2nd try : LET THE LOVE FLOWING (AR OS )

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guyz this is my 2nd try
i m trying to improve
in this ff no villain is there just LOVE AND FUN .
* LET THE LOVE FLOWING *
Armaan riddhima are happily married more than 5 months completed.

One morning :
riddhima's sleep was disturbed due to sunrays .
Riddhima just move her hands on bed but...
He was not there ...she think that he might be in balcony
armaan talking to somebody on phone
armaan: haan pari bol kya doon.
Armaan: tu paagl ho gayi hai kiss doon . Dimaag skull se nikal kar knee mein pahunch gaya hai .
Abey basket sunegi na toh tujhe maar daalegi .
Armaan: okay bye take care
he just moved back and saw ridz fuming in anger

armaan thought beta armaan ab tu tera raam naam satya hai

riddhima just moved to kitchen and in anger hold a chopper and started chopping vegetables like freaks
armaan just moved in kitchen and tried to calm her down
armaan: kya hua basket aaj toh lag raha koi special breakfast banne wala hai .
Riddhima: haan haan aaj toh dil kar raha 'armaan ka bheja' banaao ..khaoge?
Armaan: chee chee yeh kaun sa dish hai tum toh poori ki poori khooni darindi ho gayi ho ?

Riddhima: to jaao naa apne pyaari roop ki raani pari ke paas .mere paas kya kar rahe ho .
Armaan: haan main bhi toh ab tumse bore ho gaya hoon .sochta hun koi nayi bomb dhoond loon .
Riddhima: haan haan jaate kyun nahin.but tere jaise outdated old model buddhe ko koi bhaav nahin dega .
Armaa: kya kahan buddha .
Buddha hoga tera baap .
Riddhima: papa par mat jao
armaan: main jaaonga .jaaonga papa par bhi aur unki khooni aadamkhor beti par bhi .
Main aaj bhi kisi ladki ko smile kar doon uska dill ka tarffic jam ho jaata hai .
This is the charm of ur patidev
riddhima: jaao jaao hato bade aaye patidev banne subah subah kiss ki dukaan laga rakhte hai woh bhi phone par doosro ke liye kabhi mere liye...oops yeh kya kah diya ab toh shuru ho gayi armaan ki teasing

armaan: kya basket kabhi kya ?
Riddhima: jaao ready ho jaao hospital bhi jaana hai
armaan just encircled her from her waist .
And whisphered in her ear
basket aaj sunday hai aur mujhe sasur ji ne jhadu pocha maare ke liye nahin rakha jo sunday ko bhi jaao.
Main toh india ka most sexiest doctor hun jisper sirf tumhaara haq hai .and bite her ear lobe
riddhima: blushed ...said accha toh mr. Supersexy superhott ab aap mujhe khana banane denge

armaan: kitni badi ullu se bhagwaan ne nujhe pyaar karwaya itna hott pati uske saamne khada hai aur use khane ki padi hai .bhukkhad kahin ki .
Riddhima : bhukkhad aur main .main toh tumhaare liye breakfast bana rahi hun .tumhe hi toh bhookh lagti hai
armaan: turned riddhima to his side and placed a passionate kiss on her lips .
Riddhima reciprocate it with equal passion .
It was a long one .
Armaan : lo ho gaya mera breakfast
riddhima just blushed and hit him on his chest
armaan : breakfast roj roj aisa hi ho toh maja aa jaye .ab chale thoda sa lunch ki bhi tayyari kar le .
Riddhima become tomato red
armaan : oyye hoyye kitna sharmaati hai .lagta hai koi modern dhoondhni hi padegi .

Riddhima: i will kill u
armaan lifted her in his hands and said toh maar daalo naa.

Riddhima just hugged him tightly and palced a kiss on his chest .

While carrying her to their room
riddhima: asked armaan yeh pari kya bol rahi thi .
Armaan: main usse pooch raha tha ki tujhe apne sixth month anniversary par kya gift doon
toh usne kahan gift mein paisa barbaad karke kya karna hai saste mein kiss se nipta le .
Riddhima : oh toh tere freinds bhi tere jaise ki kanjoos hai .
Armaan: main aur kanjoos . ..ye kya bol rahi ho jaan
riddhima: kanjoos makhi choos ...
Armaan : achcha to main kanjoos hun .
He put her in their room and hold her face tightly and did a shower of kisses everywhere.
Armaan: to mrs. Dildar main kanjoos iss maamle toh bilkul bhi nahin hoon .
Riddhima: i love u armaan
armaan : i love u too jann .
They spent their sunday happily
Edited by sgksg - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ON 9th OCT . There was their 6th month anniversary .
Armaan sneked out of home at 6 am
riddhima opened her eyes but he was not there .she become restless searched everywhere in house garden gym .and called each of their freinds but he was not there .
Suddenly door bell rang
a beautifull teddy bear with red roses were there with a card .
'' kya basket mujhe dhoond rahi ho ? Itni easily nahin miloonga .go to terrace.''

basket goes to terrace she was shocked at the decoration just perfect as armaan .but where is mr. Pati parmeshwar .
Armaan ! Armaan! But he was not there .
Suddenly she saw a packet ..with a card .
She read the card '' iss packet mein jo bhi hai usse pahan kar garden mein swing par aao 2 ghante mein ..i know tum ladkiyon ko kitna time lagta .so 2 hrs will be sufficient ''

riddhima took the packet and saw a beautiful red coloured short dress. And other accesories like a diamond set with a neck piece and diamond bangles .

Riddhima took exact 1 hr 55 mins to get ready .how true was ammy

riddhima was looking gorgeous beautiful elegant as well as hott and sexy .
Then she moved to the swing .
She was again shocked to see swing competely decorated with orchids .
There was no sign of him but a packet was again there .
She opened the box and found a platinum band and a card .'' for the world 's most beautiful bride . Basket plzz look upwards '
and the fireworks started and it appeared on sky .
'HAPPY 6TH MONTH MARRIAGE ANNIVERSARY ARMAAN-RIDDHIMA '

Riddhima eyes fell up with tears to see his husband's unmatched love
match ho bhi kaise sakta hai uska armaan hai hi unique.but where is he? She started missing him a lott just then message flashed on her mobile
message: ab jo bhi bmw ghar ke aage akar ruke usme baith jaana main tumahara intezaar kar raha hoon .
Just then a bmw stopped and riddhima went .and the car stopped at the beach .

Armaan standing there in black suit and looking not less than greek god .
Riddhima just ran towards him and hugged him tightly .and next moment she kissed him .
Armaan : oyye hoyye aaj toh mohtarma badi besharam ho gayi hai .

Riddhima: sab aapki sangat ka asar hai janaab
armaan : main mar jaawa .kya lag rahi ho tum badi kamaal lag rahi ho .
Riddhima : armaan
armaan lifted her in his arms and started moving on the beach
riddhima : yeh kya kar rahe ho ?
Armaan : apni dulhaniya ko sabse chupa raha hoon. Kahin koi dekh lega toh mujhse jalne lagega . Phir fire brigade ko bulaana padega
Riddhima smiled
riddhima : but hum kahaan jaa rahe hai ?
Armaan : ghar!
Riddhima : kiske
armaan : apne
riddhima : toh mere kuperman aap yahan se 10 km mujhe aise lekar kar chalte huye jaayenge.bahut mazaa aata hai kya .
Armaan : yeh dhai kilo ka haath apni basket ko utha kar kahi bhi jja sakta hai
but for now bas ek minute aur .
armaan put her on the sand and handed over a key
riddhima : just amazed by the all glass beach house .which was covered with red and white curtains .

Riddhima opened the house and was amazed to see a large bed with rose petals .whole room is decorated with candles .

Riddhima: this is just beautiful
armaan: bas meri basket se thoda kam
riddhima and armaan spent their night there . In the morning riddhima again didn't see armaan by her side .she woke up and see a card with a packet .riddhima wear this and plzz come out .
Riddhima wear a plain pink coloured saree and move out to see ammy between the water bare body .
Riddhima just took a glance of his perfect v- shaped body and mann hi mann hayye kya sexy item diya hai pati ke roop mein just perfect and ran towards him and hugged him from behind .
Riddhima: i love u armaan
armaan : main yeh baat kah kah thak gaya hoon ..ki i love u too
so and he moved towards her
riddhima with a confused look .looking towards him
armaan : so maine yeh tattoo hi karwa liya
yes he has done a tattoo on his chest written I LOVE U RIDDHIMA .
Edited by sgksg - 13 years ago
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When riddhima sees this her eyes fill up with tears .
Armaan tumhe kitnaa dard hua hoga .
Armaan: mard ko kabhi dard nahin hota .hahaha
riddhima: majak band karo and she just kissed on tattoo and licked it ..
Armaan just moaned and then hold riddhima and pulled her underwater and kissed her .
Riddhima: u just taste awesome armaan .
Armaan: waah waah tu toh badi halkat nikli
riddhima: jiske paas aise bindass item bomb pati ho woh biwi toh halkat ho hi jaayegi
armaan : oyyehoyye
riddhima: itne saare surprises main to paagal hi ho jaaongi
armaan: to ho jaao main toh tumhe pehle din hi dekhte hi paagal ho gaya tha .pagal-pagal ki jodi jamegi
riddhima: armaan . Sudhar jao
armaan : jo sudhar jaaye woh armaan mallik nahin
riddhima: acha to mere bigdail pati kya poora time paani mein hi rehna hai
armaan: accha chalo room mein .main aata hoon
riddhima goes into the room
after 10 mins armaan entered the room and see her saree was on sofa .and she was just in towel
armaan still bare bodied

riddhima said : ammy woh saree to bheeg gayi hai .
Armaan just couldn't utter any word and moved closer and closer to riddhima .
And just put her on bed and placed himself upon her
Armaan just kissed her neckline ,her face her eyes her cheeks , her lips , he just licked her throat and kissed everywhere . He just slid her towel and kissed her evrywhere and hugged her completely and completely embraced her .they were just like one body .

Many years of AR marriage went bye ..but the love the nok jhok the khatte meethi baate never reduced rather increased by leaps and bounds but after 5 years of their marriage the love is now shared with a 3 year old farishtaa ridhaan - son of ammy and basket.


Just AR and their motto
LET THE LOVE FLOWING .

Hope u like it
kya aapko yeh os
QUBOOL HAI .

kya karoon ab toh aadat si ho gayo hai qubool hai likne ki ..just karan singh grover' s addicition .
Edited by sgksg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice os
AR's love scenes was awsome
keep writing more
thanks for pm
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Thanks fr the PM man...again a masterpiece...where were u hiding all these creativity !!!
What a title ...LET THE LOVE FLOWING ...I actually find its overflowing ...so much so that I am drowning in it ...having problems in breathing !!...SATAN save me !!!
Now cuming to my fav lines from yr OS ...Armaan saying to Pari '' Dimag skull se nikal kar knee mein pahuch gaya hai '' ...Armaans nxt dialogue to Riddhima '' Main aaj bhi kisi ladki ko smile kar doon uska dill ka traffic jam ho jata hai ''
Riddhima s lines to Armaan '' tum kiss ki dukan ho '' ...& then '' tum outdated old model buddhe '' & then seeing Armaan bare bodied & thinking '' hayye kya sexy item pati ki roop main mila ''
Actually all the lines r my fav ...jst getting confused which one to quote !...
Armaan is such a doting hubby man ...frst he gifted her a red short dress ...(.was tht a lingerie by any chance ?)...which she took 1 hr 55 mins to put on .!...& nxt morning he gives her a saree ...raat ko gift ..din ko gift wah bhai wah !!!
& the last paragraph .. man it was reeking of sex !...hands sliding inside towel...kissing, hugging, licking ...simply erotic !!! U shd start writing on Kamasutra ... u ve got the potentials !
Believe it or not your OS s are actually acting as a stimulater for me ...my emotions r getting accelerated at a ridiculous speed that I m fearing a short circuit in my brain !!! Such is your magic !
So jst a request ...dont write the OSs within such a short span of time ...pls help my brain to get a bit rested ...so tht I can be a bit more relaxed when I face yr nxt bombardment !!!
uhh.. jst one thing more ...wheres the intelligent kid Arima gone ...AR already had a daughter didnt they ? ...so Riddan is their second child ...am i rgt ?...but Arima was born after 8 mnths of their marriage acc to yr prev OS ...so how cum AR r celebrating their 6 th mnth anniversary ?...but I m sure u ve a reason ...again my stupid brain...jst dnt understand the simple facts !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hail_Van_Helsin


Thanks fr the PM man...again a masterpiece...where were u hiding all these creativity !!!

What a title ...LET THE LOVE FLOWING ...I actually find its overflowing ...so much so that I am drowning in it ...having problems in breathing !!...SATAN save me !!!
Now cuming to my fav lines from yr OS ...Armaan saying to Pari '' Dimag skull se nikal kar knee mein pahuch gaya hai '' ...Armaans nxt dialogue to Riddhima '' Main aaj bhi kisi ladki ko smile kar doon uska dill ka traffic jam ho jata hai ''
Riddhima s lines to Armaan '' tum kiss ki dukan ho '' ...& then '' tum outdated old model buddhe '' & then seeing Armaan bare bodied & thinking '' hayye kya sexy item pati ki roop main mila ''
Actually all the lines r my fav ...jst getting confused which one to quote !...
Armaan is such a doting hubby man ...frst he gifted her a red short dress ...(.was tht a lingerie by any chance ?)...which she took 1 hr 55 mins to put on .!...& nxt morning he gives her a saree ...raat ko gift ..din ko gift wah bhai wah !!!
& the last paragraph .. man it was reeking of sex !...hands sliding inside towel...kissing, hugging, licking ...simply erotic !!! U shd start writing on Kamasutra ... u ve got the potentials !
Believe it or not your OS s are actually acting as a stimulater for me ...my emotions r getting accelerated at a ridiculous speed that I m fearing a short circuit in my brain !!! Such is your magic !
So jst a request ...dont write the OSs within such a short span of time ...plshelp my brain to get a bit rested ...so tht I can be a bit more relaxed when I face yr nxt bombardment !!!
uhh.. jst one thing more ...wheres the intelligent kid Arima gone ...AR already had a daughter didnt they ? ...so Riddan is their second child ...am i rgt ?...but Arima was born after 8 mnths of their marriage acc to yr prev OS ...so how cum AR r celebrating their 6 th mnth anniversary ?...but I m sure u ve a reason ...again my stupid brain...jst dnt understand the simplefacts !!!


hey man ...thanxx a lott for such a awesome comment
actually i should say ..i was really waiting for ur comments.
And u also have potential to write a funny ff or os .u should try

and ya i m going to write it atleast after 25 days as my exams are going to start from 20th of september

or agar dimaag paagal ho gaya to 20 th se pehle ek likh sakenge

and for now thanxxx a lott
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sgksg


hey man ...thanxx a lott for such a awesome comment
actually i should say ..i was really waiting for ur comments.
And u also have potential to write a funny ff or os .u should try

and ya i m going to write it atleast after 25 days as my exams are going to start from 20th of september

or agar dimaag paagal ho gaya to 20 th se pehle ek likh sakenge

and for now thanxxx a lott

You were actually waiting for my comments !?...well well not surprised a wee bit ...I know I am a AUSGEZEICHNETEN KOMMENTATOR !!!!
writing funny FFs ...who me ?...nahhh !...me jst good at KOMMENTS...cant pen down FFs ...writing needs imagination, basic skills , creativity , good vocabulary ...i dont ve any !!! LOL !
Edited by Hail_Van_Helsin - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey yaar
im so happy tumne ak aur OS likha hain.
i was lookin forwrd to it..
I love it
its sooo romantic
AR's romance scenes are a treat to read
i loved the begining alot.
the way riddhima thought tht Armaan was hydin summat
n Wen they go to the house...
Aur jab Ammy ridzi ko vo dress gift karta hain
Its sooo cute
acha hua ke iss main sid nahi hain
And i loved how u described all the situations, emotions feelings etc...
Yaar u write soo welll
Pls write more na jaldi
N thx 4 pm
Agle baar phir pm karna
tc
😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice os...
mujhe v pm vej diya karo yaar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanxxx a lott for ur valuable comments and likes

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