swaron ss:Witout u its hard~to survive❤️ch 12,pg57 - Page 42

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
cant believe that this has cum to an end
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Posted: 13 years ago
Neetha yaar you will inactive for a long time kya?😭But still best of luck yaar.

The update as super cool as usual. Neetha you came in knocked some sense into swayam😆 jokes apart, that is what made him realize that sharon is there for him. After coming back and his conversation with shaorn was sooo romantic and the sweetest. Well yaar thanks so much for a lovely update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
I don't want this ss to end this soon:(
Naughty swayam loved it
Last quote was amazing
"without friendship n love its hard to survive"
Waiting for ur next ff/ss
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome is the word***
you killed me with this one..it was so romantic and captivating...loved every bit of it..pure love could be sensed from it. could feel the love,the passion who would have been writing this one...
it was pure magic...from the time sharon feared of loosing him again to the moment when neetha, i mean you go and teach him a lesson, a lesson which could change his life only for betterment..
while the set-up was really interesting..sharon in a bathrobe and loved swayam's dialogue why do we fall on bed always..😳...loved it to the core..sad it ends here..i wished it went on and on...
also could you pls tell me the meaning of MIL n FIl..i'm a little confused..
rest the whole update was amazing...simply awesome!

hope you start with the new SS really soon..would be waiting for it!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swaron_d3

awesome is the word***

you killed me with this one..it was so romantic and captivating...loved every bit of it..pure love could be sensed from it. could feel the love,the passion who would have been writing this one...
it was pure magic...from the time sharon feared of loosing him again to the moment when neetha, i mean you go and teach him a lesson, a lesson which could change his life only for betterment..
while the set-up was really interesting..sharon in a bathrobe and loved swayam's dialogue why do we fall on bed always..😳...loved it to the core..sad it ends here..i wished it went on and on...
also could you pls tell me the meaning of MIL n FIl..i'm a little confused..
rest the whole update was amazing...simply awesome!

hope you start with the new SS really soon..would be waiting for it!


MIL-mother-in-law😆
FIL=father-in-law😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES!
*edited*

I am really really sorry for commenting after almost a year!

Neetha It was just beautiful in the starting..swayam at beach..clearing his mind and heart! and then her girlfriend appeared (i can't take her name 😆)
the way you showed them it was soo emotional!
and this scene was really needed to show that swayam has accepted sharon and has given a second chance in love!
and ahem ahem..tumhari writing ki hotness ke baare mei kya kahun mai!! 😳
it was really hott..swayam getting naughty..both falling on the bed..
and den the shower place! ☺️
loved it wen swayam said tu simmi--tum jo chahti thi wohi hua! 😉
and then the group hugg!! 🤗
your quote in the end was soo truee!! 👍🏼

I will truly miss your SS neethaa!! 😃
after all issi se toh tumne bhi Debut kiya acting ke dreamworld mei!! 😆
And waiting for your FF...and our SS too! 😃
Edited by surbhimathur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cutie pie Neetha 😳 Pls check ur pms gal..i am not able to PM you as ur inbox seems to be full.
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Posted: 13 years ago
This SS was wonderfully Beautiful...
update was wonderful..and i really liked the fact that u made swayam realize his feelings fully and then accept sharon...
the way she dint regret the kiss but was hurt with swayam going out abruptly was wonderfully written...
the way he realized his feelings letting the past move and present get into him was beautiful...
loved the closing thought of yours...loved the fact that u justified the title of ur SS in that thought...

PS: i knew the meaning of MIL and FIL😉
PPS: i'll miss you😭


Edited by shaani2209 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
NEETHA 🤗this ss has come to its end and i am surely gonna miss it .😔
it has always been an amazing experience to read ur updates
coming to the update -
Awesome update neetha !!
beautifully written 👏
loved how in the beginning sharon remembered her kiss with swayam and then got scared of loosing him.
swayams and neethas convo was realy nice.
swayams acceptance to sharons love was fantastically described .
the last part was adorable .
totally loved the closing thought of urs .
i knew what u meant by FIL and MIL😉
will be waiting for ur futher works on swaron ...
thanks for the pm.
P.S - will miss u neetha , come back ASAP...😭
love u <3

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