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Posted: 12 years ago
Nothing dear...was a wrong post...and I am out of station right now so will update as soon as I reach home..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
]Awww...My dear readers, Please bear with my extreme late update habit this time...I am at my grandpa coz of demise of a loved one...I can't write update in such a situation..I will be back very soon and then will surely give you a long update..Sorry for all my 'atyachar'😳
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M speechless after readin dos story.. Its been cts 6hrs tht m readin dis story.. N subah b ho gyi.. Pta e ni chla.. I loved evry word evry sentence of it... Their beginning.. Tht unknowwn restlessness.. Tht feeling whn someone starts affecting u.. It was all real.. Darkeays nite,d way kriya took care of rey,d growing bond meeting wid amma.. Kria assumption.. Rey vulnerability.. D way he danced wid her in club.. D whole montreal trip.. It was jus awsome.. I happened to go thru dis topic n m glad tht i did it...
It was a lik a movie being played in front of me!!
U r an Epic writer.. Must say!!
D way u described each feeling.. It killed me.. Be it d bond of friendship o love o hatred...!
I was miving along wid d story<3

Kriyaansh.. Ua d only couple who makes me fall for them again n again!!
Love u:)
Waitin fr d story to proceed.. Do pm me whn u update next!
Lukin forward!
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dudeee... Where are you now...??????? You are the most wanted person now... Snigdha k b'day update k baad u also dissapeared... This is sooo not done yarrr... :/ ... Yestrday i posted somthin like this on mania's story... Uska update to mil gaya... Bt ab tmhara kb milegaaa... Really waiting for it aditiii... Jaldi jaldi update naaa... :/
Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Thanks a lot my dear friends for appreciating my work and bearing with me this time.I wasn't in condition to write in such a situation.I love ya all for being so supporting.
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PART-26


Next few hours after coming to India were sleepy. Jetlag was enough to make Rey-Kria drowning in sleeps for hours. It was almost a day they were sleeping. Next morning, City seems to have rain. Rain's noise was making Kria awake from that deep sleep. She opened her eyes and saw window is open and rain is coming inside. She rushed to shut the window. As soon as she reached there, rain drops caressed her face. She realized how much she missed these crazy rains in Montreal!! Wind, feel and breath everything was feeling her home.

She went to door and checked the letter box. A lot of post was waiting for her. She totally loved the amount of letters. She took a look on every letter. And she saw a number of letters got stamped from Palampur. Next moment she held her head in guilt. Kria was guilty for not contacting her mother for so many days. Her cell got destroyed and she couldn't call her Mom. And top of all these excuses, she forgot!! How can I be such a jerk?? She asked herself. Next moment she wore her jacket and took the umbrella. She reached the nearby telephone booth and dialed the number. It rang but nobody picked it up. She thought may be mum will be on medical trip. She tried again but no response.

She rushed back home and opened all the letters from her Mom. They were random. Latest ones were about her worry as Kria's cell wasn't reachable. Some were about apologies as her mother thought Kria is annoyed with her. Kria's eyes were filed with tears for making her mum that guilty about their last convo where her mother objected on her job. Kria wasn't at all upset with her mum concern but she just forgot to call her. Kria was cursing herself for forgetting that as her mum is closest to her.

Then she opened another big shocking letter from college where she was asked about her absence from internal practical!! It was surely a bad realization day for her. She was living in a fairy tale from where she just stepped into reality.

She got ready for college and left asap.

Rey on other hand was filled with joy to see Kria at workshop. Happiness of her arrival was soothing his senses. Ali was discussing the upcoming Death Valley race with him. He was hearing Ali's details but was busy looking at door. After few hours, his excitement turned into sadness as Kria wasn't there. He kept himself busy in customizing his car in order to avoid his irritation. He was constantly thinking about all the possibilities of being late. He couldn't call.

After suffering from hyper tension mode, he decided to visit her. He went to her house but it was locked. He came back to workshop. He was damn angry with Kria but he didn't want to so he decided to calm himself. He played some nice music in his Bugatti. And song he played was "attitude" you have some f**king attitude". He couldn't stop himself from laughing hard. It reminded him of Kria's audition for this job when she was mocking him on this song. He laid on his Bugatti and reminding her oil-spilled face and innocence.

It was evening. Ali was off to home. Rey didn't want to go home as he has a hope that Kria will come. Evening turned into dark night. He was busy entertaining himself with her memories. It was late night and Rey was about to leave.

He switched off the lights of garage and moved towards the exit.

Suddenly someone entered into the garage. Rey was unable to see who it is!! Open door was telling that it's raining heavy outside.

Rey asked "who is there??" And a voice of sneezing echoed. Rey in hurry switched on the power. It was "that angelic face for whom he was waiting for the whole day". He anxiously asked Kria?? You are all wet. He reached her and took the broken umbrella and closed the door. She was shivering as she was wet.

Kria kept on sneezing. Rey was all focused on her sneezes. He asked her, "Why you came here in such a heavy rain??? You could fall sick. You are so silly Kria.

Kria kept on waiting that Rey stops talking so she can answer. She smiled and put her finger on his lips. Shhh!! Just shhh!! You are talking faster than this rain Rey.

Kria's wet finger on his warm lips made Rey restless. He forgot all his concern and anger. Kria answered," I went to college today for giving my practical which I missed. And rain in this city is crazy. I struck in college due to this non-stop rain.

Rey looked at her from tip to toe. She was all wet and was sneezing. He interrupted and said, wait!! Lemme see if I have some spare cloths. You are all wet Kria. He went to cabin. Kria walked toward window to watch the rain in glittering lights of parking. They were looking beautiful. Rey tried to find out some cloths which Kria can wore comfortably but failed. He only found a white shirt. He was feeling embarrassed that how can he ask Kria to wore this. But he had to offer her.

He went towards her and asked her," All I got is this Kria. Kria turned around and see one white shirt. Rey was looking here and there to avoid her embarrass reaction. She took it and smiled. She can totally understand Rey's awkwardness in offering this cloth but she trusts her love completely. She went for changing. Rey got busy in cooking some noodles for both of them. She wore it. Shirt was knee length, a bit shorter than that. She was feeling shy to come out. This whole scenario was so new and full of bliss for her. Spending night with Rey in workshop and that too in a knee length shirt only, she was feeling so nervous.

She came out with a shyness adjusting her shirt, stretching it as it would become longer. Rey was nowhere but flowing streaming smell of noodles was telling that he is in kitchen. Kria's taste buds were on treat. Rey came out holding two bowls of noodles but jammed as soon as he saw Kria. Kria was rubbing her hands in anticipation of tasty noodles with a wide smile. And Rey was jammed there with no expression. Her wet hairs were swinging on her cheeks. Her beautiful lips were smiling. She was looking totally irresistible in that long shirt. Rey lowered his eyes and walked straight to her. She almost shouted in happiness after seeing her favorite veggie noodles. Rey's face filled with joy. Rey couldn't eat a single noodle as he was totally restless and it was almost impossible to behave normal with her alluring presence. He was looking into her big eyes which were nothing less than starry galaxy while Kria was busy eating noodles. And his sight got stuck on those delicious lips where at corners, a shy smile always float when he is around. Her beautifully carved neck with those beautiful collar bones'.And Rey woke up from alluring live story of Kria. He felt so embarrassed for checking her out like this. He mumbled "I should go". Kria looked at him with question. He saw a question mark in her eyes and those lines on forehead where dews of water were still shining. He closed his eyes and said, "Kria I have some customization left for my car. I'll be back. You stay here. He walked fast towards next cabin where his car was standing.

Kria was a little surprised with his weird reaction but shyness and respect in his eyes were telling the story.

Kria followed him and sneaked through shed of wooden wall. He was constantly busy in working. She kept looking at him with all mesmerized eyes. Those bedroom eyes of Kria were enough to make someone crazy in enchant.

But Rey was like wooden plank was busy with his girlfriend "Bugatti".

Kria while playing with flicks was staring at him with all love. It was like eye delight for her. Rey spilled some engine oil on his shirt badly. He took his shirt off unknown of the fact that Kria is watching him. And now this was time for Kria to blush. She turned her face and closed her eyes. Her breaths were upbeat down. She was unable to find a junction to rest the heartbeats. She looked at him again. His fine toned back, that spine line which was shining in oil flacks, she closed her eyes again. She could feel the fragrance of her breathe. Somehow, her skin seemed glowing to herself. She walked back to hall and just wanna dance to the rain. Her heart was filled with desire and love for most amazing man on this earth. The feeling of having Reyansh as love of her life was overwhelming.

(Please turn the song on if its not...)😳


She opened that big door from where rain can enter the hall. Her hands started playing with rain. Those dews on her hands were jumping here and there. Door was making noise due to crazy wind. Rey came to see what's this noise is about.

He saw Kria playing with Rain drops. A wide smile on her face was telling how she enjoys this rain. Her blowing hairs and rain drops on her face was a beautiful dream for Rey. This time, he couldn't control his flowing heart and walked towards her. In no time, he held her from her waist and Kria left all amazed. Kria's hands were on his arms which were so perfectly wrapped on her waist. He held her hand and advanced it to rain. Rain dews were colliding on their hands. Kria's blowing hairs were all over Rey's face. Kria non-wrapped his arm from her waist and brought him in rain. Kria's hands were well fitted in his hands. Rey was constantly looking into her eyes where eyelashes with rain drops on them were nothing less than a desired dream.

Rey came close to her and caressed her face with his hand. His drawing hands ended up on her lips which were shivering in blush. Kria closed her eyes in anticipation of a life awaited touch. Rey put his lips on her cheeks. She left with a current in her body. Those warm lips were making rain look in micro second rain. Time was static for both of them. As soon as Kria felt warmth on breath shifting towards her lips, she out of blush tried to escape from his wrap. Rey smiled with his closed eyes. Kria's hands were in his hands and she has a turned back on his face. He pushed her back against his chest. She was perfectly captured by Rey in his arms. This moment was special most for both of them. He gifted a firm kiss on her neck. She with all shyness turned her face towards him and hided herself in his chest. Her hands were on his bare chest. Rey tightened his grip. Kria put hands on his neck. Rey felt weak at knees. Kria with a playful mood tickled on his neck and ran away. Rey nodded his head in return and followed her. She was hiding behind the pillar. Rey was finding her. Kria was all cheered up for making him restless. She sneaked to see his position but he wasn't anywhere. Kria left the shed of pillar and came out and next moment, she was in arms of Rey. He walked her against pillar and asked," hide and seek with me"?? His eyes were filled with Roguishness. His naughty lips were floating with a playful smile. Kria lowered her eyes with shyness. Rey held her face in hands and leaned towards her. Kria closed her eyes tightly. A tender kiss on his forehead, Rey put his lips on her forehead for long. Kria held Rey's waist tightly. Next moment, Rey adjusted her hairs which were pure wet. He asked him to take her bag so that he can drop her home. A smile was there on his face. Kria with all anxious and respect was looking at him. She walked in with slow steps. She was thinking, how Rey can be such a gem. He could let himself flow with this night and I am surrendering but he didn't. There were a lot to absorb from this night. Kria collected her cloths and came back. Bugatti with Rey was waiting outside. She with eyes filled with a mix of love and shyness sat in the car.

Next part-

Something life changing...Life of Rey and Kria would take a 360 degree turn..

Stay tuned..

Thanks for reading..

Love ya

Aditi

Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yipee i'm d first one to comment...

Finally u updated...

coming to d update...it was super awesome...
GOSH... I loved it to d core...
kriya in long shirt bellow knee ... kriya was felling shy...

kriyaansh romance ...hayee mar dala...
d way kriyaansh were playing in d rain... luved it...

luved kriya when she said "He could let himself flow with this night and I am surrendering but he didn't." poor kriya ...😆 😆

waiting for d nxt update...
update soon


Edited by cool_star14 - 12 years ago
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finally you updated this...was waiting 4 it from so long... :)

Awesome update aditi...loved it...their rain masti was just amazing...enjoyed it totally


thanx 4 d pm

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Edited by --Kinjal-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow amazing update yaar Aditi. Really loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!!awesome ...
Loved their rain romance... [8-o thanks a lot for this update n pm...
Precap seems exciting...cant wait!!!

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