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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 39(B)

THE KRIYAANSH CONSUMATION PRIOR 2 MARRIAGE

V V IMPORTANT NOTE:

Readers discretion adviced

This is purely An 18 plus update.children plx stay away!!!n I promise ll giv a lil in next update 4 u 2 understand the story.but under 18 plx dnt read or read at ur own risk..em nt responsible.aftr so much pondering n cnsdring thngs I ve dcded 2 post this part as smbody suggested me tat its nt tat p**n

Sorry mods!plx dnt ban me..i dnt giv such updates often.its infact my 1st ever try wid this.this work z a product ov my naughty mind who made it up aftr reading medical subjects!!n the scene making n all z purely fictionous wid no resemblance 2 any real character(cx no1 lets me watch such thngs ov them..lolx') or my own experience.so pardon me 4 any drawbacks or blunders in the script!!

PRECAP:

Kriyaansh hug

Kriya s dress:

She z wearing a half sleeves pink colored flowery top wid blue skin fit jeans n a beautiful scarf around her neck(she normally wears a scarf.nw plx imagine hw she z looking like)

Rey s dress:

Rey z wearing a tank top with shorts(in most casual mood as he z drunk n drinking makes u feel hot hehehe'thou I never tried.just my wild imagination u knw :P )

they were still lying in the same posture tat kriya ws on top ov rey on the bed.rey took the strands ov kriya s hair tat were coming in their way n put it behind kriya s ears.kriya shuddered in the flow ov emotions she ws gng thru.his touch ws making her crazy n she ws losing herself.she longed 4 tat touch cx ov their distances.this proximity ws dangerous n she knew it bt she ws kinda paralyzed by rey s warm breath falling on her nape.thou they were in relationship a long tym b4 yet they were nt tat intimate before.she let out a meak moan wen rey kissed her nape.

K:rey!stop it!u r nt in ur senses.u ll remember nothng wen u ll wake up

R:wen u r by my side kriya,I need nt 2 remember anything.

Kriya again tried:rey plx dnt do this.this Is nt right

R:4get abt right n wrong honey wen we r 2gethr.nothng cn b as pure n perfect as this very moment.dnt spoil this.

She again tried 2 say smthng but rey put his hand on her mouth.he ws ttly in the trance n alcohol also made him senseless so he had decided 2 do smthng n make tat night big.kriya tried sayng smthng but rey dint let her complete.he ws constantly kissing her neck n kriya ws also getting lost in the passion tryng hard 2 refrain herself n him 4m committing a sin.he ws a man aftrall,more powerful,more handsome n breath taking.he ws a killer n girls used 2 die on his looks n his gaze n here we had a pretty,timid n delicate kriya who ws a lady who loved him 4m his childhood.hw cn she resist his charm?

Both got carried away.nw rey rolled n changed their current position such tat he ws nw on top ov her n she ws under him wid her totally in his embrace n he caressing her back wid his palms n kriya moaning.it ws her 1st tym.she never let any man come near her n tat near:NEVER!

Rey ws the 1st 1 n he ws getting full advantage ov tat!her body ws stiff(rey is caressing her back 4m above her top ryt nw :D ) nw rey moved his hands on her bare arms.kriya trembled in fear.she ws constantly tryng 2 get herself outta his grip wenever she gains a lil conscious.but rey s grip z more firm as he wz a man!rey s constant kissing n caressing sessions wer gng.then slowly he started moving his hands on her legs.kriya s legs stiffened wid this.he comes down 2 above on front n instead ov caressing above her top,he moves his hands inside her top.nw rey s hands wer coming in direct contact wid kriya s skin.kriya s breathing rate became faster n faster n her heart beat increased.she ws also missing beats n her moaning increased.

K:stop it reyaansh!plx stop.

But rey wz nt listening.both his hands wer caressing both sides ov kriya s stomach.then he stroked lightly 2 arouse kriya.her breathing ws getting irregular wid constant contraction n relaxation of abdominal muscles.she ws getting drenched in sweat all over thou the airconditioner in the room ws working!

His hands then travelled further upwards 2 caress her ribs.kriya ws sensing danger bt she ws paralyzed by this man s charm n the force wid wich he ws holding her.she tried 2 move her arms 2 shove off reyansh n he held both her arms wid his 1 hand.nw she ws moving left 2 right 2 save herself 4m him but rey ascended further 2 capture 1 ov her curve.it still wsnt bare in his hand bt he pressed it within tat small piece ov cloth.at wich kriya let out a loud moan!

K:rey!u r commiting a sin.em enganged.

This enraged rey n the savage came outta him.he pulled out his hands 4m her top,made her back face him n her front faced the bed n opened her top buttons 4m back.then he separated the top 4m her torso leaving just a piece ov cloth covering her curves n this revealed her perfect,beautiful n slim figure.kriya ws dumbstruck.she snaked her arms around her body.

K(meakly):rey r u in ur senses?get off me at once.

Strangely rey obliged 2 her command n stood up.this made her free n she ws abt 2 run away 4m thr bt rey caught her 1 wrist 4m 1 hand n unbuttoned his shirt 4m his other hand.nw he ws bare chest!sweat overflowing 4m his body,his heartbeats faster n his passion undeterminable.his built ws athletic being an IAF officer!tame n toned body n sexy,breath taking looks!he pulled down his shorts n nw ws only in his boxers.kriya tried 2 divert her gaze so tat she may not get carried away bt he ws breath taking.he made her face him.she ws trembling wid fear wid her heart beats nw more n more faster.her heart ws pounding as if it ll come out anytym wid a loud thud!her mouth ws dry n she ws gulping in any saliva left in it.the lights ov the room were dim,infact many side lamps were burning only(it ws a 7 star hotel n thr rooms r lyk tat)this ws making the scene even more horrible n sensous 4 them.nw rey pushed kriya on the bed.she ws nt so dumb as 2 nt get wot ws gng 2 happen nw.she tried a lot bt rey wsnt in a mood 2 understand anything.then suddenly her eyes went on his bare chest.her mouth kept open in awe.he had a perfectly handsome man!nobody in the wrld cud deny tat!she ws still in his trance wen he started licking her lower lip.her lips involuntarily parted giving his tongue access 2 go in her mouth.he started playing wid her tongue.their salivas met n they were tasting each other.kriya reflexively closed her eyes n her arms snaked his mane.his arms caged her slim,bare waist n they were totally lost in each other.she ws so lost tat she didn't realize wen rey pushed her on bed wid him on top ov her still lips met n tongues exploring each other s mouth!nw she cud feel tat rey ws gaining more access n exposing her further.he undid her jeans n she ws just left wid her undergarment.she cud feel shivers run down her spine.nw rey s hands caressing her bare legs.it ws a sweet torture 2 her tat even her deciding power ws fading.she knew wot he ws dng n she ws also aware tat he wont remember anything wen he wakes up n tat alcohol effect z over bt she ws getting hypnotized wid his charm n his tacts 2 seduce her.

By tat tym both were breathless n they parted lips 2 get sme air.she had just 2 pieces ov cloth covering her 2 most private parts nw.rey nw started caressing her thighs nw.she ws damn shocked.then rey covered both ov them wid a sheet on them.

N then in smtym it happened before her.rey in drunk state d********d kriya who ws fully conscious.she felt a strong pang ov pain n shouted bitterly.rey covered her mouth wid his n dint let her moan even.he ws totally in her nw n their souls n bodies became 1.aftr smtym kriya s power diminished n she stopped protesting n started 2 enjoy wid the rhythm.then they slept in the same posture.

MORNING

Kriya woke up wid the rays ov sunlight falling in her eyes.she ws freshwid sme unknown energy in her.she tried 2 open her arms wen they hit rey s nose wich made her come 2 reality n she realized she ws in bed wid rey wid no clothes on both ov them n all the limits crossed,all the rules broken,all the boundaries ended.she ws hell shocked n a pang ov guilt moved over her.wot ll she gonna tell her family n karan?hw ll they react?hw ll rey take all this?hw z she gonna face the wrld?these n many other questions were invading her mind.

Wid kriya s hand hitting his nose,rey also woke up.n he saw the posture they were in.he ignored it n quickly got up,took the other sheet n ran 2 the shower.she cud hear the shower pouring water down.she ws tryng 2 recollect herself wen rey came out aftr taking a shower.he collected his clothes 4m around the bed,wore them n get ready being unaffected ov the surroundings he ws in as if nothng happened.his face ws blank.she cud read no emotions:guilt,happiness,shock,questions,nothng.he doesn't seem 2 hav any hangover 4m the effect ov alcohol as if he ws never drunk.

This made her perplexed.wots wrong wid this man?did he remember everything?then y z he nt affected at all?n if he dint?then y z he nt shocked wid all this?if he ws under the effect ov alcohol,then he must hav sme lil hangover at least but no!

The bed ws a mess.sheet ws stained n in a bad order.kriya ws in 1 ov the sheets n her clothes were scattered all over around the bed.she ws sobbing bitterly!she waited 4 rey 2 say smthng

R:go n hav shower ws all tat he uttered.

Kriya ws hell shocked.y z this guy nt affected at all?she tried 2 recollect her shattered self n picked up her clothes n went 2 shower.wen water ws pouring down her body,she ws in deep thouts.

Ll rey marry me?ll he accept tat he forced himself upon me?ll he remember everything or abandon me like he did years ago?

N then she ws terrified.

Years ago wen teddy left me n months ago wen eagle left me,tat ws ttly different 4m nw.i ws free,I ws v****n bt nw last nyt we consummated.em nt same as before.nobody z gonna accept me nw!wot ll happen ov my n karan s relationship?ll he b able 2 4give me ever?i ll b losing nt only my fiance bt my best frnd,the person who stood by me thru thick n thin,the person who ws thr even wen rey left me.he gathered my pieces bck 2gethr n made me the kriya tat em 2day!bt wot next?

Then she tried 2 pacify herself sayng tat rey ll accept her cx he saw them in bed 2gethr,he saw in wot position were they in!

She quickly finished the shower,dried herself n came out in her clothes.water drops were still dripping 4m her wet hair.this ws making her adorable b trey dint even take a look at her.wen she came bck,she saw rey had neately placed the sheets bck 2gethr n put the stained sheet in laundary bag.it ws same as before wen they came thr.thr were no signs ov intoxication on rey s face,no hangover nothng!

Kriya gathered full courage 2 speak

K:rey!u knw last night'..

N she ws cut in the middle by rey

R:kriya go home.ur parents must b waiting 4 u.its ur sangeet 2day

Kriya s eyes widened wid horror

K:WHATTT???

R:ya its ur sangeet 2day.ur family must b worried abt u!

K:rey!do u knw wot u r sayng?aftr all tat happened last nyt'

Again she ws cut in the middle

R:4get it wot happened last nyt kriya.it ws a weak moment 4 me.i just got carried away n I ws drunk 2!

K:wot do u mean by u got carried?u thnk it ws a mistake?

R:ya ov course!

Tears rolled down ov kriya s cheeks.

K:Dnt u love me?

R:cmon kriya!z it a question 2 ask nw?its ur sangeet 2day n u asking me?u r getting married 2 karan nt me!wake up babe!!

K:rey!do u thnk karan ll marry me aftr knowng wot happened between us last nyt?

R:look I am sorry kriya!

K:does ur sorry bring bck 2 me everything I lost in this night?

R:it ws just a weak moment kriya!

Nw she ws crying bitterly!

K:rey u ruined me completely

R:cmon kriya!its a custom in airforce.karan must hav spent many nights wid different grls so its nt smthng ov a surprise if u spent a night wid ur ex-boyfrnd before ur marriage.em sure he wont mind.

K:reyaansh singhaniya!u b****y B*****d

R:my pleasure grl!n he led out a dirty chuckle.. if u wnt I cn still drop u home drop u home.wid an evil grin

K:just 1 last question mr reyaansh!were u drunk last night?

R:well dr kriya!2 b honest,no I wsnt!n being an IAF officer I knw hw 2 look like 1!n he again led out a loud nasty laugh

This shattere kriya in n out completely.she stood up n banged the door behind on him n went out.she ws roaming aimlessly lyk a detremented lost soul on the calm n deserted roads ov dehradhun!her bitter sobs cud b heard 4m a distance.she ws in a shocked state.she wsnt able 2 register the fact tat reyaansh deceived him.he looted her respect n her v*******y 4m her n z nt even ashamed ov tat!she felt like a tissue papr who ws used n thrown away.hw n y did i trust him so much knowng tat he had deceived me twice before? She felt like a w***e.she ws cursing herself mentally tat she ws so intelligent n never let any man come near her then y she allowed him 2 cross all limits wid her?she ws thnkng wot 2 do next bt nothng seemed 2 help!

She then came 2 a conclusion tat if she lived it tat way,the wrld wont let her.so its better 2 die n kill herself(suicide) than 2 live an ashamed,guilty n disrespectful life n make her family ashamed 2!so she went on the edge ov a cliff n ws abt 2 jump dwn wen 2 strong muscular arms held her strongly 4m her waist!

PRECAP:

Rey s mystery behavior revealed

Kriya s marriage

Ok guys!i presume tats my longest update ever.hope u liked it!any like,dislike,cmnts n criticism accepted.bt plx do like n cmnt!

MODS plx dnt ban me.i ve nt put any explicit cmnt or bad wrds in this!!plx 4give my 1st n last mistake.n dear readers it's the original unedited update J reviewed by a gud frnd ov mine n declared safe 2 b read..still if mods ban me then I ll feel really v v v bad

Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 40

PMS LATER

scroll up 4 chapter 39 part B

Em really happy 4 the gud response em getting.i never thot my ff cn go tat far!a special thnks 2 all those who read,like n cmnt on my ff..its cx ov u guys tat me n DSR z here 4 u ppl!a silent request 2 my silent readers plx do cmnt smtyme it ll make me more confident n inspire me 2 write more n wid my heart!

RECAP:

Rey made it out wid kriya n aftr tat abandoned her sayng she shud go marry karan.kriya z so heartbroken tat she z gonna commit suicide by jumping off a cliff 2 save her family 4m humiliation.she z on the edge ov a cliff n abt 2 jump wen a pair ov muscular hands hold her 4m the bck

Kriya turned bck 2 face the man who stopped her 4m jumping off n z surpized 2 c Vicky standing thr.vicky sees kriya s eyes swollen ov crying badly,tears dried n fixed on her cheeks n kriya in demented n detrimental state.he z shocked at the sight.

V:princess!wots wrong?y u so upset n wot were u gng 2 do btw?we hav been searching 4 u 4 so long

K:y did u stop me vick?y dnt u let me die peacefully?

V:y wud I let my sweetest princess die?

K:as if u dnt knw anything yet!

V:ya kriya!i swear idk wot happened?i just went bck home leaving bro on the road n wen I went bck home,karan calld me 2 tell tat u r missing.tell me wot happened?

N kriya narrated him the whole story ov wot rey did wid her last night.she ws crying bitterly n Vicky cud get the last parts ov the narration wid great difficulty.he ws petrified wid wot rey did wid her.he hugged her securely in his arms.

V:idk princess wot 2 say or thnk?i just cant believe tat bro cn b such a savage beast!hw cn he b such an ugly devil n stoop so low n why did he do tat?bt its all my fault!i shudnt hav let him go alone wen he left

K:vick..vick'he ruined me completely.wot wrong did I ever do 2 him tat he did so?i just went 2 leave him 2 the hotel 2 help him as acc 2 me he ws drunk n I thot if he goes home like tat,his parents wud b annoyed wid him.n he ws so brutal he made me helpless.i tried many a tymes 2 get outta his hold bt he dint lemme n later I came 2 knw he wsnt even drunk n did everything on purpose 'kriya said it within her sobs.. nw I dnt hav any choice bt 2 die.so plx lemme die.dnt stop me.

V:wots wrong princess?i wont let u die tat easily.bro ll get his punishment bt y u punishing urself wen its nt ur fault?i ll try n convince karan.i knw he ll understand n he loves u so much

K:but I dnt want him 2 suffer cx ov me.rey ruined my life bt I dnt wanna ruin his life.

V:cmon princess!dnt wrry.evrythng ll b fine.n em always thr 4 u.

She ws still in his embrace n he ws caressing her hair wid his fingers.she pulled bck wen reality striked her.

K:u r his brother na!then y u supporting me?

Vick ws dumbstruck wid this sudden q ov hers:cx u r my frnd princess!n I supported u 4m the beginning n I knw u r right n he z wrong.

She hugged him tightly.

K:em sorry vick!sorry 4 nt believing u.u r such a gud frnd.plx dnt leave me ever

V:no my dear princess!never

N then he persuaded her 2 go bck home wid her.he went thr n told karan the whole story.karan accepted her wid his whole heart n said

Ka:its all my fault.i knew she z nave n rey z v cunning.i shudnt hav left her alone.

V:no its my fault.i wont hav let him go away

K:nw stop it both ov u.stop this blame game.its nobody s fault.it ws written in my destiny n ws meant 2 happen.so dnt wrry n lets c wots next?

Ka:next z tat u r soon gng 2 b mrs karan singh

n he let out a naughty laughter.this made kriya laugh 2 thou her heart ws in deep pain.he ws her best frnd who always made her smile even in severe distress.

Thr rey left 4m the hotel 2 reach singhaniya mansion n went straight 2 pinky s room.held her hand in his n put his head on it n said

R:my dearest sister!c I took ur revenge.she took my bubbly cute sis 4m me n I took her self respect,her happiness n her pride 4m her all in 1 go.i hope u d b really v happy 2 hear this.

A tear escaped pinky s eyes.rey wiped it wid his palms

R:dnt cry my dear sis!ur revenge z done.she ll cry her whole lyf.nw plx come bck 2 me

MARRIAGE CEREMONY

Vicky,neha n all their frnds came in their best clothes.they were really very happy 4 kriran.no1 xcpt vick,kriya n karan knew the truth.then the wedding ceremony started n all were enjoying the scene.the mandap ws set n fire ws lit.pandit jee ws w8ng 4 the varr n vadhu.karan n kriya came n sat in the mandap.

Kriya s dad took kriya s hand n gav it in karan s.then he did kanya daan n they got up 4 pherras.every1 ws flowing flowers on them

Acha sorry guys its enuff 4 2day.cant send pms.mama shouting.sorrry

CH 41(A)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66844471

Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
rey cheated kriya...can u pls pm the 39part????eagerly waiting 4next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
rey cheated kriya
poor krixa 😭
i m loving vicky's charecter here
update soon
nd plz pm me part 39 if u can
Edited by kitttu1309. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update. Can't believe that Rey did this on purpose. He cheated kriya. Loving Vicky's character.pm me part-39 .update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome..
loved vicky charecter..
poor kria. rey cheated her...
plz update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update

Argh rey did that just 4 d sake of revenge...

Vicky is realy a true friend
and Wat was that
shaadi hogai...?
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Posted: 13 years ago
just luved it... bt cn u snd me unedited chapter... nd last prt was confusin... wch truth r u tokin abt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hw cld Rey do that?! He has cheated on her twice n finally ruined her lyf completely jst fr tking a revenge!! Karan is d real hero.. He hs accepted Kriya no matter what had happened to her.. Really luvd Karan n Vicky's characters.. They both r so much Supportive.. Waiting fr next update.. Plx don't frget 2 pm me

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