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Posted: 13 years ago
Memory of the Fireplace

From past 4 months Drishti and Rhone were living in Alaska ' with Tamina, Benjamin and Satan. Drish was having an eye on Chand, Haseen and Abhay from the time they were away from the others. First month on Dehradun things were fine for Chand and his family, Abhay was hurt but fine. In the second month Rhone could see the bond which he had spoken to Abhay before their separation. Rhone knew that Abhay was getting connected to something; he thought something impossible is trying to happen. But from past 2 months Abhay was invisible for Drish, she couldn't see where he is or what he is doing.. On the other hand Rhone found that the bond was complete and now Abhay was with something, but what he could not identify. No matter however they tried they failed to find Abhay or his bond, only the factor that after centuries Abhay was happy held them from turning up in Dehradun. Drish and Rhone sensed that Abhay was invisible but complete.They held back as more than anyone they had sensed Abhay's loneliness and pain, now that he was happy they did not wish to destroy it.

But from past 2 days something was happening around Abhay. Drish could see Abhay as some blinking light, sometimes visible sometimes invisible. Rhone could sense that Abhay was breaking again; yet again he was tearing his dead heart. But this time they thought it has to be stopped, they didn't want Abhay to be wounded again so they decided to come to Dehradun.

In Dehradun..

Abhay and Piya were walking in the jungle. All the way Abhay was silent, he didn't say a single word this silence of Abhay was starting to disturb Piya. After about 2 hours of walk Piya couldn't take it more, she spoke out '

Piya : "Abhay where are you taking me? We have never come to the dense forest ' once when I asked you to take me into the forest you stopped me but today looks like you are taking me very much into it."

Abhay : "Piya if you're afraid we can go back. I understand this place of the forest if fearful."

Piya : "My stupid Lover Boy when I'm with you nothing fears me ' not even death."

Abhay : "Piya just don't say that. I'm dead afraid for your life."

Piya : "Oho Abhay, I'm not afraid just a bit tired. Can we sit down a little?"

Abhay : "Of course Piya. Come On."

And both Abhay and Piya sat down by the trunk of a huge tree. Piya looked up but couldn't find out what tree it was, Abhay had his head in his knees and was not looking at Piya. Piya moved his shoulders and looked into his eyes '

Piya : "Abhay what happened? Are you fine?"

Abhay : Piya even in this situation you are worried for me how can I leave you?? "Nothing Piya just thinking something.."

Piya : "You think a lot Abhay." Piya was struggling to read between his lies. She could read the pain in his eyes. Today he was the old Abhay (the older one, before they got close) just a bit more wounded.

Abhay : he noticed that Piya has identified his pain and tried to distract her. "So you know that I'm reading your diary.. Hmmm how did you find it out? I normally read when you are in deep sleep."

Piya :(in her mind) 'so your distracting me now.. lets see' "I felt your touch in the papers - Your cold touch and your smell. I can feel you around Abhay, I can smell you."

Abhay : "You can feel me around ' liar." And started laughing.

Piya : "What don't you believe me??"

Abhay : "Of Course My Princess. Now come on we have to keep walking I want to take you to a special place, and by the way here's your breakfast."

Abhay gave Piya a packet wrapped beautifully. Piya opened it and saw that it was her favorite sandwich.

Piya : "Wow! Spicy egg sandwich with chees I love it. But wait I never said this to you. How do you know I love this?"

Abhay : "Have you forgotten I have read your diary. Now enjoy your breakfast and walk slowly."

Abhay and Piya started walking into the jungle again, but this time Abhay kept on talking to keep Piya from guessing something what he is hiding. Abhay's sudden talk was yet again surprising Piya as she knows her Abhay very well he is not someone who speaks so much she guessed he was hiding something from her again but this time she won't let him do it for long she will break his wall and read his problem. After about an hour and half walk they reached to a dark place. A place where even a single beam of light could not penetrate through the trees. Abhay bundled few dry branches and set fire. The fire lightened only a small patch of darkness around Abhay and Piya. Piya couldn't believe any darkness would be this heavy something that can be strong enough to engulf all the light in the world. Abhay sort of understood Piya's mind,

Abhay: "These darkness are very old and hold many stories in it which gives it power to block the track of light. Time and breath gives power to darkness and this place has a prominent story in it. Before I start I want a word from you."

Piya: "After staying with you I have learned never to promise you without knowing what the matter is and today you are turning me freak. Tell me first what should I promise?"

Abhay: "hmmm..looks like I have spoiled you. Ok then, I'm gonna narrate a story but at any point if you're afraid you will stop me and you will never come here ' never again."

Piya was afraid now, from the time they were together he had never separated her and now he was saying you won't come here not we, she realized that this time its not a story but his story. But somehow she didn't want to hear it, not now - not at this place, but didn't have enough strength to stop him. "Hmm. I promise I will not come here."

Abhay's Story

Piya you are a smart girl and I believe you have found out that I am different from others, other guys around' other human around. But to know my story you should first know the story of this place ' yes I belong to this place. Everything about me is from this place - Dehradun.

Dehradun was hub of very ancient tribes and the prominent one were the Arbols. Arbols are the one of the magical tribes that first visited this forest and later turned it as their house. Arbols believe in the essence of life that stays in the heart of earth which gives birth to all the trees and flowers and herbs in its ground, this made them very efficient and gifted potion makers. They knew all the powers of the herbs and they could identify the magic hid in them. For centuries they stayed here peacefully once some warrior herds entered this forest. Arbols are also very strong fighters so they could prevent their entry but also lost their fighters in the battle. Once a warrior group from southern Dhaka crossed this place in their journey, the beauty and energy of this place trapped them totally and they wished to settle in this place along with the Arbols. This peace loving warrior group were the Pandhers, they had peace talks with the tribes and after accepting each-other both the groups started co-existing. The northern forest till the river was ruled by the Arbols and the southern place on the other bank of the river by the Pandhers.

With time both the tribes started living together comfortably; they helped each other and protected each other with time. Arbols were always restricted to their duties and rituals but one a Pandher prince fell in love with Arbols Chief's third daughter and wished to wed her and make her his first wife and Pandhers queen. This was a forbidden love for both the tribes a warrior can never want the hand of a black witch. But the prince won all the tasks put in front of him by both the tribes and succeeded in claiming the hand of the tribal princess. With this everything changed till then 2 tribes turned to be one family now, and from then the first prince of Pandher would wed Arbols Chief's third princess this made the next generation of them to become Magical Warriors. People were undefeatable warriors with owns of magical blood which gave them power to win over both light and dark world. For several decades they lived happily under the rule of Pandher and with the guidelines of the Arbols Chief. People were bond to rituals, rules and duties and no-one were permitted to step out of the set directions for life.

Piya all this is just the way life was led at this place at that time, my story is not about the royal heads or powerful magicians' people in my story were simple people who lived at that time and had to face the punishment of doubt. I'm going to tell you about Abhayendra, he was not a Prince or Magician he wasn't even a warrior, he was nothing but a horsebreed who took care of horses in the yard. A simple boy who held no proud of any power or greed of gold, he wished nothing but a simple life with the girl he loved who again was not any princess or royal blood she was a daughter of one of the tribes men who was one of the workers of Princess of Pandher. She was Gohari, just like her name which meant white lily, a lily which was not special or different she wished nothing more than being Abhayendra's wife. Their only problem was that Gohari was Princess of Pandher's look alike; both of them were each other's mirror images. This made her to switch place with the Princess whenever she was not interested in attending a meeting or celebration. And eventually when the King learned of Abhayendra's love he miss understood that he loved the Royal Princess. He punished Abhayendra calling his love the forbidden sin; the king did not heed to any of his explanations and jailed him till death. After 3 days and 4 nights of darkness on da 5th night the Princess visited Abhayendra in the mid of night and planned to escape both Gohari and Abhayendra to a far away land so that they can lead a happy life.

Plan was to kidnap Abhayendra to this place which is in the heart of the forest and this is the only place which is avoided by both Pandher and Arbols for it is believed to be the birth place of the dark power which was worshiped by the Arbols. So the Princess with some help from few other people transported Gohari to this place, she herself wanted to get Abhayendra here and set both of them away from this kingdom. If everything would have gone as planned I would not be reciting this story to you because if all had happened I would have dies ages before.

Abhayendra and Gohari's love was a simple love and they wished nothing more than a simple life, but that had a tragic darkness. Its not always Prince and Princess even a ordinary love at times is shattered. That's what happened in this place at that time...

Edited by Bella-Edward - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg Its FANTASTIC update yaar:-) I have no words, Its jus SUPERB:-) I want to read more;-) Plz cont... Love it:-) love Abhiya:-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh thank god finally an update*phew*
that was brilliant👏
hope pia accepts abhay...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome. Thx for PM.
Luved it. Plz continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice dear. u take ages to update, but when u do, its always magnificiently written.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Phew! After agaes an update...fantastic dear! Very well written.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow wow wow amazing update dear. Beautifully written and described. Plz update asap and simply gr8 job!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update dear.This story of Abhay is so different.I loved it.I hope Pia trust Abhay's love & not leave him😳
Plz cont..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update
Abhay telling his past to piya
Why did abhay make piya a promise to never come here again I guess he is expecting piya will stop him when she finds out that he is a vampire so she will be hurt n run away maybe but I guess he doesnot know how much piya loves him n drish n Rhone coming let see how they react seeing a piya a human.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Lovely update

Abhay telling his past to piya
Why did abhay make piya a promise to never come here again I guess he is expecting piya will stop him when she finds out that he is a vampire so she will be hurt n run away maybe but I guess he doesnot know how much piya loves him n drish n Rhone coming let see how they react seeing a piya a human.
Thanks for pm
Sorry for late reply


for a further hint... he doesn't know how much Piya knows ... there is a secret that will be revealed and ya wait for Drish and Rhone to return n after that there can be a time when Abhay may want to leave Piya...
Piya herself is a secret to be found even for herself...
what will happen...
will Piya stay with Abhay...
will Abhay want to stay with Piya...


PS:- in abhay's story there are holes where he din tell her the full story and there are times where he himself does not know parts.. who will fill that parts... was abhay right about calling piya his nightmare...

there are limits after which the darkness should not be tested...
&
there are places where it should not penetrate...
does this stand hold for Abhay Piya..!

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