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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohh God, I Feel Sad For Khushi :( She's So Innocent 🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wat happen to khushi ????
poor khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
come on update soon pls...waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg wht hapend 2 khushi i cnt wait 4 chptr 7 plz update soon ur writing is superb so gud tht i wish u cud write th stories 4 program like ipkknd n teri meri love stories enyways keep up th gud wrk
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Posted: 13 years ago

warning!

stay away from my Shit my readers love to my shit , they like the way i writer ,so i write for them. kindly don't you dare step in.

sorry for delay as in a post few writers were bash for their writing styles & their errors their work is called shit , i will just ask them to step out of my work .calling names & saying shit other work is that respect you all give to others.i dont want to prove it as this picture will itself prove , because of my writing i am famous and in all time hall of fame list .all are not crazy here who have liked my work


i never wanted to share but as some one said writer go for quantity not for quality ,i always write os as as prediction,at times reader send me out lines .to make everyone happy to be positive nothing else .

i was really upset as it is really bad to sit and make fun of others , by they way thanks as you have time to read our stuff that is the reason you all discuses
Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Khushi: was drowsy, she look at him moved his finger away from her lips ,Arnav was sacred what she will say now "Promise me "she said shouted loudly ,Akash decreased the volume

Arnav :what

Khushi"when i will die you will hold me as tight as you are holding me now"

Arnav :"what rubbish you are talking about?"

Khushi "no rubbish no " like a kid she beat him "promise me "she started pulling his shirt

Arnav"Promise ,i will hold you tight and willnot let you die"

Khushi: giggle " but even then i will die 1 , 2 ,or 3months" she showed him her fingers

Arnav "what are you saying Khushi?" his heart has skip a beat , he was feeling suddenly someone had pierce needle in his heart,he pull her as close as he could to him , he run his fingering in her hairs ,caress her cheek

NK:"you said i am your brother never say like this ever again" he felt bad

Arnav:"she is asleep "

Akash:"why LA did it ?"

Arnav i know why she did it ?

NK: why?

Arnav "she saw us today morning ,i was teasing her "

NK: even if you were teasing Khushi ji it is your personal matter, what is her problem , she had switch her drink

Akash:"jealousy my bro ,Jealousy " they reached home

NK: "Buaji will kill us if she finds out she Khushi ji is drunk"

Arnav:look at her she was sleeping peacefully in his arms" she can sleep at my place"Akash&nk look at each other .without waiting for their reply he ,picked her up & walk up . They ran behind him .

Akash : hope she will not mind?as he saw Arnav making her rest on his bed

Arnav :"i will take care of it" he pull quilt over her,they left , he changed & came back , Khushi words were echoing in his ears, he look at her she was shaking her head as if banging with the pillow , he sat next to her placed his hand on her forehead .gently press ,she open her eyes .blink twice & hold his shirt

Khushi" Payal meri da "

Arnav:" first you sit & have tablet "he pour water in glass & taken out a pain killer "chalo"pull her up to sit

Khushi: pout out her lip's "aik pyar "

Arnav:raise his hand"maro ga "

Khushi :look around" koi nahi dekhe raha"pout out her lips again

Arnav" abhi nahi Kal"

Khushi: with a sad look "Kal agar hum na hoon tou"he placed the glass back ,cupped her face .

Arnav:"why you talk like that?"

Khushi"1 ,2 3" she wave her hand in front of his eyes"3 mouth maximum "

Arnav:Kya ,she hold his faced & kissed him it was so sudden he couldn't pull him self away ,he look at her she was crying .with her closed eyes ,with in few second she moved away

Khushi "i can die now " she lay back & closed her eyes

Arnav:"what rubbish are you saying?" he shake her she was fast a sleep .he saw a smile at her face ,she was peacefully asleep"she kissed me " he smiled "Pagal she is out of her mind" he caress her hairs ,touch her lips lean forward he was inch away from her lips " pagal hoon mein bhi, it is not her fault , i started it" kissed her cheek & walk to the sofa ,he kept on staring at her in street light , when he slept he don't remember


Khushi felt some one was strangling her throat , she sat & started coughing, her head was spinning & she feel like throwing up,she on the light, she saw Arnav sleeping on sofa,she jump out of bed & ran to washroom, she throw up ,stared at the sink it was all red , she wash all the stains & check it twice ,pass him she wanted to placed his hanging arm properly ,but she was scared he will get up she quietly walk out of his flat .she cough & felt blood taste again,tear started running down her eyes "hum ko jeena hai" she cried her heart out . she became weak she slept



Arnav woke with the door bell ,he sat at once he look at the empty bed ."Khushi" he look at the wash room it s door was open , he ran to door "bill"

Arnav"what "

Newpaper guy"sir payment :"

Arnav hmmm,he gave him money he saw Buaji coming up she was tense "buaji"

Buaji: got scared " ha beta "

Aranv: Buaji woh

Buaji: i am late i will make your breakfast , she walk in her home

Arnav why she is so tense , he quickly freshen up and went to buaji home

Akash and NK were in kitchen they were helping buaji

Buaji: sorry aaj mein lat hogai

NK: no problem buaji fiqar not

Buaji: gave them a weak smile " hum aata hain "she walk to Khushi bed room


Akash:what happened?

Arnav i dont know, i slept ,when i woke up she was not in room"he look at the close door

NK: when i came her buaji was crying , i asked her but she didnot told me "

Arnav: let me check , he walk to the door he could hear Khushi coughing

Khushi "buaji please aap jai hum thek hain"

Arnav open the door and walk in" what happen"

Buaji: kuch nahi

Khushi closed the washroom door .

Arnav walk ahead and he knock at the door" open it at once "

Buaji: beta

Arnav: tell me buaji what happen ?

Khushi walk out wiping her face " nothing"

Buaji: look at her she was all pale but has a big smile

Arnav"why you are coughing?"

Khuhsi: flu ha

Arnav" ok come with me i will take you to a dr"

NK and Akash both walk in

Khushi: i am fine

NK: fine you are all pale you are saying you are fine

Arnav: you both say i am not coming office i will take her to hospital,

Khushi i said i am fine,now leave me alone "she scream

Buaji: with teary eyes asked them to leave her alone . she pull Arnav arm

Arnav: "no buaji no" she is not at all fine he hold her hand "Khushi" she was having temperature ,he took her all weight on him

Khushi grab his shirt " why you are doing this ?haan, who are you? why you are showing me dreams to live "

Arnav: buaji i can i talk to her for a min , he grab her from her waist

Khushi:"dont try to build hope in me ,do you get that" she shiver

Arnav:"shhh" he check her pulses as her lips was turning all blue "Akash ,NK" picked her up and ran out

Buaji" beta Khushi"

Arnav "please dont say anything "he ran out NK & Akash followed him . she was getting all cold "buaji "

Buaji "she has TB,her lungs are damaged,Dr said treatment can't cure "she cried"


All three of them recollected her conversation "Promise me"

Arnav " i will not let her die" he embrace her as tight as he could .

Akash & nk "we"

This story is bit emotional . my all the stories are emotional this is bit more


Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AMAZING DEAR, WHAT AN EMOTION FILLED PART, HOPE KHUSI IS CURED, LOVE IT.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Di, me crying😭
What an emotional update!😭
I got tears in my eyes reading their conversation!
Di,plss dnt let Khushi be dead😔
Waiting for ur nxt update!

P:S:- I always admire ur writting, will read it always InShallah no matter what the others say😃
To me-U r 1 of the great writters in IF👍🏼
I love U & Ur writtings🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
tooo ooo gud yaar...ur works r really awesome...do continue ur work ...dont give a heed of thot on other bashers...u write for ur own satisfaction n for other readers lyk us...who luv to read ur works
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Posted: 13 years ago
I rly felt emotional reading d 1st arhi scene.Then Khushi is having disease which cant b cured.So sad.plz dont kill her.I'm hapy that here not only Arnav is with Khushi,but also Akash n NK.
Can u put pics in btw?So that its easy 2 imagine more

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