~ * FF: PMP * ~ UPDATED!!!! pg.136

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~Physics May Pyar?????~

~(PMP)~

As a request from my one of my ff readers i made an index incase u guyz get lostšŸ˜†:

1-1, 2-1, 3-3, 4-3, 5-4, 6-6, 7-6, 8-9,
9-12, 10-14, 11-17, 12-19, 13-21, 14-23
15-24, 16-27 & 29, 17-31, 18-34, 19-37
20-38, 21-40, 22-42, 23-43, 24-44 & 49
25-57, 26-58, 27-60, 28-62 & 65
29-70,74,77 and 78, 30- 83, 86, 89
31-95, 32- 98, 33- 102 34- 110 35- 112
36- 115 37- 116 38-118 39-120 40 - 122 124
41- 126 42-128 43-130 44-132 45-134, 136

After readin all those amazin FF! i got inspired to ryt 1 of mi own...

this is mi first time... so sorry if u guyz don't like it.

A whole new angle:

"Shut up, Jai! I like this guy. He's cool. Don't you dare mention tutoring me in Physics. Just be quiet". I broke into a smile "Hi Sahil."

Sahil nodded at me, then looked at Jai. "Who are you?" he made a face at jai... which i never seen him done b4

Jai hesitated fer a sec, then he threw his arms around me and hauled me up against him... "Im Jai ... Bani's ....Boyfriend"

WHAT! Heaven HELP ME! did he just say he was mi BOYFRIEND! omg I WAS SHOCKED!. I whirled around to confront him, to kick him hard, but the second i was facin him, he grabbed me by the shoulders and KISSED ME! then he released me and flipped me a grin. "See u tonight darlin'"

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Part I

"Wow just look at him! i mean he got the perfect body and he is a fast runner... he is soo cuteeee!!!! Bani i no u lik him... just go up to him and talk to him... if it was me i would hab been followin him to the boys locker room" Vidya screeched!

Bani was ryt next to her but sum how her best friend Vidya found it normal to yell espisically wen HE was ryt there ... across from them with his "gang" the . Bani did like him ... i mean he was hot. and he was a great runner. ... he had a perfect body.... six packs... ugghh there were gurls all over him.

One thing i noticed was the varsity cross-country boys were wayyyy cutter than the boyz in my old college. i m an only child and i hab 3 bestfriends. Vidya, Natalie, and Page. we new each other from inside and out. All my friends had bfs... except fer me . Unfortunately, i wasnt one of the girls earnin all the attention. NOPE! i was sittin on the bottom bench of the metal bleachers strechin mi hamstrin, watchin all the older girls laugh and flirt with the very cute older boii... one of them was Sahil the guy whom i hab a huge crush on.... hehehe.. We had practice for almost 6 weeks and i still couldnt get the guyz to notice me. yup the story of mi life.

Im Bani Dixit and its mi sophomere (2nd yr) at Maplevillie (the name of the college). Runnin is mi LIFE! and i mafe varsity this yr. im soo excited too bad i dunt no ne1 on the team. Why couldnt the girls b more FRIENDLY!???

Well newayz Vidya came by to see me after college wen we (the runners) hav practice. This was rare cuz shes usually wit her bf and so r mi other "best friends"

"Bani i came here to tell u sumthin: Vidya looked at me bitin her lips

Well duh its not lik u come here often i was hurt... mi friends are always busy wit their bf! and the last time we actually had a hang out was lik way in high skool... now they were alwayz on their date or sumwhere with their bfs.

"u no how page, natalie, and i were suppose to meet u tonite.... well we cant... sorry..." vidya contin.

"wat ... y? my guts sank

"well i wont b able to see TAD all week and page got tickets to a play with colin and natalie wants to hang out wit theo...is that ok"

i bit mi lips to keep away from cryin.

"its ok////"

vidya left and coach came....

"Bani we need to talk. You hav been doin great and this team needs u. but i got sum bad news... Mrs. Linch your Physic teacher had a meetin wit me... and she says she will pull u out of this team if u keep on failin physics. so she wants to meet u ... i think u should go now!"

what that witch! ugh! who cares about physics newayz! ughh i cant stand her! how can she pull me out of the one thing im good at! RUNNIN!

"come in"

"hi ms. linncccccchhhhhhhhh.... i streched on her name. i couldnt help it i hated her! u wanted to see me:?"

"yes. im sure coach told u y... well i no how much u love runnin so u hab to proved to me that u should b kept on the team... thats y WE decied that u need a TUTOR!"

a TUTOR! wth! m i hearin correctly? i dunt need a tutor... this lady is seriously OUT OF HER WACKO MIND! im not dumb! omg how m i gonna show mi face to mi friends. they think only DUMB PPOLZ NEED TUTOR! ahhhh i need to do sumthin.

"Umm... ms. Linch can i just skip the tutor ... i promise i will bring up mi grades."

"NOPE BANI! the balls in ur court... either the tutor or no TRACK TEAM!"

gosh can this person get any more annoyin!

"i thought so bani! heres the person who i chose fer u, he is a very smart person. and he will tutor u very well. "

she handed me a paper and said

"hes in the library ryt now... he will leave at 4pm... u better go fast to meet him and this is his name she pointed at the paper/"

i left her room... crumblin the paper wit "MY TUTORS NAME" ughh. well i cant let ne1 no bout this. I ran to the library ,,,

WOW... the library was crowed... how m i suppose to find my tutor? who is he newayz? wat was his name again?

i looked at the paper and it read

Jai Waila.

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wat will happened? how well will bani and her toutorin b going?

i hope u guyz like it. please let me no if u want me to continue... and

im sorry if u guyz hate it...

should i continue? i'll stop if u want me to.

^^^ Maddi ^^^

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Posted: 19 years ago
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woooooow.......... awesome......... šŸ‘

plzzz plzzz plzzzzz cont soon..... 😊

cant wait for part 2 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg!!! Maddi, that was amazing! fantastic! fabuloso šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ and i truly mean that!!! i love it! it's a completely new angle! can't wait for you to continue šŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8!! i am sooo looking forward to the next part!!

šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!! wow!! wow!!! awesome FF jaanu 😊 .........keep it up!!
dying to read more...... 😳

n as for this FF being ur first 1 .......wow!! very well written!! šŸ‘ .......Love itā¤ļø 😳 ........amazing job hun šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

plzzzzzzz continue soon! 😳

Luv you so much! šŸ¤—

LiSa
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part II
Jai Waila? Hmmm... WHo is he?
I look around the library there are so many ppolz here... wow ... omg how m i ever gonna find out who this jai waila dude is????
"BANI! BANI! Over here"
i turn around to find a dude in mi pyshic class.
PLease dunt let that b him please please! it was bad enough that i needed a tutor , but hes in my class. i thought mi tutor was gonna b a junior or senior. PLease dunt let that b him .... that will prove that i am the dumbest person ever i mean im havin sum1 mi same class. UGH!
Mayb its not Jai. Mayb Jai just told him to direct me to jAI??
"Yes?" I silde over to the table.
"You didnt bring ur books?" he asked.
"Yeaa.... i was at mi track practice."
i tried to peek at his notebook to see wether he was Jai or not.! but no such LUCK. I couldnt handle it nemore
"u talked to ms. Linch?"
"uh-huh" thats it! i couldnt i might as well ask! "r u jai waila?"
if i wasnt dreamin or nethin he looked offened fer a split sec. then the cool mask feel over.
"You dunt even no my NAME? We're in the Same CLASS"
"yEA i no that... i reconized u from physics.."
i wasnt a snob! i hardly pay attention to ms. linch i mean she is the borinest teacher EVERRR... wait a min thats y im failin because she a BAD TEACHER not becuz i was STUPID!
"uhhh... so r u Jai?" hey i needed to no ... i mean
He nodded once, his face still cold.
"O come on Jai, Dunt take it in the bad way, so i dunt remember ur name. theres a lot of other ppolz that's name i dunt no"
"Yea every1 who u think is un worthy."
I frowened, "What kinda comment is dat? Im not a snob" so far im just a loser! so newayz
" i could care less... im being paid to tutor u so that all im here fer"
"thery;re PAYIN U?"
he nodded and looked a lil smug "SEVEN BUCKS AN HR"
"ur kiddin" omg dunt cry dunt cry... m i that stupid that they are PAYIN sum1 to tutor me?
"im hopless"
a flicker of emotion crossed his face. Sympathy?
"Well we meet everynite 6 days a week. "
WHOA 6 days a week... WOW!
He laughed. i must say i loved his laugh... whoa wat m i thinkin ... hes my TUTOR!
"wat r u laugh bout"
"becuz its funny seein u pout! sorry bani but ur stuck wit me... sports only take u so far in the world"
i wanted to say sumthin back... shesh! i dunt deserve his treatment... only cuz i fergot his name ... gosh... wat can a gurl do? but i no how it feels lik to b OVERLOOKED! so yea i kept mi mouth shut
"Where do u live?" he asked
i gav him the "xcuse me" look
he groaned in disgust.
"Gimme a break, Bani! Im not gonna stak u! Trust me i hab better things to do. I have better things to do than spendin mi time hangin around ur house hopin to catch ur attention idk how kool u r"
om gosh! can this dude get ne ruder???? i mean its bad enough he makes me feel stupid and lik a snob fer not nowin his name and now this. Could he b any more hostile????
"Well???" he asked
"Ugh! W/E"
i rote mi address in a piece of paper and gav it to him.
"btw... i dunt think im kool" i narrowed mi eyes at him!
"w/e" dude he got lik a major attitude for being a smart guy! he was more of jock! the way he answers back lik that!!!!!!!
" thats not far away from mi house... i could come over latter... how about 7 ???"
omg wat about mi parents... o wait ... thank god todai mi parents are going to their lil family meetin! i guess they wont see him .... and i will definitly not tell them about mi tutorin or else they wont let me b on the track team.
"ok, 7 works" i tell him.
he shoved his books in his bag.
"well see u tonite then" and he left.
i watched him dissaper from the library! Whoa y was i lookin after him lik that! ugh... Bani he is ur tutor!!!! omg wat if mummy and papa leave home after 7!!!???
i have to go home now!
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wats gonna happen? will bani b able to hide this tutorin thing????
hey guyz! did u lik part 2??? sry if its borin ... but i promise i'll make it interestin or sumthin lik that in the other 1... g2g
please tell me if u think i should contin or not
thank u
Maddi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome!!
i love the new angle!!
im totally with Bani, Physics is evil!! šŸ˜†

Plz continue soon

Luv Taz

Edited by Tazmanian_Devil - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tazmanian_Devil


im totally with Bani, Physics is evil!! šŸ˜†

LMAO! tru... lolzšŸ˜†šŸ˜³šŸ˜†

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: loranlee4u

LMAO! tru... lolzšŸ˜†šŸ˜³šŸ˜†

ahhh....dont mention physics ihave it tomorrow

heyy continue with your fanfic

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Posted: 19 years ago
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yaar, Maddi...it's not boring at all....i love it!!! plz continue soon šŸ˜›

And yes me also agree with bani.........physics is boooooring 😭

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