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Part 22

The Khuranna's and Handa's were forced back to Delhi due to some issues in the Raichand's project and this had fumed Maan like anything. He right now wanted to concentrate on his Jaan who was face to face to her past which they had never wanted. Everyone was made aware about it and were strictly ordered by Maan tat no one leaves her alone at any time. They were also told not even to utter anything which would make her go into her past but wat about the future tat they were unaware about.

It was not a good come back as once they had landed in Delhi they were informed about the high alert tat was placed in Delhi. All were shocked and upon getting to know the reasons tat the high alert was due to constant kidnapping of girls and later they being killed after they were raped to death. None could realize tat behind them such things would happen and Maan wanted to get sure enough so he had spoken to the commissioner regarding the matter and to know how far the truth was and than he realized tat indeed, it was very serious and without wasting any more time he called Khan Saab.

Maan: Khan Saab, I think you are well aware about the happenings in Delhi.

Khan Saab: Haan Maan baba. And you don't need to worry have already tightened the security for Geet and Annie baby.

Maan: Good Khan Saab but still I want you to be with them all the while henceforth. I don't want any loop holes in their security. Did you get through the information about the new guards that are hired?

Khan Saab: hmmm.. have been closely observing them since they have been hired and they are upto mark.

Maan: So, I don't need to worry about the security as I will be busy with projects for quite some time.

Khan Saab: you don't need. Maan Baba, did Geet baby come to know about it.

Maan: hmmm…

Khan Saab: Maan baba… don't be so low as I know tat her Maan will not let her slip away from him. He has done everything to keep her safe and will always do. You know na it was not your mistake nor hers. Just give her some time she will be ok.

Maan: I know Khan Saab, but this high alert in Delhi has bit made me worried even though I know now tat My Geet and Annie are safe when you are around but still.

Khan Saab: You don't need to be Baba…. They are my daughters too and I would even kill and would not think before dying for them. They are safe around me Maan Baba, you just concentrate on your work now.

Maan: hmmm

Khan Saab placed a soothing hand on Maan's shoulder which made him relaxed and unknown to them Rajveer was looking and hearing them. Rajveer knew tat if Maan never opens to him it was only Khan Saab who could do tat. He knew tat when Khan Saab was around their girls no one could harm them as they had to face their wall and tat was Khan Saab who would never think before killing anyone or himself sacrificing his life for the Khuranna's and Handa's.

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As always the three Vicky, Annie and Geet were on their way to college unaware tat this day might be the last day of their togetherness or even the last day of their life. Khan Saab had kept the best guards for the girls due to the cropping threats around Delhi. Annie and Vicky did observe Geet being bit aloof and knowing the reason for it they thought to lighten the air and as usual Vicky started his talks.

Vicky: Hmmm agar you too finished your not to talk vrat is over than can we have a chitchat girls.

Annie and Geet looked up at Vicky who was bit scared with the look they gave.

Vicky: Ohhh don't take me wrong its just tat I feel bored sitting quite. It looks as if we are mourning.

Annie: Vicky… (showing her eyes)

Vicky: Di…. I know tat Prem Bhai gets angry but not me. Anyways had a good news and bad news for you too. But seems like you are not interested.

Annie: wat…

Vicky: I said good and bad news.. so wat you want to hear first.

Annie: Tera Bad news.. I know how bad they are so first the good news.
Vicky: Good news is this tat some one from us is going to get married after exams.
Annie: Wat.. married but who..
Annie looks at Geet but and than at Vicky asking who it was but he denies shaking his head.

Annie: Vicky who is it…

Vicky: You said good news and I gave it. now get ready for bad news.
Annie: wats tat.

Vicky; the bad news is tat Anwesha Singh Khuranna is getting married to Prem Handa after her exams.

Annie: ohhh so sad. I mean poor girl.

Annie shot opened her eyes while her mouth wide open realizing the meaning of the words and she roused from her sit hitting Vicky with her bag.

Annie: is this bad news haan… ab tum gaye.

Vicky: bad news tho hain na.. but only for you but for me its good news after all I will get all your share of things and pocket money.

Annie continued hitting Vicky while he shouted for Geet seeing her smiling.

Vicky: now you just smile Geet, but don't feel so good this devil Di is coming to your house only so be careful.

Annie: she does not want to get worried Vicky. She is not selfish like you.

Vicky: ohhh do you think so Di. Don't know tat this chipkali Geet does not want to share her brother with a devil like you.

Geet got angry hearing Vicky calling her Chipkali and she too started to hit Vicky.

Geet: wat.. wat did you say.. me chipkali.. wait I will show you wat this chipkali does.
Geet and Annie were hitting him continuously while poor Vicky who wanted to lighten the air had become their prey now. He begged for him life but poor boy who could save him from these two devils now.

Vicky: aare matao… I wanted to make you laugh and poor me you started to hit me only.. waise bhi you both showed tat you are devils indeed.

Annie: haan we are devils and devils don't leave their prey at any cost.

Geet: haan Di you are right and anyways he said na tat m a chipkali so chipkali always chipkofy na.
Vicky: bachao…… Khan Saab Bachao.. bichare bache ko do gundi maar rahe hain… save me ohh gods save me from their clutches.

The fight came to a halt with the sudden car break and Vicky taking the opportunity ran out leaving the two inside the car fuming with anger while Khan Saab was shocked to see Vicky running away and he poor thinking tat there was some problem came running to their car only to see his baby girls fuming.

Khan Saab: wats the matter girls?

Annie: don't ask Khan Saab: today I wont let tat Vicky duffer to stay alive. How dare he calls me devil.

Geet: and me chipkali.. aaj tho dekha denge ki we indeed are devils.

Khan Saab: omg.. I don't feel ki today Vicky Baba will be alive from your torture. Good going and hit him from my side also.

Annie and Geet: yup….

And they both ran..
Khan Saab: but don't forget to attend your classes.
Geet: we wont Khan Saab……
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Annie and Geet were searching for Vicky. They looked for him at every corner but he was nowhere to be seen so Annie and Geet parted their ways and started to search for them while Khan Saab and the other guards were at the parking lot. It was getting time for their classes when Geet heard a voice, turning around she saw Vicky holding his ears and saying sorry.

Vicky: sorry princes. I was just joking..

Geet turned her face faking anger so tat Vicky could manofy her.

Vicky: please na sweetheart. See I was just joking. How can you be a chipkali after all you are such a darling dear. Dekho na your nail scratched my hand and its bleeding. Omg so much of blood.. I will die.. god I will die…

Geet turned her face looking only to see him blowing air at his hand. She instantly grabbed his hand and it was just a scratch mark and no bleeding. Geet hit him slightly on his face herself making a puppy face which Vicky enjoyed.

Vicky: you know princess… you look so cute when you make those puppy faces. Really bro must be enjoying na…

Geet blushed hearing Maan's name as she knew how much he likes when she makes these types of faces while Vicky kept teasing her. They soon forgot about their fight and were enjoying talking about Malaysia. They were soon engrossed tat they did not realize tat it was time for their classes unless and until they heard the bell ringing. They turned to leave but Vicky felt tat he wanted to hug her. he turned calling out at her and ran to her while see looked at his eyes showing love and concern for her and she knew tat he was just trying to get her busy with talks.

He hugged her unknown tat she was flinching in pain but as his hands reached her back touching the blood oozing out from her body, he felt a cold shiver ran through his veins. He slightly parted himself from her body and saw her almost closing her eyes while his gaze looks at his hand covered with blood, her blood and before he could say she was falling down due to his loose hold but before he could say or hold her again he felt a sharp pain in his chest and soon followed by another one with such a force tat they both were thrown away from each other hitting the ground while Vicky severely hitting his head on the nearby stone while Get lying in the pool of blood bit away from him. the air freezes halting everyone onto their legs making them stop while still they could not realize wat had happened but next moment the two wounded souls were crowded by the students none ready to help them. The word of them getting shot was passed like a fire.

Annie reached the spot with shivering body and legs not supporting while Khan Saab and the other gourds coming from other side. Their legs frozed unable to move seeing their loved ones lying in a pool of blood with closed eyes. Annie could not make a move while Khan Saab carried Geet while another guard carried Vicky running to their cars to reach the hospital while some guards taking dragging Annie along.

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The hospital echoed with the voice of none other than Maan Singh Khuranna who was right now holding the collar of Khan Saab who himself was soaked with blood but Maan's anger only knew tat he had seen the lifeless body of his love and brother while his sister almost a living dead body. He could not control his anger while others could not think anything else ever since they heard the news. His anger was on new height and he did not know tat he tried to hit Khan Saab when he felt Rajveer holding his hand before it touched Khan Saab. Rajveer himself was worn out since they had been to the hospital seeing his kids in tat state.
Rajveer: Khan Saab….

Khan Saab: I don't know Rajveer… it was so sudden tat no one knew wat happened. How they were shot and by whom. It was just tat I had seen them moving out of the car chasing each other and next it was like everything stopped.

Mohinder: But how come…

Khan Saab: No… its not from near by… I can say it.. they were shot from a distance and its professional.

Prem: Yani ki.. contract killer but who can do it.

There was a pin drop silence realizing tat it was not as simple as it looked but who and why would anyone wanted to kill their kids. Who was their enemy and did not even thin once before getting here.

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Dev: You B******.. how dare you shot my Geet.

Killer: it was by mistake…
Dev: By mistake than fine, think tat this is also same.
Before the killer or Jack could act Dev shoot the killer several times into his heart until his gun was short of bullets but still he was not satisfied and picked the other gun from Jack and kept shooting him. He than holds Jack neck by his neck choking him to death.

Dev: I will kill everyone if she is hurt.

Jack: she was only hurt from behind. It may not be serious boss.

Dev: it better…

Dev pushed Jack down kicking him taking out his anger and frustration on him. he never wanted to harm Geet but just wanted to kill Vicky but everything had gone wrong.

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Inspector: Mr. Khuranna… its confirm tat everything was planned and the person involved in it knew about them very well or say had been keeping an eye on them.

Rajveer: But…

Inspector: Mr. Khuranna as per Mr. Khan your security chief they were not hit from near by and as doctor said tat the speed of the bullet was high seeing their injury its well confirmed tat its only a professional contract killer and after getting through all side we have come to the conclusion tat they were hit from the opposite building.

Mohinder: than why the hell are you. I just need the bloody killer hanged to death.

Inspector: we have given an alert all over and will have him soon.
Maan who was getting angry by each second by now lost it completely when he heard the inspector saying tat and he holds him by his collar shaking him.
Maan: I don't need any hopes but need tat ba***** soon in front of me or else think about yourself.

Inspector: Mr. Maan he is a contract killer and no one has seen him.

Maan: than find him even from the hell but I need him within a day.

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It had been two hours since Vicky and Geet were being operated but there was no news about them. It was getting hard for everyone while Khan Saab had already hired the best experts for handling the case secretly. He somewhere felt tat he failed in his duty and now had promised himself tat he would kill the killer with his own hands. Maan on other side was getting wilder by each passing second when he heard the doctor saying.

Doc: Mr. Khuranna, though we have been succeeded in removing the bullets from Ms. Handa's body but still she is critical. The force with which she was shot, the bullet was hit right near her vital organ leading to severe bleeding and unless and untill we get to know her progress we can't say anything

Prem: wat about Vicky Doctor.

Doc: he is very critical. We have yet not been able to get the bullets out of his body.
Prem: than whom the hell are you waiting.
Doc: its not easy Mr. Handa. You may have been knowing tat the bullets were directly hit on his chest and very close to his heart and the aorta. A slight mistake from our side can be dangerous for him.
Maan: so you mean you cant handle the case. Right doctor.
Doctor: Mr. Khuranna, you don't get wat I mean.
Maan: ohh really than why don't you first think tat this may be your last case of your career.

Doc: wat the hell is this Mr. Khuranna.

Maan pulls the doctor by his collar almost piercing him with his strong look.

Maan: Listen Doctor and get straight into your mind the two inside are not any ordinary people. One is my brother and the other the love of my life, so it will be good for you tat you think twice before saying anything.
Doctor was hell scared of Maan as he knew wat he can do with his power and he knew tat his words only meant a last warning to him.
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It was not long before tat the Raichand's made their presence in the hospital along with their son Dev who was well expertise is masking his face with emotions according to the situations. The husband duo settle along with the elders giving support while Dev reached to Prem and than Maan giving a supportable hand for him. Maan looked as if he did not care while the sudden silence was broken with a scream from Annie who was sitting close to her mother lifeless.
Annie: where is vicky? Where is geet ?
She tunred around to see her mother looking at her. She shook her asking the same question again but not getting answer she turned hyper wit their silence.

Annie: where the hell are they. Don't you know tat we need to go to college.

Prem who was standing at a lone corner could not see her like tat. He came forward and slapped her hard bringing her back holding her cheek.

Prem: don't you know where there are, than come.
He pulled her towards the OT showing her through the small glass tat they were fighting for their life. Its than when Annie went back to the time when she saw them lying lifeless with blood all around. She stood numb realizing tat it was not a dream but the reality that her eyes had seen. She clutched Prem's hand digging her nails into her skin while tears continuously flow down but no voice coming out. She tried to touch the glass with her hand but there was not strength in her to even raise her hand. She kept looking at them while her eyes giving away and next she was lying unconscious in Prem's arms panicking everyone once again but were assured tat it was due to shock and there was no worry.

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Another few hours passed while the doctor making an exit from the OT. He knew tat the news which he wanted to share would make the MSK more wild and angry but he had to do it. He knew tat he could not handle the case any further and they did not have much time. He let out a sigh and inched closer to Rajveer and Mohinder.

Doctor: Mr. Handa, your daughter is out if danger but still we need time to get to know her current condition. As told earlier the bullet was hit near the vital organ, we could not stop the excess bleeding but now I can say tat she is out of danger.

Everyone took a sigh while the one person who was the happiest was Dev Raichand who was inwardly praying for the death of Vicky. He had the news earlier tat Vicky was shot in his chest and it would be not easy fro him to survive and the next words from the doctor confirmed his thoughts.

Doctor: but…

Everyone looks at him with expectation but would they get.

Doctor: but.. tats not incase of Vicky. M sorry to say but we are still unable to get the bullets out from his chest and to say tat if we don't get them out within next 36 hours, we wont be able to do anything.

Prem was about to lash his anger out when Rajveer and Mohinder holds him while the doctor continues.

Doctor: it's not easy and being a doctor I myself feel ashamed tat I can't handle this case. A mere small mistake from my side can give him death but still we can hope for his survival only if…

Prem was now getting mad and he almost chocked the Doctor holding his neck in his grip.

Doctor: only if Dr. Ram Gupta handles this case.

Prem: than why the hell don't you call him.
Doctor: its not easy as he is the top most heart specialist, surgeon, and getting him is near to impossible.

Maan: Dr. Gupta will be here within 8 hours.

Everyone looked at Maan but Maan ignored them and walked straight to Doctor who still was under Prem's hold.

Maan: trust me doctor if anything happens to Vicky within these 8 hours than.. I don't need to say wat I will do.. (He turns to leave). You have just eight hours to leave Delhi.. Just 8 hours.

The news of Doctor Ram Gupta coming all the way from US made Dev more furious as he knew tat Dr. Gupta was the best and having him means a life for Vicky once again. He slowly slipped from the place making numerous calls to get the details of Dr. Gupta's whereabouts but his each effort was going into drain. He tried to contact all his hidden resources in order to get a slight detail about him but it was only the failuret at he got. It looked like as if there was no Dr. Ram Gupta available in this whole world. He anyhow wanted to stop Dr. Gupta from coming here for Vicky

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Maan looked at the dead body of the person or say the contract killer. Maan saw him while his hands had the photos of Geet and Vicky that were in the pockets of the killer. Maan shot a glare to the inspector who was all shivering with his look.

Inspector: Mr. Khuranna there's no point of confusion anymore as he is the contract killer who was hired to shot them but looks like the person who hired him did not want him alive and here he is all dead.

Khan Saab: So you mean tat there's no clues as who is behind all this.

Inspector: Mr. Khan as you yourself had not seen who shot them and when we found this body we could only recognize him as the most wanted contract killer who takes only high murders. It totally depends on him which case he wants as his fees are very much high and form these photos we are sure tat he was hired for your family members. It also proves tat the person behind all this is very influential and knows how to handle all such things

Khan Saab: Than why did he keep the photos.

Inspector: So tat the case is shut down for lack of proof. It was his plan to keep the photos in his pockets so tat everyone believes tat the killer is dead so there is no proofs behind.

Khan Saab: So you mean tat the case is closed.

Inspector: As you can see the contract killer is dead and we dont have any other proofs to go ahead so...

Maan: shut down the case. Close it...

Khan Saab looked at Maan and the look on his face told him tat there was much more to come. Though Maan was calm but he was boiling from inside. He somewhere knew tat this was just not the way it looks like and he needed to go deep into the matter. The calmness on his face was just the indication of the coming storm into their life. on the other side Dev was trying his level best to get information about Dr.Gupta.

Precap: Will Dev reach Dr.Gupta

Is this Vicky's last?

Why is the Dangerous lover so calm?

So here is the update. M really bit upset tat the likes and comments are decreasing every update and I don't know the reasons for it. Love and Hate is also not getting the likes and comments. Now I will be straight forward to you tat if you want me to continue the story of love and hate or not, if not than I can pretty well end it within next 10 updates. I never minded never got upset but now I really feel bad tat you don't like the updates.

As far as this Dangerous love is considered I will not update until and unless I get good number of likes and comments. Will keep u all hanging to know about Vicky's future.

Don't like to threaten anyone but m seriously sorry for being harsh but now my heart is bit selfish for more likes and comments.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊yyyiiieeepppeee😃

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maan k calmness anewale toofan k aghaz hai...abb jo toofan ayega woh sab kuch badbaad kar k rakh dega...hum kuch nehi jante...sirf chahte hai vicky ko kuch nehi hona chahiye...aur uss b****** dev ko punishment milna chahiye jald se jald...uske sachchai sab k samne ana chahiye...aur kuch nehi chahiye...plz itna toh ho hi sakta hai na...

awesome n beautiful mindblowing update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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nice update par yeh dhamki kyun saare ff writers aaj kal hum logo ko darate rehte hai ki ff update nahin kare ge,plz dont do this ,it is not fine .update ur ff for people like us who crazily want maneet and so spend their time in geet forum just to live maneet 's moment through the ff written by u all people ,plz dont stop ur ffs and update them for us .plz its request fro all maneet lovers
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omg such a disaster

i wan 2 kil dat bas*** dev he is a real monster

i jst hope vicky wil b fine n dr. Ram gupta wil b dere for vicky on tym

i m realy curious 2 knw about nxt step of our dangerous lover

nyc update
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Hi dear nice update but dont' let anything happen to vicky please let dev fail to his plan let maan fine about dev plan make him suffer big time

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