh"


His heart is screaming in pain, in anger, in agony. He is not able to understand only her words are ringing in his ears. He collapsed on his knees and looking at the sky blank. It seems that even God is also crying seeing his condition. It started raining, but maan didn't care. He sat there motionless, caring about nothing. It is the most worst day in his life. Maan Singh Khurana failed to understand his best friend. He thought she too has the same feelings as him, but no. he failed to understand. And he even failed to see the pain in her eyes when she was saying those words.


Not only maan, but the girl whom he proposed is also in pain for rejecting him. She too loved him more than anything, but she can't accept him. Not only maan, she cannot accept anyone in her life except the one, whom her parents have decided when she was small. But no one knows how love happens, there will be no particular time or date or day. It happens but by the time she realized, she didn't get anything but pain. And the same pain she gave to maan.


Maan is in love with his best friend GEET SHARMA. He deeply, crazily is in love with her. But the reality that geet doesn't reciprocate the feelings made him breakdown completely. He had a strong feeling that geet too loves him, but no it was his illusion for maan. But in reality geet too loves him but she doesn't have that right.


Maan sat still drenching in rain, he felt a hand on his shoulder. He jerked and turned back.


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Here geet reached the college. She wiped her tears and went to her class. She went to her place and sat there. Soon the professor came and started the class. But geet is not in her senses. Her thoughts went to maan, the way he came and sat on his knees and proposed her. When he proposed her, geet's heart jumped in joy. But her joy and happiness was short lived and reality stuck. How can she love maan? She questioned herself. "No I can't do this? I can't cheat on maan. He is a nice guy and soon he will find someone but not a complicated girl like me".

Not wanting also, geet spoke those harsh words to maan in order to break his heart and she is successful. She broke his heart into pieces and at the same time even hers too. Both are in pain, both are suffering.

Geet is not able to concentrate on the class, she is thinking about only maan. She felt suffocated, she want to be alone and cry her heart out. For the first time in her life she is feeling alone in a crowd. When others are cracking jokes and laughing, she felt that they are laughing at her. She want to go from here as soon as possible. After the class she left from the class. She made her way to hostel, she didn't take bus this time. She doesn't want to be in crowd, she preferred walking. She is in her own world, the world of pain-A HELL. It's raining outside, but she didn't care.

Finally somehow she reached her hostel all wet, entered into her room and closed the door but didn't lock it. She leaned to the door and sat on her knees and cried her heart out. She is catching cold and shivering badly, but she didn't care to change.

"Why God why you did this to me? I didn't ask you anything. But for the first time I am asking you, I want my maan in my life. I hurt him, I accused him, he may hate me now. Why I loved maan when I know that i belong to someone else? Why??" Cried geet.

No energy left in her body, she is tired both physically and mentally. She collapsed on the ground unconscious. She is shivering badly and having cold. She cuddled to herself more and cried even in her un-conscious state too.


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Maan turned back to see who the person is? He saw Rajeev there, seeing his face maan came to know that he knows everything. Maan smiled at him sadly and stood up.

"Maan'" called Rajeev.

Maan hugged Rajeev, "raj for the first time I did a mistake, without knowing her feeling I proposed her. I should apologize to her man" told maan.

"Maan listen I think there is something else which geet is hiding from you because I was also in the same bus in which geet was there. I saw the pain in her eyes and watching you. I think she loves you" told raj.
Maan thought for a while and told "I don't know dude, but it's my mistake na".

"Why don't you talk with her once?" Asked raj.

"What should I raj? How can I face her now, after so much happened in the morning" told maan.

"Maan look there is nothing wrong in what you did, you just expressed your feeling. Go and talk with her once, plz maan" requested raj.

"Ok but not today, I think she will be very upset. And I too need some time" told maan.

Rajeev nodded and told "maan everything will be alright".

Maan smiled sadly and told "mera pehla pyaar adoora reh gaya. (my first love is incomplete). And for today's deed geet will never forgive me".


Rajeev was silent he doesn't want to talk anything which will cause more pain to maan. "I am sorry maan, I am the one who insisted you to propose her. But the turn of events were different. I am so sorry dude" thought raj. They both left from there in maan's car to their room.


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Its been hours geet is unconscious, here pari completed her work in the college and thought of meeting geet.

"I will meet geet and we both can go to hostel together" thought pari.

She went to class and didn't find geet anywhere. "Where is geet?" Thought pari and asked one of her friend.

"Hey jenny, did you see geet anywhere?" Asked pari.

"Hey, no she left the class after first class" told jenny.

"Ok thanks" told pari and left from there. She left the class, "where she might have gone? Let me check in library and canteen" thought pari and went in search of geet. But she found geet nowhere.

"I will go to hostel" and she took her car. Pari drove to her hostel, parked the car and went to her room. She saw the room door is slightly opened. She sighed in relief.

"Oh so madam bunked the college today. Wait let me talk to her."

Pari slightly opened the door and saw geet on the floor all wet. She didn't understand anything. She got in and tried to wake up geet. Pari touched her shoulder and turned her face. She is shocked to see the tears strains all over her face. She touched her forehead and it is burning hot.

"Omg.. yeh geet ne kya haalat bana diya" (omg.. what happened to this girl) worried pari and took her to the bed and made her lie down. Pari took the dry clothes and changed geet.

"I should call doctor", she took the mobile and immediately called doctor.

"I will be there in 15 min" told doctor and cut the call.

Pari is so worried about geet. She took a cloth and a cold water. She dipped the cloth on the cold water and placed it on her forehead.

"I will call bro too, if we have to go to hospital". Pari called maan. By the time maan and raj reached their room.

Maan picked the call. "Ha pari bolo" (yes pari tell) told maan.

"Bro wo.. geet is not feeling well you please come here" told pari almost controlling her cry.

Maan is shocked as well as worried. "What happened to geet?" Asked maan.

"Bro, she has high temperature" told pari.

"Pari you don't worry I will be there soon" told maan and cut the call. "Raj, geet is not well, I am going there" told maan and rushed out.

After 10 min or so doctor came and checked on geet. She gave injection and prescribed some medicines.

"Miss. Pari, check the temperature for every 3 hours and the medicines also" told doctor. Pari nodded and took the prescription from doctor.

"Thank u doctor" thanked pari.

"If there is any problem, don't hesitate and call me" told doctor and smiled.

"Sure doctor" told pari and doctor left from there.

After some time geet is back to her conscious and moved a little. Geet slightly opened her eyes and looked here and there. Pari came to her and caressed her hair.

"How are you feeling now geet?" Asked pari. Geet got up and looked at pari with teary eyes.

"Geet what happened?" Asked pari worriedly wiping her tears.

Geet hugged pari and cried. Now she is hell worried about geet. First of all fever and now she is crying. Here maan is stuck in traffic due to rain.
"Dammit.. geet I am sorry, I won't let anything happen to you" told maan to himself and feeling guilty.

"Geet, geet calm down. See everything is fine. Don't cry dear" tried pari to convince.

Geet broke the hug and told "I am so sorry pari, I am so sorry I have hurt your brother".

"Maan bro??" asked pari confusingly.

By the time maan too reached there but stood outside. Geet is saying something and he didn't dare to go in.

"I can never forgive myself for doing this to maan" cried geet.

"Geet, what is the matter?" Asked pari now curiously.

"You won't hate me na?" asked geet with teary eyes.

"Never geet" told pari.

Geet told what all happened in the bus stop, maan's confession and geet's reaction. Though listening this pari is angry on geet but she is correct in her pov. Pari just caressed her back to calm her down. In this condition she should not stress much.

"Geet, shhh everything will be alright. Don't worry I will talk with bro" convinced pari.

"No pari don't, main tumko aaj kuch bolna chati hu, tum kisi ko mat batana." (I need to tell you something pari, but you should not tell to anyone) told geet.

"Yes geet tell me" told pari.

"Pari, I love your brother. I love maan" confessed geet.

Here pari and outside maan are shocked to hear this. Geet loves me then why she reacted that way in the morning thought maan. Now his curiosity increased and when he came to know that geet loves him then no chance of back off. If geet loves him then geet will be HIS.

"What?? What are you saying geet?" Asked pari hell confused and shocked.

"Darasal baat yeh hain ki'" (the matter is...)

Precap: Reason????


Hello everyone, here is part 1. How is it? Hope you liked it. Thanku very much for ur lovely comments on prologue and ch sk.

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Edited by JMR-Sisters - 13 years ago

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