arvi fanfiction : pavitra rishta 'made in heaven'

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arvi ff: pavitra rishta "made in heaven " PART 1... a man sitting on a chair holding a picture ov a young baby girl . Hz face z shown he z non odr dn manav deshmuk hz eyes filled wid tears love affectn nd he z lukng at da picture in da picture manav z standng holdng a baby in hz hand nd he smiles touchng da picture .. Manav: 18 saal hogye ma kahan sy kaha agaya aj bht upar ho zindagi ma par meri zindagi toh tm ho beta pata ni tm mujy yad karti b hogi ya ni par aek baat yad rakhna tmaray baba ny pichlay itnay salo ma srf aur srf tmay yad kia ha tmari baray ma vandu sy sun sun ky jiya hn ma agr tm na hoti toh shaid aj ma is maukam pay na hota tm hi ho meri zindagi meri kamyabi ka karaan i lov u purvi beta hmesha yad rakhna ky baba tmsay bht pyar kartay hn nd baba tmay jald lainay aein gay bht jald aur us aurat ky paas sy ly jao ga tmay mujy aj b yad hai wo din jb tmay meray hath sy cheen lia ta tmay... FLASHBACK: in da chawl in deshmuk house dre wz police nd a lawyer standng wid manav nd archana.. On da sofa dre were 2 girls were sittng who were tej nd ovi 3 years old nd wid dm savita aai wz sittng lukng angrily at archana damodar baba wz standng wid archana.. Manav wz holdng 2 year old purvi in hz hand nd 7 year sachin standng wid him.. Archana came angrily nd took purvi 4rm manavz arm in her own arm purvi hu wz nw cryng alot... Manav: archana yeh kia tamasha hai meri beti idhar lao.. Archana move back .. Archana: meri beti pay apka koi haq ni purvi meri ha srf meri apko kia laga ap meray bacho ko meri marzi kay begair canada lay jaein gay aur ma kuj ni karo gi yeh raha court ka order meri purvi kahi ni jaye gi na sachu kahi jaye ga... Manav: archana bholo mat purvi aur sachin meray bachay hn aur wo meray sath jaein gay ma unko tm jaisi laparva aurat ky sath ni choro ga.. Samji... (archana wz cryng) archana : ma janti ti manav ky ap meri baat ni sunein gay aek pehlay apki aur apki aai ki wja sy mera soham aur meri behn aj meray sath ni aur ap mujhsy meray bachay cheena cha rahay hn aisa ni hoga mr.manav deshmuk... Wakeel sahab inko court ka order dekhaye... Wakeel: mr.manav deshmuk purvi bht choti hai islye wo apni maa ky paas hi rahay gi yeh rahay papers mrs archana ny court ma prove kia ha ky aap aek mechanic hain nd ap unki bchi ka khyal ni rakh paein gay.. (manav wz shockd) par sachin deshmuk yeh bta saktay hn ky wo kiskay paas rehna chahein gay..(archana hu wz holding purvi nd one hand 4rwaded da odr to sachin but he lukd at manav baba nd huggd him ) archana: (cryng) sachu? Sachin: ma baba ko chor kay ni jaon ga... Wakeel: toh decided purvi mrs deshmuk ky paas rahay gi nd sachin mr.deshmuk ky paas nd ab agr ap ma sy kici ny bhi yeh order neglect kia toh wo court ki saza ka hakdaar hoga... (while da lawyer nd da police left archana wid purvi nd manav wid sachin standng infront ov eachodr manav tried to touch purvi but archana move back) damodar: archu beta yeh kia hogya hai .. Archana: ni baba is parivar ny aur manav ny mujhsy aj mera sbkuj cheen lia eb meri beti meri ha bs meri.. (archana lukd 1 last tym wid teary eyes to sachin nd dn turned to luk at ovi tej nd dn turned back to c manav wid hatred in her eyes nd dn to savita aai nd left..) manav while tears in eyes... Manav : ma wapas ao ga apni beti ko lainay.. Aai canada janay ki tyari kar... FLASHBACK ENDS manav: wo din ma kbi ni bhul sakta us din sy mainay archana sy bs nafrat ki hai aur purvi tmay wapas lanay kelye ma wo bna jo aj hon ( manav took da pic to hz heart closed his eyes nd said) purvii... On da odr hand a lady wz in a chawl infront of godz pics nd opened her eyes her face came to focus nd it wz archana ... A tear went to her cheek... Her aai came.. Sulochna aai: archu kia howa? Kahin mana ( nd she stopped wen archana turned back angrily) archana: kuj purani yadein srf dukh daiti hn aai aur zakhmo ko taza kardaiti hn aur nafrat ko bht barha daiti hn.. Khair meri purvi kaha hai ... Purvi: maain yahan hn( sulochna nd archana turned to c da angelic girl dre purvi nd smiled purvi came running nd hugged her aai archana) scene divided in two parts 1 manav huggng purvi nd hz pic nd odr archana huggng purvi both cryng... THE END... precap: dk: manav nd mainay toh tm dono ki shadi paki b kardi ha ajsay ni jb manav canada aya tbsy... (the man turned around wearng pent court shocked) the man: its utter non sense dad..:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks,continue soon the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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niceee start... do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys yushna here.. Thank yew all 4 lovely cmntz but i mistakenly rote part1 in anodr topic dre is a topic named as pavitra rishta made in heaven where i hav also written character sketch ma part 2 waha likho gi em postng dre so read 4rm dre... Hope u lyk it... Thankx again...:)

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