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Sana

@sama50

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

awesome update
i am sure arnav will took a gr8 care of his children

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

Update update update Im addicted

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babu patel

@ankitbaka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Sounds very interesting. Please continue please update soonnn👍🏼

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dorindakate

@dorindakate

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

How can he have the right to remove his children from their maternal home without due process where he proves his relationship to them through DNA testing that can not be done overnight and without samples from the children nor court processed notice of the hearing served to the mother?...If it is possible to overnight get a writ without service or an evidentiary hearing then GOD help me, I DON'T want to visit India...

Sounds like going to Mexico and getting arrested because someone else hit your car...

Obviously his seven years without Khushi did not provide him with enough time to reflect and learn that acting egomaniacaly doesn't engender one to gain cooperation from others...ergo don't kidnap your kids from their mother and hope to gain their mother's and their affection...

Obviously I have issues from life's experiences...

Nonetheless, was enjoying the story and rooting for Khushi and the kids...

Edited by dorindakate - 13 years ago

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

Chi...how can a man for instance how can a human do that disgusting act...snatch away ones children from their mother...that is most I say worst sin one can do...and I never beleive that he loves her...if he had loved her at the first instant he has to gain her trust again...but not like this, I hope writing this FF u can know that no one can prove children as their biological children in one over night...thats nowhere in the world possible...if u r a woman writing this FF I hope u wont disappoint us by sending khushi to RM and let arnav win all the time and that too being this much inhuman to his wife who he claims to be his love...I certainly dont beleive that he loves her...And now I also expect Anjali and Naani...also give some peice of shit to arnav for separating khushi from her children...after what he had done to her he cant do this what he is doing now...

if he wants her back in his life then I would say arnav win her back with your love not with ur power...

Sorry for the rant but I cant help it...I felt really bad after reading khushi's condition...

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Arpita Mukherjee

@arpita20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: nareshSV
Chi...how can a man for instance how can a human do that disgusting act...snatch away ones children from their mother...that is most I say worst sin one can do...and I never beleive that he loves her...if he had loved her at the first instant he has to gain her trust again...but not like this, I hope writing this FF u can know that no one can prove children as their biological children in one over night...thats nowhere in the world possible...if u r a woman writing this FF I hope u wont disappoint us by sending khushi to RM and let arnav win all the time and that too being this much inhuman to his wife who he claims to be his love...I certainly dont beleive that he loves her...And now I also expect Anjali and Naani...also give some peice of shit to arnav for separating khushi from her children...after what he had done to her he cant do this what he is doing now...

if he wants her back in his life then I would say arnav win her back with your love not with ur power...

Sorry for the rant but I cant help it...I felt really bad after reading khushi's condition...

hey...
just chill,why are you getting so emotional?
See story is not yet been finished,so dnt judge it until its finished...yes i am a girl,
Arnav Singh Raijada is such a difficult character to explain...I try my best to develop the story so every one will get ultimately what they deserved,so stay tuned with this SS,we will get your answer..at the charm of each character remains same..as we see in actual IPKKND...
every character😊😊

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Arpita Mukherjee

@arpita20

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

Part 12

Khushi reached Delhi,The whole way she was restless,how Arnavji can do such a mean crime,yes crime...he took her children away from her,she quickly searched auto...weird feeling ran inside her,in previous times,she used to come delhi with her jiji,amma,bauji...
now whole scenario is changed,her soul cried:"how is jiji now,her amma bauji...buaji...her family,for only them she could not feel alone,she was not treated as orphan in society...(partially)..."
The life that she left before seven years suddenly came in front of her..she had to deal every person every single person desperately...
On the other side,Arnav after getting changed,sat beside muskaan and aryan,intensely watched their face...
He achieved many awards in life,but such an achievement, he never got...he also wanted khushi..his love,he lay in between muskaan and aryan,thought about khushi...
Without khushi his life was like aimless ship,without destination his life went on, now he could not leave any single opportunity to get her,closing his eyes he thought the probable way to reach her heart,to win her soul...
Anjali came inside room taking 2 glasses of milk...
Calling "chote,are you feeling tired?"
Arnav:"no dii,sit"
Anjali looking muskaan and aryan:"how cute they are,where did you find them chotey?kaun hein?"
arnav:"dii,i will talk with you later,where is nani and dadi?"
anjali:"dining room pe hein"
arnav:"chalo di"
they reached dining room...
Anjali:"chote coffee le aye?"
arnav:"di please sit,i want to say all of you"

suddenly calling bell was ringing,manoroma mami screamed from kitchen:"HP open the door"

//Akash and Payel went for a private trip...

HP opened the door,it was khushi...seeing khushi all of RM members got surprised except arnav...
Khushi looking at arnav:"where are they?how dare you to snatch them from me?"
Anjali:"khushijiii,aap ...itne din baad?how are you khushiji?we searched you everywhere...but..."
nani:"khushi bitiya aap kaisan ho?" and started crying.
Its really hard for Khushi to control her emotion after seeing all of them...
But her total concern was only for muskaan and golu,she badly needed to see them..
"arnav singh raijada,where is my children..?aap ne kuch kiya to nehi hein muskaan and golu ke sath?"She started calling their names...
Arnav:"sit please"calling hp for bringing water...
Khushi:"no Mr.Raijada,i dnt need it...please bring back my children"
Anjali:"children?khushijiii!!!!!
apke bachhe?"
Arnav:"yes,di our children..."
nani:"what?but chotey?"
mami:"hello hi bye bye,yeh kya baat hein?kaisan ho sakat hein!!!"
Suddenly golu rushed towards khushi and hugged her tightly...
khushi also could not resist her emotion and started crying...

//Golu was sleeping,but khushi's voice brought back his sense,and he immediately rushed on to the spot...
Khushi:"muskaan kaha hein?"
Arnav:"she took rest,please sit khushi.."
Khushi:"i came here to take my children not sitting here.."
Arnav:"you can not take our children away from me"
Khushi furiously:"your children?who told you that they are your children?"
Arnav:"really...they are not my children..."
Khushi:"no,they are my children only,you have no right over them"
Arnav:""i thought you should be mature now! after seven long years you are still behaving childishly...
how can you yourself give birth of these children?"
Khushi:"yes,no one was there to help me...i alone.."
Arnav:"okk...you alone is their parents...
lets do DNA test,then truth will be visible to all of them,whats say?"
Khushi:"you can not do this to me,i will not allow you.."
Arnav:"i will do it definitely to prove that i am their biological father...get it???"
Khushi helplessly looked arnav...
She did not know exactly how to deal with ASR...
Arnav:""khushi...?why are you silent?i know you were pregnent when you left Shantivan...?"
Anjali and nani both echoed:"what???itni badi baat?"
Arnav:"khushi let it be clear,i will get them any how...at any cost...you have to co operate me"
Khushi screamed towards khushi:"sirf janm dene se aap father nehi ban sakte...samjhe aap?"
Arnav smiled at her:"thank you,you admit it finally"
Khushi:"i dnt know anything,dnt know"
She went to Arnav's room where Muskaan was sleeping,
She tried to wake her up...
But muskaan was not reponding,
Khushi touched her forehead,it was burning...
Muskaan had high fever...

Do you like it...?

Please share your views...Some of you said that i am not giving justice to Khushi or her children...
Dont go to conclusion now,

And i personally dnt want to change Arnav's character,Asr can never cry like devdas,but i will write ASR's redemption in ASR's way😊

Edited by arpita20 - 13 years ago

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Rujul13

@Rujul13

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#418

To be honest I did not like this ASR. but I will wait till the story unfold...

can you give us one more update please...you left us at cliffhanger...

I hope Muskaan is OK...

Edited by adorableyosh - 13 years ago