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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome post! I'm so glad ur back! How was your trip? Can't wait to read ur next post
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so u r bak... awesum story... plzz continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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glad to see your update 😃
awesome work .. continue soon
thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Sorry for the delay guys!! i 'am soo sorry...my exams r about to begin..hope u like this part...have done it under pressure...

'He said "then what happened?"... "then I saw mom she was in a horrible state of mind because she was regretful that she dint forgive you... She was continuously repeating that she wanted to see you that instant." Ranveer's eyes were full of tears..with a small smile he laid his hands on Aaliya's cheeks and at last found his voice and spoke "did mom really say that" he looked like he was about to dance any moment in joy!!! Aaliya replied "yes she said it"...Ranveer said "I just want to go home now ! Thank you so much Aaliya..what I couldn't do you did it..will she talk to me??" "Of course she will" said Aaliya... He said Aaliya to continue...she started off feeling very proud of herself " well then after that I landed in Delhi and I went to your superior... Sorry to say Ranveer but I hate him like anything..." Ranveer questioned why? Aaliya said frustrated "he dint help a bit...he just said its common in our job...and many favorites of mine have died in similar cases, you remember in my previous mission he said I should marry that Mp...".. "That was too too cruel...He only cares about his job and nothing else..." "Well , I want to know what happened later, so can you continue without doing anymore gossip about my senior. And don't talk anything about him like that again" replied Ranveer with a stern look on his face. "Ok, said Aaliya and continued I checked into the hotel and I called the person who I got a call from earlier..the Person who called me to give ur things ..i called him because I was suspicious and the person came but not alone he came along with his dagger this time..." "WHAT! He din't hurt u right?" asked Ranveer scared. "How can he when Aaliya's there... He had a dagger but I had a licensed gun... I aimed at him and threatened to leave the house". Ranveer smiling there said "Wow! That's the influence of a tough cop like me!!" Aaliya replied " yup... Nice joke.. It's not ur influence it's with my hard work how I learnt how to aim , and not to shut my eyes while shooting" "That reminds me ... Oh God! Ur training was tremendous... You remember once u shot at the sacks around when I told u to shoot at the target...how can I forget that" replied Ranveer. "Oh really" said Aaliya "Mr.Ranveer Chauhan don't forget I saved ur life" said Aaliya . "Ok now lets stop fighting and can u tell me what happened after that" said Ranveer getting very excited . Aaliya started "and he left the place with his car and guess what I followed him and landed up here."
Edited by sajdaluver - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very goood love it... but everytime i read your story it gets me upset as i miss sajda sooo much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum yaar 👏!!! waitin for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW SUPERB WRITING ,,,,,I REALLY MISSED RANYA NOW I DONT THANNX...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Awesome update! Cute fight between Ranya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.. CONTINUE SOON 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Really vry vry nice.. If sajda part 2 will come ,you should be script writer of that.

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